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my BOTB contest entry,its not up to date since i decided that my sigfig had not brothers but instead of brothers ill make them his warrior friends.



Sefra, leader of the guards, was leading Ladon and his men on an expedition to the northern settlement were soemthing strange was happening to the animals and they were being taken as a sacrifice, i hope this is okay with you lord lego and nufalak. they were walking between 2 steep slopes when they were attacked by some people who had started a rebellion against the king.



the batle was short only took a few seconds in fact and the general lay opn the road.

Sefra: Kill him Ladon, kill him and make him suffer.
Ladon looked into the mans eyes and the man cryed out
man: my mind, its been taken over, ive been bent to his will, let me live, i did not to this intentionally, please good sir.
Ladon: he says he was controlled against his will, we should let him live.
Sefra: controlled or not, he attacked a caravan of the kings soldiers. he shall die for his acts.
Man: my wife, hew has my wife and kid, if you kill me and i dont give him what he wants then he will kill them and their blood will be on your hands.
Ladon: who is this that you speak of.
man: his name is Se...
Sefra swung down his sword and lopped the mans head clean of his body. Ladon looked at the mans face and a tear dropped down his cheek. he stood up and walked the other way.
Sefra: where are you going?
Ladon: im going back to the city, i hereby quit the kings military, what you have doen here today is unexusable, men, i release you from my service as im no longer in any military service. His men looked at him and followed him down the road that lead to home.





Comments

  September 2, 2009
Ok, here's your score: Story: 2/5 Build: 1/5 Content: 2/5 Authentic: 1/5 Total: 6/20 Sorry, but I have to be honest with this.
  July 12, 2009
Ok, none of this really fits the lore of BotB, and I don't understand how this relates to your characters backstory.
 
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