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Celestes~ A New Dawn I
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((here will be the happenings aboard the assualt ship so as they dont interfeer with TM and dont get spread over a few threads like before. this should not be conted as a new rp, simply a new chapter))
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| March 16, 2010, 10:12 am
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Acose and Tezra got off the transport ship and one of the vast hanger bays within the ship. while they were aboard the transport the captain had informed them that any survivors from the crash would be coming as well. she said her goodbyes to the kind captain and Acose led her to the hall. by this she had regained complete control of herself and physicaly felt as though nothing had happened -- but, oh, it did...

"I have buisness to attend to but Venganza here will ascort you through the halls. its like a maze in here..."

"Uh, ok."

a red and purple clad woman came from behind Acose-- obviouly they had been whispering...

"so," said Venganza, "lets get you cleened up, maybe something to eat, then you must go talk to the general -- he has urgent buisness to discus with you"
and just like that they decended into the many twisting caverns of the ship...
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| April 6, 2010, 9:09 am
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Quoting The Abyss _
Acose and Tezra got off the transport ship and one of the vast hanger bays within the ship. while they were aboard the transport the captain had informed them that any survivors from the crash would be coming as well. she said her goodbyes to the kind captain and Acose led her to the hall. by this she had regained complete control of herself and physicaly felt as though nothing had happened -- but, oh, it did...

"I have buisness to attend to but Venganza here will ascort you through the halls. its like a maze in here..."

"Uh, ok."

a red and purple clad woman came from behind Acose-- obviouly they had been whispering...

"so," said Venganza, "lets get you cleened up, maybe something to eat, then you must go talk to the general -- he has urgent buisness to discus with you"
and just like that they decended into the many twisting caverns of the ship...


Harren and Omzhare arrived quickly afterwards. She followed him towards the Captain's chambers. Omzhare did not seem pleased.
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| April 8, 2010, 7:04 am
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Quoting Gringat the Repugnant

Harren and Omzhare arrived quickly afterwards. She followed him towards the Captain's chambers. Omzhare did not seem pleased.

once there they were stopped by a rather large Akonian holding what appearede to be a new rifle. "Our commander has requested to speak with you else where. These quarters are his santuary of sorts and he permits no one behind these great metal doors. may I suggest the conference room in the east wing?"
and the doors were massive, like hanger doors...
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| April 8, 2010, 9:09 am
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Tezra certainly did need a guid as the halls contorted on themselves like no one`s buisness, sometimes they just stopped for no reason. she saw no way that any outsider could navagate on their own.


they came to a large section of the ship which appeared to be a medic`s station. Venganza spoke, "This is the hospital wing. Let`s get you patched up!" a stern Akonian in white and purple robes came up to her, "Be calm, deary, this won`t hurt much." she took a sterilized needle out of her pocket, "Oh dont worry," Tezra said, "I`ve taken this before"
the nurse injected the Chronodermis solution into her wrist.
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| April 8, 2010, 9:18 am
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Quoting The Abyss _
once there they were stopped by a rather large Akonian holding what appearede to be a new rifle. "Our commander has requested to speak with you else where. These quarters are his santuary of sorts and he permits no one behind these great metal doors. may I suggest the conference room in the east wing?"
and the doors were massive, like hanger doors...


[Omzhare] "If you would be so kind as to escort me there, then. Harren, perhaps you should go and find your friends whilst I attend to this."

[Harren] She nodded, and called up Tezra on her headset. "Tez, I'm coming up to you, alright?"

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| April 14, 2010, 12:38 pm
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Quoting Gringat the Repugnant

[Omzhare] "If you would be so kind as to escort me there, then. Harren, perhaps you should go and find your friends whilst I attend to this."

[Harren] She nodded, and called up Tezra on her headset. "Tez, I'm coming up to you, alright?"

[Tezra]

"Alright, I`m in the hospital wing at the momment. I think you`ll be glad to know i`m feeling fit as a fiddle; more of the chronodermis shots" she turned off the comm and mumbled, "I hope it isnt addicting..."


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| April 14, 2010, 1:08 pm
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Quoting Gringat the Repugnant

[Omzhare] "If you would be so kind as to escort me there, then. Harren, perhaps you should go and find your friends whilst I attend to this."

"Yes... Follow me."he holstered hid rifle in a pouch on his back and led the general through many twisting hallways eventually coming to a peculier set of doors.
*Yes, yes this is it*
"This is the transporter that leads directly to the Conference Room. The comander should meet with you shortly"

(( tez and harren meet, tez leaves to see callidan and then he comes to see Omazare. `k?))
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| April 19, 2010, 2:06 pm
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Quoting The Abyss _
"Yes... Follow me."he holstered hid rifle in a pouch on his back and led the general through many twisting hallways eventually coming to a peculier set of doors.
*Yes, yes this is it*
"This is the transporter that leads directly to the Conference Room. The comander should meet with you shortly"

(( tez and harren meet, tez leaves to see callidan and then he comes to see Omazare. `k?))


[Omzhare]
"My thanks, soldier." He stepped through and there was a brief blue flash as the chronodermic servos span within the transporter, teleporting him to its twin in the floor of the conferecne room. Lights in the ceiling glowed when they detected the general and he pulled up one of the chairs, sitting on it patiently.

[Harren] Another soldier was leading Harren through the maze of twisting passages. This one was new; a rookie who looked even younger than she was. Eventually the circular doors of the med-bay came into view, and Harren stepped inside. The soldier trumped off back to wherever his post was.
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| April 26, 2010, 12:40 pm
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((Still need you to write that part it would be better from harren pov anyways. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yDanIr
_RGg8&feature=PlayList&p=480F7749F3A
DB98B&playnext_from=PL&index=5&playnext=2))

A tall figure came nearly running towards two small Akonians, obviously quite angry. The weak villagers were frightened and with good reason: -HE- never showed his face...
The tall Tokia general held out his arms as he aproached, then parted them. The Akonians did as they knew they should and Opened the great sliding doors. As Callidan passed by one gaurd looked to the other and seemingly shared the same thought: *He should be in there alone...*

[Callidan]
He strode quickly into the cell; an immense lump lay in the corner. "Get up! This must be dispensed with quickly, I have too many matters to attend!" the lump slowly uncoiled hundreds of tiny appendages and withdrew his true, beastial, arms from his face; a face is not what you should have called it -- innumerable mandibles circled to life and began chittering of their own accord, above that lay fur eyes dark and bloodshot. It was covered in chains.
"You will contact your deciples. You will be shepherded to the planet beneath. Have any you further resistance?" And from this crippled, insectoid mass rose a roar like no other, the words sounded as if they bloody sinew being hurled from its coarse esophagus: "Even if i wished it the means to do so have been destroyed gy the crash... It wouldn’t even have worked for me.." here he started to drown off, "It was built for my brother..."

Callidan’s mind began to tick beat relentlessly:

*No time Left.

Tick-tock!

I need his forces!

Tick-tock!

This is going to happen now

Tick-tock!

There is one last hindrance to be rid of...Omazhare*

"Can you use the ships comm-link?!"

"Maybe...but it would require a vast overhaul."

"I'll take care of that. You will be called for shortly." And he left with a greater pace than that of which he had arrived.

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| May 20, 2010, 7:35 pm
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Quoting The Artist Formaly Known As The Abyss
((hey, gringat, you still in this?))


((O.o I wrote the Tez-Harren bit ages ago. Why isn;t it here? No matter.))

[Alveus]
The Akonian busied himself with a piece of apparatus, letting it glide over Tezra to check on her. Tokia. He sighed. Some of the worst subjects to work on, since every single one was different. He had her files open on the console on his wrist, being careful to work exactly to the peramerers shown therein.

The doors sighed open behind him, and another tokia entered. Dxmn them. Did this one want healing too?

[Harren] "Um... excuse me..."

[Alveus] "Another crash victim, Tokia?"

[Harren] "Uh, no. Well, yes, but I was here to see Tezra..." She held her elbow with her opposite hand. A faint red glow glimmered from beneath.

[Alveus] He sighed again. "I'm waiting for her stasis to wear off. It shouldn't be long. If you would just go and clean yourself in one of those chambers, please. I'll have a nurse see to that injury."

[Harren] "It's nothi-" She shook her head. "Okay." She entered one of the chambers built into the far wall. A tinny voice sounded out a countdown, and a series of cleansing blue lasers and antiseptic spray enveloped her for the briefest of moments. She returned to find Tezra awake and sitting up, with the doctor packing away his apparatus into a shelf set into the walls.

[Alveus] "Tezra, you are free to go."

[Tezra] "Thank you doctor." She looked up at Harren. "How long have you been here?"

[Harren] "Not too long. You haven't been here that long either actually. How do you feel?"

[Tezra] "Better. Where's Julio?"

[Harren] She sat down on the bed next to Tezra. "No clue. The general's somewhere talking to Callidan... and the villagers are safe here too."

((Reminds me: Where ARE they now? Still on Tempesta Magna, or did they come aboard?))

[Tezra] "And how are you?" She eyed the red glow coming from Harren's arm.

[Harren] "Er, it's gonna be fixed..." She looked around the wing. "Tez... what do you think's gonna happen after this? Getting back home, I mean..."

[Tezra] "You miss Mezzinus don't you."

[Harren] "I've never been this far from him for this long..."
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| July 15, 2010, 9:06 am
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Quoting The Artist Formaly Known As The Abyss
((Still need you to write that part it would be better from harren pov anyways. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yDanIr
_RGg8&feature=PlayList&p=480F7749F3A
DB98B&playnext_from=PL&index=5&playnext=2))

A tall figure came nearly running towards two small Akonians, obviously quite angry. The weak villagers were frightened and with good reason: -HE- never showed his face...
The tall Tokia general held out his arms as he aproached, then parted them. The Akonians did as they knew they should and Opened the great sliding doors. As Callidan passed by one gaurd looked to the other and seemingly shared the same thought: *He should be in there alone...*

[Callidan]
He strode quickly into the cell; an immense lump lay in the corner. "Get up! This must be dispensed with quickly, I have too many matters to attend!" the lump slowly uncoiled hundreds of tiny appendages and withdrew his true, beastial, arms from his face; a face is not what you should have called it -- innumerable mandibles circled to life and began chittering of their own accord, above that lay fur eyes dark and bloodshot. It was covered in chains.
"You will contact your deciples. You will be shepherded to the planet beneath. Have any you further resistance?" And from this crippled, insectoid mass rose a roar like no other, the words sounded as if they bloody sinew being hurled from its coarse esophagus: "Even if i wished it the means to do so have been destroyed gy the crash... It wouldn’t even have worked for me.." here he started to drown off, "It was built for my brother..."

Callidan’s mind began to tick beat relentlessly:

*No time Left.

Tick-tock!

I need his forces!

Tick-tock!

This is going to happen now

Tick-tock!

There is one last hindrance to be rid of...Omazhare*

"Can you use the ships comm-link?!"

"Maybe...but it would require a vast overhaul."

"I'll take care of that. You will be called for shortly." And he left with a greater pace than that of which he had arrived.


((This insectoid mass - it's not Cor'opseis is it? If it is, that would be SO cool! :D))
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| August 20, 2010, 7:53 am
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((yes, he' like zaktan only khraken are the protodites))
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| August 22, 2010, 11:30 am
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Quoting m/, *_*/ ,m/
((yes, he' like zaktan only khraken are the protodites))


((Please reply to me on the other group (i need to talk with you Gringat). Stuff needs answering. ))
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| August 29, 2010, 6:40 am
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She walked through one of the metallic hallways in the labyrinth of Callidan`s emense battle ship. She had been directed to the captain’s quarters when she’d arrived. She continued walking and came to two very large doors. she would have thought these hanger doors had they not been inside the ship, but the label on the left side read clean as daylight: “Captains Quarters.” She knocked slightly before entering, then pushed them aside. “Hello? Brother are you here?” she walked in all the way closing the door behind her but hesitant to do so as the entire room –which must have been huge as she could not see the walls – was shrouded in darkness. Far to the rear sat a black and silver figure sitting behind a desk with his head buried in his hands. Light, as though coming from nowhere at all, illuminated him. “Callidan, is that you?” she was frightened now: the room gave off an eerie feeling that chilled her to the bone, and this solitary figure just sat there deep in thought seeming haunted and crazed. “Callidan?” she only could have whimpered this time, there was something so...Unsettling. The figure’s head rose and many emotions were shown upon it: fear, yes great fear, sheer happiness to see his sister after so many years…but also insanity. He smiled like a loon, and spoke but he laughed as he did so and also rose “I- I have done it Tezra!”He began to walk towards her. She was scared, “D-done what, exactly?” he was coming closer, he said harshly “what my life has all been for that’s what! I have set in motion the events that will bring down the Tokia Empire, and avenge our father!” Her voice scared still but now demanding, “what have you done?!” he replied as if the simplest thing in the world, “I have amassed legions! I have now –THREE- of these battle cruisers at my command. troops awaiting my call to strike all across The Celestis! The Hynacks -OF OUR WORLD- are under my command, they have joined me so that we can be rid of this Tokia injustice once and for all!” At these last words he seemed ecstatic, had her brother turned into an insane
War-monger? He came closer still and grasped her in a full on embrace, “Ahh, it is good to have you here to see me right the wrongs that have plagued our family. I’m so sorry I had to leave you those years ago-’’here he grew enraged and held her close, “-THEY HAD NO RIGHT TO DO THIS TO YOU!!” he calmed, “but all will be right now, you’ll see; I trust you did your part at home?” she was now utterly terrified at what he had become. How their father’s death and the events that followed had affected him so deeply, not only had her father been taken from her but now, from a chain reaction of the same events, she had lost her brother as well. She answered his question, “What was –MY- part?” he replied as if she was the silliest person in the world, “To bring the cities to there knees of coarse!” he said this with a smile. “Uhm…yes the, uh, the Khraken-“ he interrupted her knowing what the rest would be, “Ahh, others have had their revenge as well then. Come I will show you my friends! You may already know one…” Callidan led her deep into the ‘Hanger’.She then inquired, “Why do you keep it so dark in here?” this question visciously sparked Callidan memory: years before a colonel had come asking the same question but his arrogance had got the best of him, for when Callidan refused to answer the colonel had told the computer to activate the lights…this was a bad idea for in that instant all of his delusions and ideas were revealed to his superior: complicated formulas and algorithems, strategies and battle plans lined the walls written in blood and ink alike. “well we can`t have you telling this to the world now can we”Callidan had said when the colonel horrified expressions became illuminated. At these words he had sent the colonel into a cataclysm of fear: *Fear me. Fear my body and my soul. Fear the air you breath, the ground you walk on, the very universe itself. Fear it all…* when his superior collapsed into a phobia-induced coma he had dragged him into a back closet to be used as spare parts “Yes nano-ciruitry will be of great use to me”. He ignored the question. Where they emerged she saw a Behemoth. A creature similar to the Hynaks she knew but far larger, even its powerful arms, as big as tree trunks, were certainly an awesome sight. On its back hair thick as cables protruded from ghastly green flesh. Its mighty jaw jutted out from its face as if tusks. It stood on all fours like a proud gorilla…guerilla more like. Broad cable like muscles covered its immense body except for where half decade flesh appeared. Its head turned and it leered at her with big, deep, dark blue eyes. She jumped and hid behind her brother, still after all these years thinking him a protector and father-figure. He then replied to her actions, “This, Tezra, is Bruticus a member of the ancestral species to the Hynaks. He hails from…far, far away from The Celestis. He prefers to stay in his native form as he says doing so simplifies his thoughts…and well it is about the only way he can walk around here with the small ceilings! Don’t be frightened, he won’t bite…I can see to that. Have you been acquainted with Acose?” he pointed her to a silhouette leaned up against the corner that had lay overlooked. The silhouette walked into suitable light, and she recognized the familiar young Tokia. “Oh, Acose what are you doing here?” Acose ignored her and reached behind his head, his hand jerked as he pulled. Slowly he took off a mask. Tezra stood there horrified and stupefied as Acose pulled off his face! He threw the nanoid mask to the ground showing his true face: his lips had been removed and the teeth beneath were sharpened to a point, his face was half melted away and where the hot liquid metal had settled and rehardend lay rare patches of unharmed skin. She threw her arms around her brother, “THAT IS NOT ACOSE!”she said this to him like a whimpering child not wanting to know the truth. “Yes. Yes he is the same person you fell in love with only-” “H-” “How did I know? I have my ways-” she then interrupted him in a frail whisper, “What happened to him?” “Let Acose explain that. I have to go now” she clung on to him for dear life. “Don`t worry I`ll be back. You stay here for now.” When Callidan had shut the door behind him Acose spoke: “You see the first tests to create a ‘super being’ were nothing like the Tokia-process today, they were much more similer to the Zenithri program…But they involved much, much more chronodermis than was later used. This was to impede further development of the conscious brain and force the creative parts to flourish. However these high, concentrated amounts had disastrous effects on the subjects body…Making them immune to time itself! And in doing so death aswell…But not injury…”He stared down at his gruff worn hands, a single tear fell to the ground. “What you are staring at now, Tezra, is the Tokia patient-zero…”

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| September 6, 2010, 8:05 pm
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Quoting Gringat the Repugnant

Omzhare sat cross-legged with his arms folded on the ground of the conference chamber. He had been kept waiting too long. He felt his anger and frustration towards Callidan, and as such was forcing himself into his meditations to calm himself. He didn't want to trigger The Reaction like he had so often before. Calm. Quiet. Controlled. That is what he had been trained to be.

He had completely lost track of time when he heard Callidan approaching the door. Getting to his feet, and standing straight as a rail with his hands behind his back, Omzhare stood at ease.


[Callidan]
"Hello my old -friend-..." he growled as he steped through the door
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| October 2, 2010, 4:08 pm
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Quoting m/, *_*/ ,m/

[Callidan]
"Hello my old -friend-..." he growled as he steped through the door


[Omzhare] The general did not turn around to face Callidan. he continued to stare at the clock on the wall, hands behind his back. "I thank you for taking my crew and I aboard ship, captain. It was kind of you." He turned to face him. "You know that your sister is aboard, yes? Anyway," he waved his hand dismissively, "I am sure this meeting is pure business. We shall not take up much of your time and you shall find a considerable boon in your wages this month for helping me. We must return to Milita Magna poste haste to deliver the civilians into safety."
Callidan didn't reply straight away, but Omzhare saw the look on his face.
"I really do apologise captain. Or is something else on your mind?"
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| October 9, 2010, 3:45 pm
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Quoting m/, *_*/ ,m/
“What you are staring at now, Tezra, is the Tokia patient-zero…”

(( WOW JAKE! This is getting interesting. Can't wait until I get to this part when I'm writing the 'real' story XD ))
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| October 9, 2010, 3:50 pm
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Quoting Gringat the Repugnant
Callidan didn't reply straight away, but Omzhare saw the look on his face.
"I really do apologise captain. Or is something else on your mind?"

[Callidan]

Callidan activated his comm-link, “Bruticus, bring in the prisoner,” he turned his attention back to the General, “Oh, we will be going to Militia but I’m afraid your citizens will never see the light of day again…”

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| October 9, 2010, 4:19 pm
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Quoting Me ep
Quoting Gringat the Repugnant
Callidan didn't reply straight away, but Omzhare saw the look on his face.
"I really do apologise captain. Or is something else on your mind?"

[Callidan]

Callidan activated his comm-link, “Bruticus, bring in the prisoner,” he turned his attention back to the General, “Oh, we will be going to Militia but I’m afraid your citizens will never see the light of day again…”


[Omzhare] "What are you saying, Callidan?"
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| October 10, 2010, 9:36 am
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Quoting Gringat the Repugnant

[Omzhare] "What are you saying, Callidan?"

th Empire -MUST- pay for its injustice, and I will see that it will. a War is about to begin. I must go and rally my troops... Lets see that you dont cause any trouble," he smirked.
The large doors burst open and an enormouse hynak-like monster came wheeling in a blue and white Tokia strapped to a dolly. "No doubt you remember Zaes, here, after all -you- sentence him to life-in-prison for war crimes. On, another -completly- different note-"the sarcasm was blatant,"-you've always known how
-incredably- leathal electricity can be to Akonians now haven't you?"
The frea was torn acrose the general's face "What-"
"YOU TOCHERED HIM TO GIVE HIM THESE POWEERS THEN IMPRISONED HIM FOR THEM!!!"
all this time Zaes had been huufing and puffing and snorting uncontrolably. Lightning now burst from the tokia flickering the lights and striking everyone in the room, however the gereral seemed to be the only one effected by this. "H- how c-c-can you stand this!" he managed to spurt out.
there was no one in the dolly.

((callidan made him fear it and stuff like that))
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| October 10, 2010, 9:53 am
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((BTW harren's not dead since she was in the hospital area but the bay where the vilagers were was fumegated))
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| October 10, 2010, 10:11 am
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Quoting Me ep
th Empire -MUST- pay for its injustice, and I will see that it will. a War is about to begin. I must go and rally my troops... Lets see that you dont cause any trouble," he smirked.
The large doors burst open and an enormouse hynak-like monster came wheeling in a blue and white Tokia strapped to a dolly. "No doubt you remember Zaes, here, after all -you- sentence him to life-in-prison for war crimes. On, another -completly- different note-"the sarcasm was blatant,"-you've always known how
-incredably- leathal electricity can be to Akonians now haven't you?"
The frea was torn acrose the general's face "What-"
"YOU TOCHERED HIM TO GIVE HIM THESE POWEERS THEN IMPRISONED HIM FOR THEM!!!"
all this time Zaes had been huufing and puffing and snorting uncontrolably. Lightning now burst from the tokia flickering the lights and striking everyone in the room, however the gereral seemed to be the only one effected by this. "H- how c-c-can you stand this!" he managed to spurt out.
there was no one in the dolly.

((callidan made him fear it and stuff like that))


Zaes materialised suddenly behind Omzhare and grabbed him, a sliver of drool hanging from his malformed mouth. Omzhare cursed. He couldn't turn invisible here. The amount of electricity loose would mean he would be blind and unable to see in his electron vision while his stealth field was active.

"Callidan!" He shouted. Zaes did not let go. Lightning still arced from him, spearing into Omzhare's body. Quickly, Omzhare's spike flicked out from his wrist and stabbed Zaes in the leg. The proto-tokia screamed in pain and staggered backwards, allowing Omzhare free movement enough to draw his pistol. He fired three quick shots of chronodermic radiation into Zaes' chest, and then ducked suddenly as Bruticus swung a heavy clawed fist where his head had been moments before.

Zaes flickered and tried to advance, but could not. Electricity sparked around him and he screamed - but the scream echoed oddly. His heart was no longer linking properly in time to the rest of his body. The shot would be lethal.

Bruticus loomed over Omzhare, and made to attack again. The general ducked, and slid between the creature's legs, firing a blast upwards into the creature's body as he did so. Bruticus toppled, falling, and Omzhare quickly stabbed him. Both were paralysed in time.

Callidan was making to leave, a rictus of surprise on his face. Omzahre grabbed him and held him in an armlock, bringing his chain dagger up to Callidan's neck. "You are out of line, Callidan." The dagger twitched, deftly breaking Callidan's communicator. "You shall do nothing to harm the civilians, do you hear me? Any move you make now will merely confirm it."
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| October 10, 2010, 10:12 am
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Quoting Gringat the Repugnant

Any move you make now will merely confirm it."

"Were you... arfaid of Zeas? Is that why you locked him up?" Callidan made a silly questioning face like a 5 year old girl. ((you see Zaes isn't real he is only a manifestation of Omazhare's subconcious fear))
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| October 10, 2010, 10:16 am
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Quoting Me ep
"Were you... arfaid of Zeas? Is that why you locked him up?" Callidan made a silly questioning face like a 5 year old girl. ((you see Zaes isn't real he is only a manifestation of Omazhare's subconcious fear))


"No, Callidan," Omzhare growled through clenched teeth. "Zaes was locked up for his OWN welfare, and the safety of others!" The dagger buzzed near Callidan's throat. The trapped captain chuckled to himself. "I do NOT regret my decision."

Behind him, the form of Zeas disappeared. Bruticus, however, was still there. Twitching.
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| October 10, 2010, 10:32 am
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Quoting Gringat the Repugnant

his silly expression turned to malice, "Then what do you fear? the loss of your people?-" images flowed through Omazhare’s mind of genocide but he didn't flinch, "The deaths of your foster parent perhaps?" the hallucination was almost real this time... Callidan was getting closer, "becoming a beast once more? The death of Lady Ellisara? The deaths of your pathetic siblings?"
when Callidan was first grabbed he had turned on his comm-link now all he had to do was wait for help. Omazhare was not one to underestimate

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| October 10, 2010, 10:45 am
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((my comment wont go through >>))
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| October 10, 2010, 10:49 am
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Quoting Me ep
((my comment wont go through >>))


((I'll put it through if I can. Gonna have to go for today though. Sorry =/ It's been awesome. We haven't ahd this much happening for AGES! And I'll be sure to come back soon...

I think the dialogue between Mezzinus, Yayap and Cor'opseis doesn't need me involved, so... yeah. You guys continue that :) ))
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| October 10, 2010, 11:18 am
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Quoting Gringat the Repugnant

((I'll put it through if I can. Gonna have to go for today though. Sorry =/ It's been awesome. We haven't ahd this much happening for AGES! And I'll be sure to come back soon...

I think the dialogue between Mezzinus, Yayap and Cor'opseis doesn't need me involved, so... yeah. You guys continue that :) ))
((please let omazhare be subdued i need callidan to start everything. omazhare can break out later, eh?))

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| October 15, 2010, 7:57 am
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Quoting Gringat the Repugnant

((I'll put it through if I can. Gonna have to go for today though. Sorry =/ It's been awesome. We haven't ahd this much happening for AGES! And I'll be sure to come back soon...

I think the dialogue between Mezzinus, Yayap and Cor'opseis doesn't need me involved, so... yeah. You guys continue that :) ))
((are ye there?))

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| October 31, 2010, 11:10 am
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:Several Hours Earlier:

Little Jaezon ran through the crowd, flowing towards the behemoth war ship, screaming desprately for his mother. An old man walked infront of him and placed a hand on his shoulder, "It'll be alright little one, we'll find her when we're all inside. Tell me your name" He did. The old man was wearing what seemed to be an ancient tribal mask with wholes on the cheeks and a concave for a mouth -- this meant e was a preist; The boy would be safe with him.
They great multitude of people from the lunar cities had all acumulate in a vast cargo hull of the war ship named "Tezra's Might" the name could have been seen in enormous letters acrose the outside walls. Jaezon was standing at a portwhole gazing into black, when he suddenly saw something streak past at incredable speed! "Jaffar! Jaffar!" He cried for the old man and ran to him. "What did you see?"
"A Red and silver angle! It was beautiful!"
"Ahh," dread spread over Jaffar's face, "He's only seen in times of great destruction..."
"What?"
"The last time he was seen the Khraken rose to power, before that was the great cataclysm... They say were he goes his brotther, Drothmar follows..."

((no new characters just wanted to write that))

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| October 31, 2010, 11:38 am
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his silly expression turned to malice, "Then what do you fear? the loss of your people?-" images flowed through Omazhare’s mind of genocide but he didn't flinch, "The deaths of your foster parent perhaps?" the hallucination was almost real this time... Callidan was getting closer, "becoming a beast once more? The death of Lady Ellisara? The deaths of your pathetic siblings?"
when Callidan was first grabbed he had turned on his comm-link now all he had to do was wait for help. Omazhare was not one to underestimate


Omzhare stayed poker-faced, but the slight twitch at the end showed the mention of siblings had hit a nerve. His grip tightened on Callidan, his voice dark and low. "You will not succeed, Callidan. I have faced your type before, and each of those maniac bXXtarXs were killed by my hand."

((Egg him on a bit more! See what happens!))
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| November 6, 2010, 7:27 am
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Quoting Gringat the Repugnant

Omzhare stayed poker-faced, but the slight twitch at the end showed the mention of siblings had hit a nerve. His grip tightened on Callidan, his voice dark and low. "You will not succeed, Callidan. I have faced your type before, and each of those maniac bXXtarXs were killed by my hand."

((Egg him on a bit more! See what happens!))
"Oh, yes, whatever puts your mind at ease.-" here he broke free and started strolling around the general who seemed to -- stunned at the momment to restrain him. "-Tell me: do you think your sister escaped the cloro((something :P)) gas that sizzled and corroded all your insolent little villagers? and what of this mezzinus? My sources say he's fighting against the Hynaks. Of coarse you know I'm behind that as well and will do all in my power to CRUSH HIM LIKE A KHRAKEN!" he roared like the mighty murtok that roam the plain spewing saliva in Omazhare's face. The general made a move with his knife but it was frightfully apearent that what Callidan had said struck him incredably hard. callidan held back the dagger with one hand and what seemed like ease, "Even if you kill me my cause will continue." he spat in his face.
Acose then came into the room, "Ah acose, please do send medics for our poor frien there," Callidan gestured to the sleeping giant....

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| November 6, 2010, 10:57 am
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Quoting Gringat the Repugnant

Omzhare stayed poker-faced, but the slight twitch at the end showed the mention of siblings had hit a nerve. His grip tightened on Callidan, his voice dark and low. "You will not succeed, Callidan. I have faced your type before, and each of those maniac bXXtarXs were killed by my hand."

((Egg him on a bit more! See what happens!))
"Oh, yes, whatever puts your mind at ease.-" here he broke free and started strolling around the general who seemed to -- stunned at the momment to restrain him. "-Tell me: do you think your sister escaped the cloro((something :P)) gas that sizzled and corroded all your insolent little villagers? and what of this mezzinus? My sources say he's fighting against the Hynaks. Of coarse you know I'm behind that as well and will do all in my power to CRUSH HIM LIKE A KHRAKEN!" he roared like the mighty murtok that roam the plain spewing saliva in Omazhare's face. The general made a move with his knife but it was frightfully apearent that what Callidan had said struck him incredably hard. callidan held back the dagger with one hand and what seemed like ease, "Even if you kill me my cause will continue." he spat in his face.
Acose then came into the room, "Ah acose, please do send medics for our poor frien there," Callidan gestured to the sleeping giant....

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| November 6, 2010, 10:57 am
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Quoting Gringat the Repugnant

Omzhare stayed poker-faced, but the slight twitch at the end showed the mention of siblings had hit a nerve. His grip tightened on Callidan, his voice dark and low. "You will not succeed, Callidan. I have faced your type before, and each of those maniac bXXtarXs were killed by my hand."

((Egg him on a bit more! See what happens!))
"Oh, yes, whatever puts your mind at ease.-" here he broke free and started strolling around the general who seemed to -- stunned at the momment to restrain him. "-Tell me: do you think your sister escaped the cloro((something :P)) gas that sizzled and corroded all your insolent little villagers? and what of this mezzinus? My sources say he's fighting against the Hynaks. Of coarse you know I'm behind that as well and will do all in my power to CRUSH HIM LIKE A KHRAKEN!" he roared like the mighty murtok that roam the plain spewing saliva in Omazhare's face. The general made a move with his knife but it was frightfully apearent that what Callidan had said struck him incredably hard. callidan held back the dagger with one hand and what seemed like ease, "Even if you kill me my cause will continue." he spat in his face.
Acose then came into the room, "Ah acose, please do send medics for our poor frien there," Callidan gestured to the sleeping giant....

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| November 6, 2010, 10:57 am
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Quoting Gringat the Repugnant

Omzhare stayed poker-faced, but the slight twitch at the end showed the mention of siblings had hit a nerve. His grip tightened on Callidan, his voice dark and low. "You will not succeed, Callidan. I have faced your type before, and each of those maniac bXXtarXs were killed by my hand."

((Egg him on a bit more! See what happens!))
"Oh, yes, whatever puts your mind at ease.-" here he broke free and started strolling around the general who seemed to -- stunned at the momment to restrain him. "-Tell me: do you think your sister escaped the cloro((something :P)) gas that sizzled and corroded all your insolent little villagers? and what of this mezzinus? My sources say he's fighting against the Hynaks. Of coarse you know I'm behind that as well and will do all in my power to CRUSH HIM LIKE A KHRAKEN!" he roared like the mighty murtok that roam the plain spewing saliva in Omazhare's face. The general made a move with his knife but it was frightfully apearent that what Callidan had said struck him incredably hard. callidan held back the dagger with one hand and what seemed like ease, "Even if you kill me my cause will continue." he spat in his face.
Acose then came into the room, "Ah acose, please do send medics for our poor frien there," Callidan gestured to the sleeping giant....


(( I have made two new characters, Arrukhan and Ikrah. The two are agents for Callidan, spying on Zhar and making sure Cert's resistance fails. They answer to Cert, who in turn answers to Callidan, right? And Arru has shadow powers and Ikrah has fire powers given to them by Callidan - but maybe not as powerful and severe as the ones we've already seen in the story, right?

Also, can we say that Callidan deliberately made a hynak or khraken agent sabotage the fist of elisara to make it crash on Tempesta Magna? That would round off most of the plot holes nicely XD ))

[Alveus] The blue and white tunic of a medic was instantly recognisable as Callidan's medic entered the room, a look of disgust on his face. "You called, commander?"
He looked to Omzhare, baring his teeth a bit at the red light pulsing around his bruises. Omzhare glared at the three figures.

((Also, where's Tezra? Can you RP her a bit? ))
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| December 4, 2010, 1:32 pm
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[Alveus] The blue and white tunic of a medic was instantly recognisable as Callidan's medic entered the room, a look of disgust on his face. "You called, commander?"
He looked to Omzhare, baring his teeth a bit at the red light pulsing around his bruises. Omzhare glared at the three figures.

((Also, where's Tezra? Can you RP her a bit? ))

"Call more gaurds if need be, BUT I WANT HIM ALIVE UNDERSTAND! there are more pressing matters to attend." with that he left.

Tezra sat in the gloomy dark of callidan's "office" distraught as much as seemingly possible, slowly and without her awares, she was growing angry...

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| January 5, 2011, 11:49 am
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"Call more gaurds if need be, BUT I WANT HIM ALIVE UNDERSTAND! there are more pressing matters to attend." with that he left.

Tezra sat in the gloomy dark of callidan's "office" distraught as much as seemingly possible, slowly and without her awares, she was growing angry...


[Alveus] He stumbled over to Omzhare, as were his commander's orders. There was little light in the chamber now, but the red pall cast by Omzhare's wounds was visible. As a zenithri, the painlight was dimmer than normal - but it still looked fairly bad. The medic opened one of the pouches at his belt, his face grim. Omzhare glared at him coldly, but Acose's prescence in the room deterred him from acting.

Alveus' voice came quietly and low in Omzhare's ear as he made to mend a bruise on his arm. "I am... sorry, general, for what is happening... I fear-"
"Alveus... Just repair the damage and go. You are a good healer - don't waste yourself longer than you have to."
"Sir I-"
"You served me well during the war, Alveus. Do not think I don't respect that."
"Then what are you.."
"Planning to do? I don't know anymore Alveus. It was a small mission. I was close to retirement... and now I'm attacked by our own army and three villages are dead because of my mistakes.."
"It's not your-"
"I am a general. It's my responsibility, whether or not it is my fault."
There was a silence as Alveus kept to his work, then.
"If it is your responsibility, stop him! You have not released your... the Omzhare since you were captured - it would-"
"Fail utterly. I have no aspirations that brute force will acheive anything here. Leave me for now Alveus - I shall think of something." There a slight smirk on his bruised face as he said it and Alveus left him.

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[Harren] As she approached the civilian vault containing the villagers, she felt a strange feeling of foreboding - something wasn't quite right. There was an odd, chemical smell in the air. Something like Mezzinus' workshop after he had been mixing repellents.

The door rolled open, closing behind her as she entered the small cubicle between the doors. The main door to the vault then opened.

The stinging wave of chlorogen gas struck her like a fist, and her rebreather suddenly, automatically began running. The air was like thick soup - she couldn't see the walls - or anything else! It was quiet too... the feeling rose to panic, fear, disgust, worry.

Her foot touched something and she froze. Batting away the thick gas, she saw something on the floor - a hand! No... more gas moved away, and the body of an akonian became visible. She recognised her - one of the girls of Tezra's village - she had just gotten married! And... there he was, beside her, holding her hand. Both dead. Pain in their eyes. Chlorogen. Although it wasn't able to enter Harren's own lungs, she felt sick, weak...

She turned to leave, but couldn't see the exit! Panic rose, she stumbled - more bodies. Tears stung her eyes - and then she hit something. It crackled.

"Harren?"
It was the shield! Of course, the generators had saved the villagers during the Khraken attack on the village! Someone must have brought them with them. She looked through the crackling shield, and saw the face of an akonian on the other side. Yes! Some of them were still alive!
"Yes! Yes, it's me! How many of you are in there?"
"A lot. Nowhere near all of us - the elders..." The man behind the shield swallowed. "Most of them didn't get in in time. They wanted to sit close to the walls... A lot of others, too... They're..."
Harren put her hand on the shield. "I'm here now." More faces appeared. "I'm getting you out."
"...How?"
"Just stay in there."
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