Chapter IV of my comic taking place in the Imperial Period of Star Wars. Enjoy!
About this creation
Play this for the music if you want a more-movie like exprience
A prisoner that was to be executed by the evil DARTH VADER has escaped the jail of the GALACTIC EMPIRE with the help of a JEDI KNIGHT. Little do they know that the Empire is right behind them...
Commander Grey: We have tracked the Jedi and the prisoner back here to Nar Shadaa.
Darth Vader: Very good, Commander. Fiind the Jedi's whereabouts and eliminate him.
Rob Rotgers: Rocky, this is a friend of mine. His name is Kolon Tola, and he is a member of the Galactic Senate.
[Rocky and Kolon shake hands]
Rocky: Pleasure to meet you, Kolon.
Rob Rotgers: Now if you'll excuse me, I have a previous engagement.
[Rob walks away]
Rocky: I am going to go get something Kolon. Then we can leave.
[Rocky comes to his work]
Man: Rocky, what are you doing here? I heard the Impies detained you.
Rocky: I'm here for the you-know-what.
Man: Rocky, get out of here! The Impies are already here- your--GAH!
[Sith stabs man]
Sith: Hello daddy.
Rocky: Son? You escaped the Imperials? Why did you stab Timothy?
Sith: Lord Vader trained me in the powerful ways of the Sith. Get out of here now, forget what you came here for or else I'll have to kill you.
[Rocky runs off]
Commander Grey: A spy has seen the Jedi in a cantina down on the surface of the planet. I'm heading there now.
Darth Vader: Very well, Commander. Make sure you kill him.
Rob Rotgers: I'm going to get another drink.
Rob Rotgers: I'll have a Frothy Bantha.
Bartender: Strong drinks make not one great...
[Commander Grey and stormtrooper come to the bar]
Doorman: No stormtroopers. Get outta' here Impie scum.
[Commander Grey tries to come in and doorman pulls out blaster]
[Doorman shoots stormtrooper]
Doorman: I said no stormtroopers!
Commander Grey: You should've shot me instead.
[Commander Grey bashes doorman with the butt of his rifle]
[Grey shoots doorman]
[Grey enters cantina]
Commander Grey: I am looking for a Jedi named Rob Rotgers. Is he here?
[Rob ignites lightsaber]
Rob Rotgers: That's my name, don't wear it out.
[Commander Grey shoots]
[Commander Grey bashes Rob's lightsaber with the butt of his rifle and Rob's saber slips, cutting off a drinker's arm]
Drinker: Oh man, that was my drinkin' arm!
[Rob Force pushes Commander Grey into the other wall]
[Rob throws his lightsaber at Commander Grey]
[The lightsaber cuts Commander Grey's head off]
Rob Rotgers: I'm going to a different bar.
Stormtrooper: The Jedi has eliminated Commander Grey. But the prisoner and the senator Kolon Tola are leaving Nar Shadaa on path to New Plympto.
Darth Vader: Set a course for New Plympto. We can handle the Jedi later.
Quoting Michael Sloper
Great part Rocky! I like the bar and I like the line the bartender said. I also like the blaster effects and the photos too. But didn't you say my Commander Drivc figure could be in your series?
Yes, he will be, I just gotta find a good time for him to be in it.