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Star Wars-JEDI HUNTER-Part 1
Okay here it is: my first-ever Lego Star Wars comic! I wanted to do something different than the usual (don't I always?) I wanted to use action-figure size characters instead of the standard minifigs. I also wanted to use Photoshop for "special effects". This took me 2 weeks to create, so I hope it paid off. Please rate and comment:)
About this creation
It's been 2 years since Order 66. Since Palpatine attempted to rid the galaxy of the Jedi and to expand his new empire to every corner of it. But a few Jedi slipped through the Emperor's fingers to disappear into the darkness. That is, until today. The Empire needed someone to finish the job they started. So they hired me, Moog Shim, to do just that.

Lord Vader made a special request that I hunt down and destroy one Jedi in particular: his former master, Obi-Wan Kenobi

And that trail has led me here, to the barren ice planet of Hoth.

The perfect place to find a certain exile Jedi Knight by the name of Bek Hoganoo.

Moog: "Surprise, Jedi! Vacation's over!"
Bek: "Ugh! What?! Who are you and what do you want?!"

Moog: "What I want is to wipe the galaxy clean of Jedi scum like you! But first, I need answers! Obi-Wan Kenobi! Where is he?!
Bek: "Uh, I don't know what you're talking about! I don't know where he is!"

Moog: "Come on, boy! You and I both know that's a lie! I know you were one of the last Jedi to see him before he went into exile!"

Just then, Hoganoo uses the Force to summon his lost lightsaber...

...and ignite it, destroying Shim's weapon.
Bek: "I'll tell you nothing!"

Moog: "That's one thing I could never stand about you Jedi: so hard-headed. Alright, young one, if it's a real fight you want..."

"...it's a real fight you'll get!"
Bek: "Ugh!"

Moog: "Where's your fire now, Jedi? You'll tell me what I want to know one way or the other!"
Bek: "H-how do you know how to fight with a lightsaber?!"

Moog slices off Bek's hand!
Bek: "AAARRRGGGHHH!!!"

Moog: "Because, Hoganoo, I was once a Jedi JUST LIKE YOU!!!"
To Be Continued...



Comments

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  February 19, 2012
Nicely done! The figs and the graphics look great!
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  August 7, 2010
it is quite out of the ordinary to see an action figure scale comic! the only thing I did not like is you revealed to much in the first comic like how moog shim said he was a jedi , but besides that very good overall!
  April 2, 2010
this is good. you need to add words. check out my comic
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  February 14, 2010
This is a good comic! Except Starkiller (Galen Marik)from The Force Unleashed has that job. BTW What do you think of this? http://www.mocpages.com/moc.php/186080 It's called "Space Station Room". When I order from Bricklink I will be able to complete the space station. Any suggestions/complaints?
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  November 14, 2009
Great comic. The only thing this needs is bigger saber handles. Could you check out some of my custom SW minifigs? Thanks.
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  October 22, 2009
This is awesome!! Good figures, "Moog Shim" a great name"! Some pics are really movie like, so great job!
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  October 3, 2009
awesome, that's cool how the comic doesn't have mini figures like the others I've seen. nice job
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  September 26, 2009
That was awesome!!!
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  September 21, 2009
This is one of the best comics/series on mocpages because it has just the right mix of mistery and action. The mechs are perfect you captured the other jedi perfectly, the photoshop effects blend in perfectly. But you may want to improve the lightsabers at that scale I think you could pull off a detailed yet purist lightsaber, other than that small detail it is perfect.
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  September 17, 2009
nice great comic I like the head of the main character
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  September 13, 2009
Quoting MOCrazy ! Nice, I have also created a comic named Jedi Hunter could I just give you credit for the name and keep it?
Yeah, that's cool.
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  September 13, 2009
Nice, I have also created a comic named Jedi Hunter could I just give you credit for the name and keep it?
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  September 12, 2009
SWEET!!!!!
M<0><0>DSWIM  !
The Incinerator
  September 6, 2009
hey mood please check out my newest moc when you got time
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  September 6, 2009
Quoting ARC Commander BlueFire Can I be in your comic?
Maybe. I'll have to see how the story develops.
  September 6, 2009
Can I be in your comic?
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  September 6, 2009
Quoting Spencer Pearce KK is moog shim wearing a helmet?
Yeah. I'm gonna explain in the next part how he went from Jedi to bad guy. He's a cyborg like Vader.
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  September 6, 2009
Quoting Spencer Pearce And just where the |-|3LL did you get that cape? (BTW USS Reliant is done!)
I made it:)
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  September 6, 2009
Quoting jetfire 35 nice, but what species in moog shim?
I think I'll reveal next episode that he's human. Bek's species I just made up.
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  September 6, 2009
nice, but what species in moog shim?
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  September 6, 2009
Sorry I haven't commented it earlier, but as university starts I have less time you know:( Probably this is your best creation so far, I like the special effects that you made with the help of photoshop, it makes your story really different, really cool and incredible...so keep up this awesome way of building Mood! I am looking forward to seeing the next ep=)
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  September 5, 2009
Quoting Michael Qoyawayma I like it a ton! when can we expect the next part? On a side note, I advise you to leave all of phazez groups, he is rude, mean, takes over groups, and ignores authority. Please, you making a statement will help further our cause for a clean mocpages. Phaze must be shunned.
Ok. The next part should be out in a week or 2.
 I like it 
  September 5, 2009
I like it a ton! when can we expect the next part? On a side note, I advise you to leave all of phazez groups, he is rude, mean, takes over groups, and ignores authority. Please, you making a statement will help further our cause for a clean mocpages. Phaze must be shunned.
 I like it 
  September 4, 2009
Very creative idea, pulled off perfectly! I am looking forward to the next episode ;)
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  September 4, 2009
tht was intence please check out my new mech for Maox
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  September 4, 2009
Great job! My new comic is up. Please take a look: http://mocpages.com/moc.php/149283
 I like it 
  September 3, 2009
epic win man, an extremely original idea which has been pulled off very well, great work
  September 3, 2009
thi s is totally cool the action mechas are totally awesome! one thing, i need some judges to judge on this contest-could you? http://www.mocpages.com/group.php/5635 thanks
M<0><0>DSWIM  !
The Incinerator
  September 2, 2009
Hey Moodswim I posted part 4 of my comic Imperial Times http://www.mocpages.com/moc.php/149889 maybe you can check it out? thanks
M<0><0>DSWIM  !
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The Incinerator
  September 2, 2009
huh funny I already had commented on this moc, anyway its a really good start I'm excpecting a lot from this series the photoshop is also really cool, fantastic story tell me when part 2 is up~Inc
M<0><0>DSWIM  !
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Char Bioshift
  September 2, 2009
Nice. Not much to say but it has a good storyline. can't wait for part 2
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  September 2, 2009
I LUV IT!!!! IT IS AWESOME!!!! 100000/5!!!!! SUH_WEEET! The special effects are really awesome!
  September 2, 2009
well i dont usally read or look at comics and stuff but its u im talking bout, so i checked it out, its looks awsome(ok i havent read it yet, i will when i got more time) but i love the look of it(not the comic, the why u used the photo shop or whatever it is, very cool looking.
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  September 2, 2009
Quoting Yuri Fassio This is not bad at all, but in a comic or story opening pic after pic is quite bothersome... you shoild use the bigger settings when uploading.
Thanks, man! I didn't even think of that. I changed it and I think it looks much better:)
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  September 2, 2009
This is not bad at all, but in a comic or story opening pic after pic is quite bothersome... you shoild use the bigger settings when uploading.
M<0><0>DSWIM  !
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George Kemper
  September 1, 2009
Great job the pics are perfect. Sorry about being really quite have had school and football. Oh and about the DA (old) but did u let elite commander teabagger join? Cause I need to talk to you. Commander's of the D.A. group when you get the chance.-George
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  September 1, 2009
Quoting Shopaholic Girl Hey that was really good. I like the pics you used. The figures are really good ,too. You have amazing writing skills. Have you ever thought of writing a book. I'm in the middle of writing a book. By the way you did a great job.
Thanks. I have done quite a bit of writing in my day. I used to write short stories and poetry. I write mostly lyrics for my music nowadays.
 I like it 
  September 1, 2009
Hey that was really good. I like the pics you used. The figures are really good ,too. You have amazing writing skills. Have you ever thought of writing a book. I'm in the middle of writing a book. By the way you did a great job.
 I like it 
  September 1, 2009
Great work on this comic. I would like to see more. Thanks for the comment.
  September 1, 2009
Cool comic! It was worth the wait! Hey, when you get a chance, check this out before it gets removed! http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Zc4TH0w91bM Its a cool Gundam 30th anniversary thing!
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  September 1, 2009
Awesome, just awesome. I really don't know about the Photoshop effects, though...They just seem a bit out of place. Great job, though! (I know it must be a lot of work, but maybe if you could make it a little longer?)
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  September 1, 2009
Quoting Brickdoctor - That's really good, but you might want to change the font on the main photo. It would be best if you could get a StarVader font (http://www.galaxyfaraway.com/gfa/1998/12/star-wars-fonts/) for the main text (seeing as it is a comic) and then place an Aurebesh translation below, slightly smaller, and make it look like a hologram transmission. I'm not sure about Photoshop, but in my editor (Paint.net), choose Text, primary color trans-light blue with a diagonal line fill, and secondary color trans-dark blue. Looks really nice.
Thanks for the link, dude:)
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  September 1, 2009
Quoting Sergeant Pepper What species is the Jedi? (The backwards legs really confused me for a while)
I don't know. I made him up:)
  September 1, 2009
What species is the Jedi? (The backwards legs really confused me for a while)
 I like it 
  September 1, 2009
Pretty cool build! I love the figures, and the story flows nicely. I agree with whoever said this below me, the lightsabers should be bigger.
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  September 1, 2009
Quoting William H. Good job. But the problem with full size comics is that the set has to be HUGE. And no vehicles... :(. Anyway I love the effects and the story. The characters look really awesome and the story leads up to the next one. Nice MOC Swim, I really love it.
The cool thing about Photoshop is that the set can be any size because you can stretch it, which I did. There will be some vehicles in the next part.
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  September 1, 2009
Nice start, that jedi is toast
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  September 1, 2009
if his mission was to kill jedi he would have a very har time with sam huftobn (hes half jedi master and half lord=jedi lord)
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  September 1, 2009
Nice. I love the way you have used big figures instead of minifigs.
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  September 1, 2009
Nice. I love the way you have used big figures instead of minifigs.
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  September 1, 2009
Nice. I love the way you have usedbig figures instead of minifigs.
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  September 1, 2009
Very cool, like the guy said before me "love the photo shop" every thing goes well together. Could you check out my newest creation? http://www.mocpages.com/moc.php/149515
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  September 1, 2009
AWESOME!! Great job and photoshop! I've been waiting for this for a while... Lol. Everything's awesome. I can't wait for the next one! Very suspenseful, too! :D :P
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  September 1, 2009
Awesome!
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  September 1, 2009
AWESOME!!! ~Moses
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  September 1, 2009
AWESOME!!! ~Moses
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  September 1, 2009
Good job. But the problem with full size comics is that the set has to be HUGE. And no vehicles... :(. Anyway I love the effects and the story. The characters look really awesome and the story leads up to the next one. Nice MOC Swim, I really love it.
 I like it 
  September 1, 2009
That is probabbly the best comic I've ever seen on mocpages! The photoshopping really adds a realistic touch! Awesome work! Can't wait for the next one!
  September 1, 2009
Hahaha! Teeny-tiny light sabers! I know you're not one to copy things, but you might want to look at the lightsabers held by the Grievous lego model (10186) or better, using technic axles or a bar 4L and stacking some bits on it.
 I like it 
  September 1, 2009
That's really good, but you might want to change the font on the main photo. It would be best if you could get a StarVader font (http://www.galaxyfaraway.com/gfa/1998/12/star-wars-fonts/) for the main text (seeing as it is a comic) and then place an Aurebesh translation below, slightly smaller, and make it look like a hologram transmission. I'm not sure about Photoshop, but in my editor (Paint.net), choose Text, primary color trans-light blue with a diagonal line fill, and secondary color trans-dark blue. Looks really nice.
 I like it 
  September 1, 2009
Very impressive. It's also nice that it is different from others.
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  August 31, 2009
This is great!!! i love the action, and especially the photoshopping skills! great job my man, cant wait to see the next part!
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  August 31, 2009
why's it always the hand with you people? can't a jedi or sith just cut off a couple of fingers? I mean, vader, luke, dooku with both hands, and now this? lol jk nice comic, and good photoshop techniques. 5/5
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  August 31, 2009
why's it always the hand with you people? can't a jedi or sith just cut off a couple of fingers? I mean, vader, luke, dooku with both hands, and now this? lol jk nice comic, and good photoshop techniques. 5/5
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  August 31, 2009
awesome job man, im in awe at your photoshop and action posing abilities!!
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  August 31, 2009
Can't wait 'till part 2.
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  August 31, 2009
Very good!
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  August 31, 2009
OMG this looks awesome! You better finish it :)
 
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