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Takanuvas
this is Takanuvas, the toa of power (good)
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This is my self moc, I know it's not very good, I have a total of 24 mocs on my shelfs right now, so I'm limited on pieces... I'll try to take



Pictures every chance I get and post them here and on youtube...



PLEASE COMMENT AND RATE, I NEED TO KNOW YOUR OPINION AND WHAT CAN BE DONE TO IMPROVE HIM



Comments

 I like it 
  August 20, 2009
Not your best moc... but I'll still give it a 5.
 I made it 
  August 9, 2009
Quoting Aquaras NA Pretty good, but you said to critique it. The following is only helpful hints. 1. You could try to switch the shoulder armour with something that doesn't need a half-long stopper piece, like Matoro Mahri's shoulder armour. 2. You could try to change the abdomen armour. The Hordika foot is fine, but the Umbra hand piece just seems out of place. And if you want to keep it, try using the 1 1/2 long peg. 3. What's with the angled pieces on the foot? It just doesn't really make much sense. You could add something like one of those 2-hole and 1 cross-hole pieces onto it, and add something onto that. Also, what's with the blue axle-peg on the left hand? is that supposed to hold the weapon somehow? Note: These are only suggestions. You don't have to follow them. Hope I was helpful.
yea, thanks, and the blue peg is actually for the use of his motorcycle, I'll upload that tommorow
  August 9, 2009
Pretty good, but you said to critique it. The following is only helpful hints. 1. You could try to switch the shoulder armour with something that doesn't need a half-long stopper piece, like Matoro Mahri's shoulder armour. 2. You could try to change the abdomen armour. The Hordika foot is fine, but the Umbra hand piece just seems out of place. And if you want to keep it, try using the 1 1/2 long peg. 3. What's with the angled pieces on the foot? It just doesn't really make much sense. You could add something like one of those 2-hole and 1 cross-hole pieces onto it, and add something onto that. Also, what's with the blue axle-peg on the left hand? is that supposed to hold the weapon somehow? Note: These are only suggestions. You don't have to follow them. Hope I was helpful.
 
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