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Haywire Chapter 10
This is it: Haywire Finale part 1 of 3. This episode will leave you hanging, so be prepared!
About this creation
In the CEIA (Coalition Experimental Industries Administration) main headquarters, machines department V/P3r is being prepared for deactivation...



Avon: Well, well, well. V/P3r, the rogue robot. hmuph! we were watching the whole time...

V/P3r: Why watch me? Am I not just a nonthinking machine?

Avon: All prototype infantry and espionage robots were tested because of a certain jump in number of faulty machines. Most ran smoothly, missions complete or missions failed. 1 mission aborted: yours.

Avon: And I don't know if you are a nonthinking machine... your question itself testifies that.

V/P3r: Then why can't I choose my fate?

Avon: We cannot have our property lost. We own you, machine.

V/P3r: But you said it yourself, I can think... I can feel!

Avon: ah, but you are naught but a machine!



Avon: Computer! deactivate the subject!

Computer: Cannot complete function- system corrupted- foreign software detected- attempting to re- Hello, Commander. Your "computer" is unavailable at the moment. May I take a message?



Avon: technician! deactivate him manually!

Technician: yes sir, gimme a second.



Play this now!



Fwap! Viper takes out the techie.

Computer: sorry sir, systems are functioning at normal capacity. Shall I deactivate the subj- Avon: GET THE ROBOT!



Avon misses the shot and Viper kicks the Night Crawler (a black ops platoon) guard.





Avon: sound the alarm! I want all troops on this robot! He can't escape this time!







Viper holds the trooper and uses his gun.









Viper blasts the armor rack in the barracks.







Viper runs into a field of machine parts and prototype robots. (some will be made into MOCs)



A prototype mecha infantry unit.



Viper hears them coming...



Troopers: he was in here! He can't have gone far.



Avon: come, we have to search!



The mech turned on, despite not being programmed yet. (by Viper)



Gah! look out!



The robot deactivates in mid step.



and crashes to the ground... on the guards.





Viper returns to his body and is ready for a head start to the hanger.



Voices in the distance: They he goes! cut him off in the hallway!



Viper takes out troops while running to the hanger.





Avon: we have him now, no where to hide!



Blam!







Avon: Your time is up machine!

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Scroll while the epic sinks in...

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YAWNNNN!
I think I'll go take a nap. maybe make the next episode in a month or two.
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Ok, just kidding, It was photographed at the same time as this one, so I just need to upload it. I have to wait till the weekend still.

In your comment (you will comment!) tell me what you think and feel upon seeing the last picture. wait... the last picture... lets see that one again



ouch, well, gimme your predictions of what will happen next...

OMG! VIPER ES GONNA DIES! OH NOEZ!



Comments

 I like it 
  July 31, 2009
lol music was still playing by the time i finished reading....nice cliffhanger!
 I like it 
  July 19, 2009
epic cliffhanger!
 I like it 
  July 16, 2009
That Mech looks vaguely familiar!
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  July 11, 2009
AAAHHHHH!!! ...ok, i think it is realy, realy, realy... realy cool!!!!! but the pictures are a bit doged beacause of the colour scemes you used still, it is totaly awesome!!!!!
 I like it 
  July 10, 2009
nah anders i don't read minds but i do sometimes dream into the future but thats a story for another day
 I like it 
  July 10, 2009
nah anders i don't read minds but i do sometimes dream into the future but thats a story for another day
 I like it 
  July 9, 2009
wow, 5/5 for general excellence - and I really like the cliffhanger!
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  July 9, 2009
Quoting Lieutenant Commander Idonian Sweetness! Could you give me tips on how to make a cool robo for a similar comic.
ok, i'll do a MOC about it sometime soon.I'm no expert though. try lots of hinges and turny things. i recommend "faucet" pieces to make joints. You'll see some examples in #11
 I like it 
  July 9, 2009
What's that I see through the doorway of the last pic..? I wonder what it could be...
  July 9, 2009
Sweetness! Could you give me tips on how to make a cool robo for a similar comic.
 I like it 
  July 9, 2009
hmm. since this is part one of three I'm pretty sure he won't die... at least not yet. for some reason though the last picture reminds me of the scene in Dirty Harry when they're in the football feild and Harry steps on Scorpio's leg.
  July 9, 2009
Gus, are you busy? If not, can you log on to Gmail now?
 I like it 
  July 9, 2009
Oho! There they are!
 I made it 
  July 9, 2009
Quoting Eturior . Hmm, but I don't get it why you post unready MOCs? Anyway, nice job with this episode!
simply so i don't lose the stuff if something happens. I've had to redo a whole episode before... sometimes people will come and exit out of the edit page while I'm having a break or something.
 I like it 
  July 9, 2009
Hmm, but I don't get it why you post unready MOCs? Anyway, nice job with this episode!
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  July 9, 2009
OMFG!!!
  July 9, 2009
Hehe, I knew it wasn't done. And for what will happen next... Oh! Viper downloads himself into Avon's gun, and kills them all, then escapes! No, no, forget that, he downlads himself into Avon's helmet (with HUD) and escapes without Avon knowing! EDIT: Umm, Oucho, do you read minds?
 I like it 
  July 9, 2009
NOOOOO HE CAN'T DIE!! i think viper will program in to his gun then follow lots of different circuits to a new body. well done this is cool man
 I made it 
  July 9, 2009
Quoting Galvan . i see your still workin on it
thank you, you knew!
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  July 9, 2009
Nice, but why no mainpic or textures?
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  July 9, 2009
(Insert intense music above) He's givin' us the silent treatment!
 I like it 
  July 9, 2009
...No dialogue? *Sniff*
 
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