Quoting John Sheppard
I like the song, it goes good with your creation. The story of it is good as well. One thing I may point out to you is the "Gamma Echo". This is incorrect. "Golf Echo" is the proper military terminology.
haha thanks, im glad you liked it :)
and dont worry i know the militant terminology (the phinetic alphabet) but my name is based on a CLONE callsign.... and they are bred with greek letters/other figures in their names as well (theta, tau, chi, alpha, delta etc)