This is my version of the venator, read the points below the pics to find out why I did it that way before you comment.
Here are some of the build facts-
-It weighs 6.5 pounds
-32" in length
-21" wide
-8.5" tall with the base
Make sure you check out my interior of my venator for a completely awesome view!
About this creation


Compared to my mini version...



Not particulary proud of the engines, I didn't have a ton of materials, you can see why.

The main hanger, quite nice in my opinion...

I didn't have enough pieces to make the guns all uniform, so I settled for it having 2 Ion cannons, 2 medium turrets, and 4 heavy turrets...


The bridge, I love how it turned out...


Side hanger guns, look close and you can see smaller guns...


Forward guns and Tractor beam emmitor...



Originally I designed the stripe to slide open like the real thing, it proved too tricky...





Bording ramp was a personal touch of mine...

The hanger needs to be redone, but I'd say a nice start....

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October 16, 2011 |
Wow amazing design! |
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December 4, 2010 |
This is a great model of the Venator. I would suggest making the bridge a bit bigger, it just doesn't look proportionate. other than that, it's great! |
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June 16, 2010 |
AWESOME
i suggest u make the nose a little smaller slightly
otherwise
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May 29, 2010 |
that is good, but it needs more greebles, and it is just too fat, i know its a pain remodeling but it just has to be done, 4/5 |
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April 22, 2010 |
very nice, but not your best! the back could have some improving, the front are a bit too fat, it needs a republic insignia and it needs more greebles! but overall, this is pretty good! |
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March 24, 2010 |
excellant! i will post my star destroyer soon |
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February 14, 2010 |
Hmmm. I thought I already checked this. Nice job! Very detailed, and cool MINI Venator too! |
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Nice shape and greebling.~H |
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January 3, 2010 |
Wow excellent! |
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December 15, 2009 |
there are few really good ones but i thing yours is the best from them all! :-) great! super awesome! |
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November 28, 2009 |
Great! The guns in my opinion are very detailed.! |
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And finally, I give you a 26/30. It missed a few things, but it is by far the best entry I do believe I've seen. |
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October 22, 2009 |
Quoting Commander Chris
Really good. I like the detail you put onto the side of it. You said there was an interior?
I do, I'll try to post it soon. |
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October 22, 2009 |
I like this. The only thing you need now is the symbol/thing on the sides. I don't know how someone can make that. Try a decal maybe. You could put alot of smooth pieces on the sides and place labels on them. Then, just get a red sharpie and you're done. Could you check out my creations? Thanks. |
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October 22, 2009 |
Really good. I like the detail you put onto the side of it. You said there was an interior? |
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October 21, 2009 |
Why don't you take this apart, build the tank for the Tournament, and then build a v.2? Most people will probably see flaws in the design, anyway. You could kill 2 birds with one stone. |
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October 21, 2009 |
If this is your contest entry then 300/30!!Awesome!! |
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October 21, 2009 |
wow just wow, this has to be your best and biggest (duh) creation yet! and one more thing
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October 21, 2009 |
Very nice, very nice! The bridge is too small, and (maybe cause of the bridge) it looks too wide (the big front section right after the docking bay)... But otherwise, everything was very well done! 4/5! |
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October 21, 2009 |
Wow, I gota bad memory, you did post the link... Well you should add the link to this too. It's great. |
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October 21, 2009 |
This ginormously awesome man great build. |
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October 20, 2009 |
Quoting Juan Carranza
I'm seeing some flaws in this, the back part next to the engines is too tall, the engines need some work, the middle red part is too thin and is not dark red, the bridges look too small in comparison to the rest of the ship, the surface is underdetailed, and the belly of it is flat, but the side greebles are actually pretty good.
As I said before, read the points under the pics. You obviously didn't therefore, sorry to say, but your comment makes you seem dumb. As to the back being messed up, actually, the only thing not good are the engines. |
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October 20, 2009 |
The studs don't mess it up, it gives it the retro look. Wow... Awesome job, a little flat on the bottom and basic looking(it's too late to read so if you give an explaination for that... my eyes are burning from staring at this screen. I'm not looking even now.) By the way, I forgot to say you gota post your entries to the contest in Lightning Group http://www.mocpages.com/group_conversation.php?id=56&topicid=18067 here, and I don't know if I told you yet or if you know, but their is also a Venator section, you should post that your adding this as well. I'm assuming thats why you added the speeder to the group. If not ignore. Awesome Venator by the way. |
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My Biggest complaints with this is that the stripe seems too small compared to the rest of the body. That, and the studs kinda throw this thing off, but it's understandable if you did not have enough smooth plates to cover it up. |
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@Michael: I already read the intro before commenting, but I pointed out things that were'nt in the intro or under the pictures. |
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October 20, 2009 |
Not bad my friend. |
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October 20, 2009 |
Quoting Juan Carranza
I'm seeing some flaws in this, the back part next to the engines is too tall, the engines need some work, the middle red part is too thin and is not dark red, the bridges look too small in comparison to the rest of the ship, the surface is underdetailed, and the belly of it is flat, but the side greebles are actually pretty good.
Read the intro before commenting.
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I'm seeing some flaws in this, the back part next to the engines is too tall, the engines need some work, the middle red part is too thin and is not dark red, the bridges look too small in comparison to the rest of the ship, the surface is underdetailed, and the belly of it is flat, but the side greebles are actually pretty good. |
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October 20, 2009 |
Wow! I was gonna make a milinium falcon, but i tore it apart! |
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October 20, 2009 |
I better get good comments! |
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