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The Mars Mission Novel Chapter 6
The Alien hive.....
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Chapter 6; we are here.

Far away from Eagle command, in a large abyss, lat an tangle of green wire, strange glowing liquid, and then. Built into the depths of Martian ground lay the Alien command… And inside; The alien Commander.

“Did our offensive against the Humanoids prove an success?”

“Err, no commander. The Humanoids have more weapons than we expected…. B-But we managed to stop there mining operations.” The Alien drone stopped, scared we stood in the dark room, then the Alien commander lifted his large, black and Green body from his throne. His glowing yellow eyes stared at the alien drone.

“We failed…..
We landed on this world one hundred thousand years ago… We wiped out the Martian threat and took this world for our own.. Raped this world on Energy Crystals and went into slumber… Now we awake, to take the new supply on crystals, and when this ‘inferior’ species lands here, with only a hand full of troops. We fail?”

The Alien drone took an step back. The commander walked towards him, and stood before him. He was twice the height of the Drone, and twice as strong.
“I do not take this matter lightly…”
The Alien Commander grabbed one of the drones arms, and began to pull. The drone let out am scream of agonising pain.. Then, his arm separated from his body, in an explosion of green blood and flesh…
The drone held his other hand over the patch of raw flesh that was once his arm joint, and ran away towards the Aliens medical facility.
The Alien commander turned around.
“How much Liquefied Energy crystals do we still have?”
“All pools are full sir, we can last 10 years at full operational power.”
The Commander walked towards an consol, steam bellowed from the girded floor. The alien drones carried out there work.
“I believe its time we ‘activated’ all our resources.”
His clawed hand pressed against the screen, alien text appeared. Then large alien symbols appeared.
AWAKE POPULATION
It translated as ‘AWAKE POPULATION’.
Before the consol the black wall opened up, revealing millions of [green pods, with the odd alien ship flying around.
All the pods gave an immense glow on lime green for a split second.
Above the complex; pools of green energy drained away, providing power for what ever machine the Commander has activated.
The pods explodes, green liquid poured out of them, flooding the huge cavers, then it drained away….

Millions upon millions of screeches could be heard, as after 100,00 years of slumber. The population of aliens woke up!
The Commander gave a grin, his yellow glowing eyes widened. His entire army, his people awoke to this new era.
The commander threw his arms up in the sky, turned around and faced a drone.
“Prepare all out Mother ships for launch, then send one, and one alone to destroy the humanoids base.”
“Yes Commander, You and you start draining every pools, start everything! Power up all mother ships! THAT’S AN ORDER!!.

As the drones scurried behind him, the Commander looked upon his newly born drones… He new he would retake this world, any maybe, just maybe, find the humanoids retched words and take it over too….



Comments

 I like it 
  March 5, 2012
when are you going to write the next one please write it soon its been three years hurry up
 I like it 
  November 25, 2010
MAKE IT A BOOK! AND ALSO MAKE IT LONGER CAUSE ITS A GREAT THING TO READ!
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  July 11, 2010
sick man i can't wait for the next, go to my pages and have a look around
 I made it 
  July 4, 2009
Every Human L.O.M set, 4 alien sets, and no U.F.O sets.
 I like it 
  July 4, 2009
i remember those i only ever gotone or two sets from 1997 and one from life on mars an alien hopper to be exact
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  June 29, 2009
In response to your question HK, (this may contain spoilers) The alien commanders home world was wiped out by the U.F.O’s (From Lego 1997 sets - I like to connect all Lego themes base as I can). So he flees his world in a hand full of ships. He eventually gets to a far off solar system (Us) and before he runs out of fuel he makes contact with martin (From Life on Mars 2001 sets) He requests that they allow him to Mine energy crystals to rebuild his people, the Martians denies his request because there running low on crystals as it is. The alien commander attacks mars, and eventually wins the war. But his mate (The alien queen) is killed, he then strip mines mars, but he does not mine enough to make an ship large enough to retake there home world, so. He starts to clone alien drones, and builds the massive complex. He is so evil because the only way he ca Handel the pressure of single handily (Because al his subjects and dumb clones) keeping his species alive. And the only way he knows how to do that is to ‘do what ever you can to survive’. He became evil to keep his world, race and history alive… (I messed with the storyline a little)
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  June 29, 2009
glad you liek it. Mars Mission is not my favourite film. But i do plan to finish this off.
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  June 29, 2009
Hm... Much better than your other ones, I have to say. I look forward to the next. Good day
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  June 28, 2009
why is your commander so cruel mine can be nasty but he would never injure another trooper unless they turned on him to injure a trooper would be one less soilder on the front lines and that means one step closer to defeat and have you gone through all those blogs one that siad they were explorers not conquerers and had discovered this barren red planetrich with a new power source and the only reason there fighting us is because we stole from them
 
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