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My Series about a U.S. Airborne Private. And it WILL be continued. Not like my other ones where they won't continued for quite a long time. Enjoy!~Aidan
About this creation

The Plane was cramped and dark, I couldn't see two feet ahead of me. And you could actually smell the nervousness of everyone in the plane. I could hear the booming of AntiAircraft Guns and the wailing of sirens. When the door opened I could hear it even louder! When it was my turn to jump I stood at the edge of the open door and looked out while waiting for the light to turn green.

Then I jumped. When I pulled the cord to activate my chute it didn't work! I began to fall faster and faster all the time trying not to panic. Finally, my chute opened and I was jerked back. The last thing I saw before I blacked out was the top of a tree.

When I woke up I had the strangest view. Everything was upside down! I saw my Captain lying dead in the field, and I could barely see my Sergant hiding behind some sort of sandbagged defence.

The Sergant saw me and helped me get down from the tree, then he said: "Ok, I think that MG Nest is empty but I'm not sure. Let's check it out. Stay quiet and follow me"

Just as I was getting up to follow Sarge, my gear clanked together. Then everything happened at once, Sarge yelled: "Take Cover!!" Gunfire burst from the MG Nest, and I fell to the ground in pain, clutching my gut. Then everything began to fade.

I tried to move, but I couldn't, I was paralyzed! In what I thought were my last moments, I saw Sarge chuck a Grenade into the MG nest. Then everything went black.

To Be Continued



Comments

 I like it 
  January 14, 2012
Wow! I love the about-to-black-out effect and first person Point of view. Great Work!
 I like it 
  July 10, 2009
Very nice work this looks great. Can you check out my new creation if you get the chance?
 I like it 
  July 9, 2009
nice work on the creation and the effects!
 I made it 
  July 7, 2009
Thanks you guys! I'm getting started on the next one now.~Aidan
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  July 6, 2009
Nice! I love the custom decals. Great job!
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  July 6, 2009
Wow, nice job! I love the pictures and the little effects. Excellent work. Nice little story line. ~ Ghostman :)
 
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