Sorry to say, but this creation(which you entered in the Bionicle MOCs contest) does not conform with the rules. Your creation must be new and it must be a rahi. Check to see which rahi group you are in. If you don't change your creation, it will be disqualified. Sorry.

cool ,maybe perhaps resembles kardas

Ecellent job on everything, i think you should make the wings a bit more blade-y (i don't blame you, through, Wings are REALYY hard to make, especially at the size you want yours.)

cool!!

nice job! you made the head well. 5/5

Thank you for pointing me to your page :) I like this one, but I can give you some suggestions to help you improve. Try to use as little colors as you can when building: a small and elegant Bionicle is better rated than a big multicolored one. When you start buildins, decide whetther your creation should look elegant and proportioned, or wierd and uneathly, and don't mix the two styles on the same MOC. Keep it up!