Quoting Commander Frodo
thats amazing i love it but the first thing i think about is "grap the sniper grap the sniper NO! my teammate grabbed the sniper.....betrayal and other team laughing and i have my sniper!"
Well, it's a good start for your first Halo creation. I think the main thing that you need to work on is making the design more of your own, not only for your own conscience, but for the people of MOCpages. My only point is that some people would rather see YOUR Warthog. By the way, did you fix that slanting problem I told you about?