Telzira is proving so fun to play with, I think I have a new main character for my YouTube profile ^^ As well as Gringat. And Greeblimus.
About this creation
Telzira, like all other known Skrall Females, has lived much of her life in the Sisters' Monastery in the Black Spike Mountians. There, she and her sistren learned the disciplines and martial arts focused around the psycho-kinetic powers all females of her species posess. Their regime is strict, brutal, and minimalistic - even worse than the regimes of the Skrall Legions in Roxtus, who sting themselves with Zesk venom every morning to wake themselves up.
Her mother, the Matron of her order, is in charge of the entire enclave. It is her job to ensure it all runs smoothly, and she rules with an iron fist.
Telzira hates her.
Always the rebellious, non-conformist sort, Telzira openly questioned the tenets of the order and always was the one with the awkward questions that teachers didn't want to answer. She was unpoular - the other sisters hated her, gossiped behind her back, and the fact that her mother was the Matron didn't help. There was no trusting Telzira - even though most of the rumours were unfounded. Worse then that was the fact that she was actually more powerful and better at using her powers than any of the other sisters there.
In a fiery row with her mother, she defiantly left the order to seek her own fortune in Bara-Magna: following the path the males had taken so long ago. Perhaps she would become an Arena combatant or something. Whatever. As long as she was away from her witch of a mother, and the snipish sisters that had plagued her life since birth.
She trudged the hills for many weeks, having to hunt for her own food and water, and often bring herself to stealing to get what she needed. This is what happened with Agamemnon, the lone Glatorian. Dubbed the "Stew incident" thereafter, Agamemnon, Telzira and Fenrir, a Vampirik who had stumbled upon the scene, suffered an uneasy friendship, until eventually Agamemnon took his own life. Telzira beleives she is responsible for unsettling him into doing this.
Fenrir proved a powerful ally, and perhaps even a friend to Telzira. Despite his rages and gruff nature, Fenrir seemed to tolerate her company, and eventually even got around to trusting her - something nobody had ever done with her before.
--The Battle at the Monastery.
Ataklinus, abbot of the Templars' Monastery, had Fenrir, Agamemnon and Telzira captured - in an attempt to get Fenrir's allegiance.
While there, a battle struck. Magmar, and an army of nomad warriors attacked the Monastery, and Ataklinus summoned Bara-Rui, a Great Being, to defend.
Unfortunately, he hadn't counted on Telzira's unreliable powers. Figting off the enemy, Telzira's proximity to Bara-Rui siphoned off power from him, letting her use attacks more powerful than ever before. The enemy army was decimated, but the building was completely destroyed. Bara-Rui and Ataklinus were never seen again, and Telzira feels guilty for their disappearances as well.
--Happenings in Vulcanus.
Rames' mother was a skrall, and somehow, the half-Glatorian inherited her psychokinetic powers. Telzira met him in Vulcanus, in a prizon cell. Fenrir's appearance had prompted an attack from the guards, and Telzira had been captured. Rames helped her escape, and for that, she feels indebted to him - he insists she helps him learn how to use his powers. So far, it's working.
What Telzira hasn't cottoned onto, however, is that Rames is in love with her. BIG TIME.
"Yes. I am a threat. Now hand over the pot, and nobody gets hurt!"
Well just make sure Kira has the feminine look if not my real sister whom she is largely based off of will hunt you down. She will probably kill me to(lol) oh and ya know the meltdown you had on how unpopular she was, well I had the same feeling when Ronin and Thel received little attention., Espesially when no one liked Raam whom I still believe to this day was my greatest feet of monster engineering.
Quoting Supreme commander Gideon Fucci
Shes cool shes hot she will kick everyone's A SS and they wont know what hit 'em. She is awesome though she lacks that feminine look. I would happily fight that other guy for her.
Telzira's not supposed to look that feminine. She's rather scrawny, in all honesty. Wait until I post Tezra and Harren, THEN you'll see how feminine I can make my MOCs...
Shes cool shes hot she will kick everyone's A SS and they wont know what hit 'em. She is awesome though she lacks that feminine look. I would happily fight that other guy for her.
Quoting Johann Dakitsch
Quoting Gringat: "Huh. I thought I'd get a better rating that THIS! All my other BRC mocs have gone through with flying colours. What's wrong with Telzira? She's awesome!"
Calm down, it's normal to have creations we like getting rated a lot below we were expecting, but by doing this such of appeal you won't get much better with it, the better to do is be modest and accept that not everyone likes it. And look, you've added this today, and has already 3 persons who like it. Many of my creations take more than one day to get to this...
___By the way, the MOc is nice, the head specially, but I didn't found many outstanding aspects with it. To me it's just good, you have done better before...
Quoting Gringat: "Huh. I thought I'd get a better rating that THIS! All my other BRC mocs have gone through with flying colours. What's wrong with Telzira? She's awesome!"
Calm down, it's normal to have creations we like getting rated a lot below we were expecting, but by doing this such of appeal you won't get much better with it, the better to do is be modest and accept that not everyone likes it. And look, you've added this today, and has already 3 persons who like it. Many of my creations take more than one day to get to this...
___By the way, the MOc is nice, the head specially, but I didn't found many outstanding aspects with it. To me it's just good, you have done better before...
Huh. I thought I'd get a better rating that THIS! All my other BRC mocs have gone through with flying colours. What's wrong with Telzira? She's awesome!
MWAHAHAHAHAHA!!!! *slaps face* Sorry, insane outburst after seeing Fenrir. The new model is good. And I'm liking Fenrir's look. The black definitely works. Though I always saw Fenrir's high-speed jaunts with Telzira as Fenrir grabbing her by the arm and then shooting off.
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