I'll get a picture, just waiting for Faelo. Oh, and thanks to him.
About this creation
The War was tough. I lost many of my best men, all to save the lives on Jedi we would kill anyway. That first battle was the toughest. I was brand new, ready to prove myself to the galaxy. I felt invincible, as most new troops do when they are sent into battle for the first, and possibly last, time. That feeling of invincibility was gone the second I landed on a dusty Outer Rim planet that would soon be the graves of many of my brothers. What I saw as my LAAT touched down was horrific: men lying in pools of their own blood, being stomped into the dust by soulless, mechanical heels. Fortunately for me, my squad was assigned to clear the Execution Arena of droids and wipe out any important Separatist members. This is where my story begins...
Our whole squad, or what was left of it, met in the Arena's catacombs to be briefed. Our Lieutenant was a strict man when the need arised, but I respected him as a leader, and learned that to the fullest extent when we worked together in later life.
The squad split up, CT-1096 to the last known position of a very high ranking Geonosian, CT-4309 to the landing pad with explosives to destroy escape ships, My lieutenant went to kill off the droids that were left, and I was sent to clear the execution animal cages. I did not expect anything to be there, as I assumed that they were all dead from the Arena Battle.
At first I though I got the easy job, I was wrong. At first I thought I was done and was going to leave.
I heard a grunting sound deeper in the area. I thought it was a wounded animal, so I went in to put it out of its misery.
As I walked deeper into the animal area, and there before me stood a massive animal at least a few meters tall, chewing on a certainly tasteless droid carapace.
I do not know how I did it.My adrenaline was pumping, and, with all my might, aimed the best I could, and shot a laser bolt that seemed to be in slow-mo. I prayed it would find its mark...
With a grunt, the giant beast stumbled and fell to its side. I was frozen.
My squad found me very quickly. They were amazed at what i'd done. I said that i'd accomplished my mission, and found out that trooper CT-1096 single handedly took out a Geonosion general and had his golden vibroblade as proof.
As we were about to meet up with our commander, my Lieutenant pulled me aside and informed me that we were both to be transferred to Kamino to participate in a new training program that encouraged individuality in clones. That promotion would lead me to the greatest peril I would ever see...
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July 31, 2009 |
Very cool! I really like the story!! Keep me updated! |
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July 29, 2009 |
Quoting CC-1792 Commander Trixe
Nice job reek this is a great story 5/5! I think I want to make something like this if that is alright with you?
Sure. |
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July 29, 2009 |
Nice job reek this is a great story 5/5! I think I want to make something like this if that is alright with you? |
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Are they on Geonosis? Maybe make the ground red, and add some of the arena? But I love the story, and that's a great reek! Is it to scale with a person? |
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July 27, 2009 |
This is the same genre as my series.
I can't wait for more. It's coming along great. I'm reading 2 now. |
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July 26, 2009 |
Cool, I am sure this is going to be a great story. |
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This is great I love the storyline ,and the Reek looked good except Geonossis should be tan or brown. |
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July 21, 2009 |
ITS SOOOOO COOL, DUDE!!!! |
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July 21, 2009 |
Quoting Commander Flare
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WHAT? |
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July 21, 2009 |
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Quoting Recon Commander: Reek
Ep 2 might be posted today, and yes that is Faelo! How did you find out?
LOL, I saw some comments (I don't remember where) where you and Faelo were talking about this. So I kept on reading. LOL. "Make sure I have blue arms then..." etc. ^^ Once again, good job. |
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July 20, 2009 |
Quoting Crusader Maxim .
AMAZING story, very very well written. Cool, too. Isn't the lieutenant Lieutenant/Commander Faelo? Can't wait for episode 2 (if there is one)!
Ep 2 might be posted today, and yes that is Faelo! How did you find out? |
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July 20, 2009 |
AMAZING story, very very well written. Cool, too. Isn't the lieutenant Lieutenant/Commander Faelo? Can't wait for episode 2 (if there is one)! |
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July 20, 2009 |
Nice, I see your camera is working again! |
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July 20, 2009 |
Quoting Heber .
The story was really good but I think you should add some walls and stuff made of Lego and stuff. AWESOME first episode. When are you going to make them talk though? :]
They'll probably talk in the next episode. I was thinking about making this like Reek's journal, but I guess if everyone wants that i'll do it. Ep 2 should be posted this week. Oh, and as I finished filming, I saw a perfect yelloow wall in a brick pile! Ugh! |
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July 20, 2009 |
That's pretty nice, good story aswell.
By the way, part 7 of my series is up! You are in it this time, check it out! |
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Commander King July 19, 2009 |
nice job. i like it! |
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July 19, 2009 |
The story was really good but I think you should add some walls and stuff made of Lego and stuff. AWESOME first episode. When are you going to make them talk though? :] |
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July 19, 2009 |
Quoting Spartan*Zer0* (Thorn)
the story is very good but the ground pieces your using don't realy match the story.
Well, it is inside, so it is metal. |
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July 19, 2009 |
the story is very good but the ground pieces your using don't realy match the story. |
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July 19, 2009 |
nice man! |
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