Zehra Nui 2009 Comic=- Episode 1: The Rising: A LEGO® creation by Ryan T. M. : MOCpages.com

Zehra Nui 2009 Comic=- Episode 1: The Rising

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About this creation

Ok. Orack is the black one and Zerradrox is the white one.

Orack: I have a surprise for you and your little friend
Zerradrox: his name is Elrarox
Orack: whatever… well… here's my surprise… his name is Feredox… he is here to help me overthrow you and ur helpless friend… PREPARE TO DIE Zerradrox!

Zerradrox: DEFEND, Eltarox!
Eltarox: ARGGHH!! *slashes at Feredox*

Zerradrox: ahhh… why… did it come to…. THIS!?
Orack: you were a hindrance to me taking over the world
Zerradrox: why would you want to take over the world when you already have so much?
Orack: there is NEVER enough… until you have ALL…
Zerradrox: I hope you find out that you are wrong one day… when you are more wise
Orack: I am MORE WISE than you OLD MAN! To prove it i will teleport you to an alternate dimension where you will spend the rest of your life glued to the ground in DARKNESS!!!!!
Zerradrox: Whatever you do you will not stop me from stopping you, I will return to put you back on track, my apprentice
Orack: *zaps Zerradrox to a dark dimension* MUHAHAHA!!!!!!

Eltarox: *slashes Faredox's leg off* i will return stronger than eve... you will see! farewell *runs off away from the snowy mountains*

over a decade Eltarox formed a team of elite warriors... he still plans to overthrow Orack who has now become a world conqueror.

Eltarox: who are you... mysterious Giant on the horizon... who?
Mysterious Giant: My name is... HederoxX.. i am here to help you overthrow my brother Orack...

Eltarox: Orack is your brother?
*HederoxX smiles and nods*

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Matt D.

April 20, 2009

Nice! Add more background to the epic, but other than that it's excellent work! Keep it up!

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beta 501

April 1, 2009

i lokie bionicle but i really only have black are whit pieces. i like your comic and cant wit untill the next issue

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Elite ARC: Captain Rocky

April 1, 2009

Swweeeett!

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Gringat The Stormlord

April 1, 2009

OMG GOOGOO CHECK OUT MY LATEST MOC!!!! It's your MOC, but really tiny, like!

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Duncan Life

March 31, 2009

They could be better. But good for a first try

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Supreme Commander Michael Sloper

March 31, 2009

Huh, I never seen a Bioncile series, and you did a pretty good job. In your next episode I would have a platform for them to sit on and maybe add some detail on it. Anyway, well done! Keep it up! Also can you check out my newest Moc itâ€™s called, E.O.S. Shadow Troopers.

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GooGoo GaGa The Great

March 31, 2009

"there is NEVER enough… until you have ALL…" -Orack kinda cool sounding huh.. i got some better ones 4 next issue

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GooGoo GaGa The Great

March 31, 2009

Quoting Duncan Life They could be better. But good for a first try

ya... episode 1 explains everything... but trust me episode 4 will be the best.. i already have quotes and plans and new villians and heros and all sorts of stuff in plan... part 2 will be good... part three will be interestng... part 4 will be EPIC!!! i have plans

Gringat The Stormlord

March 31, 2009

A good try, for your first attempt, but I'm sure it'll come along after a few more tries. I've been writing fics my whole life (Though not as much as my friend at school grant you), and Lords Of Korrothis is the first I've ever thought good enough to put up =/