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Sorta Horrer and based off of Dead space.Well, first time photo shopping and comicing, Areetsa, the "creatures" shall probably come next episode, just help me find some more ideas please.
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  April 1, 2010
Quoting kallo mavak Very good,but there is one fatal flaw that leads back to deadspace.You called the ship ishimura.Still,good series.5/5
Yeh, just didn't come up with a differnt name.
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  April 1, 2010
Very good,but there is one fatal flaw that leads back to deadspace.You called the ship ishimura.Still,good series.5/5
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  November 25, 2009
Quoting Casey McCoy Woah! Awesome! I've already got chills! The gore was great, very real. I liked the soldier in the grey a lot. I think that you should use the 'large' button when uploading images. That way, people don't have to open every single frame to read it. Also, you should try making the text bigger. It's a little hard to read. Anyway, nice job! 5/5!
Thanks.
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  November 24, 2009
Woah! Awesome! I've already got chills! The gore was great, very real. I liked the soldier in the grey a lot. I think that you should use the 'large' button when uploading images. That way, people don't have to open every single frame to read it. Also, you should try making the text bigger. It's a little hard to read. Anyway, nice job! 5/5!
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  November 16, 2009
Quoting DarkKnigt88 U.N.E. Tech Commander Great comic, not necessarily original, unless you make a C.O.P. tie in about how this was an experiment of their's gone horribly wrong. Overall 5/5, not bad for your first time using Ps, I'm still experimenting with CS4, its been awhile since I've worked with Ps.
You will see how this turns out, but I do have an idea...
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  November 16, 2009
Great comic, not necessarily original, unless you make a C.O.P. tie in about how this was an experiment of their's gone horribly wrong. Overall 5/5, not bad for your first time using Ps, I'm still experimenting with CS4, its been awhile since I've worked with Ps.
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  November 11, 2009
Quoting danny morgan Nice one! i can't read waht they're saying though :0
Look closely...
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  November 11, 2009
Nice one! i can't read waht they're saying though :0
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  November 10, 2009
Quoting Matt The Backward One Speaking of comics... Mind if I include your sig-fig in a comic?
Already answered. Oh, wait, you already know that.
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  November 10, 2009
Speaking of comics... Mind if I include your sig-fig in a comic?
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  November 10, 2009
Quoting LegoTrooper 101 Pretty good, decent storyline, but the text needs to be a lot bigger.
Thought so...
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  November 10, 2009
Quoting Matt Shack no droid, and what is wrong with that guy?
Oh, noting...
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  November 10, 2009
Pretty good, decent storyline, but the text needs to be a lot bigger.
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  November 9, 2009
no droid, and what is wrong with that guy?
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  November 9, 2009
Quoting Matt Shack know what is funny in Elite Squaderon, I am a regular battle droid with a Electro-staff.
Well, you could be a med-droid.
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  November 9, 2009
Quoting Matt Shack am I the masked guy?
That persone shall be a unknown persone for a while. But, you may not want to be that persone.
  November 9, 2009
know what is funny in Elite Squaderon, I am a regular battle droid with a Electro-staff.
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  November 9, 2009
am I the masked guy?
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  November 9, 2009
Quoting Matt The Backward One Windows Vista has automatic spell check on EVERYTHING, so I have no problem. :P
Mmmmm...
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  November 9, 2009
Windows Vista has automatic spell check on EVERYTHING, so I have no problem. :P
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  November 9, 2009
Quoting Commander Joe Darkness Love the idea...
Thanks.
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  November 9, 2009
Quoting Areetsa C Hmm... Size 8 font? No wonder... Anyway, I've got most of these resources together. Here y'go: http://www.brickshelf.com/cgi-bin/gallery.cgi?f=408877 Some of the things may need resizing, though, especially the effects. You can use http://www.spriters-resource.com/arcade/M.html for more effects if you want, the Metal Slug ones are quite useful. The only real problem is that most of them are meant to be seen from the side, so a little rotation can be neccessary at times. The panel template is optional, too; that's there in case you want an example, I seriously doubt it'd fit your pics without a bit of resizing. The dialogue file has some onomatopeia in it, too, just waiting for a resize and placement. Of course, you don't have to use any of this if you don't want. I just thought it might be handy.
So, it seems pretty decant, although I am maybe going to start another comic around Christmas that may actually need it.
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  November 9, 2009
Love the idea...
  November 8, 2009
Hmm... Size 8 font? No wonder... Anyway, I've got most of these resources together. Here y'go: http://www.brickshelf.com/cgi-bin/gallery.cgi?f=408877 Some of the things may need resizing, though, especially the effects. You can use http://www.spriters-resource.com/arcade/M.html for more effects if you want, the Metal Slug ones are quite useful. The only real problem is that most of them are meant to be seen from the side, so a little rotation can be neccessary at times. The panel template is optional, too; that's there in case you want an example, I seriously doubt it'd fit your pics without a bit of resizing. The dialogue file has some onomatopeia in it, too, just waiting for a resize and placement. Of course, you don't have to use any of this if you don't want. I just thought it might be handy.
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  November 8, 2009
Quoting Colonel Schmeisser . cool! i see you used the door design from here: http://mocpages.com/moc.php/161313
Well, I found it out a while ago(2 years) but baisically, yeh.
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  November 8, 2009
Quoting Areetsa C I'll see if I can compile together a few resources. Now, to business: so far, it looks good. The main problem is that the mocpages uploader took your pictures and shrank them; that's why I use brickshelf, it lets me pick the picture size and the quality. You can, of course, fix that with a larger font. Size 14, for instance, should do the job. I don't exactly like the paper, but since you probably don't have the parts to make a SNOT sign... A few quick tips; if you think you may have got a word wrong, you can type it into google; if it says 'Did you mean HUNGRY' when you type in 'HUNGY' clearly something's ever so slightly off. On your camera, there should be a little button with a tiny picture of a flower; if you press that, the pics you take should be a bit clearer; you can also rest the camera on a stack of books or something if you can't get a tripod. The bit at the end could be fitted with a bit of onomatopeia (or however it's spelled), which is the lettering in comics that declares the existence of sound; like BLAM and AAAIIIIEEE in big, brightly coloured angular letters. You could also touch up the size of the text boxes and tails, but yeah, for a first, this is very, very good. I just hope you have the plot all written out, otherwise you'll catch writers block at a major plot point and then... Anyway, as I said, I'll fetch a few of the resources I use for you.
My Brickshelf, yeh, I thought of that, but, oh, well. I use Google for spell check sometimes. My camera has a adjuster. I took these a while ago(1 week) so, next will be better, and Photoshop wasn't working, my mom had to go, so I had to use size '8'. Anyhow, thanks.
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  November 8, 2009
cool! i see you used the door design from here: http://mocpages.com/moc.php/161313
 I like it 
  November 8, 2009
I'll see if I can compile together a few resources. Now, to business: so far, it looks good. The main problem is that the mocpages uploader took your pictures and shrank them; that's why I use brickshelf, it lets me pick the picture size and the quality. You can, of course, fix that with a larger font. Size 14, for instance, should do the job. I don't exactly like the paper, but since you probably don't have the parts to make a SNOT sign... A few quick tips; if you think you may have got a word wrong, you can type it into google; if it says 'Did you mean HUNGRY' when you type in 'HUNGY' clearly something's ever so slightly off. On your camera, there should be a little button with a tiny picture of a flower; if you press that, the pics you take should be a bit clearer; you can also rest the camera on a stack of books or something if you can't get a tripod. The bit at the end could be fitted with a bit of onomatopeia (or however it's spelled), which is the lettering in comics that declares the existence of sound; like BLAM and AAAIIIIEEE in big, brightly coloured angular letters. You could also touch up the size of the text boxes and tails, but yeah, for a first, this is very, very good. I just hope you have the plot all written out, otherwise you'll catch writers block at a major plot point and then... Anyway, as I said, I'll fetch a few of the resources I use for you.
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  November 8, 2009
Sorry about the small images.
 
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