"The local supermarket was just about to close when a few men came in. A guy with a gun, followed by a man who's leg was severly hurt, there was blood everywhere. They were followed by a couple of things, you couldn't call them human, they looked rather dead. The janitor handled quick, he closed all the doors. Suddenly the cashier began to scream when she saw the zombies, and another women hide away, leaving her own kid behind. The zombies tried to get in, but luckely I came by with a gun in my hand. I just knew this was going to happen some time."
This is superb. Unfortunuly, I am not a huge fan of guns, zombies, blood, and screaming ladies. That caused me to take it to Very good, not excellent. One question though, could you join my group? I sent you an invite.~Ginny
Quoting Maclane Mars
Excellent building, the detail on the outside and the inside of the market were very cool. Unfortunately, your grammar and misspelling of the word luckily (spelled "luckely" by you) caused my two drop down my rating by a star. Sorry.
Thank you very much. And since I'm Belgian (so I speak Dutch) is English not my first language...