Downed Techno Union Ship
About this creation
Some Droids
Downed Ship, exterior
Downed Ship interior. I didn't spend much time on the interior, but I like how it looks. *I sort of used Commander Fed's Techno Union Ship as a model for mine. The only difference between ours is his is missing a side, mine is complete all around, and it's a bit bigger (I think)*
Bet you thought that was it, eh?
View of the battlefield.
Republic side of the Battlefield
Seperatist side of the Battlefield. (This is my favorite pic, it really gives you a feel for the size) (96x96 studs, so far....
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Well, thanks for looking at this. I haven't done something like this since Kashyyyk, so I thought it was time to get cracking.
-I'd like to thank Commander Fed, his Geonosis helped me get some ideas. Especially the Techno Union Ship. Thanks man. Plus, mine and his sort of look similar, at least the Techno Union part. Am I right?
-Unfortunately, one of my MTT's had to sacrfifice a lot of pieces, but I think it's worth it.
As this is a WIP, i'd like some suggestions as to how to improve this. If you'd leave a comment with a suggestion, i'd really appreciate it. Thanks-Tom
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April 15, 2009 |
Cool. It looks like it's from Star Wars Battlefront. Check out my new At-Rt. |
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March 28, 2009 |
I like it however I think you need to add more clones some walkers and The gunships didn't realy sit right on the battlefield they just droped troops off so maybe get some clear bricks and mount it of the ground and with the back higher than the front great job so far~Nicky B |
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March 28, 2009 |
sweet! how long did it take to make it? |
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March 25, 2009 |
This looks like the map from Star Wars Battlefront II! |
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March 25, 2009 |
Very cool |
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| kameron schollmeyer March 24, 2009 |
that is cool!!!!! |
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Commander Ender March 23, 2009 |
Ok, thanks for the moc-off. I will tell fed I won. Good luck with geonosis. |
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March 22, 2009 |
WOW ... that ship-hull looks Awesome ! ... i knew exactly what it was when i first saw it - the fragments of a crashed ship ... nicely done ! |
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So far it looks good, just remember to stay strong on those details and not make the battle look too one-sided. |
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Supreme Commander Michael Sloper March 20, 2009 |
Hey Tom, it's Friday now so could you pick the last three moderators in the 550th? |
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March 20, 2009 |
Yes the downed sjip looks great so far, the whole thing looks great so far! PS. I got some new MOCs up. |
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March 19, 2009 |
Alright, thanks Tom, it means a lot! I'll go join immediately! |
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March 19, 2009 |
Hey Tom, I got an invite to join the E.C.A, and I'll tell you what, I'll join on 2 conditions; Your an admin so, give me a high rank and put me in your legion. Think about it and leave me a comment ;) P.S I won't be leaving the A.o.T though, because a lot of my loyalty is still with Fed. Thanks |
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March 19, 2009 |
Good job on the Techno Union Ship. |
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March 18, 2009 |
Quoting Elite ARC Gober of the Galactic Republic
I hope you're happy Tom.
Now I'm happy! You just gave this moc 50 "I like it's"
Thanks man! |
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March 18, 2009 |
I hope you're happy Tom. |
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March 18, 2009 |
It looks awesome. I absolutely love the crashed ship. The detail is incredible. I love all the CIS droids around it as well. Sorry I haven't been on MOCpages in a while. I've had a few delays (no access to LEGO). I'll tell you when I'm back on. |
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March 18, 2009 |
hey come check out my Mygeeto WIP when you can. |
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March 18, 2009 |
Quoting Shadow Trooper Peala /Galactic Republic Founder (TSC Home Defender)
I would probably add some more detail to the fallen ship (to make it look real). Remember in the real battle you could see little groups that had six clones and a Jedi leading them? I think you should add them.
I don't have a lot of Phase 1 clones, so I might not be able to do that. But, I'll give it a shot. |
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March 18, 2009 |
I would probably add some more detail to the fallen ship (to make it look real). Remember in the real battle you could see little groups that had six clones and a Jedi leading them? I think you should add them. |
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March 18, 2009 |
This looks amazing already! I like the big destroyed starship bit, try putting other little bits around that actual frame to make it look even more shattered, Great work! |
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March 18, 2009 |
Quoting Awesome-o-saurus The Not-So-Great
Seeing how you asked me to review this, even though I already have, I'll say it's cool again.
Sorry about that:) |
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March 18, 2009 |
Seeing how you asked me to review this, even though I already have, I'll say it's cool again. |
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March 18, 2009 |
man this is great, lookin like the Battlefront level, well kinda.
hey check out my new mini frigate, and assault walker when you can. |
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Supreme Commander Michael Sloper March 16, 2009 |
Can you check out my newest Moc it’s called, Commander Thire. |
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March 16, 2009 |
I still can't wait! P.S Could you check out my V2 of the Millennium Falcon? Thanks |
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March 16, 2009 |
Wow!!! This is so cool. Your Kashyyyk was awesome and I can tell this could be better. It just looks really awesome! Nice new icon picture. You can expect much more MOCs from me in the near future. Keep doing well on this! |
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March 16, 2009 |
maybe you can make the forward command center. this is cool! |
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March 16, 2009 |
You're off to a good start. |
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Clone Messiah Kalinka March 15, 2009 |
yes make more of the techno union ship and you are going to need to make the entire battlefield brown orange. i think this would be a great idea would be to add a spire with a turret just like in battlefront 1 and you could make the laat flying |
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Supreme Commander Michael Sloper March 15, 2009 |
Tom, there’s a important matter in the briefing that needs you opinion.
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March 15, 2009 |
thanks for commenting on my carrier- love it looks- can't wait to see the finished product- will look awesome i bet |
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March 15, 2009 |
This is pretty good, but could you try to make more out of the ship, like the engines or the top? Because now, it just looks like a ruined sewer pipe. No offense, it was just a suggestion. |
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March 15, 2009 |
Hmm... Next time make more of the ship and a bunch of pieces every where! I like it though! |
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March 15, 2009 |
Awesome Geonosis, it needs only some brown parts, maybe bases or something and gigantic battle layout is ready. Too bad if you don't have geonosian fighter, it's a good set containing two geonosians and purple battledroids only things missing in most geonosisdiodramas. |
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March 15, 2009 |
Excellent!! Can't wait to see it finished. =) |
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March 15, 2009 |
wow!! this thing his humungous!! and very well made! the detail is awesome, the ship! its sooo amazing! it looks really really good! cant wait for it to be finished! |
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March 15, 2009 |
Great detail on downed ship, can't wait for it to be finished. Also, perhaps add some geonosian sonic gun emplacements like the ones in battlefront would be nice. Yuo could also maybe make that moblie clone command post. Good luck! |
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March 15, 2009 |
Fantastic work by far! this gonna be a huge piece of art, can't wait for the final project... my only suggestion on this will be to make some good photos; you know good MOC like this needs a good presentation... peace |
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CC-7576 "Rex" March 14, 2009 |
I see, I see, you are goinf to create another awesome and huge Diorama, I wish you luck that it is going to be as good as your Kashyyyk. |
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| Supreme Commander Michael Sloper March 14, 2009 |
This looks like it's coming along great! I love the detail put into the downed ship. But I would add more detail to the floor in the next one. Anyway, well done! Keep it up! P.S. How's your bed dragon problem coming along? ;) |
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Adam Jacomay March 14, 2009 |
Amazing. I can't wait to see it finished! (I can tell it's going to be great after seeing all of you'r other dioramas/projects/creations) I am almost finished with my Kashyyyk battle. I haven't posted it yet but I will soon, so check it out when it's done. |
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Gc: Darman March 14, 2009 |
Nice job man! It's huge! |
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March 14, 2009 |
First of all, this is huge!!!! Off topic, clan father @ 15 yrs? you're a fast worker. I'm about to be a father @ 28. The best feature is the star gate looking thing. The area that could use the most work is the comingling of the base plates using landscaping. Looking forward to seeing this grow, although not as much as the castle you forementioned. |
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March 14, 2009 |
Great! I like the idea with the Techno-Union ship! Keep up the work. - Kevin |
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March 14, 2009 |
Man that is huge! I would like to make a huge project like this but I have no room in my, well, room, which is my only building space. |
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March 14, 2009 |
Really nice work! But I already left a comment about it down there. |
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March 14, 2009 |
Very nice, I can't wait to see how this one comes out. I myself am making a geonosis but it won't exactly be the same as yours. Anyways great start. ~CTF |
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March 14, 2009 |
Now I want to go play Battlefront II... Keep up the hard work, and now I'm gone to go kill clones in a Hailfire droid! |
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March 14, 2009 |
WOW! Looking great so far! The only thing of advice I have is to maybe add a little more to the Union Ship, maybe some parts on the ground, have the "head" of the ship slanting down and dug into the ground. I think you know what I mean. Nut, anyway, awesome can't wait to see what it looks like when it comes together. Thanks |
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March 14, 2009 |
this looks awesome the dome rocks! |
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March 14, 2009 |
This is pretty nice! Everyone needs to make at least one huge battle. I do think that there should have been a couple more rocks for detail, and a bit of wreckage near the downed ship. Overall a nicely built battle!
~S.K. |
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March 14, 2009 |
Awesome Geonosis Tom! This is great! I can't wait till you finish. P.S. could you check out my latest moc if you have time? It's an called the FJ Type 96 "Fiesty" Mockingbird. |
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March 14, 2009 |
I love it so your still working on it right well if you are i cant wait to see it finished! |
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March 14, 2009 |
Dear, Lord! This is massive! Love the down ship so far, and I can't wait 'til this is done. My gosh ,man, this will surpass anything I've built...Yet. The battle of the Fathers is on! You will not out-build me! Just kidding. Overall, excellent work so far! |
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March 14, 2009 |
Great moc! The downed ship makes the creation look good. :)LCG |
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March 14, 2009 |
Really nice man! I am looking forward to it being finished! I like how you have part of a crashed sepertist ship. I makes the scene look really cool. Hey, please check out my newest moc if you have time. |
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March 14, 2009 |
Nice!! cant wait to see this thing finished! im really looking forward for this, it might over lead feds genosis if its good enough |
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March 14, 2009 |
Quoting Commander Fed
I am not mad that you copied I just don't want people to say "You copied the Techno Union ship off of Fed" So and so, Do you know what I mean? Anyway I won't response for a while. I am uploading Episode 14 now!!!
Ya I know what you mean. I just got the basic idea off yours. Anyway, can't wait to see Episode 14! |
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March 14, 2009 |
Quoting Commander Fed
Tom Looks great but I don't want you to seem like you copyed off of me in the Techno Union ship. I would Suggestion to build some more of it like it just fell. Its just an idea. This moc will be great!!!
thanks. And I have more in store for the Techno Union Ship....
sorry if I made it seem like I copied off of yours. |
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March 14, 2009 |
Quoting Ben Tice
cool but why is the republics side grey just cover that with brown pieces and tan pieces also i would shift the gunship so that it is facing forwards and put troops coming out of it from both sides also add more droids if you have also a hail fire droid would look good right next to the techno Union ship other wise good work!
Yeah, I don't have a lot of brown pieces at the moment. I barely had enough to cover the Techno Union Ship Part. Anyway, yes, I do plan on using a lot of droids (70 B1 Battle Droids, 24 SBD's). |
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March 14, 2009 |
Four large light bley basepltes? the same size as my Mygeeto!. Excellent job, very nice. |
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