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"Into the Fire": Part 1- Kashyyyk
This is a Star Wars comic I am making called "Into the Fire". It will include my clone Commander Arsenic. This is not really a part, that's why it is so short. Consider it more of a prologue.
About this creation

Tank(big gun): Remind me why we're here again?
Commander Arsenic: We're to meet up with Gin Vas, the Jedi knight.
Sparks(left): Isn't this exciting? Our first real mission!
Trigger(right): Yeah, yeah, yeah. I just wanna blow up some clankers! Those darn droids!
Arsenic: Hey Sparks, I need to see you.
Sparks:*whispers* Oh boy!

Arsenic: I have a job for you. I need you to hold on to this holocron for me. But it is very important that this holocron doesn't get into Separatist hands. It needs to get to the Jedi Council on Coruscant. Understand?
Sparks: Sir, yes sir!
Arsenic: Okay let's go.


{The group continues walking...}
VROOOM!
Tank: A speeder bike? What's going on?
Trigger: Hey do you hear that? Blaster fire!
Arsenic: Let's go men!

Trigger: Yeah! Time to shoot me some clankers! Come on Sparks!
Sparks: Hold on, I think I heard something...
Trigger: Well just hurry! I'll see you there!


Sparks:(to himself) What was that?
BLAST!
Sparks: Arghhh!
Droid Captain: I'll take that! Count Dooku will be very pleased to see this!


{The group arrives at the source of the commotion, and are surprised to see a large battle raging on...}


{The Jedi Knight Gin Vas is also there fighting...}
Gin Vas: Take this you scrap metal!


{Meanwhile, Trigger runs out into the heat of battle...}
Trigger: Die you tin can Separatists! Blast!Blast!Blast!
Arsenic: Wait, Trigger! You're too far out!


{Suddenly an intensely sharp pain flies through Trigger's leg. He's been shot by a battle droid.}
Trigger: Arghhh!
Arsenic: Trigger! No!!!
{Commander Arsenic charges out, blasting at the droids.}


{Trigger slowly loses consciousness while his world blurs as his head hits the sandy shores of Kashyyyk...}


{He looks up to see Commander Arsenic holding up his head, chanting to him.}
Arsenic: Trigger! Trigger stay with me! Trigger! Trigger, trigger...
{Then darkness consumed him...}

















Comments

 I like it 
  August 24, 2011
Nice work, pretty good. I like the last couple photos wih the blurred vision.
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  October 19, 2010
noooo! i want trigger to live! anyways great job on the comic
 I made it 
  October 16, 2010
Quoting Tom Simon You brought a lot of different skills to this: the landscaping details, the overall composition, posing the figs, and yes, the cute out of focus shots of losing consciousness. Very thoughtful.
Thanks! I'm currently working on another comic :)
 I like it 
  October 16, 2010
You brought a lot of different skills to this: the landscaping details, the overall composition, posing the figs, and yes, the cute out of focus shots of losing consciousness. Very thoughtful.
Josh B.
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matt brody
  September 13, 2010
really awsome dude!!!!!
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  July 3, 2010
nice little comic! I like Commander Arsenic! can you check my MOCs?
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  June 27, 2010
Noooo sparks died!!!
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  June 27, 2010
i have to tell you that i really like the way you made the little grey bunker they are very co0l. And the way you made trigger fade into darkness BRILLIANT. i also really like your commander arsenic he has a very cool armor markings 5/5
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  April 15, 2010
nice story
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  January 9, 2010
cool, I hope you will do 2nd part ;)
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  December 9, 2009
great MOC! I liked your idea of the fallen tree it is very creative and the effects are cool!!specially the one when he is seeing blurry
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  November 22, 2009
cool
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  November 18, 2009
That is really good, I like the lots of detail.
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  November 18, 2009
Well done-This comic is awesome!
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  November 1, 2009
Cool I like the part at the end poor sparks though did he die? Anyway nice comic 5/5 can't wait to see part 2!
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  October 24, 2009
nice job
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  October 24, 2009
Very cool, great job!
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  October 24, 2009
Nice story, I like the barricade design, mind if I ste- use it someday=P? I can tell this will be a good comic=)
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  October 24, 2009
Very nice work with set and story- but why do all pics look bad in the main page -but good as bigger (except those with blurry effect of course- nice idea btw)
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  October 24, 2009
I love it! this is awesome! good job!!
 I made it 
  October 24, 2009
sorry for the blurry pictures. I wanted them to be big. If you click on them though, they get a lot clearer.
 
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