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Star Wars Rise Against the Empire: 1
this is the first episode in my new star wars comic which has more action than the first episode of all my comics combined
About this creation

Actus: o.k so heres the plan, Mira you go in get the job, we follow then we leave, quick and the empire never knows we are here.
Mira: o.k can do

Actus: c'mon guys and girl lets go.

(this is set on coruscant by the way)

Kel Door Janitor: fasuu bantha doo doo



Mira: hey Denku, i was told you had a job for me

Denku: i'm sorry it just got taken by a real friendly bothan



Actus: so whats the job?
Mira: we lost it, we must of took too long



Stormies: FREEZE!
Head Stormie: you are under arrest for desertion and cowardice, you are to come with us and be executed by order of the emperor.

Nickolon: you don't want to try that with us metal heads....

Nickolon: you see i'm a jedi

Actus: WHAT! you fool you revealed to them you were a jedi, you are only a padewan, you don't have the skill!

Nickolon: oh really?
Stormies: WHOAH!



Stormie: AAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!

Stormie: AAUUUGGHHHH!

Nickolon: i hope you guys are ready

Gamma: well i guess he does have the skill, ehy cap, should we help him out?
Actus: no lets see what he can do, if it gets to bad we can interveen

Nickolon: FORCE KICK!

Nickolon: take this
Impailed Stormie: AAUUAUGGGHHH!
Force Kicked Stomie:AAAAHHHHHHH A WALL!!

Stormie: now drop your weapon jedi, same goes for the rest of you

Stormie: put your hands up aswell, none of your force tricks

Server: let him go or we blow you apart NOW!
Gamma: yeah we will call in our reinforcements

Stormie: really cus i don't see anyone coming to help hehe

Mira: hi boys, now raise your hands high o.k or i will have to blow those helmets off.

Stormie: aaaww great, the sir isn't gonna be happy about this

Nickolon: NO ONE THREATENS ME!!

Stormie: AAH!

Merc: whoah! what the @{&

Nickolon: now you can go to tell your precious officer your self!

(stormie rises really high into the sky)

Actus: you know that really wasn't jedi like

Nickolon: i know but my rage took over. so where to next?



Comments

 I like it 
  July 23, 2009
aaaaahhhhh to good =) but could use more shooting
 I like it 
  May 21, 2009
Excellent storyline for the series, it will be interesting!
 I like it 
  May 20, 2009
Cool, nice work!! But I would recommend to give the clonies ep.III helmets. Anyways it's great. By the way, could you please check out my newest MOC? Thanks. http://mocpages.com/moc.php/120958
oucho t cactus
Kir Kanos Kalinka
  May 17, 2009
pretty kool id like to see the next one
 I like it 
  May 17, 2009
Awesome! Cool figures! Nice story and awesome kel dor janitor! So cool! Good job! P.S Thanks for the comment!
 I like it 
  May 17, 2009
That's pretty awesome!!
 I made it 
  May 17, 2009
Quoting Edward O'Ferrall very cool when will you post your BTBG
very soon, the origional one got broken and i am building a new one but i need to work out the kinks
 I like it 
  May 17, 2009
cool
 I like it 
  May 17, 2009
Btw do you know that "force kick" goof in the Return of the Jedi?
 I like it 
  May 17, 2009
That's a great comic and it's full of action! I like those force effects and all.
 I like it 
  May 17, 2009
Very intense. Nice story line. I really makes sense, unlike some others. . . Nice job on it. ~ Ghostman :)
 I like it 
  May 17, 2009
Can't wait for more! Must make more! But I also must keep building o.O
 I like it 
  May 17, 2009
Nice 1st part,mine will be up next month(workin on summit big)Check out my best droid yet!!!
 I like it 
  May 17, 2009
Sweet! lots of good action!
 I like it 
  May 17, 2009
Pretty cool. It does have a lot of action I'm it. Can't wait for the next one!
 
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