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Haywire Chapter 1
This is my first in a new series of comics that feature my robot: V/P3r, aka Viper. (CC, who cares, he is sick!) the captions are below the photos.
About this creation


Indo: this is the planet the EOS are currently hidding out on. We need a strike force to take them out. Full scale invasion, but we need some recon and sabotage to soften up their defenses. This is where V/P3r comes in...



Indo: V/P3r will go down to the enemy camp and download his consciousness into an enemy robot. He can recon the area. Any questions?







(benjy turns V/P3r on)




Avon: Why do we need these robots to do everything! they cant think! they cant feel! how are they going to replace humans!



Indo: C'mon Avon, we don't need this. Leave him alone.



Aboard the Dominance:



Viper passes a techie and a marine in the auxilary bridge (the bridge in the front)



Trooper: heh, look at that! these robots are always wandering the ship. its like they have no mind of their own.



You do know I can here you, I am not as mindless as you think



Trooper: OOO! It speaks! Like you have any real thoughts behind that! hu- urghhh!



Admiral (name): Viper, put him down.

Trooper and tech: Admiral!

Viper: I am... sorry, to put it in your emotions. I got... angry.



Admiral: come Viper, Fleet Lord Indo needs to see you...


Trooper: Ugh, I hate them, they are tools, no need to talk back


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this is the end of the first episode of my newest comic, taking the place of Warstories. This one will be different in 3 ways:

It will focus on the character of Viper
It will have battles as only a secondary part, mostly the plot.
It should seem to be more balanced. The Warstories were all COP wins because I felt that I can win for my group, you can win for your group. If anyone but the COP would make a comic!

Leave a comment on this new storyline. Make sure you read Awesome-o-Saurus's comic: Philosophy of a Machine. http://www.mocpages.com/folder.php/48829 this is his comic folder.

Also, Anders Hognerud will be posting his new comic soon! you should see his. It'll be good!



Comments

  November 12, 2009
I don't really get it. Their on the death star, and somebody turned into a robot?
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  July 9, 2009
So they're hiding on the Death Star? ;-P
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  June 15, 2009
This is an interesting story... I'll have to read on.
Gus Indo
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Infinity Life
  April 30, 2009
This is Awesome!
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  April 18, 2009
hey gus i used your camera body design to make a environmental/hardsuit thing with human heads
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  April 17, 2009
hey gus can you check out my new microcity
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  April 16, 2009
Sure, i dont put allies lists but I will add to my buds list
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  April 16, 2009
nice story Gus keep it up, like the robot v/p3r too!
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  April 15, 2009
Lol its a deathstar. keep going!
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  April 15, 2009
oh the spaceman at the window, i saw that earlier but i didn't thing it was secret or is it that death star in the first one =P
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  April 15, 2009
Quoting oucho t cactus well i saw it on the ship in the same place but i also saw an eagle on indo's shoulder
theres one more
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  April 15, 2009
well i saw it on the ship in the same place but i also saw an eagle on indo's shoulder
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  April 15, 2009
Quoting oucho t cactus sweet but i didn't see gus was here
its on now
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  April 15, 2009
sweet but i didn't see gus was here
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  April 15, 2009
Trust me, Sammy, it's going somewhere. We're prorobot too.
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  April 15, 2009
Nice!! But all this robot abuse. I my self am pro-robot.
 
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