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Blood of the Vampirik I
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((This has branched from the Bara Magna storyline. Lestrix, Kira and Fenrir (and possibly Aedalus, depending on who Jibs wants to go with) are tracking down the rogue vampirik, Jormandgund.

Meanwhile, in the actual Bara Magna storyline, Ronin's quest to save his people begins. This involves Ronin, Amul, Telzira, Rames and Aedalus (depending on whether the last two turn up.)

((Nothing should be posted here until the story actually splits. They are still together for now, until they finish investigating Drachen's Hope for clues. After that, they will go their seperate ways.

Since The Abyss is no longer involved in the Bara Magna storyline (But you can join back in any time), approval falls to me for this. I approve :) ))
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| March 6, 2010, 9:54 am
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((Due to John's return, I no longer control Fenrir and Merlonus. Lilac was never mine (Gideon's), so I'm left without a character in Drachen's Hope. (The village needed a name)

So...))


[Surt] ((:D))

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fT6SnBj2L8E&feature=related ((Ruins Theme))

A silver-armoured figure strode across the decayed, weather-beaten courtyard that connected the Monastery to the outside world. Jagged peaks rose up on two sides, and a steep ravine on the third. The damage his brother and his party had done to the place during the nomad attack was astounding. Half of the walls were rubble, and the top floors were almost all caved in. The rusted armour of several templars and dozens of times more Nomads littered the place, while sand and weeds had grown up between them... Silence pervaded the place. A silence Surt could not break, but for the echoing crunch of Gonerhymm's boots on the rubble. The past five years had taken their toll on the ruins.

Surt turned around, looking at the leaning central tower, its onion-shaped roof sliced down the middle and bearing hideous looking scorch marks. Some rubble fell down in the distance, beyond his field of vision, creating a small avalance of mortar and brick into the ravine...

Surt's search for information brought him to the dilapidated main atrium of the Monastery. The black and white tiles were mostly broken, or missing, and littered with pieces of armour and weaponry. A small vault door at the back that had once been hidden by a portrait was open. Curious. He stepped inside...

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZVP_rYFmwy8&feature=related ((Golem's Theme))

And then the vault door slammed shut behind him. A trap! Something else inhabited these ruins!

There was movement below. He drew his sword, searching for life. He sensed none, and could smell only rot and decaying stone, but something was down there all the same...

The Golem leapt at Surt with blades and claws drawn. In the darkness, Surt brought his shield forward, connecting harshly with the Golem's hand, crushing it. The magnetised surface pulling two fingers away. A pair of mandibles lunged towards Surt's chest. He kicked out with a leg. Crunch. The creature fell down the flight of stairs, scrap metal tinkling off it. In the light below he saw it get back up, ready for another charge. Surt charged with his sword, letting out a fierce bellow. Slash! Crack. He connected a spiked knee with the golem's chest, and then brought his shield down, secering its head. It collapsed into a pile of junk and rotting flesh on the dusty stone floor with a satisfying crashing sound.

((That said, the Golem still being operational proves Telzira is still alive. Were she dead, the machine would spontanously collapse, no longer fueled by her energies. This will be good news for Ronin when he and Surt meet at Drachen's Hope.))

Surt stepped forward. Ahead of him was Ataklinus' vault. Sealed. Perhaps within was the information he sought...

((He'll return to Drachen's Hope and meet the others next time I post. :) ))
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| March 9, 2010, 4:34 pm
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[Magmar]((look back no one ever said he died...^^))

a small solemn voice filled with regretts and memoirs of power echoed through-out the tower room, "Thank god you killed that beast...its been tormenting me for years"...
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| March 9, 2010, 6:20 pm
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Quoting The Abyss _
[Magmar]((look back no one ever said he died...^^))

a small solemn voice filled with regretts and memoirs of power echoed through-out the tower room, "Thank god you killed that beast...its been tormenting me for years"...


[Surt] The former vampirik did not look up from the scrolls within the safe. "Perhaps "killed" isn't quite the correct word."

He opened another scroll, this one with an unpleasantly realistic rendition of the Mask of the Boneraiser. He shuddered at those memories.

"What is your name, Agori?" he said.
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| March 12, 2010, 8:22 am
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[Magmar]

he crawled out from a small crevass in the wall, brushed himself off and spoke, "A name i have but agori i am no longer." he had grown a long grey whisping beard, his armor was tarnished and foul and in is voice age was heard. thses years alone had not been kind to him. "I am Magmar."
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| March 12, 2010, 8:53 am
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Quoting The Abyss _
[Magmar]

he crawled out from a small crevass in the wall, brushed himself off and spoke, "A name i have but agori i am no longer." he had grown a long grey whisping beard, his armor was tarnished and foul and in is voice age was heard. thses years alone had not been kind to him. "I am Magmar."


Taking all of the scrolls into the hollow inside his chestplate, Surt nodded. "I know of you, Magmar. You led the army that attacked this place. My brother Fenrir was present at that time."

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| March 16, 2010, 6:33 am
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Quoting Gringat the Repugnant

Taking all of the scrolls into the hollow inside his chestplate, Surt nodded. "I know of you, Magmar. You led the army that attacked this place. My brother Fenrir was present at that time."

"Hmm"

"It was not wise you coming here..."
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| March 16, 2010, 10:07 am
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Quoting The Abyss _
"Hmm"

"It was not wise you coming here..."


"I am here for information on myself and my brothers. One of them is still rogue. I have nothing to do with the attack that happened here, and I plan to keep it that way."
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| March 16, 2010, 6:05 pm
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Quoting Gringat the Repugnant

"I am here for information on myself and my brothers. One of them is still rogue. I have nothing to do with the attack that happened here, and I plan to keep it that way."

"That is not what i ment...you see their power keeps one here under a trance. one cannot leave..."
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| March 16, 2010, 6:22 pm
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Drachen's voice resonated throughout the chamber.

"Nay. It is not a Vampirik, but something else. Something from the world that I hail from."
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| March 16, 2010, 9:00 pm
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Quoting John the Imaginative
Drachen's voice resonated throughout the chamber.

"Nay. It is not a Vampirik, but something else. Something from the world that I hail from."


((I was just about to make Drachen, you know ^^; ))

[Surt] "Who is this, Magmar?"
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| March 19, 2010, 12:13 pm
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Quoting Gringat the Repugnant

((I was just about to make Drachen, you know ^^; ))

[Surt] "Who is this, Magmar?"

((i`m sorry i dont understand. both yours and johns comments))
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| March 19, 2010, 12:24 pm
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Quoting John the Imaginative
Drachen's voice resonated throughout the chamber.

"Nay. It is not a Vampirik, but something else. Something from the world that I hail from."


[Surt] "Whatever it is, I will have nothing to do with it. I have what I need, and now I am leaving for Drachen's Hope."
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| March 24, 2010, 4:00 pm
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Fenrir looked at the faded pages of the journals. Most people would take one look and think they were the writings of a madman. But Fenrir had seen things that convinced him of Ozahkura's sanity. Merlonus looked at his old friend, marveling at how much he had changed, then looked at the barrel of Toxic Rum next to Fenrir, then realized how little he actually had.
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| March 25, 2010, 4:03 am
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[Surt] Surt made to leave.
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| March 27, 2010, 7:52 am
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Quoting Gringat the Repugnant
[Surt] Surt made to leave.

"WAIT!! you-you can leave this place! are you mad?!" he feature contorted on themselvs, and he was ignored. "YOU MUST STAY you have to..." he picked up a boulder, "THEIR POWER it grows ever stronger LOCCKED UP BEHIND THAT CRACK in the wall. it KEEPS me here lures me, entices me to stay when all my men have left... don`t leave me alone again...you`ve already KILLED MY ONLY COMPANY!!" he threw the stone at the vamprik with suprising streagnth for an agori. it colided with the base of his spine jostling something as it did.
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| March 27, 2010, 11:05 am
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Quoting The Abyss _
"WAIT!! you-you can leave this place! are you mad?!" he feature contorted on themselvs, and he was ignored. "YOU MUST STAY you have to..." he picked up a boulder, "THEIR POWER it grows ever stronger LOCCKED UP BEHIND THAT CRACK in the wall. it KEEPS me here lures me, entices me to stay when all my men have left... don`t leave me alone again...you`ve already KILLED MY ONLY COMPANY!!" he threw the stone at the vamprik with suprising streagnth for an agori. it colided with the base of his spine jostling something as it did.

((You just threw a rock a suit of armor controlled by a spirit. I don't think that will do anything))
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| March 27, 2010, 11:09 am
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Quoting Supreme commander Gideon Fucci
((You just threw a rock a suit of armor controlled by a spirit. I don't think that will do anything))

((does he know that?))
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| March 27, 2010, 11:18 am
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Quoting The Abyss _
"WAIT!! you-you can leave this place! are you mad?!" he feature contorted on themselvs, and he was ignored. "YOU MUST STAY you have to..." he picked up a boulder, "THEIR POWER it grows ever stronger LOCCKED UP BEHIND THAT CRACK in the wall. it KEEPS me here lures me, entices me to stay when all my men have left... don`t leave me alone again...you`ve already KILLED MY ONLY COMPANY!!" he threw the stone at the vamprik with suprising streagnth for an agori. it colided with the base of his spine jostling something as it did.


Surt collapsed as the boulder hit, swearing loudly. The scrolls rolled across the floor. His platemail skirt crumpled to the floor, followed shortly by the rest of him. He braced himself against the walls of the corridor as the armour in his lower back snapped apart.

He pulled the dented piece out and righted himself, the armour plates shifting and settling back into their normal positions. he raised Gonerhymm's shield and activated it, bulling buckets of Golem-Shrapnel and Magmar himself towards it. A Rock-Ox shinbone pierced the agori's back with the force of a miner's pick into a rock face.
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| March 27, 2010, 11:46 am
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Quoting John the Imaginative
Fenrir looked at the faded pages of the journals. Most people would take one look and think they were the writings of a madman. But Fenrir had seen things that convinced him of Ozahkura's sanity. Merlonus looked at his old friend, marveling at how much he had changed, then looked at the barrel of Toxic Rum next to Fenrir, then realized how little he actually had.


((John, would you like to play as Fenrir in the Vorox Trouble thread? There's an angry Telzira after his blood. :P ))

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| March 27, 2010, 12:36 pm
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Quoting The Abyss _
"WAIT!! you-you can leave this place! are you mad?!" he feature contorted on themselvs, and he was ignored. "YOU MUST STAY you have to..." he picked up a boulder, "THEIR POWER it grows ever stronger LOCCKED UP BEHIND THAT CRACK in the wall. it KEEPS me here lures me, entices me to stay when all my men have left... don`t leave me alone again...you`ve already KILLED MY ONLY COMPANY!!" he threw the stone at the vamprik with suprising streagnth for an agori. it colided with the base of his spine jostling something as it did.


((I'm re-writing that last post. I'm being mean to Jake otherwise))

[Surt] His armour stopped moving and settled into place. His shield still held the Agori. Magmar writhed, his own inky black blood falling in droplets onto the stone floor, clutching at the shinbone piercing his torso.

"Perhaps you will survive before I reach Drachen's Hope. Perhaps not." Gathering the scrolls under his other arm, he strode off across the dunes. Night passed, and eventually, through the rictus of his pain, Magmar saw the towers of Drachen's Hope for the first time. Surt did not speak, and the inescapable magnetic hold the shield held over Magmar did not sway.
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| April 14, 2010, 3:09 pm
Quoting Gringat the Repugnant

((I'm re-writing that last post. I'm being mean to Jake otherwise))

[Surt] His armour stopped moving and settled into place. His shield still held the Agori. Magmar writhed, his own inky black blood falling in droplets onto the stone floor, clutching at the shinbone piercing his torso.

"Perhaps you will survive before I reach Drachen's Hope. Perhaps not." Gathering the scrolls under his other arm, he strode off across the dunes. Night passed, and eventually, through the rictus of his pain, Magmar saw the towers of Drachen's Hope for the first time. Surt did not speak, and the inescapable magnetic hold the shield held over Magmar did not sway.

((Hey guys, can I join in? Oh and is this RP before or after when Mata Nui and Teridax fought on Bara Magna? A 3rd question, what exactly is a vampirik? A 4th question, can anyone make a vampirik? Cause I wanna make one almost as awesome as Lestrix.....))
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| April 28, 2010, 4:13 pm
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Quoting Aaron Tran
((Hey guys, can I join in? Oh and is this RP before or after when Mata Nui and Teridax fought on Bara Magna? A 3rd question, what exactly is a vampirik? A 4th question, can anyone make a vampirik? Cause I wanna make one almost as awesome as Lestrix.....))


((There is a thread for questions about my races, which includes Vampirik. Take a look in the threads.))
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| April 28, 2010, 8:24 pm
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Quoting Aaron Tran
((Hey guys, can I join in? Oh and is this RP before or after when Mata Nui and Teridax fought on Bara Magna? A 3rd question, what exactly is a vampirik? A 4th question, can anyone make a vampirik? Cause I wanna make one almost as awesome as Lestrix.....))


((1 - of course you can! Just put a new character in the character conversation so we can see his bio.

2 - In this story, it takes Teridax 6-ish years to reach this part of Bara-Magna (but there are rumours of an evil spreading from the east, and most of the skrall have followed a prophet named Dalligastrus who claims that the makuta will grant them immortality, and we're nearing the end of that 6-ish year period.

3 - What John said. Baically they're another race of glatorian-ish beings, some have wings, and they have the power to drain energy. Read Lestrix's page for a bit about the history, and that's pretty much it.

4 - Go ahead! Although I don;t think ANYONE can make one as cool as Lestrix :p <- Joke.
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| May 4, 2010, 9:26 am
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(( This is Blood of the Vampirik, properly starting now, after branching from the end of Bara Magna IX. I'm starting a new BM X as well to stop confusion. Surt is now in Drachen's Hope's Inn, with the other characters, and Ronin and Aedalus have just left, heading North. ))
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| September 2, 2010, 9:22 am
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