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Empire of Darkness: Chapter 3
Chapter III of my comic series taking place in the Imperial Period of Star Wars. Enjoy!!
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Empire of Darkness: Chapter III

The evil white-clad STORMTROOPERS of the GALACTIC EMPIRE, led by COMMANDER FED and DARTH VADER, have captured an innocent man and taken him to be killed at the Imperial prison on Dathomir. He is held prisoner on Darth Vader's personal Super-Star Destroyer, the Executor. Vader is going to soon hold the prisoner's very public and painful execution.


[On the Executor bridge]
Commander Grey: We have reached Dathomir, Lord Vader.
Darth Vader: Good. Have a ship sent up.
Commander Grey: It will be done, my lord.


[Commander Grey walks away]
Darth Vader: I feel a disturbance in the Force... What could it be?... It couldn't be that Jedi, even the Emporer didn't feel him, it is someone else...
Captain, come here.


[Captain comes]
Captain Remquist: Yes, my lord?
Darth Vader: Do a full search of the ship. Make sure everyone on the ship has clearance.
Captain Remquist: Yes sir.


[Later]
[Remquist comes back]
Captain Remquist: Lord Vader, I have finished the search. Everyone on the ship checks in.
Darth Vader: Thank you, captain, that is all.


[Vader walks away]


[He comes to holo-communicator]


[He turns it on]
Darth Vader: Master, I sense a disturbance in the Force. I feel something on the Executor but I do not know what it is.
The Emporer: Lord Vader, it is nothing. I have felt this disturbance as well. I have forseen this happening and what you sense is nothing.
Darth Vader: Thank you, my master.
[Holo-communticator turns off]


[Vader walks away]


[Later]
Stormtrooper: Your shuttle to the prison is here.


[Rocky wlaks out and troops escort him out of his cell block]


[Troops escort him through hallway]
Stormtrooper: Are you ready to die, scum?
Rocky: I didn't do anything.
Stormtrooper: Of course you did, traitorous slime!


[Through dock]


[They enter prison shuttle]


[Trooper shoots other troopers]
Rocky: What?!?


[Trooper removes his helmet]
Rob Rotgers: Hello Rocky, I am a Jedi Knight. We must go save a friend of mine in need.


[Captain Remquist comes to Vader]
Captain Remquist: Sir, a prsioner has escaped with the help of a stormtrooper gone AWOL. He was a new recruit sir, just transferred to the Executor.
Darth Vader: What? What prisoner?
Captain Remquist: That Rocky person.
Darth Vader: Your services are no longer required, captain.


[Vader Force Chokes Remquist]
Darth Vader: You have failed me for the last time, captain.
Darth Vader: Commander Fed, Commander Grey, come here.


[Fed and Grey come]
Commander Fed: Yes, my lord?
Darth Vader: Ready your troops Commanders. A prisoner aided by an AWOL stormtrooper has escaped in a prsion shuttle.
Commander Fed: All of the prison shuttles have tracking beacons in them, sir. We can track them.
Darth Vader: Excellent work Commander. We must find this shuttle.

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Well, there you go, that's Chapter III of Empire of Darkness! Next MOC will be either my updated Skaborr or Chapter IV. Hope you enjoyed it!




Comments

 I like it 
  August 7, 2009
awsome.
 I like it 
  May 31, 2009
Wow, your building shows incredible amounts of detail! Great job, it's definitely a great read! (Ps.Who knew Fed and Roy were so evil? ^ ^ )
Rocky W.
Kir Kanos Kalinka
  May 9, 2009
ok but i still think the vignettes are too small and that view of the shooting in the shuttle is kinda awkward the shuttle doesnt look right. idk do you think fed is happy about you with Rob Rotgers?
 I like it 
  May 9, 2009
great job
 I like it 
  May 9, 2009
Very nice work, simple build but effective story lines and presentation... keep on the good work >>> peace.. Firas
 I like it 
  May 9, 2009
You had the anticipation going in my blood there, when Vader said he felt a disturbance in the force. An anticipation I rarely get from comics. It's a sign that this is going to somewhere...
 I made it 
  May 9, 2009
Quoting commando scorpion nice!rob rotgers does it again 1.jedi 2.bounty hunter 3.stormtrooper what next?a jawa?check out my newest moc cos part 2 is up later today
Don't give me ideas! Next time you see him, Rob WILL be a Jawa! LOL
 I like it 
  May 9, 2009
hahahahahah commander grey is green ..... LOL anyways- very good story line, I was disappointed it ended so quickly!! good work!!
 I like it 
  May 9, 2009
Nice story and figs, but scenery could be larger and more detailed, it's not bad, but there is lots of vigs there, not actual scenery, anyway nice job.
 I like it 
  May 9, 2009
nice!rob rotgers does it again 1.jedi 2.bounty hunter 3.stormtrooper what next?a jawa?check out my newest moc cos part 2 is up later today
Rocky W.
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Infinity Life
  May 8, 2009
Can't wait for the Next one
Rocky W.
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Michael Sloper
  May 8, 2009
Sweet comic Rocky! I like the little hologram idea you came up with and the plot isn't to bad either. But I was wondering if maybe my Commander Drivc figure could be in your series? Because he survived the clone wars and it would be awesome if he could be in this!
Rocky W.
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Michael Sloper
  May 8, 2009
Alright cool! So if you want to know what he should look like it's pretty easy. He's yellow so you can paint him anyway you want maybe some paint on the helm would look good. But I'm so glad you decided to include him. Thanks!
Rocky W.
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Michael Sloper
  May 8, 2009
I kind of prefer that he doesn't. Because he's my favorite character and a dissent number of people know about him. So can you live with that?
Rocky W.
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Darman Skirata
  May 8, 2009
Awesome comic! WHo would have known it was Rob the whole time! Nice job, Rocky. I might post a few things tomorrow, so keep on your toes.
 I like it 
  May 8, 2009
Nice job! I like the renegade "Stormtrooper." Funny how Darth choked the Captain guy, too. Good work.
 I made it 
  May 8, 2009
Quoting Commander Fed Man then Rob is a dare devil, on the Death Star and now on the Executor, what can't I do
LOL. Hey, what's gonna happen in Dark TImes 3? Tell me it in Dark Times Talk.
 I like it 
  May 8, 2009
this is sweet rocky. i like your comic style, short but sweet.
 I made it 
  May 8, 2009
Quoting Commander Fed Nice work!!! Post the next one before the Skaborr!!! I'll post Dark Times 3, anyways this is still before my series right? If so I might be able to connect it in the next episode and include rocky!!!
This takes place between Dark Times 2 and 3.
 I made it 
  May 8, 2009
Quoting Michael Sloper Sweet comic Rocky! I like the little hologram idea you came up with and the plot isn't to bad either. But I was wondering if maybe my Commander Drivc figure could be in your series? Because he survived the clone wars and it would be awesome if he could be in this!
Sure! Well maybe. I think I'm gonna buy another Imperial Battle Pack.
 I like it 
  May 8, 2009
this rox!!! man i love it! p.s. can u goto chatroom now?
 
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