this is the first episode in my new star wars comic which has more action than the first episode of all my comics combined
About this creation
Actus: o.k so heres the plan, Mira you go in get the job, we follow then we leave, quick and the empire never knows we are here.
Mira: o.k can do
Actus: c'mon guys and girl lets go.
(this is set on coruscant by the way)
Kel Door Janitor: fasuu bantha doo doo
Mira: hey Denku, i was told you had a job for me
Denku: i'm sorry it just got taken by a real friendly bothan
Actus: so whats the job?
Mira: we lost it, we must of took too long
Stormies: FREEZE!
Head Stormie: you are under arrest for desertion and cowardice, you are to come with us and be executed by order of the emperor.
Nickolon: you don't want to try that with us metal heads....
Nickolon: you see i'm a jedi
Actus: WHAT! you fool you revealed to them you were a jedi, you are only a padewan, you don't have the skill!
Nickolon: oh really?
Stormies: WHOAH!
Stormie: AAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!
Stormie: AAUUUGGHHHH!
Nickolon: i hope you guys are ready
Gamma: well i guess he does have the skill, ehy cap, should we help him out?
Actus: no lets see what he can do, if it gets to bad we can interveen
Nickolon: FORCE KICK!
Nickolon: take this
Impailed Stormie: AAUUAUGGGHHH!
Force Kicked Stomie:AAAAHHHHHHH A WALL!!
Stormie: now drop your weapon jedi, same goes for the rest of you
Stormie: put your hands up aswell, none of your force tricks
Server: let him go or we blow you apart NOW!
Gamma: yeah we will call in our reinforcements
Stormie: really cus i don't see anyone coming to help hehe
Mira: hi boys, now raise your hands high o.k or i will have to blow those helmets off.
Stormie: aaaww great, the sir isn't gonna be happy about this
Nickolon: NO ONE THREATENS ME!!
Stormie: AAH!
Merc: whoah! what the £@{&
Nickolon: now you can go to tell your precious officer your self!
(stormie rises really high into the sky)
Actus: you know that really wasn't jedi like
Nickolon: i know but my rage took over. so where to next?
Comments
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July 23, 2009 |
aaaaahhhhh to good =) but could use more shooting |
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May 21, 2009 |
Excellent storyline for the series, it will be interesting! |
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May 20, 2009 |
Cool, nice work!! But I would recommend to give the clonies ep.III helmets. Anyways it's great.
By the way, could you please check out my newest MOC?
Thanks.
http://mocpages.com/moc.php/120958 |
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May 18, 2009 |
Cool! |
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| Kir Kanos Kalinka May 17, 2009 |
pretty kool id like to see the next one |
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May 17, 2009 |
Awesome! Cool figures! Nice story and awesome kel dor janitor! So cool! Good job!
P.S Thanks for the comment! |
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May 17, 2009 |
That's pretty awesome!!
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I made it |
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May 17, 2009 |
Quoting Edward O'Ferrall
very cool when will you post your BTBG
very soon, the origional one got broken and i am building a new one but i need to work out the kinks |
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May 17, 2009 |
cool |
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May 17, 2009 |
Btw do you know that "force kick" goof in the Return of the Jedi? |
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May 17, 2009 |
That's a great comic and it's full of action! I like those force effects and all. |
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May 17, 2009 |
Very intense. Nice story line. I really makes sense, unlike some others. . . Nice job on it. ~ Ghostman :) |
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May 17, 2009 |
Can't wait for more! Must make more! But I also must keep building o.O |
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May 17, 2009 |
Nice 1st part,mine will be up next month(workin on summit big)Check out my best droid yet!!! |
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May 17, 2009 |
Sweet! lots of good action! |
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May 17, 2009 |
Pretty cool. It does have a lot of action I'm it. Can't wait for the next one! |
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