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You know what to do! Leave me a link and I'll get to it as soon as I can.
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| October 8, 2010, 6:48 pm
Here: http://www.mocpages.com/moc.php/230234

It is the set for the first episode of my comic, a small table scrap, and 3 mini-figs. Honestly, just pay attention to the set, but go crazy.
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| October 9, 2010, 1:56 pm
I'm 99.9% sure you have no idea what Darx is. So when you review this, if in your mind replace the word "Darx" with "Fake Military", it'll make it easier for you.

http://www.mocpages.com/moc.php/228959

Thanks!
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| October 9, 2010, 2:01 pm
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Quoting Klay ™
I'm 99.9% sure you have no idea what Darx is. So when you review this, if in your mind replace the word "Darx" with "Fake Military", it'll make it easier for you.

http://www.mocpages.com/moc.php/228959

Thanks!


Oh, I know what the Darx Empire is... You forget young padawan, the Phipson is omnipotent! MUAHAHAHAHAHA *coughcough* Ok, I'll get to the review soon.

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| October 9, 2010, 5:19 pm
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Quoting Matthew Novosad
Here: http://www.mocpages.com/moc.php/230234

It is the set for the first episode of my comic, a small table scrap, and 3 mini-figs. Honestly, just pay attention to the set, but go crazy.


The sombraro wearing vampire was a nice touch...

Ok, the set. It's a good start with the SNOT work but I really hope that's not all you're building for a set? I'm really hoping that you're going to add a wall or something to it. That base is good, don't worry there, but it needs more with it. Gimme a link when you're done with it to let me know how it's coming and I'll give some more advice then. Good luck!

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| October 9, 2010, 5:58 pm
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Quoting Klay ™
I'm 99.9% sure you have no idea what Darx is. So when you review this, if in your mind replace the word "Darx" with "Fake Military", it'll make it easier for you.

http://www.mocpages.com/moc.php/228959

Thanks!


Ok, review time.

I dunno man, this looks a little rushed to me. Like you had an idea and threw bricks at it quickly to get it posted. The thing that strikes me strange about that though is that the pics are clear, crisp and in focus with good lighting so you obviously slowed down there. But the build just seems... yeah, rushed. My advice would be to take some more time and add more to the build itself. Of course sometimes it's fun to just toss a few bricks together and that's it, but by stepping back and looking at your build and wondering what you could add to it to make it better, you'll be well on your way to bigger and better builds every time. Good luck!
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| October 9, 2010, 6:16 pm
Quoting Chris Phipson

The sombraro wearing vampire was a nice touch...

Ok, the set. It's a good start with the SNOT work but I really hope that's not all you're building for a set? I'm really hoping that you're going to add a wall or something to it. That base is good, don't worry there, but it needs more with it. Gimme a link when you're done with it to let me know how it's coming and I'll give some more advice then. Good luck!

I would add a wall, but it is a road. So, a wall would be weird. If I added more to the set it would get confusing because of the nature of me not narrating it. You know, the viewer coming up with their own version of the script. Yeah, that idea. I actually can squeeze out loads of stuff out with some coordinated camera angles and a photo editing. I'll let you know when the final version is up, you'll see a big difference! BTW Can you view Youtube videos that are embedded on another website? Otherwise you can't get the full experience of my comic.
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| October 9, 2010, 10:07 pm
Some constructive criticism would be nice ;)

http://www.mocpages.com/moc.php/228614
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| October 16, 2010, 5:30 pm
Phipson im sorry about the carpet but i just got a sheet for my stuff so this should be the last time you see my carpet XD http://www.mocpages.com/moc.php/231231
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| October 17, 2010, 5:26 pm
It seemed like a good idea when I built it, but to me it looks sort of... strange...
http://www.mocpages.com/moc.php/231740
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| October 17, 2010, 6:00 pm
Definitely one of my best.
http://www.mocpages.com/moc.php/231911
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| October 18, 2010, 6:02 pm
I figured it was something to do with the photography lighting, maybe too hard to see?

http://mocpages.com/moc.php/213930

Much obliged!
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| October 20, 2010, 1:40 am
You said to go bigger with this technique, so i have. I don't think I got the main chair exactly how i wanted, but hey. It's a fairly accurate recreation of the surgery!
http://www.mocpages.com/moc.php/232494
so please, fire away!
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| October 22, 2010, 3:02 pm
http://www.mocpages.com/moc.php/229982
This one needs some improvement I think.
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| October 30, 2010, 6:25 am
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Quoting John Drake
What happened? Chris used to be on it (and I am not trying to be a snitch here) but now its just filled with burdens, come on.


I'm getting there... just playing catch up from being gone for 10 days.
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| October 30, 2010, 5:47 pm
http://www.mocpages.com/moc.php/233931
I'm starting to like these sorts of builds.
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| October 31, 2010, 8:45 am
http://mocpages.com/moc.php/230779

ignore the blue piece on top, not enough gray.
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| November 5, 2010, 9:34 am
http://mocpages.com/moc.php/235065
First vig in a while, what do you think?
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| November 6, 2010, 2:37 pm
http://www.mocpages.com/folder.php/110547
I'm not really getting many reviews on my NnoVVember stuff so it would be helpful to know how I'm doing so far.
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| November 7, 2010, 10:49 am
http://www.mocpages.com/moc.php/235307

What? Expecting me to put something here about the MOC? Uh.... Its... WWII-ish..
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| November 7, 2010, 8:05 pm
http://www.mocpages.com/moc.php/237732

Thanks in advance!
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| November 22, 2010, 9:52 pm
http://mocpages.com/moc.php/166367

I think this could use some of your "Phippy Powers" here.
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| November 29, 2010, 8:30 am
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| December 8, 2010, 3:09 pm
http://www.mocpages.com/moc.php/237102

Sorry for the bad pics! Feel free to, oh I don't know, talk about me on your next moc, or something. (seriosly Don't you want to complete my life!)
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| December 9, 2010, 3:45 pm
Well if you have the time, I believe I have invented the first SPACE POLICE PHIPSON! Sorry, no new helmet, but I think you'll like him if you take a look. :D http://mocpages.com/moc.php/234677
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| December 9, 2010, 3:49 pm
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I'm really sorry everyone, but like Kelso said in another thread here, I've recently been hit in the face with a big ol slap of real life. So, for the time being, this thread will be closed. I'm sorry that I wasn't able to get to everyone's requests but I've just run out of time. Thanks for understanding.

~Chris.
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| December 14, 2010, 3:45 pm
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