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Haywire chaper 2
The second in a long series about a little robot named Viper. This episode will feature a huge space battle, great backdrops of the inside of Dominance, and every fighter in the COP fleet! Enjoy!
About this creation
Aboard the Dominance en route to the EOS planet...



Admiral: V/P3r here to see you sir.

Indo: Thank you.



Indo: Viper, I'm sorry about Avon. He just doesn't like the fact that the fate of the whole operation rests in your hands. I trust you will succeed.



Viper: Thank you sir.

Indo: The plan is that we need you to do an assassination. Usually we give a choice... I just thought we'd ask if you'd accept. I can be hard on a person... being, to kill in cold blood.

Viper: That is thoughtful of you. I do not mind, my programming does not fell emotions...

Indo: But, i think you do... You are a... unique robot.



Shoom! Crash!

Indo: What was that?!?



Siren: AWOOOOGA!!! AWOOOOGA!!!

Admiral: maybe asteroid field...



Soldier on comm: Admiral, we need you on the bridge, we have an enemy fleet emerging from hyperspace.

Admiral: well, you heard him, I'd best be off.



Indo: do you think the battle will be quick?

Viper: So it shall come to pass!

Indo: What?

Viper: sorry, what did I say?

Indo: nevermind, go to the port drop pod hanger bay, Lieutenant Roberts will be there waiting.



Out in space, a fierce battle rages (and good photoshop skillz)

Admiral: all men, to your battle stations! Code Red, 3 enemy light frigates!!!



Admiral: turbo laser batteries, fire on the enemy ships, maximum power!



Trooper: Enemy fighter squadron incoming!

Admiral: Attention pilots! to your ships! launch all squadrons!!!



Admiral over the comm: Marine group blue, prepare for boarding... Fire torpedoes on the frigate...





Soldier: you heard him men! at attention!!!





Roberts: where is he?



Viper: Hello Lieutenant Roberts, I am V/P3r.

Roberts: oh, hello, they didn't mention you were a robot soldier. Pleased to meet you anyhow.



Viper: Thank you sir, Fleet Lord Indo requests our immediate departure.

Roberts: very well, the battle makes a good distraction for the enemy.



Roberts: alright men! mount the pod! we're moving out!

3...
2...
1...
LAUNCH!!!




To Be Continued...


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Thanks for viewing (and hopefully commenting) I believe this is my best comic I have yet. I spent all vacation making the edits and dialogue. I have to give credit to the space scene fighters to:

Ian Macdonald- for the Ares Class Dropship and Drop Pod

Grand Admiral Darren aka Deaths Hand- for light recon gunship

Captain Lawrence- Tiger Assault ship

Elite Marine BK kelly- A-2 Tunderbird

Sammy Harris- Hydra class fighter

and Karta Deraji- EOS 67th fleet Defense Fighter

I will now tell you all the hidden goodies from episode 1 so read on to find them:

- Death Star hologram in main pic
- Gus Waz Here on the Dominance
- Fleet Lord Indo's shoulder symbol, my personal symbol, a bird (maybe eagle)

this episode has 4, i think, spread out and hard to find. really funny stuff too.

Also please check out Awesome-O-Saurus's comic: Philosophy of a Machine! #3 up soon!

and see Anders Hognerud's comic coming soon!

This is my best ever comic, thanks for viewing. Please comment but dont spoil the hidden surprises. just say "I found one!!!" or something.



Comments

Gus Indo
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Infinity Life
  April 30, 2009
Nice!
 I made it 
  April 20, 2009
Quoting Anders Hognerud Cool! Like the space scene! BTW, I'll tell you when I need some photoshopping.
sweet, anyways, you can just use paint but its harder to cut out things. i just taught myself photoshop for this creation. I will help do the space scenes.
 I made it 
  April 20, 2009
Quoting Ed Petrie AKA General Warren theres like a rainbow in the robots arm when there going into the pod.
dont tell everyone
 I like it 
  April 20, 2009
Cool! Like the space scene! BTW, I'll tell you when I need some photoshopping.
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  April 19, 2009
theres like a rainbow in the robots arm when there going into the pod.
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  April 19, 2009
FOUND ONE THERE ARE CLONE TROOPERS IN THE BACKGROUND!!!!!
Gus Indo
eoghan o callaghan
  April 18, 2009
meesa see a starwars clone in back of pic and in the arm of the robot whn enter drop pod
Gus Indo
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Slip Knot
  April 18, 2009
Sweet work Gus. I am gonna do a Star Wars comic and take a break from my 'Lost in Space' series.
 I like it 
  April 18, 2009
Awesome Space Battle and you used My Recon Ship Thank you!! nice story and can't wait to seethe next episode!!
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  April 18, 2009
Yo! Read POAM 3!
 I made it 
  April 18, 2009
Quoting eoghan o callaghan meesa see a starwars clone in back of pic and in the arm of the robot whn enter drop pod
yeah! but where? dont say it!
 I like it 
  April 18, 2009
sweet!!
 I like it 
  April 18, 2009
everyone i please ask you to ignore the post below me it is a spoiler
 I made it 
  April 18, 2009
Quoting Commander Fed Really nice man!!! I have some questions, is that the E.O.S. attacking if so, we don't use Hyperspace. We use Slip space and those aren't our Fleet colors. Our colors are more Separatist look. Anyway if it isn't ours then just ignore what I said. Anyway great work again!!!
its a really bad looking EOS fleet. No, I change it, It's now a colonial defense force for the planet. it's a militia type of thing
 I made it 
  April 18, 2009
Quoting Sammy Harris Awsome story, awsome photoshoping, and awsome... Well everything!!! And thanks for using my 'Hydra' jet fighter! That's 2 photoshops it's been in so far!!
your welcome
 I like it 
  April 18, 2009
Awsome story, awsome photoshoping, and awsome... Well everything!!! And thanks for using my 'Hydra' jet fighter! That's 2 photoshops it's been in so far!!
 I made it 
  April 18, 2009
yeah, thats not counting the other pics...
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  April 18, 2009
i wouldn't have the paitence, i would of kicked something in the time that took
 I made it 
  April 18, 2009
do you like the big battle scenes? i spent hours on that
 I like it 
  April 18, 2009
i found 2 of em haha
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  April 18, 2009
Ha! I seee what you did there! Nicely done, putting... that... in. You know what I mean.
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  April 18, 2009
its o.k i just want to show it off to the world of moc
 I made it 
  April 18, 2009
Quoting oucho t cactus it is up http://www.mocpages.com/moc.php/112785
sorry, but the next one maybe, a bit too late.
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  April 18, 2009
 I made it 
  April 18, 2009
Quoting oucho t cactus the cactus knows but this thing is uber sweet and it will be up really soon
true!
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  April 18, 2009
the cactus knows but this thing is uber sweet and it will be up really soon
 I like it 
  April 18, 2009
You know this isn't done, Cactus....
 I like it 
  April 18, 2009
sweet gus, can you add my ship thats about to be up (it is mt best MOC)
 
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