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About this creation
Sorry flux. I know you said a while back it would be shame to see the city in ruins. To do this it was quick and relitivly painless. Just stood up on my bed and well dropped the City. I have to redo many parts of it anyways. My brother was shocked however as he walked in as it landed. and this is the result. It will be used in a up-coming comic of mine
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They heard the sickining sound of metal being torn like paper, glass shattering and raining down.
"Damage report"!!
"Inertial Dampeners offline"
"Venting Atmosphere"
"Damage on all levels,
"structural stability compromised" We only have one jump left before the ship is torn apart. Hairline fractures throughout the ship
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Atlantis flew through the Atmosphere plummeting towards the planet. Trying to give cover to the drones weapon platform on it. Atlantis was intercepting all enemy weapons fire as it burned up in the Atmosphere without the protection of its sheilds. The peirs were being shredded as the evacutation ships from earth were leaving.
"FTL on Standby"
"On my mark Jump"
IMPACT.
- The drive didnt respond. Impact was iminate.
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The city rose slowly from the earth. refusing to die, refusing to give in. It was a wreak, only central peir intack with half of sublight engines offline and the others blown in half. Yet if flew. They had one last chance. One shot at victory. They were worthy of survival.
Up next
-Atlantis Repaired and pair updates
-My birthday, so that means money so it is between
-Aurora Class ship
-Alterus Maximus
-Alterus Maximus LDD, i feel it is missing sometihng, might post it anyways but probably not so i can fix some of the errors i found
-Adama Class Space Station, named in honor of BSG, might have accually liked it more than Stargate sometimes
-BattleStar Galactica and Pegasus Minis
-Viper
-Z.P.M Acual Scale
- First Comic installation featuring yours truly, and FLUX HARBIN!!!, as the bounty-hunter.
-A Possible project by me and More Geeky T.U. and anyone who has somthing to offer to it.
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June 28, 2009 |
Quoting Flux Harbrin
:O :O how did I miss this almost 2 months ago now?!?! It does look pretty cool tho.. Your brother probly had a heart attack when he walked in!
Most likely as he knew how much effort i put into it and to see it go smash was probably like :0 |
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June 22, 2009 |
:O :O how did I miss this almost 2 months ago now?!?! It does look pretty cool tho.. Your brother probly had a heart attack when he walked in! |
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June 22, 2009 |
well, this teaser is awesome, I would love to see the whole plot.
PS.
If you had a little bit of free time could you check out my newest Version of Atlantis V. 6.0 |
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May 17, 2009 |
Quoting Cristofori Thebo Wecri
ive probably already asked this but i dont remember, so when does it come out?
Whenever i get a better camera. |
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May 6, 2009 |
ive probably already asked this but i dont remember, so when does it come out? |
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May 4, 2009 |
Quoting Michael Labelle
Inspiring destruction...
Yeah but its already rebuilt, i thought that if i was going to redo most of it why not get some cool pics of it destoryed and use them for my comic. |
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May 4, 2009 |
Inspiring destruction... |
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May 2, 2009 |
um... well how do i say it... whoa..... |
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May 2, 2009 |
Sounds great so far, im definately looking forward to the comic. I'm sorry to see your Atlantis torn apart but i know you will build a better version of it. I'm thinking about making a city ship myself with out using ldd. |
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