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Ashblight
The Black Fantasy Scourge is spreading... Even the trees are infected now...
About this creation
MoonWereWolfAir has used this same song for one of her MOCs, but I feel this is more fitting for mine, considering it is a Dark Black Forest.



I wonder into the Black Forest...
What do I see?
Is this a tree I see before me?
Perhaps it once was,
Proud,
Magnificent,
But now Twisted,
Broken,
Bleeding,
Writhing.

Once great oaken branches have withered, sharpened, blackened.
Roots suck the life from tainted ground.
And a great, glowing, burning eye.
watching the forest.
Watching for what?








It turns.
Writhing trunk glistening in the early morning mist.
Leafless branches tumbling

And a hapless gafna feels its life end
in its jaws.

I stay back, but it notices me.
It roars
Lunges.
But the roots keep it secured to its blasted clearing.

Even so, it lunges for me,
and I feel my heart race.



I wonder, in retrospect,
why it was so attatched
to its one apple,
hanging forlornly from its side.
Perhaps it had feelings
for its unholy fruit.

Did I pose a threat to this monstrosity?



And it turns, a bird had startled it.
It had forgotten me,
then a tentacle lashes out at a passing smokehawk

I am rooted to my spot, just as the tree is.
With fear.
It can smell it pouring off me.


Then the beast turns,
arches over,
and releases a torrent of bile from its deformed throat
Onto the leaf-strewn floor.

It screams in rage, pain, and I move away.

But is this pity I feel? For such an evil, monstrous creature?

Yes.

And then all of a sudden a figure strides out in front of it, and strikes.

Mata-Nui! I thought I'd be dead.




Comments

  August 21, 2009
i tottaly Vote a V2, i suggest makking it bigger and MAKE IT A CANABLE!! (Nomnomnomnomsomeothertree :))
Gringat the Repugnant
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Alex Ward
  August 19, 2009
OMG this is the best black fantasy moc I habve ever seen (shadowgear's are really good to though)
 I like it 
  August 19, 2009
awsome Black Fantasy!
 I like it 
  August 19, 2009
Awesome Bionicle dude!
 I made it 
  August 19, 2009
Quoting Johann Dakitsch Nice, but I think it has a bit of too much red/orange/wathever pieces... And, if you didn't say, I'd never realize that's a tree... But it's not so bad, I just think it needs more work in the aesthetic part...
Ashblight was originally a Giant BF pathogen for Thius to fight, but I changed him to a tree halfway through after a few comments from my brother... Now I look at him, I could make a V2 ten times more tree-ish than this...
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  August 18, 2009
Very nice story. I love the use of the leech sphere for the apple (is it the apple?) and the Skrall head as a drooping, leaf-covered branch.
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  August 18, 2009
AWESOME!!!
  August 18, 2009
Nice, but I think it has a bit of too much red/orange/wathever pieces... And, if you didn't say, I'd never realize that's a tree... But it's not so bad, I just think it needs more work in the aesthetic part...
 I like it 
  August 18, 2009
Interesting build with a nice little story.
 
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