one mans story, that goes trought many dangers and perils.
About this creation
my name is Mac Bringer. And this is my story.
one day, oh that one day, i was look at the clouds trough my office window... then... i was abducted....
i was later transphered to some kind of facility... there, i meet the only friend that i had made in the facility... Greg...
we both were the best shots in the class, Greg said i was a better shot than him, i denied it, although, i secretly agreed with him.
then, early one morning, BOSS called Greg and I in. he had armor waiting for us along with C-42 rifles. it was finally... armor day...
he told us he had our first assinment in the field. a band of terrorists were hiding out in the desert. we, had to go extermentate them.
he sent us on our trip and we were rearing to go.
LATER IN THE MOHAVI DESERT
thugg1: can we go now!?!? its SO hot out!
thugg2: ya boss, atleast let us in the water.
boss: no you fools, you are to protect me, not swim in MY oasis.
thugg3: hot, hot, hot, SO HOT! HOT!!!!!
thugg4:its so hot!! wahhh!!!
thugg5: shut it whiner! we're all hot. suck it up.
thugg6: ahhh..... even my bazuka is bone dry....
thugg1: wait, am i holucinating?!?!? (spelled wrong) or are there two... BAM!
thugg2: ahhh!! were under attack!
boss: battle stations! go! go! go!
[Battle breaks out]
Greg: I HOPE YOU LIKE THE TAST OF LEAD FOOLS! HAHAHAHA!!!
BAMBAMBAMBAMBAM
thugg2: ahh....
thugg6: he's throwin' a dang spe...
thuggs3,4,5: RUN!!!!
Mac: so mr. whateveryournameis. whe've finally caught you after months of searching.
boss: what the heck?!?! i've never seen you guys before!
Mac: justs adds drama. so come with...
Greg: DUCK!!!
Mac:what the heck was that!?!?!?
Greg: that was a boulder sherlock.
Mac: i know that! but how did it fly at us!
boss: prepare for the worst... muhahahaha!
Mac:its a... monkey?...
Greg: its so cute!
Mac: dear lord! were did he get those guns!
Greg: not cute! not cute! not cute!
BAMBAMBAMBAMBAM
Monkey: uhuh ahah
Mac: how does he do that!?!?!
boss: he watched the matrix one too many times.
Greg: uh... Mac... HE HAS SWORDS NOW!
Mac: He's doging our every bullet!
Greg: he's up again!
but right then and there, mac ended the fight with a well aimed shot.
Mac: your comin with us "boss"
BOSS: good job Mac and Greg. now then, get some rest, i have a suprise for you in the morning.
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note that there is BOSS and "boss". BOSS stands for "basic, oporations, security, sargent
this is my first series EVER!!!
i don't really have any idea about what is going to happen in the second episode exept for the "suprise" that BOSS has for Mac and Greg.
hope you enjoy! please rate, comment, or give any suggestions!
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August 25, 2009 |
It's a nice setting and could become an interesting series but it needs a cool story. The protagonists are already cool in their armors. Keep working. |
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August 18, 2009 |
sweet! thats a cool comic! |
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August 11, 2009 |
cool! |
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August 4, 2009 |
Ninja matrix monkey? What more could you ask for? |
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I made it |
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August 4, 2009 |
Quoting Awesome-o-saurus The Not-So-Great
Matrix monkey... That's new.
don't forget the swords! oh and do you think the story line is good? because this is my first series moc. also, YOUR POAM IS DONE!!!!! CURSE YOU!!! jk, but i will add you to my favs because that series was probably the best on moc pages. it sounded like a AFOL wrote it. amazing job. |
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August 4, 2009 |
Matrix monkey... That's new. |
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I made it |
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August 3, 2009 |
Quoting Spartan Crusader Matt Shack
Nice use of Mandalorian armor.
thanks |
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August 3, 2009 |
Nice use of Mandalorian armor. |
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