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Part 2 of "The Invasion"

The TFOLs thought that the fight was over, that the AFOLs had been wiped out and victory was theirs. This however, was not the case. Hidden in a secret bunker in the Cliffside overlooking the carnage, the survivors of the disaster plan their revenge…






Man standing at Window: “Mr. Pitter, I want a head count please. How many did we lose?”








Wes Pitter: “Accounted for so far, we have Crimso Giger, Garth Danielson, Dave Kaleta…”








Wes: “Dave Shaddix, Heath Flor…”








Wes: “Luke Chapman, Moodswim, Yuri Fassio…”








Wes: “Alan Crisp, Master Shifu Leo J., and myself.”








Man: “Is that all?”
Wes: “Well, we also found Kelso’s sheep.”
Man: “Not surprised. She’s survived worse. But please get her off the table, we don’t WANT to know where she’s been.”
Wes: “Of course.”








Shaddix: “So what are we going to do now?”








Yuri: “Those punks wiped out everything!”








Kaleta: “The devastation was total. We must have our revenge. What can we do?”







Man: “Don’t worry my friends. I…”







Phipson: “…have a plan.”
Luke: "Dear GOD he's hidious!"
Phipson: "Shut it Chapman!"





Later that week, in downtown Tfolston.




Shaddix: “So this is it?”








Shaddix: “THIS is your revenge plan? To give them a stripclub?”








Phipson: “Think about it. A TFOL is only a TFOL until what age?”
Shaddix: “18.”
Phipson: “And the minimum age to get into a strip club is what?”
Shaddix: “18…”








Phipson: “Exactly, at which point they become an AFOL and then they’re one of us. Revenge my friends, is a dish best served… patiently.”








Shaddix: “I gotta admit it Chris, this is one brilliant plan! Argh… Urk… my arm…”





THUD




Yuri: “What happened to Dave?”
Phipson: “Wow. I guess it really DID kill him to say something nice. Who knew?”








Phipson: “Alrighty then, let’s go inside shall we?”
Yuri: “Right behind you!”








Alan: “I hope they can break a hundred?”
Heath: “I hope I brought enough tape!”
Kaleta: "Hey, they have fleshies in here. Should we call Richard?"






The TFOLs could be seen pacing the street in front of the club every night for years to come. Peeking whenever the door was opened, hoping to catch just a glimpse of the wonders within. The AFOLs had their revenge though the use of patience and cunning. By biding their time, they were able to rebuild their ranks and again, rule supreme over MOCpages…








Fourth Wall Commentary: When I first did the “Invasion” moc, I had no intention of making a follow up to it. Then everyone started with the “can’t wait for the second one” kind of comments. I thought, OK, sure, I can do that, but I didn’t want it to be yet another full force invasion thing. I wanted to take it in a different direction. Then… this idea hit me. What’s the ONE thing that AFOLs have that TFOLs envy (and vice versa actually. Youth is wasted on the young)? Age. All the teens want to do is grow up and be adults. So how could I exploit this? Bam… there ya go. I actually want this to be a small learning lesson for you teens. Don’t be too quick to try to grow up. Enjoy your youth while you can. Once it’s over, it’s over. Ok, enough of my soap box. Hope you all enjoyed my little bit of poking fun here. Till next time true believers!



Comments

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  December 24, 2013
Classic!
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  June 25, 2012
Mmm.....
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  June 24, 2012
As a TFOL myself I find this ridiculously hilarious.
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  January 29, 2012
Sweet revenge :)
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  October 16, 2011
yes, but while the other TFOLs are pacing I'm pillaging all the AFOLs houses because I'm catholic! *halo noises (real Halo, not game)*
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  October 15, 2011
No!No Stan Lee references!(And I'm not in a hurry to grow up!I never will be!I take life slowly when it needs to be!)
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  March 20, 2011
I have to say I did not see this coming. Great follow up.
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  August 16, 2010
Lego Strip Club! I'm shocked the Home Office didn't contact you to make it an official set. Somehow I thought Chapter One was a new build...Anyway, Nice work!
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  June 13, 2010
LOve it! How do you beat the TFOL's, just let them age, genius...And that club is my kind of place, love the way you roll. P.S. I cracked right up at how you just slipped Kelso's sheep on the table, wham! Hillarious...
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  October 20, 2009
I agree with Ian. After all, what's the internet for?
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  October 20, 2009
*has heartattack* Strip club? That's innapropriate! Heh heh heh...
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  October 20, 2009
Trust me, we TFOL's are allot more patient than you think. We will rule! Otherwise, great moc I loved that wall pattern in the " board room".
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  October 20, 2009
I have that same dark green body can anybody tell me what set/ line it came in?
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  October 20, 2009
Im guessing that while invading they didn't destroy the stripclub....lol, nice one Chris.
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  October 17, 2009
Alan: ooh ooh, my sig fig is the ninja! Right?! Chris: yah, sure it is, sparky.
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  October 15, 2009
maybe its an old question, but what is an AFOL and a TFOL ? also i think your figures are lame and your backgrounds are totally fantastic... so its great, when i look at the buildings
  October 15, 2009
Haha, I just recently realized who was who. I like how you made Luke Chapman and Moodswim. :P Would you mind inviting me to the MOCOlympics group, because I would like to participate in the Dark MocOlympics, if it isn't too late.
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  October 14, 2009
Hehe, very true. Your revenge is truly cruel, Mr. Phipson. Nice work on the sign too, I always find it impressive when people can create legible words without decals.
  October 13, 2009
By any chance do you know when the next Brickcon or such is happining and where? And how old do you have to be to display.
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  October 13, 2009
this would look nice beside the massage parlor somebody built recently. Great job. And by the way, are the Galactic Pimptastic Pole girls performing there?
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  October 12, 2009
Curses! now i will have to stick to the internet! But i really like the story and i knew that something was in that cliff side. you should do another one of all the TFOLs outside the club bickering. you do not have to say my name if you actually do use the idea.
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  October 12, 2009
I prefer revenge to be served up rather quickly, but I also prefer to visit strip clubs, so I'm liking this plan. At least there is entertainment while we wait.
Chris Phipson
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Commander Rhenzov
  October 11, 2009
Dude that was funny you should be like on front page every day because these comics keep geting better and better. By the way GREAT JOB!
  October 11, 2009
hmmm... this series (yes, you know you want to make a third) has gotten a idea into my little head. (no kelso, not the last few picks) but the AFOLs vs the TFOLs. maybe there could a a tournament of some sort! a TFOL team against a AFOL team! that would be awesome. maybe you could use the idea sometime? ~nickeal1
Chris Phipson
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Brad Jasko
  October 10, 2009
Lol.
  October 10, 2009
Can I join the Moc Olympics? 2009 of course.
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  October 10, 2009
I'm enjoying my youth, and using my teenage mind I have devised a plan...Cody, get on my shoulders! :P
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  October 10, 2009
Lol. Very funny. Sheep! lol.
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  October 10, 2009
Yay! I'm in one of your comics! This is very well done and really funny. Aw, the days of being kicked out of strip clubs because I was too young (wipes tear from eye):)
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  October 10, 2009
Haha! great! very funny!
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  October 10, 2009
love this one chris very funny
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  October 10, 2009
heheheheh classic, great build, and i'll get into that club oneday! then you'll all be sorry! muhahahahahha, damm just another 3 years to go then
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  October 10, 2009
wow, nice twist. and I meant the plot line, not the club.
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  October 10, 2009
Emergency aging kit! -Puts someone on my shoulders and wears a long coat- Oh my god...
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  October 10, 2009
LMFAO. You found out our weakness ! I hope there is a number 3.
  October 10, 2009
the first part reminds me of resident evil 3
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  October 10, 2009
Oh come on! No mention of me?! What kind of a world is this? Anyway, nice MOC, great idea. Good day
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  October 10, 2009
Hehe
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  October 10, 2009
Ha! Love it! Great job.
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  October 10, 2009
Wow. This was probably the second time when i read everything on someones MOC;) Really nice story, and nice idea for a revenge, by the way!
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  October 10, 2009
A clever build - love the story. Lee.
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  October 10, 2009
*shakes head* I'm really having a hard time commenting on this! All I can say is... well, I can't!
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  October 10, 2009
What makes you thing that I want to get all old and crippled so soon. You say revenge might be a dish best served patiently, your not a chef. Give it up Phipson, club or no club we will capture your leader and I will hold the key to MOCpages. Huuuaaaa haaaaa. *places spy camera inside window of club... Good build. -Dylan
Chris Phipson
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Joe P.
  October 9, 2009
I am wondering why a strippers club is good? OH NO! I'm either tingling with fear or excitement *evil laughter*... Anyway, The MOC is pretty cool overall. It makes me giggle in a lot of the parts. Just GREAT!
Chris Phipson
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Blake B.
  October 9, 2009
How are you a moderator? You build this stuff. I have no intention of doing that sort of thing ever. Crimso Gear added me to his favorites, he's awesome. Good job on the sign, though. ~Blake~
Chris Phipson
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Dave Sterling
  October 9, 2009
ROFLCOPTER...yep...you brought it out once again. I love this! Great ending to a great story. And the sign at the club is fantastic work. Great build Mr. Phipson. It's funny...all the TFOL's want to grow up and be AFOL's and we all wish we could go back to being kids. My how things change. :-)
Chris Phipson
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George Kemper
  October 9, 2009
I think the club needs some more security if I get out on the streets I'll definetley get in some how (probably pay the gaurds off or just be asked in).-George
Chris Phipson
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Heather LEGOgirl
  October 9, 2009
Well Shaddix croaking from paying a complement made me actually laugh out loud. Super funny, Chuckles Mcgee. Yes, that's your new name, enjoy it. ;)
Chris Phipson
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Mark Legorski
  October 9, 2009
Jokes, all I can say.
Chris Phipson
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Dave Shaddix
  October 9, 2009
Chris Phipson FTW! Well played, I am still laughing.
Chris Phipson
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Dave Shaddix
  October 9, 2009
...at your building skills
Chris Phipson
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Dave Shaddix
  October 9, 2009
I also love the fact that you left me, face down in the road, next to a giant hair.
Chris Phipson
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Dave Shaddix
  October 9, 2009
...and you gotta be 21 to get into the GOOD ones!
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  October 9, 2009
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA HA
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  October 9, 2009
good, actually great story, but I was expecting, something different. I mean yuri creating a mad dragon, Luke making big boom, Epic Jedi fight? Anyways, I suggest an "alternate ending". I mean, everything could end differently.
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  October 9, 2009
well we TFOL's have our youth!
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  October 9, 2009
If Phipson's line was a David Caruso parody, im happy. -Danny
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  October 9, 2009
LMFAO that's awesome man! And oh so true!! As soon as you youngins hit 18 you're OURS!!!! Muwahahahahahha!!
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  October 9, 2009
Somehow, I think the beginning is from a movie, suggestions, Chris?
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  October 9, 2009
Bravo Mr. Phipson! I need to get my sig fig up so I can check out fleshy slave Leia in that joint! Funny stuff
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  October 9, 2009
Awesome follow up, Chris. I am, of course, not worthy to be sitting at that table. Love the city out of the window. I'll be quiet, now...
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  October 9, 2009
Lol.
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  October 9, 2009
You do realize that 6/8 of the finalists in your olympics are TFOLs.
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  October 9, 2009
Quoting Master Shifu Leo J Well, the bouncer/driver license checker at the door might just let a few stray TFOL in with the proper bribe... wait there isn't one...
He's inside to give the false sense of secuirty to the TFOLs who attempt to sneak in... That's my story and I'm stickin to it.
Quoting Master Shifu Leo J the saga continues...
Like I said to Crimso, dear God NO!
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  October 9, 2009
Hahaha, some genuine laugh out loud moments there. And what's happening to that poor sheep in the background?
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  October 9, 2009
Really funny Chris. Keep it up.
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  October 9, 2009
Well, the bouncer/driver license checker at the door might just let a few stray TFOL in with the proper bribe... wait there isn't one... the saga continues...
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  October 9, 2009
Quoting Crimso Giger I didn't know I've got a mutant/robot face, thanks for the laugh !)
I looked for a sig fig on your home page and didn't find one... maybe I should have paid attention to your buddy icon huh? oh well, next time!
Quoting Crimso Giger Now... an Episode 3 ? ;-)
Oh dear god please NO!
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  October 9, 2009
Going to a strip-club with a cop, Batman and a whole bunch of great characters ? A (weird) dream that come true (at least for my sig-fig - I didn't know I've got a mutant/robot face, thanks for the laugh !) Well this is brillant and hilarious once again ! That is what I call a revenge haha I really love how you made the sign for the strip-club, and the city in flames behind the window is fantastic. Now... an Episode 3 ? ;-)
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  October 9, 2009
LOL this is really dang funny!!! pheraps this is a little inapropiot for a site like mocpages, But still hilarious. Great moc
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  October 9, 2009
HA! Hilarious ending! I am probably the only adult male who has not been in a strip club, but I was in my fair share of bars that bordered on strip clubs in my youth. Think I am still banned from one down Nogales way, anyway, great ending to a great two part story! Thanks for the laughs.
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  October 9, 2009
HAHAHA! Robo Man and i will be having fun in the strip club and all the other TFOLs will be out in the rain! Man, growing up is great for the time being! :)
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  October 9, 2009
Funny. I figured the TFOL's would just get bored and wonder off into the wilderness but strip clubs do have that certain attractive lure. Pimply faces asking, "Can I getta look see?" I remember going into my first pub with strippers. This was in Canada and I was big for 17. No one carded you back in the stone age. Wow, completely naked women and a beer. That was some lunch. That sigfig is pretty close, I do wear that hat. I know it's pretty small but it's stylin'. I did sneak my sigfig into my MocOlympics story entry. I have the Hawaian shirt on. Thanks for the yucks. Stay in school! see ya. garth
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  October 9, 2009
I'm going to try to quote Frank Miller's infamous line without getting moderated... "What, are you dense? Are you retarded or something? Who the h--- do you think I am? I'm the ----- Batman!" Yes, I am Batman. Thanks Chris, for including me (though I may have to give you a dark blue one which I prefer). Anywhooo, hahaha, great MOC!
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  October 9, 2009
Condor Calling Chris "Hey...Uh Hi Chris...Um...I'm Kinda Stuck In The 4th Floor Of The The Amsterdam Hotel...And Uh...Oh Guess What? My Hands On Fire! Anyways Could You Possibly Come Get Me?"
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  October 9, 2009
Great follow-up to the Invasion. My favorite scene is the burning city through the window.
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  October 9, 2009
Quoting Stacy Sterling I really like the forced perspective you did with the city (hmmm...seems I've seen that somewhere...perhaps in a galaxy far, far away. Or perhaps it was just a figment of round 4 of the MOCOlympics...sigh). If you keep the club together I think we could find a great place for it on the layout at Brickworld! Oh, and nice work on the story :)
To both Sterlings. Thanks guys! Sadly I already tore down the entire moc and sorted most of it already. I've got "other" plans for your layout next year though, so fret not little lady.
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  October 9, 2009
"Meanwhile, General JD is lounging is a giant mansion built of precious metals gloating over his spoils. Kelso's Lego collection...Goldman's Lego collection, Brian K's BrickForge Halo gear...he has it all. All I tell you! ALL!!"
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  October 9, 2009
Quoting Dave Shaddix I also love the fact that you left me, face down in the road, next to a giant hair.
The hair's your mom's. Thought you'd recognize it. And do you know how close I was to having you get run over by George Kemper while driving on his learner's permit? hahahaha
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  October 9, 2009
I really like the forced perspective you did with the city (hmmm...seems I've seen that somewhere...perhaps in a galaxy far, far away. Or perhaps it was just a figment of round 4 of the MOCOlympics...sigh). If you keep the club together I think we could find a great place for it on the layout at Brickworld! Oh, and nice work on the story :)
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  October 9, 2009
Oh gawd that was hilarious! "Oh god, he's hidious!" The club kept me luaghing for 3 minutes straight (thats hard to do, just so ya know) and Kelso's sheep is STILL alive?!? Glad I'm not an official TFOL, that would be torture. A work of art.
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  October 9, 2009
Quoting Dave Shaddix ...at your building skills
I rest my case...
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  October 9, 2009
Man, we just got owned... Good build btw. ~ J
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  October 9, 2009
Right behind you!
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  October 9, 2009
:-)
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  October 9, 2009
AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!! *faints* *wakes up* *ROFLS* AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!! I need to get that master shifu sigfig, preferably in orange... AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!! Somebody please stop me... Gawd Dang Kelso's sheep! AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!
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  October 9, 2009
Darn... You got us there, Phippy. What HAPPENED to you?! Nice job. The sign is really well done, (...not because of what it says) you must have a lot of clear blue bricks. Anyway... Nice story, funny!
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  October 9, 2009
NOO!! The TFOL lost!
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  October 9, 2009
Nice, good thing you did make a follow up, great job
 
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