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Tempesta Magna II
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"Indeed?" Ezru launched into a monologue of scientific language, most of which involving quantum theories the Matoran had never even discovered. New words bounced around in it like lead-covered confetti, leaving Shiva's mind querying every second, demanding data that he would no doubt end up not understanding either.

"...And then after that, reversing the Cyrogastical flow of the materials is really quite simple. There. You have an explanation. Do you see what I meant now?"
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| November 29, 2009, 5:20 pm
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Quoting Gringat The Stormlord
"Indeed?" Ezru launched into a monologue of scientific language, most of which involving quantum theories the Matoran had never even discovered. New words bounced around in it like lead-covered confetti, leaving Shiva's mind querying every second, demanding data that he would no doubt end up not understanding either.

"...And then after that, reversing the Cyrogastical flow of the materials is really quite simple. There. You have an explanation. Do you see what I meant now?"


Shiva

"Got it all. The scientists will love this."
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| November 29, 2009, 5:28 pm
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Quoting John the Imaginative

Shiva

"Got it all. The scientists will love this."


"Do YOU understand it?"
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| November 29, 2009, 5:31 pm
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Quoting Gringat The Stormlord

"Do YOU understand it?"


Shiva

"Heh, I'm not a science AI. So I don't understand all of it, but I understand around 75% of it."
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| November 29, 2009, 5:42 pm
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Quoting John the Imaginative

Shiva

"Heh, I'm not a science AI. So I don't understand all of it, but I understand around 75% of it."


"Amazing. Your civilization obviously hasn't regressed as much as I thought it would."
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| November 29, 2009, 5:46 pm
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Quoting Gringat The Stormlord

"Amazing. Your civilization obviously hasn't regressed as much as I thought it would."


Shiva

"So you say that we used to be even more advanced?"
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| November 29, 2009, 5:47 pm
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Quoting John the Imaginative

Shiva

"So you say that we used to be even more advanced?"


"Yes."
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| November 29, 2009, 6:00 pm
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Quoting Gringat The Stormlord

"Yes."


"Really, or could have just been that we forgot how to use many of the machines that were only used by you."
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| November 30, 2009, 3:21 pm
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Quoting John the Imaginative

"Really, or could have just been that we forgot how to use many of the machines that were only used by you."


"The RenoSphere used to be a public device. That this idiotic town was built here instead just shows how ignorant you have become of your own technology. You yourself are somethign I'd expect to see in Jodem's Archeological collection."
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| December 1, 2009, 4:20 pm
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Quoting Gringat The Stormlord

"The RenoSphere used to be a public device. That this idiotic town was built here instead just shows how ignorant you have become of your own technology. You yourself are somethign I'd expect to see in Jodem's Archeological collection."


Shiva (with anger)

"What was that?"
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| December 1, 2009, 4:22 pm
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Quoting John the Imaginative

Shiva (with anger)

"What was that?"


"Hm. Anger. In the design rejects section, then."
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| December 2, 2009, 12:21 pm
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Quoting Gringat The Stormlord

"Hm. Anger. In the design rejects section, then."


Shiva (with restraint. He's on the verge of attempting to flatten Ezru.)

"Emotions came into as a result of a freak reprogramming caused by being blasted into exposed electrical wires. Same incident where my left leg was damaged. An electrical overload triggered a massive reprogramming and a reboot. When I finished rebooting, I had emotions."
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| December 2, 2009, 2:53 pm
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i climb up the mountain side ((tahu style))
the storm howled if i didnt find an inlet i would freez to death in an instant.((i`ve been climbing these lat few days:) ))
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| December 3, 2009, 11:00 am
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Quoting John the Imaginative

Shiva (with restraint. He's on the verge of attempting to flatten Ezru.)

"Emotions came into as a result of a freak reprogramming caused by being blasted into exposed electrical wires. Same incident where my left leg was damaged. An electrical overload triggered a massive reprogramming and a reboot. When I finished rebooting, I had emotions."


"Really? How interesting. Why don't you have a replacement foot?"
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| December 5, 2009, 11:31 am
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Quoting Gringat The Stormlord

"Really? How interesting. Why don't you have a replacement foot?"


Shiva

"I chose not to. I chose of my own free will not to have it replaced. Besides, it doesn't inhibit my performance at all."
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| December 5, 2009, 11:33 am
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Quoting John the Imaginative

Shiva

"I chose not to. I chose of my own free will not to have it replaced. Besides, it doesn't inhibit my performance at all."


"Hm... well, your choice I imagine." He turned his head down the way they'd come. "Where's your friend?"
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| December 6, 2009, 6:51 am
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Quoting Gringat The Stormlord

"Hm... well, your choice I imagine." He turned his head down the way they'd come. "Where's your friend?"


Shiva

"Kore? He wanders off sometimes. I try not to question it except when he tries to kill himself."
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| December 6, 2009, 7:01 am
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Quoting John the Imaginative

Shiva

"Kore? He wanders off sometimes. I try not to question it except when he tries to kill himself."


"Indeed. Well. I'll be seeing you then. I have other work to do, to catch up with."
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| December 6, 2009, 8:19 am
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Quoting Gringat The Stormlord

"Indeed. Well. I'll be seeing you then. I have other work to do, to catch up with."

((i think ezru and orbatraz would be old freinds. orbatoz has a genetic abnormality that makes his lifespan much longer than the average:))
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| December 6, 2009, 10:11 am
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Quoting The Abyss [formaly jake riedke]
((i think ezru and orbatraz would be old freinds. orbatoz has a genetic abnormality that makes his lifespan much longer than the average:))


((Sure. That would be great. he hasto head for the surface soon now anyway, to contact his children (in a way I haven't made up yet, but it'll involve giant machinery and cyclonoid battling). Perhaps the two could meet somewhere up there?))
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| December 6, 2009, 11:28 am
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Quoting Gringat The Stormlord

((Sure. That would be great. he hasto head for the surface soon now anyway, to contact his children (in a way I haven't made up yet, but it'll involve giant machinery and cyclonoid battling). Perhaps the two could meet somewhere up there?))


((Cyclonoid combat? Shiva's coming with you!))

Shiva

"Wait up Ezru, I'm coming too!"
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| December 6, 2009, 11:36 am
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Quoting John the Imaginative

((Cyclonoid combat? Shiva's coming with you!))

Shiva

"Wait up Ezru, I'm coming too!"


"If you must, then." He walked on, allowing Shiva to follow, but not slowing down. They turned through a maze of twisting passages, the tunnels that Shiva knew well, and apparently, so did Ezru. Odd. The being had probably never been here in his life.

"I expect you want to hear the plan, then?" He said, after a long while of walking.
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| December 6, 2009, 11:41 am
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Quoting Gringat The Stormlord

"If you must, then." He walked on, allowing Shiva to follow, but not slowing down. They turned through a maze of twisting passages, the tunnels that Shiva knew well, and apparently, so did Ezru. Odd. The being had probably never been here in his life.

"I expect you want to hear the plan, then?" He said, after a long while of walking.


Shiva

"Why not?"
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| December 7, 2009, 2:55 pm
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Quoting John the Imaginative

Shiva

"Why not?"


"Well, it really is quite simple. I must contact my children. A contact relay lies a few miles to the southwest of here, on the surface. I shall have to go there, activate it, and contact... which moon is closest to here... ah yes. Fosphoros Magna. Cyclonace will be pleased to know of my return."



((Ohh no she won't! :P ))
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| December 8, 2009, 3:42 pm
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Shiva

"Fine by me. And if the Cyclonoids come?"
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| December 8, 2009, 4:04 pm
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i reached the top of the mountain after a great many hours,and saw a cycloniod i shouted over the mountain winds "TAKE ME TO ELSTAR! I NEED TO GET TO THE OUTPOST ON THE OTHER END OF THE CHAIN!" LUCILY MY LUNGS HAD GIVEN OUT LONG AGO FOR WITHOUT MY RESPORATOR I WOULD HAVE DIED IN THE THIN AIR...
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| December 8, 2009, 4:09 pm
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Quoting John the Imaginative
Shiva

"Fine by me. And if the Cyclonoids come?"


"Do what you were designed to do."
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| December 8, 2009, 4:31 pm
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Quoting The Abyss [formaly jake riedke]
i reached the top of the mountain after a great many hours,and saw a cycloniod i shouted over the mountain winds "TAKE ME TO ELSTAR! I NEED TO GET TO THE OUTPOST ON THE OTHER END OF THE CHAIN!" LUCILY MY LUNGS HAD GIVEN OUT LONG AGO FOR WITHOUT MY RESPORATOR I WOULD HAVE DIED IN THE THIN AIR...


Basiliokonei

The cyclonoid leaped up from the ground and glided over to him. A series of razor-sharp blades unfolded from verious places in its armour, as it pondered whether or not to kill him.
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| December 9, 2009, 12:09 pm
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Quoting Gringat and Xalos

Basiliokonei

The cyclonoid leaped up from the ground and glided over to him. A series of razor-sharp blades unfolded from verious places in its armour, as it pondered whether or not to kill him.

i yelled over the deafening winds " THIS CONCERNS US ALL! I MUST SPEAK WITH ELSTAR!"
i was all i could do to stay up right, the snow blinding me, i could barely see my new aquaintance
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| December 9, 2009, 12:13 pm
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Quoting The Abyss [formaly jake riedke]
i yelled over the deafening winds " THIS CONCERNS US ALL! I MUST SPEAK WITH ELSTAR!"
i was all i could do to stay up right, the snow blinding me, i could barely see my new aquaintance


It lowered it razors, and tilted its angular head to one side.
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| December 9, 2009, 6:02 pm
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Quoting The Abyss [formaly jake riedke]
i yelled over the deafening winds " THIS CONCERNS US ALL! I MUST SPEAK WITH ELSTAR!"
i was all i could do to stay up right, the snow blinding me, i could barely see my new aquaintance



Basiliokonei

The cyclonoid gave what could only be a sinister laugh, and lunged at him, blades out.
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| December 11, 2009, 5:51 pm
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Quoting John the Imaginative
Shiva

"Fine by me. And if the Cyclonoids come?"


Great arctic winds wrapped around the ice hills, carrying razor-sharp crytals in their wake. Ezru and Shiva strode through chest-deep snow, towards an enormous frozen tower that stuck above the horizon like an arrow sticking out of a wound. Other smaller towers surrounded it, and then the beginnings of the great Cryogenis Summits dominated the background behind them. The orange-grey clouds broiled overhead, showering sharp shards of snow. Lightning crackled between them, and a sheet of electricity lit up the sky brilliantly like a Sampa-Magnian firecracker.
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| December 11, 2009, 6:08 pm
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Quoting Gringat and Xalos

Great arctic winds wrapped around the ice hills, carrying razor-sharp crytals in their wake. Ezru and Shiva strode through chest-deep snow, towards an enormous frozen tower that stuck above the horizon like an arrow sticking out of a wound. Other smaller towers surrounded it, and then the beginnings of the great Cryogenis Summits dominated the background behind them. The orange-grey clouds broiled overhead, showering sharp shards of snow. Lightning crackled between them, and a sheet of electricity lit up the sky brilliantly like a Sampa-Magnian firecracker.


Shiva

"Quite the lightshow you got going here." Shiva looked at the sky. "Is this our next destination?"
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| December 12, 2009, 10:12 am
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Quoting John the Imaginative

Shiva

"Quite the lightshow you got going here." Shiva looked at the sky. "Is this our next destination?"


"Yes." They trudged on.
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| December 12, 2009, 10:57 am
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Quoting John the Imaginative

Shiva

"Quite the lightshow you got going here." Shiva looked at the sky. "Is this our next destination?"


The air above them shifted, and on the cliffs above them, silver glittered. Shiva realised too late the cliffs surrounding them on all sides were perfect for a cyclonoid ambush. Ezru strode on oblivious...


Elstar

"iiiiI think this iis an opertune time, my brothers. tttThat Machine has too lllong been a thorn in my side..."

And then the cyclonoids came dwon the mountainsides in a raging torrent of air and blades and screeching, all of them intent on the circuits that kept Shiva alive...
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| December 14, 2009, 4:59 pm
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Quoting Gringat and Xalos

The air above them shifted, and on the cliffs above them, silver glittered. Shiva realised too late the cliffs surrounding them on all sides were perfect for a cyclonoid ambush. Ezru strode on oblivious...

Elstar

"iiiiI think this iis an opertune time, my brothers. tttThat Machine has too lllong been a thorn in my side..."

And then the cyclonoids came dwon the mountainsides in a raging torrent of air and blades and screeching, all of them intent on the circuits that kept Shiva alive...


Shiva

I noticed the Cyclonoids coming down, so I decided to reveal the new function of my lance. I flipped a switch and turned a dial, and pretty soon, things really started shaking. It worked! The Impact Lance was complete. I brought out the snow skates under my feet, and skidded after Ezru, but not before triggering a sizable avalanche.

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| December 14, 2009, 6:07 pm
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Shiva

I noticed the Cyclonoids coming down, so I decided to reveal the new function of my lance. I flipped a switch and turned a dial, and pretty soon, things really started shaking. It worked! The Impact Lance was complete. I brought out the snow skates under my feet, and skidded after Ezru, but not before triggering a sizable avalanche.

Kore

I had been following Shiva and Ezru seance they had left the first city. Now high in the air piloting the falcon gunship. The White armored craft blended in with the clouds and snow.When the avalanche started I knew it was a Cyclonid ambush. "Shiva, Ezru, Take cover. I'm going hot." I pulled the trigger targeting cyclonids. I released the trigger, unleashing a volley of missiles. A few meters from their targets the outer shell melted away and balls of super heated plasma burned through the sky causing the air to boil. Suddenly something struck the ship and a warning light flashed on the control screen. "ENGINE MALFUNCTION. ENGINE MALFUNCTION." "Awe Fxxx." I spun in my seat to see a Cyclonid hacking at my engine core. "ENGINE FAILURE. ALL SYSTEMS SHUTTING DOWN." I pulled the ejection lever... only to have it snap off in my hand. "Ah not good!" The ship began to spiral towards the ground from 3,000 feet. As the ground came closer I desperately yanked at the nub that was left. At the last second I heard a click and suddenly both the seat and I flew out of the cocxpit and high in to the air. I slipped out of the chair and fell the last hundred feet into the snow.
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| December 14, 2009, 7:38 pm
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i had reasoned with the cyclonoid. it carried me in its talons to a place where i saw many of its kind swarming something i could not see
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| December 15, 2009, 12:31 pm
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Quoting The Abyss -"do you know who i am? cuz i don`t!"
i had reasoned with the cyclonoid. it carried me in its talons to a place where i saw many of its kind swarming something i could not see


Elstar

The fallen ship was swarming with cyclonoids now, ripping at it, fighting over the circuits and metal. The war droid was in some trouble, and despite his ugly sonic weapons, he was losing. The other strange being... something wasn't right about him. Something achingly familiar about him...


Ezru
"Halt! I command you! UNKH!" A cyclonoid battered Ezru on the head, bowling him over into the snow.

Basiliokonei

"Elstar is there." It grunted, before leaping off to scavenge the ship of metal.


((Cyclonoids love stealing metal. Just like Makuta they inhabit it, but unlike Makuta, they don't need it. They can live entirely like living gas - but the metal gives something of an appearance, fashion, and the elecromagnetic fields given off when metals enter their aura make the Cyclonoids feel as if they're permenantly high on Caffeine :) ))
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| December 15, 2009, 12:51 pm
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Quoting Gringat and Xalos

Elstar

The fallen ship was swarming with cyclonoids now, ripping at it, fighting over the circuits and metal. The war droid was in some trouble, and despite his ugly sonic weapons, he was losing. The other strange being... something wasn't right about him. Something achingly familiar about him...


Ezru
"Halt! I command you! UNKH!" A cyclonoid battered Ezru on the head, bowling him over into the snow.

Basiliokonei

"Elstar is there." It grunted, before leaping off to scavenge the ship of metal.


((Cyclonoids love stealing metal. Just like Makuta they inhabit it, but unlike Makuta, they don't need it. They can live entirely like living gas - but the metal gives something of an appearance, fashion, and the elecromagnetic fields given off when metals enter their aura make the Cyclonoids feel as if they're permenantly high on Caffeine :) ))


Shiva

I knew my larger body was finished, so I unleashed my final technique. I triggered the self-destruct countdown. I rapidly uploaded myself into the android body. When it self-destructed, it would disintegrate in a massive sonic pulse.

Mech Body

"3...2...1...Detonate."

((http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6wfBMTGMjT0, 00:58 to 1:00))
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| December 15, 2009, 4:05 pm
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Kore

I had some how managed to land back inside the Falcon, much to my disadvantage. What had looked like snow had been a combination of the glass canopy and the Ice around the 'pit. I knew I was would die as soon as they came for the control panels so I went to the controls and deactivated the engine's fail safe and activated the engines causing a five minute count down to appear. "Guys, You have four minutes and fifty seven seconds before this spot becomes a half mile wide patch of barren burnt soil. Don't even try to come back for me Shiva. There are too many even for you."
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| December 15, 2009, 7:29 pm
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Quoting Supreme commander Gideon Fucci
Kore

I had some how managed to land back inside the Falcon, much to my disadvantage. What had looked like snow had been a combination of the glass canopy and the Ice around the 'pit. I knew I was would die as soon as they came for the control panels so I went to the controls and deactivated the engine's fail safe and activated the engines causing a five minute count down to appear. "Guys, You have four minutes and fifty seven seconds before this spot becomes a half mile wide patch of barren burnt soil. Don't even try to come back for me Shiva. There are too many even for you."


Shiva

The sonic wave spread through the area, scattering and repulsing the Cyclonoids, and blowing away a large area of snow. Even I was knocked off my feet.
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| December 15, 2009, 8:40 pm
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Quoting Supreme commander Gideon Fucci
Kore

I had some how managed to land back inside the Falcon, much to my disadvantage. What had looked like snow had been a combination of the glass canopy and the Ice around the 'pit. I knew I was would die as soon as they came for the control panels so I went to the controls and deactivated the engine's fail safe and activated the engines causing a five minute count down to appear. "Guys, You have four minutes and fifty seven seconds before this spot becomes a half mile wide patch of barren burnt soil. Don't even try to come back for me Shiva. There are too many even for you."



All light in the 'pit faded. The swarms of cyclonoids battered and ripped at the ship, and the coundown stopped as a pair of them ripped out and consumed the ship's engine core. Armour plating wheeled off the craft until nothing was left but a skeleton. An armoured, gaseous arm grabbed Kore by the chest and pulled him into the battle. He landed into the snow with a crunch. Behind him, the last of the ship disappeared into the shifting ranks of Cyclonoids - ranks that were now well fed, and heavily armed. One of the hoisted the ships frontal lazer fleschette cannon and aimed it...
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| December 16, 2009, 4:32 pm
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Quoting John the Imaginative

Shiva

The sonic wave spread through the area, scattering and repulsing the Cyclonoids, and blowing away a large area of snow. Even I was knocked off my feet.


Metal flew, and the cyclonoids screeched with rage. Many of the weaker ones vapourised completely with a sad hissing noise, but the ones that were left stared angrily at Shiva, and lunged. Another pulled Kore from his craft and attacked him. Ezru lay off in the snow, dazed, ignored by the cyclonoids.
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| December 16, 2009, 4:34 pm
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The sonic vibrations kept on spreading, and reached Kore's crash site. It was a spectacular scene.
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| December 16, 2009, 4:39 pm
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Quoting Gringat and Xalos


All light in the 'pit faded. The swarms of cyclonoids battered and ripped at the ship, and the coundown stopped as a pair of them ripped out and consumed the ship's engine core. Armour plating wheeled off the craft until nothing was left but a skeleton. An armoured, gaseous arm grabbed Kore by the chest and pulled him into the battle. He landed into the snow with a crunch. Behind him, the last of the ship disappeared into the shifting ranks of Cyclonoids - ranks that were now well fed, and heavily armed. One of the hoisted the ships frontal lazer fleschette cannon and aimed it...

I pulled a grenade from my belt, primed and threw it. the grenade landed in the snow after bouncing off the cyclonid and exploded creating an electrically charged particle field. I opened up with my plasma chain gun the air beginning to ripple and boil around the weapon.
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| December 16, 2009, 5:00 pm
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Quoting Supreme commander Gideon Fucci
I pulled a grenade from my belt, primed and threw it. the grenade landed in the snow after bouncing off the cyclonid and exploded creating an electrically charged particle field. I opened up with my plasma chain gun the air beginning to ripple and boil around the weapon.


Shiva

I recognized those blasts. I turned my voice volume to max. "Kore! Get down unless you want to get blasted off your feet!"
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| December 16, 2009, 5:09 pm
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Quoting John the Imaginative

Shiva

I recognized those blasts. I turned my voice volume to max. "Kore! Get down unless you want to get blasted off your feet!"

Kore

I fired continuously vaporizing two more of the cyclonids. I felt something hit my back a sharp pain shot through me as the blade ripped through my back and split my chest plate in half. I grabbed at it in disbelief. I fell to my knees still clutching the Cyclonids blade. As it yanked the blade from my chest I knelt in the snow dieing. Darkness clouded my eyes. I looked into the stars and whispered "Brother, I have failed you."
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| December 16, 2009, 9:07 pm
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Quoting Supreme commander Gideon Fucci
Kore

I fired continuously vaporizing two more of the cyclonids. I felt something hit my back a sharp pain shot through me as the blade ripped through my back and split my chest plate in half. I grabbed at it in disbelief. I fell to my knees still clutching the Cyclonids blade. As it yanked the blade from my chest I knelt in the snow dieing. Darkness clouded my eyes. I looked into the stars and whispered "Brother, I have failed you."


The shock wave washed over the entire mountain. The Cyclonoids were repelled for now. Ezru was face down in dirt, and Shiva was rushing over to give Kore aid.

Shiva swore. "Kore, this is no time to be dieing on us! This is no way to fulfill your brother's final wishes. Dxxx it Kore. Live!"
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| December 16, 2009, 9:13 pm
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Quoting John the Imaginative

The shock wave washed over the entire mountain. The Cyclonoids were repelled for now. Ezru was face down in dirt, and Shiva was rushing over to give Kore aid.

Shiva swore. "Kore, this is no time to be dieing on us! This is no way to fulfill your brother's final wishes. Dxxx it Kore. Live!"

Kore

My eyes faded black and my heart light pulsed weakly. ((Only Ezru can save Kore now.))
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| December 16, 2009, 9:32 pm
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Quoting Supreme commander Gideon Fucci
Kore

My eyes faded black and my heart light pulsed weakly. ((Only Ezru can save Kore now.))


Shiva picked up Kore and walked over to where Ezru was. He still was face down in the dirt. "Oi! Wake up! Nap time is over!"
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| December 16, 2009, 10:00 pm
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Quoting John the Imaginative

Shiva picked up Kore and walked over to where Ezru was. He still was face down in the dirt. "Oi! Wake up! Nap time is over!"


Ezru groaned, and attempted to get up. Sparks flew from his back like the offshoot from an angle grinder. "Gah!" He looked up? "Oh dear. A mortal got caught in the crossfire?"

He slid to his hooves, and extended a hand. "Well... I..." He looked to Shiva. "Don't you have any medical supplies in that chassis of yours?"
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| December 18, 2009, 3:53 am
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Quoting Gringat and Xalos

Ezru groaned, and attempted to get up. Sparks flew from his back like the offshoot from an angle grinder. "Gah!" He looked up? "Oh dear. A mortal got caught in the crossfire?"

He slid to his hooves, and extended a hand. "Well... I..." He looked to Shiva. "Don't you have any medical supplies in that chassis of yours?"


Shiva hissed in annoyance. "I do, but these wounds are too severe for me to take care of."
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| December 18, 2009, 5:27 am
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Quoting John the Imaginative

Shiva hissed in annoyance. "I do, but these wounds are too severe for me to take care of."


Ezru stepped forward. "Er. Right. Can't this wait until I've set up the Array?" He looked around nervously.
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| December 20, 2009, 6:22 pm
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Quoting Gringat and Xalos

Ezru stepped forward. "Er. Right. Can't this wait until I've set up the Array?" He looked around nervously.


Shiva set his left impact hammer at maximum power and at maximum focus. "I'm afraid not. Otherwise I'll tear a hole right through you."
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| December 20, 2009, 6:26 pm
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Quoting John the Imaginative

Shiva set his left impact hammer at maximum power and at maximum focus. "I'm afraid not. Otherwise I'll tear a hole right through you."


"Um, Right..." he looked down at Kore, and took a few deep breaths. He knelt down in the snow, and extended a palm over Kore's flickering heartlight. A warm, golden glow emanated from it, which spread over Kore's body. The snow around them fizzed, and Ezru's brow shifted, as if he wasn't sure what he was doing...
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| December 20, 2009, 6:49 pm
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((Hello?))
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| December 24, 2009, 7:29 am
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Quoting John the Imaginative

Shiva set his left impact hammer at maximum power and at maximum focus. "I'm afraid not. Otherwise I'll tear a hole right through you."


--Ezru--
"I think... That's done it!" Ezru got up onto his hooves again, lookign at Kore. He coughed and sat up, looking blearily at Shiva. "There we go. I think. Can we go activate the relay now?" He gestured to the massive metal ruins jutting out of the snow off in the near distance.
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| December 26, 2009, 9:12 pm
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Quoting The Abyss -"do you know who i am? cuz i don`t!"
i had reasoned with the cyclonoid. it carried me in its talons to a place where i saw many of its kind swarming something i could not see


[Elstar]
"They are fiesty, are they not?" The Cyclonoid looked at Orbatroz. "Now, we'd attack again, but there is something intiguing. Aa member of that party is someone we both remember, from wweel over half a millenium ago. Yyyou know of Ezru do you not?"

He gestured with a half-transparent, armoured arm towards the scene, where a blue and silver armoured figure knelt over an injured being in white armour.

"The Great Being has returned, and that can only mean one thing, Orbatroz."

He turned to look at Orbatroz with eerie, glowing green eyes.

"My days are numbered, and so, by extension, are yours."

A cyclonoid blade flashed an inch from Orbatroz' heartlight.
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| December 29, 2009, 11:19 am
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the cycloniod had left me in the carcus of a great ship where i had met with Elstar
"hwut do you mean by this? i knew him long ago...though those memories are long faded i can scarce think his reson for 'ending my days'. but as it is i have an unnaturaly long life..."

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| December 29, 2009, 11:30 am
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Quoting The Abyss [formaly jake riedke]
((as a flash back))
"Ohh how should i start...
life was exciting ducking in and out of avalanches and all that-same as it is now-
but there was a femle she smiled at me,and often we would chat...Tezra was her name...'
"hellow Tezra how mineing today?"
"ohh the same as usual"she winked at me.
then my freind Suri bursted in "cap`n th` glacer be shift`n!" we rushed to the control roomand sure enough the monitors showed the great land mases moving! "what in XXX`s name could cause such a thing...((to be contineud in a later post;)))



((your post here raised a very intriguing question.


Tezra is your Sampa Magna character. Now, I'm planning to get Omzhare to bring Tezra and Harren and Julio etc... to Tempesta Magna, eventually. The shuttle would go to the planet Sampa Magna orbits, after they’ve gone to the Military moon to meet Tezra’s brother.

But... does Orbatroz know Tezra, then? Is he originally a Sampa Magnian, or was Tezra a Tempestrian? Another thing could be that Orbatroz knew Tezra's Grandmother, who had the same name? I see the last one as most probable, considering how old Orbatroz is, and how young Tezra is.))

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| December 29, 2009, 12:14 pm
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Quoting Gringat and Xalos

((haha :) i made that name for this story then forgot it and made the other characcter by the time i realized i couldnt fix it so i left it alone and waited for you guys to catch on :) i had consideredyour last explanation at the time haveing him be her grandfather but the two races are different and im not sure how that would work
tezra(and by extention her ancestry)= machine
orbatraz=bio-humaniod w/ somewhat permenat mechanic suit))
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| December 29, 2009, 1:35 pm
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Quoting The Abyss -"do you know who i am? cuz i don`t!"
((haha :) i made that name for this story then forgot it and made the other characcter by the time i realized i couldnt fix it so i left it alone and waited for you guys to catch on :) i had consideredyour last explanation at the time haveing him be her grandfather but the two races are different and im not sure how that would work
tezra(and by extention her ancestry)= machine
orbatraz=bio-humaniod w/ somewhat permenat mechanic suit))


((Actually, across all of the planets of Tempesta Celestis, the inhabitants are mainly Tokia. Although each have slight cosmetic differences, such as metallic skin, or longer limbs, the Tokia and Akonians inhabit the whole star system. Orbatroz, Kore, Tezra, Harren, Mezzinus would all be the same species.
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| December 30, 2009, 6:33 pm
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Quoting Gringat and Xalos

((Actually, across all of the planets of Tempesta Celestis, the inhabitants are mainly Tokia. Although each have slight cosmetic differences, such as metallic skin, or longer limbs, the Tokia and Akonians inhabit the whole star system. Orbatroz, Kore, Tezra, Harren, Mezzinus would all be the same species.

(()weel i stated early on my guy is bio)

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| December 30, 2009, 6:40 pm
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Quoting The Abyss -"do you know who i am? cuz i don`t!"
the cycloniod had left me in the carcus of a great ship where i had met with Elstar
"hwut do you mean by this? i knew him long ago...though those memories are long faded i can scarce think his reson for 'ending my days'. but as it is i have an unnaturaly long life..."


Elstar's eyes glinted red. "Who said it was he who would "End Your Days," Orbatroz?" Anothe blade flicked up, pointing at his throat.

"You see, now Ezru has returned, I am in a bit of predicament." The cyclonoid paced through the snow, while more and more blades hovered up and pointed themselves at weak spots in Orbatroz's armour. "The Great Being is the rightful leader of the cyclonoids. Now he's back, -I- am no longer in control, and I. Don't. Like. That."

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| December 31, 2009, 7:33 am
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Quoting Gringat and Xalos

Elstar's eyes glinted red. "Who said it was he who would "End Your Days," Orbatroz?" Anothe blade flicked up, pointing at his throat.

"You see, now Ezru has returned, I am in a bit of predicament." The cyclonoid paced through the snow, while more and more blades hovered up and pointed themselves at weak spots in Orbatroz's armour. "The Great Being is the rightful leader of the cyclonoids. Now he's back, -I- am no longer in control, and I. Don't. Like. That."

((what happend to your wwwweeeird sssppeech))
"really now how would my death serve you?"
i slowly reached around my back to the vacum chamber of my chlorogen breathing tank
"you who have ruled your kind for milenia -"
i slowly spun the service cap surounding my breathing tube,
"- i met you when you were but an adolecent -"
the cap had been undone and a dull hiss could be heard,
"- and now you hold death`s arms at my body -"
the gas craled up to the independent blads begining to erode them they sizzeled and drops of metal fell to the floor as green spheres bubbled up from them
"- well did i ever tell you why i need this rebreather? -" he became wozy and short of breath,
"- i hail from swaplands far south of here. where -my- brethren breath the fumes you fear!"
((let this work i realy have no other aces in the whole))
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| December 31, 2009, 3:39 pm
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Quoting The Abyss -"do you know who i am? cuz i don`t!"
((what happend to your wwwweeeird sssppeech))
"really now how would my death serve you?"
i slowly reached around my back to the vacum chamber of my chlorogen breathing tank
"you who have ruled your kind for milenia -"
i slowly spun the service cap surounding my breathing tube,
"- i met you when you were but an adolecent -"
the cap had been undone and a dull hiss could be heard,
"- and now you hold death`s arms at my body -"
the gas craled up to the independent blads begining to erode them they sizzeled and drops of metal fell to the floor as green spheres bubbled up from them
"- well did i ever tell you why i need this rebreather? -" he became wozy and short of breath,
"- i hail from swaplands far south of here. where -my- brethren breath the fumes you fear!"
((let this work i realy have no other aces in the whole))



"Why would I? You would ally with Ezru. Your so-called "God". You would have your people fight mine. I cannot let this happen?" More silvery metal formed up, as a shield from the gas.
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| December 31, 2009, 8:15 pm
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Quoting Gringat and Xalos


"Why would I? You would ally with Ezru. Your so-called "God". You would have your people fight mine. I cannot let this happen?" More silvery metal formed up, as a shield from the gas.

the blades had dispersed into semi-acidic pools of green bubbling steaming goo.
"THAT SHEILD WILL NOT KEEP YOU SAFE FOR LONG AND YOU KNOW IT!!" i left him to fend off the cloud as i atached the tube to my reserve tank, "ohh and elstar i hardly think i should tell you this any more -- but the plates are shifting again. it realy is a hazzardous thing living in the center of so many gravitational pulls..." he said as he walked away never turning to face his one time friend. *i should have enough to make to the mine feilds. there i can dig to find more*
((so now he has metal-kinesis?))
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| January 1, 2010, 10:48 am
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Quoting The Abyss -"do you know who i am? cuz i don`t!"
the blades had dispersed into semi-acidic pools of green bubbling steaming goo.
"THAT SHEILD WILL NOT KEEP YOU SAFE FOR LONG AND YOU KNOW IT!!" i left him to fend off the cloud as i atached the tube to my reserve tank, "ohh and elstar i hardly think i should tell you this any more -- but the plates are shifting again. it realy is a hazzardous thing living in the center of so many gravitational pulls..." he said as he walked away never turning to face his one time friend. *i should have enough to make to the mine feilds. there i can dig to find more*
((so now he has metal-kinesis?))


((I think the plates shifting would also be due to the fact that Ezru came up through the core, which no longer is absorbing his energy. It won't kill the planet, but it might cause a bit of destruction

And... All cyclonoids can manipulate the metal making up their own bodies. All they are is chlorogenic gas, and the armour that covers/floats in it. Makuta can manipulate metal too. ))

[Elstar] "tthhhhat is to be expected. I am sorry it had to come to this, my fried, bbuut I cannot take the risk that yyyou would turn against me later on, uunder Ezru's banner. Better one of us die now than let that happen then. Aand I like living."

He let loose a scream of sonic energy, knocking Orbatroz back. More liquid metal dripped onto the snow...


[Ezru] He heard the scream, and jumped up onto his hooves. Up on the cliff above, a fight was ensuing. He leaped up, landing behind the cyclonoid. Elstar turned, looked at Ezru in the eye... and then the gas finished its work, and the Cyclonoid dispersed the last of his essence into the wind.

Orbatroz cleared the snow out of his face, looking up at Ezru.

"So," Said Ezru. "Another person caught in the crossfire, hmm? I hope I won't have to heal -you- as well."
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| January 1, 2010, 8:32 pm
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Quoting John the Imaginative

Shiva set his left impact hammer at maximum power and at maximum focus. "I'm afraid not. Otherwise I'll tear a hole right through you."


Ezru yelled at the two, from atop the cliff.

"Hey Shiva! Drag that comatose lackey of yours up here! Do you know this tokia?"
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| January 7, 2010, 5:44 pm
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Quoting Gringat the Repugnant

Ezru yelled at the two, from atop the cliff.

"Hey Shiva! Drag that comatose lackey of yours up here! Do you know this tokia?"


Shiva grabbed Kore and shot upwards, and ran up the cliff face the rest of the way. "'Fraid not, don't know the guy."
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| January 7, 2010, 7:06 pm
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"no, no i`m fine a bit of mental fatige is all. you know when your as old as i am -- wait i know you-" he struggled to think,"-Ezru?! by the great beings your alive! well i geuss it should be by the great beings, considering..."he had rissen to his feet in the mitst of this to find himself quite short in comparison...
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| January 7, 2010, 7:46 pm
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Quoting The Abyss -"do you know who i am? cuz i don`t!"
"no, no i`m fine a bit of mental fatige is all. you know when your as old as i am -- wait i know you-" he struggled to think,"-Ezru?! by the great beings your alive! well i geuss it should be by the great beings, considering..."he had rissen to his feet in the mitst of this to find himself quite short in comparison...


[Ezru] The being looks down at Orbatroz. "At least -some- people recognise me for who I am." He said. "And your name is....?"

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| January 9, 2010, 6:29 am
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Quoting Gringat the Repugnant

Ezru yelled at the two, from atop the cliff.

"Hey Shiva! Drag that comatose lackey of yours up here! Do you know this tokia?"

[Kore]

I waked over to Ezru and punched him. "I am no ones lackey, an to call me such is an insult." I stalked off into the snow towards the spire, feeling the spot where The blade had come out of my chest. *Even if he saved me I won't trust him. Not after he abandoned us.*
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| January 9, 2010, 7:21 pm
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Quoting Gringat the Repugnant

[Ezru] The being looks down at Orbatroz. "At least -some- people recognise me for who I am." He said. "And your name is....?"

"Orbatroz. i remember when you first arived here, it realy picked p peoples` spirits. now i must go refuel my air supply as i just wasted most of it on him and my home, with its reserves, is underneath four spaciels of lava by now" he turned to walk away then added,"you may join me if you care to"
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| January 10, 2010, 10:00 am
((how should I put my character in here))
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| January 16, 2010, 6:21 am
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Quoting Supreme commander Gideon Fucci
[Kore]

I waked over to Ezru and punched him. "I am no ones lackey, an to call me such is an insult." I stalked off into the snow towards the spire, feeling the spot where The blade had come out of my chest. *Even if he saved me I won't trust him. Not after he abandoned us.*


[Kore]

As I stalked towards the array I activated my comm.
"Jak, bring me another ship." *If I'm going to help Ezru and Shiva, I need a tougher vehicle.* "Bring me a hellcat. We'll need the fire power." The hellcat was one of the oldest vehicles still being manufactured. The design was from Ezru's time. Maybe he would appreciate the ancient structure.
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| January 16, 2010, 11:29 am
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Quoting Liam Kelly
((how should I put my character in here))


((Perhaps your character could have heard about Ezru, and is on the Hellcat ship in order to meet him. He IS their great spirit after all. Also, Shiva and Kore are pretty much celebrities to the Akonians too :) ))
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| January 19, 2010, 5:24 pm
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Quoting The Abyss -"do you know who i am? cuz i don`t!"
"Orbatroz. i remember when you first arived here, it realy picked p peoples` spirits. now i must go refuel my air supply as i just wasted most of it on him and my home, with its reserves, is underneath four spaciels of lava by now" he turned to walk away then added,"you may join me if you care to"



"I'm not here to join a Tokia. The Array is all I'm after today." He looked across the frozen glacier-valley to The Array, which stuck up on the horizon like the bones of a crashed ship. A small light on one of its towers glowed blue in the red-dust light of dusk. "This will allow me to contact my Children. They must know I have returned."
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| January 19, 2010, 5:27 pm
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Quoting Gringat the Repugnant


"I'm not here to join a Tokia. The Array is all I'm after today." He looked across the frozen glacier-valley to The Array, which stuck up on the horizon like the bones of a crashed ship. A small light on one of its towers glowed blue in the red-dust light of dusk. "This will allow me to contact my Children. They must know I have returned."

"then i`ll join you if you dont mind, before i leave. i have a repetitive life and will not avoid an opertunity to quest with the great Ezru." i checked by back systems,"i have enough air to last me the way i`m sure" as im sure they could tell i was slightly giddy...
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| January 19, 2010, 5:48 pm
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Quoting The Abyss -"do you know who i am? cuz i don`t!"
"then i`ll join you if you dont mind, before i leave. i have a repetitive life and will not avoid an opertunity to quest with the great Ezru." i checked by back systems,"i have enough air to last me the way i`m sure" as im sure they could tell i was slightly giddy...


"It will be brief." Ezru turned, expecting them all to follow. "Kore, tell your flying friends to meet us at The Array. They must know where that is, being such a landmark. I can only hope you people haven't started your own backwards religion off it. It would not surprise me." He snarled, and stepped throught the snow, sliding lik a surfer down the ice cliff on his hooves. At the bottom, he jumped, adn landed on all fours before striding off with his staff towards The Array...
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| January 19, 2010, 6:11 pm
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Quoting Gringat the Repugnant

"It will be brief." Ezru turned, expecting them all to follow. "Kore, tell your flying friends to meet us at The Array. They must know where that is, being such a landmark. I can only hope you people haven't started your own backwards religion off it. It would not surprise me." He snarled, and stepped through the snow, sliding lik a surfer down the ice cliff on his hooves. At the bottom, he jumped, adn landed on all fours before striding off with his staff towards The Array...

((WHERE HAVE YOU BEEN!!! YOU HAVEN'T TALKED SEANCE I SAID I WAS LEAVING. 13 days ago. and I was up and running by the tenth. 9 days of total silence in the group. I thought you all had died some freak accident all at the exact same time. DON'T EVER DO THAT AGAIN.))

[Kore]

I gave Jak the order and moved in front Ezru. "I go first. Seance your a VIP You are to stand between Shiva and I so that we can provide adequate protection. If Shiva was thinking straight he would have reminded me of that." I trudged on not caring what the great being thought of me. "Something doesn't feel right. Those cyclonids attacked you.They either don't know or don't care that your a great being. Are you absolutely sure they will welcome you back.
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| January 19, 2010, 8:57 pm
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Quoting Supreme commander Gideon Fucci
((WHERE HAVE YOU BEEN!!! YOU HAVEN'T TALKED SEANCE I SAID I WAS LEAVING. 13 days ago. and I was up and running by the tenth. 9 days of total silence in the group. I thought you all had died some freak accident all at the exact same time. DON'T EVER DO THAT AGAIN.))

[Kore]

I gave Jak the order and moved in front Ezru. "I go first. Seance your a VIP You are to stand between Shiva and I so that we can provide adequate protection. If Shiva was thinking straight he would have reminded me of that." I trudged on not caring what the great being thought of me. "Something doesn't feel right. Those cyclonids attacked you.They either don't know or don't care that your a great being. Are you absolutely sure they will welcome you back.


"They did not." Ezru strode on, not looking at Kore. "If you had been able to observe, the only thing that hit ME was a careless impact hammer blast from Shiva. The cyclonoids know better than to attack me. Unlike you akonians and..." He sneered. "...Tokia, they can sense the sort of power my people carry, and know to stay away. You lucky people on the other hand, get to be slashed." Ezru's hooves made large, cloven marks in the snow, compressing the filn into bright blue glacier ice. A blizzard blew up, and snow began to rush around them in a biting, stinging torrent. Ezru ignored it.

After two hours or so of trudging through the blizzard, the party reached The Array. Ezru clicked his fingers, and the centre of the construct lit up like a floodlight. "Stay here." He said. "Only one spirit can operate this at a time." He strode inside, and then the light stopped. The centre block of The Array shut closed, leaving the others alone in the cold. Nothing seemed to be happening...

((But something will happen once someone does something. :) ))

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| January 20, 2010, 5:55 pm
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((Does it involve impact hammers?))
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| January 20, 2010, 6:03 pm
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((http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-SSRKsf0CQo))

we truged through the mild storm(by my eyes at least). feet dissapearing in the snow, us thinking the prepetual chant that they may find ice sheets beneath it. when after a few hours we came within the foot hills of three enormous crystalyn mountains, as large as the biggest in the Delta chain:
900,00000 spaciels in hight. we awwed at their massive beuty, the green light of Fauspherous hitting and gliding off their icey faces -- faces of that as old as time but remained beutiful, faces of angels -- fallen gods! they glowed briliant as yet unseen shades of the rainbow amathest, golden, and amber to name the nameable. the light surounded them in an angelic hue as they reached to the havens above. i was surprised i hadn`t seen it before.

((spaciels=2ft. when you activate it i have more))
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| January 20, 2010, 6:36 pm
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Quoting John the Imaginative
((Does it involve impact hammers?))


((If you like. Oh, and could you get back to the Bara Magna and Celestis threads too? Julio and Fenrir have been Of-Screen for ages :P ))
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| January 21, 2010, 2:10 pm
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Quoting Gringat the Repugnant

((If you like. Oh, and could you get back to the Bara Magna and Celestis threads too? Julio and Fenrir have been Of-Screen for ages :P ))

((kay i`m waiting for you))
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| January 21, 2010, 2:32 pm
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Quoting The Abyss -"do you know who i am? cuz i don`t!"
((kay i`m waiting for you))


((Not you. John. >.>))


((Ahh Whatever))



Machinery began to turn. Beneath the ice, great slabs of metal began to revolve. The great protodermis talons jutting up from the ice field began to rise, causing great rifts and cracks in the ice. The centre also rose, in a great pillar. Chaos was everywhere.

Out of the ice on all sides, the pillars grew, like a spiked mile-wide cage. Energy threads grew between them, and small spits of lighting arced from them all to the centre. It glowed, brighter, brighter - and snapped open. A wave of signals sped from it into space in a huge beam which would echo throughout the cosmos.

--{MY NAME IS EZRU. I HAVE RETURNED]--




Up above, Omzhare's commlink crackled into life as the words of the frantic captain came through. The ship rocked. Alarms rang.

The ship entered the Talon Base's hangar bay, five miles away...



Ezru strode out of the now cooling Array.

"Well. Glad that's sorted." He said. "Now where's that ship?"
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| January 21, 2010, 2:55 pm
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Suddenly, in our aw, the ice sheets stared to crack and separate spider-webbing from the center of the three towering crystal mountains which began assending to the sky. Many great colossal obelisks grew from beneath the snow as well. I felt the ice shift from what might be machinery underneath. The large pillars surrounded the whole escarpment, encaging us within. I was thrown off my feet. When I began to rise –seconds later—energy bolt leapt from one another, electrifying our ‘fence’. The energy then sped toward the center bouncing off and through the vast prism mazes of the mountains in a mass of lightning arcs colliding together in a bundle of light, blinding us. This bundle expanded and gaped open sending a forth cascading beam to the havens.
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| January 21, 2010, 3:04 pm
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Quoting The Abyss -"do you know who i am? cuz i don`t!"
Suddenly, in our aw, the ice sheets stared to crack and separate spider-webbing from the center of the three towering crystal mountains which began assending to the sky. Many great colossal obelisks grew from beneath the snow as well. I felt the ice shift from what might be machinery underneath. The large pillars surrounded the whole escarpment, encaging us within. I was thrown off my feet. When I began to rise –seconds later—energy bolt leapt from one another, electrifying our ‘fence’. The energy then sped toward the center bouncing off and through the vast prism mazes of the mountains in a mass of lightning arcs colliding together in a bundle of light, blinding us. This bundle expanded and gaped open sending a forth cascading beam to the havens.


((That was a lot better than my description. Let's go with that one :D ))

[Ezru] He sat down in the snow, not phased by the cold. "So... how long before this little gunship of yours arrives, Kore?"
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| January 21, 2010, 5:15 pm
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Quoting Gringat the Repugnant

((That was a lot better than my description. Let's go with that one :D ))

[Ezru] He sat down in the snow, not phased by the cold. "So... how long before this little gunship of yours arrives, Kore?"
((http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4V6ayeiKkT4&feature=P
layList&p=E3DF9CE9B6DA905C&index=8))
still staring at the place in the night sky that had been visciously ripped open momment before, i shook off my stupor. regaining control of consious though i replied grimly, "would that be it?...seems--rather large don`t you think?" he said while pointing at the now repared whole in the sky. they, far behind him, turned to follow his gaze. there, far off in the vastness of space was a large carrier aproching the outer atmosphere.

a leight storm began which would escalate to one of the biggest in years, the would have to take refuge under ground or freeze instintaniously

((last paraghraph will happen over time if i was not clear. and its our TM/celestis ship))
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| January 22, 2010, 10:24 am
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((where are you guys.))
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| January 23, 2010, 8:00 pm
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Quoting The Abyss -"do you know who i am? cuz i don`t!"
Quoting Gringat the Repugnant

((That was a lot better than my description. Let's go with that one :D ))

[Ezru] He sat down in the snow, not phased by the cold. "So... how long before this little gunship of yours arrives, Kore?"
((http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4V6ayeiKkT4&feature=P
layList&p=E3DF9CE9B6DA905C&index=8))
still staring at the place in the night sky that had been visciously ripped open momment before, i shook off my stupor. regaining control of consious though i replied grimly, "would that be it?...seems--rather large don`t you think?" he said while pointing at the now repared whole in the sky. they, far behind him, turned to follow his gaze. there, far off in the vastness of space was a large carrier aproching the outer atmosphere.

a leight storm began which would escalate to one of the biggest in years, the would have to take refuge under ground or freeze instintaniously

((last paraghraph will happen over time if i was not clear. and its our TM/celestis ship))


Cyclonoids flew up in their hundreds towards the incoming ship, attacking its hull with blades, knives and lazer cutters. Streams of turret-fire filled the sky as its defences attempted to repel alien entry, and cyclonoid armour bgan to rain down around the party below.

[Ezru] "That [vituperating] gunship better arrive quickly!" He tapped his hoof in the snow, impatiently, looking up at the ship.
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| January 30, 2010, 5:15 pm
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Quoting Gringat the Repugnant

Cyclonoids flew up in their hundreds towards the incoming ship, attacking its hull with blades, knives and lazer cutters. Streams of turret-fire filled the sky as its defences attempted to repel alien entry, and cyclonoid armour bgan to rain down around the party below.

[Ezru] "That [vituperating] gunship better arrive quickly!" He tapped his hoof in the snow, impatiently, looking up at the ship.

[Kore]

"Jak, Where the hxxl are you and that accursed transport." Jaks response came almost immediately and with more than a little annoyance. "I'm almost there. Quit your whining." A moment later the Transport rose up and settled into the snow. I motioned for the others to follow. The ship was much bigger than it looked from the out side. The side walls where lined with seats while the rear was totally barren save a switch to open the rear hatch. The front wall had a haych that led to the dogpit. In the center of the troop bay where four VS-AX-i30s : Each machines were built to fit The Tokia perfectly and were a fresh shipment from Militia Magna. "All a bored?" Came Jak's quizzical voice.
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| January 30, 2010, 7:03 pm
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Quoting Supreme commander Gideon Fucci
[Kore]

"Jak, Where the hxxl are you and that accursed transport." Jaks response came almost immediately and with more than a little annoyance. "I'm almost there. Quit your whining." A moment later the Transport rose up and settled into the snow. I motioned for the others to follow. The ship was much bigger than it looked from the out side. The side walls where lined with seats while the rear was totally barren save a switch to open the rear hatch. The front wall had a haych that led to the dogpit. In the center of the troop bay where four VS-AX-i30s : Each machines were built to fit The Tokia perfectly and were a fresh shipment from Militia Magna. "All a bored?" Came Jak's quizzical voice.

i, with the others, boreded the vessel in a hurry. the near black metal walls hid the engeneir statins perfectly. i took my seat at the controls of a roof mounted turret, as soon as i sat down holographic computer screens sprung to life arround my chair. "Ah, i haven`t been in one of these for ages...and i`m still to tall to fit...". i lay my arms on the intended rests, fingers seting into the required groves, sparks flew up to meet them makeing a conection. the the doors slide shut enclosing me in a 'closet'. on screen popped upan arial veiw of our surroundings i aimed at the large ship in the distance..
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| January 31, 2010, 11:40 am
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Quoting The Abyss -"do you know who i am? cuz i don`t!"
i, with the others, boreded the vessel in a hurry. the near black metal walls hid the engeneir statins perfectly. i took my seat at the controls of a roof mounted turret, as soon as i sat down holographic computer screens sprung to life arround my chair. "Ah, i haven`t been in one of these for ages...and i`m still to tall to fit...". i lay my arms on the intended rests, fingers seting into the required groves, sparks flew up to meet them makeing a conection. the the doors slide shut enclosing me in a 'closet'. on screen popped upan arial veiw of our surroundings i aimed at the large ship in the distance..


[Kore]

"Alright Ezru, You go upfront and tell Jak Where exactly you want to go."I Turned to Orbatroz but he had disappeared. I shrugged and went up through the roof hatch and into one of the sealed gun pods. "Alright Jak tell me about that ship. Then get me a communications link with there captain."
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| January 31, 2010, 12:50 pm
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Quoting Supreme commander Gideon Fucci

[Kore]

"Alright Ezru, You go upfront and tell Jak Where exactly you want to go."I Turned to Orbatroz but he had disappeared. I shrugged and went up through the roof hatch and into one of the sealed gun pods. "Alright Jak tell me about that ship. Then get me a communications link with there captain."

i heard them over the ships intercom and replied, "i have them in my sights, i`ll try blast off some cycloniods if ya want. hopefuly this old girl can still shoot as far..."
((want me to make a guy in SM?))
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| January 31, 2010, 12:56 pm
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Quoting The Abyss -"do you know who i am? cuz i don`t!"
i heard them over the ships intercom and replied, "i have them in my sights, i`ll try blast off some cycloniods if ya want. hopefuly this old girl can still shoot as far..."
((want me to make a guy in SM?))

[Kore]

"Jak, get us closer to the swarm."You Want Me To Do What?!?""Just do it Jak. We want to actually hit our targets. Now, tell me about that ship." "Well Its originally from Meta Magna and just shipped out from Sampa Magna. Establishing communications link... Connected. You may speak when ready." "This is Kore, Guard of the Southern gates. My ship is ready to provide assistance. Who am I speaking with."
As we approached the ship, about a dozen or so Cyclonids dove down at us. With all three turrets manned, we opened fire, cutting them to pieces.
((Yes make a character For SM.))
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| February 2, 2010, 8:52 pm
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Quoting Supreme commander Gideon Fucci
[Kore]

"Jak, get us closer to the swarm."You Want Me To Do What?!?""Just do it Jak. We want to actually hit our targets. Now, tell me about that ship." "Well Its originally from Meta Magna and just shipped out from Sampa Magna. Establishing communications link... Connected. You may speak when ready." "This is Kore, Guard of the Southern gates. My ship is ready to provide assistance. Who am I speaking with."
As we approached the ship, about a dozen or so Cyclonids dove down at us. With all three turrets manned, we opened fire, cutting them to pieces.
((Yes make a character For SM.))



The communications line crackled into life. "This is the Fist of Elisara, a bomber station!" came a soldier's voice from the other side. "We've just cleared a Khraken swarm from Sampa Magna! There are six hundred Akonian villagers aboard, and we are taking heavy damage from Cyclonoids!"

Ezru seemed cooly emotionless. "Jak," he said, "Ignore the ship. Take me to the nearest landing area so that I can resume my station."
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| February 4, 2010, 11:34 am
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Quoting Gringat the Repugnant

[Orbatroz]

The communications line crackled into life. "This is the Fist of Elisara, a bomber station!" came a soldier's voice from the other side. "We've just cleared a Khraken swarm from Sampa Magna! There are six hundred Akonian villagers aboard, and we are taking heavy damage from Cyclonoids!"

i had been sitting cooly in my gunning station when this sent a tremmor through me. my face droped and i took full control of the guns:with just a thought two semi-cylinders slid from underneath the armrests enclosing the electric current between the dash and my fingers. i took aim, the auto-target flashing on the screen- "they won`t be able to last if the cyclonionds breech the inner wall!--I`m helping!" -i shot! the 7th-Medium-pulse-beam flew towards the intended target - a rather large cyclonoid - it hit!
after that i managed to take down three others...
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| February 4, 2010, 3:52 pm
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[Tezra]

after a few hours they were within reach of the tempestrian atmosphere. the alarms and booming voice that had ridden on a wave of enegy had certainly rocked them all.

"Harren! look! the cyclonoids are attacking!!"
many of the batlike creature had flew into the outer atmosphere and had begun seiging the ship. they tore at the outer wall of metal
"Run!"Tezra said but some one replied "where? we are like siting ducks out here..."
Acose came up behind them with smething in his arms, "here where these! Quick! once the cyclonoids breech the inner wall they will let you breeth where there is no air! i have had a solider contact a gun ship not far off for assistance." he seemed...distracted like something more important than their lives was on his mind. just now she saw the hatred in his young eyes--what could he be? twenty years at the most surely. then, as if to draw Tezra out of her trance, a rather large cyclonoid attacked the bay window! cracks spider webbed through the enormouse glass pane and she quickly put on the rebreather *let me breath it will but what about the cold?!*
the cyclonoid was then blown off the wind sheild by a odd blue, slow(and yet somehow fast)moving blast. over the ship`s intercom, through static, sounded

-"I AM ORBATROZ A GUNNER ON THIS GUN SHIP WE HAVE RECEIVED YOUR TRANSMISSION AND I AM TRYING TO HELPOUT AT THIS MOMENT"- ...
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| February 4, 2010, 4:56 pm
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Quoting Gringat the Repugnant


The communications line crackled into life. "This is the Fist of Elisara, a bomber station!" came a soldier's voice from the other side. "We've just cleared a Khraken swarm from Sampa Magna! There are six hundred Akonian villagers aboard, and we are taking heavy damage from Cyclonoids!"

Ezru seemed cooly emotionless. "Jak," he said, "Ignore the ship. Take me to the nearest landing area so that I can resume my station."


[Kore]

"Jak belay that order. I'm still your commanding officer, And we are not abandoning that ship to the Cyclonids." I spun the turret and fired on more Cyclonids."Do you hear me. We are going to bring them in safely, Or we will die trying."
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| February 5, 2010, 1:01 am
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Quoting Supreme commander Gideon Fucci
((Hello out their.))

((hello. there`s only three of us u me andif Gingat shows up ))
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| February 6, 2010, 11:40 am
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Quoting Supreme commander Gideon Fucci
((I do realize that. and they don't seem to notice how important they are to the story. They spend way too much time AFK during the weekends and week days.))

((Meh. people have other things to do(G`s got exams right now aswell)))
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| February 6, 2010, 11:52 am
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Quoting The Abyss -"do you know who i am? cuz i don`t!"
((Meh. people have other things to do(G`s got exams right now aswell)))

((I just took my CAHSEE(California High School Exit Exams)) and am doing well in all of my classes and I still find time to be on every day of the week. It would be nice if he was on more than once or twice every Two week ya know.))
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| February 6, 2010, 12:02 pm
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Quoting The Abyss -"do you know who i am? cuz i don`t!"
((hello. there`s only three of us u me andif Gingat shows up ))

((I'd join the story, but I have NO idea abut what is going on.))
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| February 6, 2010, 12:07 pm
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Quoting Jibs Studios
((I'd join the story, but I have NO idea abut what is going on.))

((well its qute a bit to put in one post. go read Gringat`s overveiw in group creations. after read um about the first half of chapter one, after that catch up in this thread(just so you know the locales of every thing) and know that Ezru is a great being and our characters are in a small gunship that is interacting with a carrier-bomber from sampa magna(celestis is the thread we use while we`re in space). when your done with that enormouse task (:)) you should have the jist of it))
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| February 6, 2010, 2:05 pm
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Quoting Supreme commander Gideon Fucci

[Kore]

"Jak belay that order. I'm still your commanding officer, And we are not abandoning that ship to the Cyclonids." I spun the turret and fired on more Cyclonids."Do you hear me. We are going to bring them in safely, Or we will die trying."



[Ezru] "Pah! Weaklings! Drothmarr abandon your souls!" Ezru tore at the wall of the gunship. Alarms buzzed, and arctic air rushed into the cabin. The hatch door hurtled down to earth.

Through the howling vortices filling the cabin, Ezru yelled again. "Do what you want to each other, peons! This is MY planet, and since you won't cooperate with me..." Ezru leaped out of the opening, leaving the gunship rocking.

...


Basiliokonei soared up though the thinning atmosphere. The ship was where his brothers and sisters were going. Yes. They wanted to get inside, to steal metal and flesh. They would squabble and fight themselves to get it. Even kill each other... Basiliokonei did not want to fight. He was far too lazy.

And then his calculating eye caught something else. A craft his brothers and sisters were ignoring. He soared towards the gunship from behind. It was firing at his brothers and sisters, and they didn't know he was coming. There was a hole in one side, and alarms were blaring. He planted himself blades-first into the bottom of the craft.


The cyclonoid filled the cabin with his gaseous prescence, and stabbed at the walls, the floors, the wiring. He could feel the metal in his aura, stimulating him. The feeling was bliss. It was his now, and, slowly, but unstoppably, he began to take it over....
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| February 7, 2010, 10:26 am
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[Orbatroz]

i yelled over the ship`s intercom, "WE WONT LAST IN THESE HIGH ALTHITUDES AND SEVERE TEMPERTURES!! I CAN ALREADY FEAL THE SHIP SWAYING! WE MAY ONLY HAVE MINUTES IF WE DON`T FILL THAT WHOLE!". yes the cold was getting to me, but they did not call me The Storm Lord for nothing: i have weathered the highest and most treaterous there is. storms that would freeze you on the spot, leaving nothing but a block of ice in its wake!...but at least i could breath...
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| February 7, 2010, 11:05 am
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Quoting The Abyss -"do you know who i am? cuz i don`t!"
[Orbatroz]

i yelled over the ship`s intercom, "WE WONT LAST IN THESE HIGH ALTHITUDES AND SEVERE TEMPERTURES!! I CAN ALREADY FEAL THE SHIP SWAYING! WE MAY ONLY HAVE MINUTES IF WE DON`T FILL THAT WHOLE!". yes the cold was getting to me, but they did not call me The Storm Lord for nothing: i have weathered the highest and most treaterous there is. storms that would freeze you on the spot, leaving nothing but a block of ice in its wake!...but at least i could breath...



Ther was a thud, down below. The ice field cracked slightly as Ezru landed on it, and the crack grew and got deeper. Ezru, knowing after half a millenium of digging what to do, brought his fists down onto the ice, and began to tunnel downwards...

((Just so you know, Ezru IS a pretty nasty guy. You don't really get good guys and bad guys in such a sense in these stories (real life doesn't work like that), but Ezru is pretty evil tbh. And he hates the Akonians, so there you go. >:) ))

Silvery metal closed over the hole. The freezing air stopped swirling inside...
The tokia (and Shiva) were given only a second to wonder what was going on before the gunship began to shudder. Its engines roared, and it turned towards the ship, of its own accord. It opened fire on it.

...
--Back on board the Fist of Elisara

Omzhare felt the receiver go silent in his hands, before an altogether different voice issued from it. It was cold, rasping, metallic, and spake thusly: "I have taken this little gunship," it said. "And now it is mine. You cannot have it."

Omzhare's face went pale and he placed the receiver down. Behind him, Harren, Tezra and Julio stood in fear. Julio was the only one not showing it - but Omzhare saw the signs. Too long spent among seasoned warriors taught him to see when someone was starting to crack.

"The cyclonoids... have taken over the gunship." Omzhare said. "Tempesta Magna has no great spirit for us to contact." He held his hands together, and brought them to his chest, looking down. "Drothmarr have mercy on them."

Harren and Tezra did the same. "Drothmarr have mercy on them."

[Julio] "Is there no way we an help them?" Omzhare shook his head.

[Omzhare] "What we CAN do is make sure we safely make it to the Talons Port, and keep the villagers of Orgo-Hul safe."

((You should know that: Zhar - OmZHARe. Zhar is a Hynak word (meaning fang, perhaps, or talon). So Omzhare would mean "Great Fang/talon" He has a hynak name because he faught in the hynak wars and this would have intimidated them. It's also no secret that Omzhare is half-Hynak, or at least he was before he became a Zenithri.))

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| February 7, 2010, 11:53 am
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*I have to get to the dongpit, Jak`s judgment won’t be as good--* I disconnected myself and stood on weak knees, the holo-screen disappeared. *he’ll black out from lack of oxygen--* I fell against the doors of the gunners station, they opened and I tumbled out. I did my best not to fall out the side of the craft, I regained my stance—my eyes flew wide, pupils dilated I stopped in place, the ship hit major turbulence *at least I hope that is what it was…* and started to speed farther to the right, I felt short of breath *NO! Not now!* I reached for my Chlorogen tank, felt the suppliers, the tubes *EMPTY!!*. the ship hit another bump and I collapsed to the floor. I tried to hold on, to grasp at some mundane piece of metal but it was no use. I slid to the opening in the ship but just when I should have fell to my death the ships turn arced and I slid back in. I was on my dieing breath but I crawled to Jak`s side far to the bow. For air as I rasped as I spoke, “J- Jak…does t- this ship… have a…sewage filter…?!”
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| February 7, 2010, 12:02 pm
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Quoting Gringat the Repugnant


[Ezru] "Pah! Weaklings! Drothmarr abandon your souls!" Ezru tore at the wall of the gunship. Alarms buzzed, and arctic air rushed into the cabin. The hatch door hurtled down to earth.

Through the howling vortices filling the cabin, Ezru yelled again. "Do what you want to each other, peons! This is MY planet, and since you won't cooperate with me..." Ezru leaped out of the opening, leaving the gunship rocking.

...


Basiliokonei soared up though the thinning atmosphere. The ship was where his brothers and sisters were going. Yes. They wanted to get inside, to steal metal and flesh. They would squabble and fight themselves to get it. Even kill each other... Basiliokonei did not want to fight. He was far too lazy.

And then his calculating eye caught something else. A craft his brothers and sisters were ignoring. He soared towards the gunship from behind. It was firing at his brothers and sisters, and they didn't know he was coming. There was a hole in one side, and alarms were blaring. He planted himself blades-first into the bottom of the craft.


The cyclonoid filled the cabin with his gaseous prescence, and stabbed at the walls, the floors, the wiring. He could feel the metal in his aura, stimulating him. The feeling was bliss. It was his now, and, slowly, but unstoppably, he began to take it over....

[Kore]

"Son of a Bxxxx." I dropped out of the turret into the bay. I grabbed Shiva and threw him into one of the mechs clicking the Auto pilot before the pod sealed. I pushed the machine towards the rear hatch as the mech started. It hopped up and leapt from the hatch, Small thruster activating to break such a long fall. I did the same to Orbitroz. "Jak abandon ship."
"Sir I know what you will try and I can not allow it."
"Than you know me to well. I will not tell you again, though. This is the end of everything. Now go."
"May the great beings have mercy on your soul."
"Doubtful. They never really liked me."
Jak climbed into the third mech and leapt from the ship."Good bye brother." I moved to the dogpit and sat down at the controls. I punched in coordinates and activated the auto pilot. The ship flashed a collision warning but I ignored it. I activated the self destruct mechanism and pushed the throttle to full ahead. I got up and moved to the rear of the ship. I Spread my arms and fell into space. Jak didn't know me as well as he thought. Wind whistled by and I activated my thruster pack. I flew around to the front of the ship and sat on the canopy. I played music on all of the channels. Over all comm channels I anounced'" To the jack Axx that took control of my ship, You have a little less than Ten seconds before this little ship goes Nuclear and blows us all straight to Hxxx." I patted the glass."Have a nice day."
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| February 7, 2010, 12:10 pm
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Quoting The Abyss -"do you know who i am? cuz i don`t!"
Quoting Supreme commander Gideon Fucci
[Kore]


((did you read my comment above? the two might work together but i`ll still suffocate! ):( ))

((The mechs take samples of your Blood and then pump in what you need to breath you won't need the respirator while your in there.))
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| February 7, 2010, 12:21 pm
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Quoting Supreme commander Gideon Fucci
((The mechs take samples of your Blood and then pump in what you need to breath you won't need the respirator while your in there.))

((ok. while i`m here he/i wanted a sewage filter because that`s what is used to break down waste, chlorogen that is. it is kept in a stasis tube made of chronodermis so it wont erod))
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| February 7, 2010, 12:24 pm
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Quoting Gringat the Repugnant

Omzhare felt the receiver go silent in his hands, before an altogether different voice issued from it. It was cold, rasping, metallic, and spake thusly: "I have taken this little gunship," it said. "And now it is mine. You cannot have it."

Omzhare's face went pale and he placed the receiver down. Behind him, Harren, Tezra and Julio stood in fear. Julio was the only one not showing it - but Omzhare saw the signs. Too long spent among seasoned warriors taught him to see when someone was starting to crack.

"The cyclonoids... have taken over the gunship." Omzhare said. "Tempesta Magna has no great spirit for us to contact." He held his hands together, and brought them to his chest, looking down. "Drothmarr have mercy on them."

Harren and Tezra did the same. "Drothmarr have mercy on them."

[Julio] "Is there no way we an help them?" Omzhare shook his head.

[Omzhare] "What we CAN do is make sure we safely make it to the Talons Port, and keep the villagers of Orgo-Hul safe."


[Tezra]

"And how are we to do that when the only aid we had is gone?!"she was steaming.
[Acose]"well we are close to the planet. we may be able to land -- but it will be a crash landing. this ship wasnt built to survive a crash. its only for transport. my guess is if we do surviv the crash we`ll have to head out, for the most part, on foot to the nearest outpost" he was grim and talked as though he had al lot of experience...

[Terza]"IS THERE NOTHING WE CAN DO BUT WAIT FOR DEATH!!"

[Acose]"there are turrets up there but the cyclonoid will have gotten to them by now...WAIT, Omazhare what would an EMP do to them?!"
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| February 7, 2010, 12:36 pm
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Quoting The Abyss -"do you know who i am? cuz i don`t!"
[Tezra]

"And how are we to do that when the only aid we had is gone?!"she was steaming.
[Acose]"well we are close to the planet. we may be able to land -- but it will be a crash landing. this ship wasnt built to survive a crash. its only for transport. my guess is if we do surviv the crash we`ll have to head out, for the most part, on foot to the nearest outpost" he was grim and talked as though he had al lot of experience...

[Terza]"IS THERE NOTHING WE CAN DO BUT WAIT FOR DEATH!!"

[Acose]"there are turrets up there but the cyclonoid will have gotten to them by now...WAIT, Omazhare what would an EMP do to them?!"


"What does poison do to a rat?"

((I gtg now :( ))
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| February 7, 2010, 1:01 pm
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Quoting The Abyss -"do you know who i am? cuz i don`t!"
((he already deleted that post :)))

((Than a new version is in order.))
The ship exploded in to a ball of pure white light. A wave of energy spread through the air washing over the cyclonids, buffeting them slamming them into the ship. When the energy wave reached it, the ship began to fall towards the planets surface. Kore tumbled through the air, burnt and half dead. The lights on his armor were shattered and his entire lower body was gone. His pack was leaking fuel and damaged beyond all repair. When his body hit the ground, It created a crater 10 meters deep. A lone cyclonid hovered over his body And bowed its head, acknowledging the death of someone worth killing. Kore dead black eyes stared back at it. Even dead Kore's body tried to heal itself, reforming dead flesh, growing new legs. The cyclonid moved on.

((I may take up a cyclonid as my character.))
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| February 7, 2010, 2:23 pm
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Quoting Supreme commander Gideon Fucci
((Than a new version is in order.))
The ship exploded in to a ball of pure white light. A wave of energy spread through the air washing over the cyclonids, buffeting them slamming them into the ship. When the energy wave reached it, the ship began to fall towards the planets surface. Kore tumbled through the air, burnt and half dead. The lights on his armor were shattered and his entire lower body was gone. His pack was leaking fuel and damaged beyond all repair. When his body hit the ground, It created a crater 10 meters deep. A lone cyclonid hovered over his body And bowed its head, acknowledging the death of someone worth killing. Kore dead black eyes stared back at it. Even dead Kore's body tried to heal itself, reforming dead flesh, growing new legs. The cyclonid moved on. Moments later the great ship came crashing down.

((o.k. i myself would have left it to the post that had the ship explode...but its your guy. oh and can you edit so it doesnt say that the other ship crashes just yet? there are a few things that need to happen first, mainly EMP bursts that kill the cyclonoids))
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| February 7, 2010, 2:59 pm
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Quoting Supreme commander Gideon Fucci
((Than a new version is in order.))
The ship exploded in to a ball of pure white light. A wave of energy spread through the air washing over the cyclonids, buffeting them slamming them into the ship. When the energy wave reached it, the ship began to fall towards the planets surface. Kore tumbled through the air, burnt and half dead. The lights on his armor were shattered and his entire lower body was gone. His pack was leaking fuel and damaged beyond all repair. When his body hit the ground, It created a crater 10 meters deep. A lone cyclonid hovered over his body And bowed its head, acknowledging the death of someone worth killing. Kore dead black eyes stared back at it. Even dead Kore's body tried to heal itself, reforming dead flesh, growing new legs. The cyclonid moved on.

((I may take up a cyclonid as my character.))


Julio and Tezra left to help with the EMP strike, leaving Harren and the general alone.

[Omzhare] "Harren, when the time comes, you must come with me. There is an escape shuttle attatched to my cabin. Your friends are with the soldiers, including Acose, a friend of my own. They will be taken care of as well."

Harren nodded. "And then...?"

"And then I will do what I can to make sure we survive. Do not worry. As a zenithri I have more than one trick up my sleeve..."

The ship rocked as a blast hit it from outside.

"And now would be a good time to run." said the general.

They ran.
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| February 7, 2010, 5:52 pm
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Quoting Gringat the Repugnant

Julio and Tezra left to help with the EMP strike, leaving Harren and the general alone.

[Omzhare] "Harren, when the time comes, you must come with me. There is an escape shuttle attatched to my cabin. Your friends are with the soldiers, including Acose, a friend of my own. They will be taken care of as well."

Harren nodded. "And then...?"

"And then I will do what I can to make sure we survive. Do not worry. As a zenithri I have more than one trick up my sleeve..."

The ship rocked as a blast hit it from outside.

"And now would be a good time to run." said the general.

They ran.

the ragged troops filed through the ship`s corrodoors, splitting into several teams.

[Acose], "here take these". he handed Tezra and Julio two thing that looked like trip mines. Tezra spoke,"what are these?"
"these are the EMP charges." he brought them to a pair of doors, "make sure your masks are secure". Tezra again questioned him, "why, where are we going?"
"outside." he brought them to a row of mechs lineing a grand hall, "get in. you`re in for a ruff ride." the three of them climbed in, as did hundreds others...

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| February 8, 2010, 9:41 am
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[Jak]
I stood over Kore's body with Shiva and Orbatroz. I gave a short speech in his honor. I knelled down next to him and removed the cannon from his arm, setting it next to me. I removed the three plates that made up my mechanical face and set them on the ground. I removed his helmet and placed it over my head. Tubes docked with ports all over my head and neck. His helmet was now permanently attached. I removed the sword from his belt and attached it to my own. Finally I removed my own arm. I placed my own arm in the socket. I put the rotary turret in my own arm socket. more tubes linked with the weapon hard wiring in to me.
"You were the first to defy a god, Brother. And I will be the first to kill one." I Turned to the others."Lets go save that ship."
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| February 8, 2010, 2:52 pm
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Quoting Supreme commander Gideon Fucci
[Jak]
I stood over Kore's body with Shiva and Orbatroz. I gave a short speech in his honor. I knelled down next to him and removed the cannon from his arm, setting it next to me. I removed the three plates that made up my mechanical face and set them on the ground. I removed his helmet and placed it over my head. Tubes docked with ports all over my head and neck. His helmet was now permanently attached. I removed the sword from his belt and attached it to my own. Finally I removed my own arm. I placed my own arm in the socket. I put the rotary turret in my own arm socket. more tubes linked with the weapon hard wiring in to me.
"You were the first to defy a god, Brother. And I will be the first to kill one." I Turned to the others."Lets go save that ship."


((Ooh. Ezru's days are numbered! :D

Now... I can't have Ezru, Harren OR Omzhare do much now until that E.M.P thing is done, so carry on people... ))
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| February 8, 2010, 4:05 pm
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Quoting Supreme commander Gideon Fucci
[Jak]
I stood over Kore's body with Shiva and Orbatroz. I gave a short speech in his honor. I knelled down next to him and removed the cannon from his arm, setting it next to me. I removed the three plates that made up my mechanical face and set them on the ground. I removed his helmet and placed it over my head. Tubes docked with ports all over my head and neck. His helmet was now permanently attached. I removed the sword from his belt and attached it to my own. Finally I removed my own arm. I placed my own arm in the socket. I put the rotary turret in my own arm socket. more tubes linked with the weapon hard wiring in to me.
"You were the first to defy a god, Brother. And I will be the first to kill one." I Turned to the others."Lets go save that ship."

"Jak, i know your pain more than you may think...but mere guns do not bring down gods...come let us make our way far south to Cryo`s Rage!". he still wore his hardsuit, he could not breath without its custom funtions.

((Cryo`s Rage is a unbeleivably massive volcano [Cryo magna is the pole`s name]))
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| February 8, 2010, 4:26 pm
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Quoting Gringat the Repugnant

((Ooh. Ezru's days are numbered! :D

Now... I can't have Ezru, Harren OR Omzhare do much now until that E.M.P thing is done, so carry on people... ))

((I'm glad that was clear. I wondering if any of you have guessed at Jak's origins.(Hint he does not call Kore his brother just because they work together) And also like to ask if I could squeeze the Dark makers into this celestas on Necra magna.))
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| February 8, 2010, 4:32 pm
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Quoting Supreme commander Gideon Fucci
((I'm glad that was clear. I wondering if any of you have guessed at Jak's origins.(Hint he does not call Kore his brother just because they work together) And also like to ask if I could squeeze the Dark makers into this celestas on Necra magna.))

((No guesses. none, That means no one wants to know the story behind Jak. The machine that acts like a tokia, that feels rage.))
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| February 8, 2010, 5:45 pm
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Quoting Supreme commander Gideon Fucci
((No guesses. none, That means no one wants to know the story behind Jak. The machine that acts like a tokia, that feels rage.))

((he`s a machine!? i swear to you for the longest time i though he was gonna be like Vern from the Earnest movies:P))
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| February 8, 2010, 5:55 pm
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((http://www.yo
utube.com/watch?videos=8ANkXT
nsrHc&v=U7Wha
sZ5YRw&playnext=9&playnext_from=TL))

the suits were huge more like a vehicle! they were very high-tech having to carry a Tokia into outerspace by itself.
she climbed in and when the multi-layer door sealed she heard Acose`s voice crackle to life, "the virtual reality drive wil take you from here." she sat back and a helmet slid from above, over her face. "Hello i am mecha hardsuit VT1, having a nice day? from here you will control my movents as if your own. Exciting no?!" she felt herself fall away, into a deep sleep.....sslleeepp...
when she awoke moments later she was much taller than what she had been. "W...what...?!..." she held her hands to the light, and realized what had happened: her consiousness was temperairily residing in the hardsuit!
Acose leapt from the wall, auto-detaching the cords and tubes as he did so, his shoulders jerked and he moved so fluidly. he grabbed the E.M.P. core he had left on a table and many others, storing them in a pannel in his legs. he grabbed a long spear, made for the suit it looked as though it were meant to be plumbing. "Let`s go, there is no time to waste!"...

((gringat you are needed to play julio))
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| February 8, 2010, 6:14 pm
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Quoting The Abyss -"do you know who i am? cuz i don`t!"
"Jak, i know your pain more than you may think...but mere guns do not bring down gods...come let us make our way far south to Cryo`s Rage!". he still wore his hardsuit, he could not breath without its custom funtions.

((Cryo`s Rage is a unbeleivably massive volcano [Cryo magna is the pole`s name]))

((I know. I named it. It was going to be Kore's world. Now It may become Jak's world but Jak is going to finish this here with the ship and then with Ezru.))
[Jak]
"No! Ezru will die by my hand and no others." I looked down at myself. The strength of a machine and the mind of a soldier. "I'm like nothing he's ever faced."
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| February 9, 2010, 12:11 am
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Quoting Supreme commander Gideon Fucci
((I know. I named it. It was going to be Kore's world. Now It may become Jak's world but Jak is going to finish this here with the ship and then with Ezru.))
[Jak]
"No! Ezru will die by my hand and no others." I looked down at myself. The strength of a machine and the mind of a soldier. "I'm like nothing he's ever faced."

"Are you saying you would do ANYTHING to bring him down?..."
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| February 9, 2010, 9:07 am
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Quoting The Abyss -"do you know who i am? cuz i don`t!"
"Are you saying you would do ANYTHING to bring him down?..."

[Jak]
Yes. Anything that helps me bring him. Even if it requires me too become one of the undead of Necro Magna."
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| February 9, 2010, 10:03 am
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Quoting The Abyss -"do you know who i am? cuz i don`t!"
"Are you saying you would do ANYTHING to bring him down?..."


Julio swore, pelting down the red-lighted corridors of the Fist of Elisara as fast as his legs would carry him, with Tezra as his heels.
Acose was ahead, with an emp gun at his side ready to blast any cyclonoids that got too close. He had his hand on the door controls for the airlock.

"Do it!" said Julio.
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| February 9, 2010, 12:05 pm
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Quoting Supreme commander Gideon Fucci
[Jak]
Yes. Anything that helps me bring him. Even if it requires me too become one of the undead of Necro Magna."


[Shiva] The android shuddered. Revulsion wasn't a usual feeling for him. "Jak, sentience is not something you should throw away lightly. To become a Dead walker is to lose your soul... To be sealed away from Drothmarr himself."
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| February 9, 2010, 12:08 pm
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Quoting Supreme commander Gideon Fucci
[Jak]
"Yes. Anything that helps me bring him. Even if it requires me too become one of the undead of Necro Magna."

within the macha suit i reached into my armor pulling out a syring and passing it to my mech hand. Jak had his back turned to me, responding to Shiva. "That is not nesasary." i plunged the needle into his spinal cortex, he bent back and howled in pain. the sound was of metal grinding on metal. the energized protodermis seeping into his body, I retreated, pullling out the syring."That, my friend, is the first of many..."
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| February 9, 2010, 3:40 pm
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Quoting The Abyss -"do you know who i am? cuz i don`t!"
((http://www.yo
utube.com/watch?videos=8ANkXT
nsrHc&v=U7Wha
sZ5YRw&playnext=9&playnext_from=TL))

the suits were huge more like a vehicle! they were very high-tech having to carry a Tokia into outerspace by itself.
she climbed in and when the multi-layer door sealed she heard Acose`s voice crackle to life, "the virtual reality drive wil take you from here." she sat back and a helmet slid from above, over her face. "Hello i am mecha hardsuit VT1, having a nice day? from here you will control my movents as if your own. Exciting no?!" she felt herself fall away, into a deep sleep.....sslleeepp...
when she awoke moments later she was much taller than what she had been. "W...what...?!..." she held her hands to the light, and realized what had happened: her consiousness was temperairily residing in the hardsuit!
Acose leapt from the wall, auto-detaching the cords and tubes as he did so, his shoulders jerked and he moved so fluidly. he grabbed the E.M.P. core he had left on a table and many others, storing them in a pannel in his legs. he grabbed a long spear, made for the suit it looked as though it were meant to be plumbing. "Let`s go, there is no time to waste!"...

((gringat you are needed to play julio))

Quoting Gringat the Repugnant

Julio swore, pelting down the red-lighted corridors of the Fist of Elisara as fast as his legs would carry him, with Tezra as his heels.
Acose was ahead, with an emp gun at his side ready to blast any cyclonoids that got too close. He had his hand on the door controls for the airlock.

"Do it!" said Julio.

((http://www.youtube.com/watch?playnext=1&playnext_from=TL&videos=zZiaG85TfYU&v=yxsaY4Fi0ts))
he pulled down the lever, the enormous bulkhead doors started to slide to either side. The vacuum of space pulling us all out. other teams surrounded them huddled together, though the majority had traveled to another part of the ship. Acose spoke to the room of soliders “You all have your emitters? Let`s go.” He ran, boots clanking on the floor, gravity already was lighter…

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| February 9, 2010, 3:51 pm
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Quoting The Abyss -"do you know who i am? cuz i don`t!"
within the macha suit i reached into my armor pulling out a syring and passing it to my mech hand. Jak had his back turned to me, responding to Shiva. "That is not nesasary." i plunged the needle into his spinal cortex, he bent back and howled in pain. the sound was of metal grinding on metal. the energized protodermis seeping into his body, I retreated, pulling out the syring."That, my friend, is the first of many..."

[Jak]

I felt strange, almost like I was in low gravity environment. Than it felt as if someone was trying to rearrange my body from the inside out. The pain intensified and than ceased."What the hxxx was that for?!?"
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| February 10, 2010, 8:45 pm
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Quoting The Abyss -"do you know who i am? cuz i don`t!"
Quoting The Abyss -"do you know who i am? cuz i don`t!"
((http://www.yo
utube.com/watch?videos=8ANkXT
nsrHc&v=U7Wha
sZ5YRw&playnext=9&playnext_from=TL))

the suits were huge more like a vehicle! they were very high-tech having to carry a Tokia into outerspace by itself.
she climbed in and when the multi-layer door sealed she heard Acose`s voice crackle to life, "the virtual reality drive wil take you from here." she sat back and a helmet slid from above, over her face. "Hello i am mecha hardsuit VT1, having a nice day? from here you will control my movents as if your own. Exciting no?!" she felt herself fall away, into a deep sleep.....sslleeepp...
when she awoke moments later she was much taller than what she had been. "W...what...?!..." she held her hands to the light, and realized what had happened: her consiousness was temperairily residing in the hardsuit!
Acose leapt from the wall, auto-detaching the cords and tubes as he did so, his shoulders jerked and he moved so fluidly. he grabbed the E.M.P. core he had left on a table and many others, storing them in a pannel in his legs. he grabbed a long spear, made for the suit it looked as though it were meant to be plumbing. "Let`s go, there is no time to waste!"...

((gringat you are needed to play julio))

Quoting Gringat the Repugnant

Julio swore, pelting down the red-lighted corridors of the Fist of Elisara as fast as his legs would carry him, with Tezra as his heels.
Acose was ahead, with an emp gun at his side ready to blast any cyclonoids that got too close. He had his hand on the door controls for the airlock.

"Do it!" said Julio.

((http://www.youtube.com/watch?playnext=1&playnext_from=TL&videos=zZiaG85TfYU&v=yxsaY4Fi0ts))
he pulled down the lever, the enormous bulkhead doors started to slide to either side. The vacuum of space pulling us all out. other teams surrounded them huddled together, though the majority had traveled to another part of the ship. Acose spoke to the room of soliders “You all have your emitters? Let`s go.” He ran, boots clanking on the floor, gravity already was lighter…


((They aren't in space. They're inside Tempesta Magna's atmosphere now.))

Howling, freezing winds tore at the assembled company. Julio's feet clung to the outide of the ship, using magnets in his boots to cling to its metallic surface. He saw the soldiers and Acose doing the same.

A whirling mass of cyclonoids could be seen following the ship... on its way down. Through the thickening atmosphere below Julio could see Tempesta Magna's surface, looming closer. The surface of the ship began to rattle as turbulence hit it. Red sparks bean flying into the air...
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| February 11, 2010, 6:05 am
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The cieling gave way. Ezru landed on the metal grids below, and walked sternly down, towards the sound of buzzing machinery...
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| February 12, 2010, 9:55 am
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((http://www.youtube.com/watch?videos=WjMh4BUfFeg&v=qMzVps2JYzw&playnext=2&playnext_from=TL))

as hundreds walked upwards, ascending to the sky, the cyclonoid wached. some to eager swooped in on the rissing wave. the soliders moved slowly as if on the moon. a cyclonoid came in, a solider turned, you could see the cyclonoids reflection in the glass of his windsheild. as he turned he rose a cannon and a look of terror spread acrose his face. he brought the gun to eye level just in time; the cyclonoid was inches from his face. the trigger pulled blasting shock waves into the air. the cyclonoid`s atoms split from one another sending waves of light emiting particles to the air. in its dieing momments you could swear you saw a look of fear on its face. as the lumbering forces progressed all droped the mines and as the fell artificial gravity kicked in rocketing them to the surface of the ship...
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| February 15, 2010, 10:41 am
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[Jak]
"We're to late to save the ship. We can at least help those that survive the crash." I hopped back in the mech and rode towards the calculated crash site. Based on the current trajectory of the ship it would be landing just over a mile south of our position.
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| February 17, 2010, 10:10 am
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Quoting The Abyss -"do you know who i am? cuz i don`t!"
((http://www.youtube.com/watch?videos=WjMh4BUfFeg&v=qMzVps2JYzw&playnext=2&playnext_from=TL))

as hundreds walked upwards, ascending to the sky, the cyclonoid wached. some to eager swooped in on the rissing wave. the soliders moved slowly as if on the moon. a cyclonoid came in, a solider turned, you could see the cyclonoids reflection in the glass of his windsheild. as he turned he rose a cannon and a look of terror spread acrose his face. he brought the gun to eye level just in time; the cyclonoid was inches from his face. the trigger pulled blasting shock waves into the air. the cyclonoid`s atoms split from one another sending waves of light emiting particles to the air. in its dieing momments you could swear you saw a look of fear on its face. as the lumbering forces progressed all droped the mines and as the fell artificial gravity kicked in rocketing them to the surface of the ship...


[Julio] "Quick, then! Back inside!" the sirrushian barked. motiong Tezra and the other soldiers towards the airlock. His rifle cut down a cyclonoid that was swooping towards him, and then he dove inside. After a minute, everyone was inside...

The mines detonated. Cyclonoid armour clattered and fell from the sky, off all of the cyclonoids. Stripped of their metallic countenance, thousands of gaseous forms dissipated into the howling wind...
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| February 19, 2010, 8:09 pm
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Quoting Supreme commander Gideon Fucci
[Jak]
"We're to late to save the ship. We can at least help those that survive the crash." I hopped back in the mech and rode towards the calculated crash site. Based on the current trajectory of the ship it would be landing just over a mile south of our position.


It landed. A shockwave echoed across the whole of the polar region...
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| February 24, 2010, 5:37 pm
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Quoting Supreme commander Gideon Fucci
[Jak]
We marched through the snow towards the fallen craft, Arriving shortly after the crash. The ship was a smoking ruin torn apart by The Game.


((I just lost The Game >.< ))

The ruined ship had plunged straight into the Mortrag Glacier. Ice and rocks below would be shredding the ship - and any survivors- to broken pieces... One figure lay in the snow not far from Jak, wearing black and silver armour. He was completely unconscious.


...[Harren and Omzhare]

Deep in the bowels of the ship, sparks flew. The ship was destroyed, and Harren strained at a heavy beam lying across her chest, trapping her against the slanting wall of the room she was in. Omzhare nearby gave a racking cough.

"Harren! Hold on, let me get my sword..." Omzhare rumaged, and produced a hilt with a few shards of sword still attatched to it. "DXmn. I'll just do this the old fashined way, then!" Omzhare heaved to pull the beam off Harren. Eventually the pressure on her chest subsided, and she collapsed to he knees, gasping for breath.

"Can you walk?" She nodded, winded. "Let's try and get out of here then. I am unhurt. Let us look for survivors..."
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| February 26, 2010, 12:04 pm
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((http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=T1NAvQ8PIXA))

momments earlier...

"Alright now we`ll have make a jump---"
mid-sentence, Acose was cut off: the vast ship keeled violently to the right, everything was thrown in the air. he stuggled to get up and when he rose to his hydrolic apine feet the craft plumitted into the peak of a nearby cliff, the jagged ice cut through the metal of the hull like a hot knife through butter. the engines left were smoking, burning, veiling the whole scene. large white spikes potruded the floor where the group of soliders stood in their hardsuits, one killed three people. many tried to make a jump for it through the airlock doors, some made it to the ground unharmed--others did not. the vessel decended down the cliff-side sliding then ricocheting down and into the mountains.
far off a static filed, horrifide voice broke into a ships intercom: "-- though--y--were--comi--t--ship--going--down--now--hel--Callida--"
((http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aRoF73IZynI&feature=related))

miles away Orbatroz saw it all. ship came to the earth like a fallen god as it escaladed downwards mountain peaks broke off into it, some white giants completly fell to the ground. he saw figures falling to their death, lown siloettes plumiting downs to be impaled by the rocks below. but when it made contact a shockwave blew visiosly towards him, not slowing.
"Get down!! that wave will blow us into oblivion--"
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| February 26, 2010, 3:57 pm
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Quoting The Abyss -"do you know who i am? cuz i don`t!"
((http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=T1NAvQ8PIXA))

momments earlier...

"Alright now we`ll have make a jump---"
mid-sentence, Acose was cut off: the vast ship keeled violently to the right, everything was thrown in the air. he stuggled to get up and when he rose to his hydrolic apine feet the craft plumitted into the peak of a nearby cliff, the jagged ice cut through the metal of the hull like a hot knife through butter. the engines left were smoking, burning, veiling the whole scene. large white spikes potruded the floor where the group of soliders stood in their hardsuits, one killed three people. many tried to make a jump for it through the airlock doors, some made it to the ground unharmed--others did not. the vessel decended down the cliff-side sliding then ricocheting down and into the mountains.
far off a static filed, horrifide voice broke into a ships intercom: "-- though--y--were--comi--t--ship--going--down--now--hel--Callida--"
((http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aRoF73IZynI&feature=related))

miles away Orbatroz saw it all. ship came to the earth like a fallen god as it escaladed downwards mountain peaks broke off into it, some white giants completly fell to the ground. he saw figures falling to their death, lown siloettes plumiting downs to be impaled by the rocks below. but when it made contact a shockwave blew visiosly towards him, not slowing.
"Get down!! that wave will blow us into oblivion--"


Shiva wasn't fast enough. The shockwave hit, firing him backwards into the side of a cliff. The sound of a whirring alarm, and a cybernetic scream, were carried off by dopplering winds...

...The android collapsed out of the wall of the cliff, into the snow. A small avalanche engulfed him.
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| February 26, 2010, 6:55 pm
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Quoting The Abyss -"do you know who i am? cuz i don`t!"
((http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=T1NAvQ8PIXA))

momments earlier...

"Alright now we`ll have make a jump---"
mid-sentence, Acose was cut off: the vast ship keeled violently to the right, everything was thrown in the air. he stuggled to get up and when he rose to his hydrolic apine feet the craft plumitted into the peak of a nearby cliff, the jagged ice cut through the metal of the hull like a hot knife through butter. the engines left were smoking, burning, veiling the whole scene. large white spikes potruded the floor where the group of soliders stood in their hardsuits, one killed three people. many tried to make a jump for it through the airlock doors, some made it to the ground unharmed--others did not. the vessel decended down the cliff-side sliding then ricocheting down and into the mountains.
far off a static filed, horrifide voice broke into a ships intercom: "-- though--y--were--comi--t--ship--going--down--now--hel--Callida--"
((http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aRoF73IZynI&feature=related))

miles away Orbatroz saw it all. ship came to the earth like a fallen god as it escaladed downwards mountain peaks broke off into it, some white giants completly fell to the ground. he saw figures falling to their death, lown siloettes plumiting downs to be impaled by the rocks below. but when it made contact a shockwave blew visiosly towards him, not slowing.
"Get down!! that wave will blow us into oblivion--"


[Julio] The figure got up on shaking arms, to his knees, and then upright. He swayed a little. Blood ran down the right-hand side of his body, staining the snow a violent lilac-purple colour. He called out, his voice echoing from the cliffs and peaks.

"Tezra? TEZRA!!" he yelled. "ACOSE!!!"
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| February 26, 2010, 7:05 pm
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in a ship far off in the distance, a solider had received mesage of catastrophy and paged it through to the captains quarters.

the solider whom had paged it through contacted The captain of the ship,Callidan, in a frenzy.
"So w- wzat Do wE Do!"
"first DO NOT speak to me that way! secondly...we`re already on our way there are we not?"

he sat solemnly in the darkness of an ever expanding room.

[Tezra]
she lay there, in her mech-suit, underneath the large wall of the hall the group had been. it must have wayed several kilos, and she would not have surrvived if she was not manning the hardsuit. as it was though she had just barely survived under the increasing preasure she lay in the mech nose bleeding heavily. she was unconsious.
[Acose]((only time 1 person for effect))
i dazed in and out of life; one minute i was awake te next i was submersed in the most vivid dream of my life. it was my lifes story:
*i lay in bed with my wife. warriors burst in. took me. tortured me. i had done nothing! they prased me. they said i should be proud to be the first of my kind--*
my eyes opened of their own acord(had it been my decision i would have slept for an etenity) the room spun. i raised my arm. i saw double, no, triple versions of my surroundings! my arm collapsed on my chest and i fell into a deep sleep...ssslllleeeeepppp...

[Orbatroz]
from the momment i spoke i knew it was to late the tidle wave of snow and sound came at light speed toward me, it blew me back mind sentence. as i flew my arms arced back and i slid off the side of a mountain, not being lucky enough to stop there the tsunammy of force thrust me against the walls of surrounding hills untill i blacked out from a concusion
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| February 26, 2010, 9:17 pm
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Quoting The Abyss -"do you know who i am? cuz i don`t!"
in a ship far off in the distance, a solider had received mesage of catastrophy and paged it through to the captains quarters.

the solider whom had paged it through contacted The captain of the ship,Callidan, in a frenzy.
"So w- wzat Do wE Do!"
"first DO NOT speak to me that way! secondly...we`re already on our way there are we not?"

he sat solemnly in the darkness of an ever expanding room.

[Tezra]
she lay there, in her mech-suit, underneath the large wall of the hall the group had been. it must have wayed several kilos, and she would not have surrvived if she was not manning the hardsuit. as it was though she had just barely survived under the increasing preasure she lay in the mech nose bleeding heavily. she was unconsious.
[Acose]((only time 1 person for effect))
i dazed in and out of life; one minute i was awake te next i was submersed in the most vivid dream of my life. it was my lifes story:
*i lay in bed with my wife. warriors burst in. took me. tortured me. i had done nothing! they prased me. they said i should be proud to be the first of my kind--*
my eyes opened of their own acord(had it been my decision i would have slept for an etenity) the room spun. i raised my arm. i saw double, no, triple versions of my surroundings! my arm collapsed on my chest and i fell into a deep sleep...ssslllleeeeepppp...

[Orbatroz]
from the momment i spoke i knew it was to late the tidle wave of snow and sound came at light speed toward me, it blew me back mind sentence. as i flew my arms arced back and i slid off the side of a mountain, not being lucky enough to stop there the tsunammy of force thrust me against the walls of surrounding hills untill i blacked out from a concusion

[Jak]

I was no longer standing, that much I knew. I was laying against the inner walls of the hard suit. Blood splattered the interior. The blue liquid glowed like the control panels that surrounded me. I wiped my face, my hand coming away covered in blood.
"Shiva. Orbatroz. Status report." I coughed raggedly as i tried to contact the others. "Are you all right. Respond." Nothing. "Shiva. Orbatroz are you there." Still nothing. I sighed and hit the emergency hatch release. The charges that should have blown the hatch sky high made a dull thud as they detonated. The hatch moved less than a centimeter. Daxn it."Guys, if you can hear me I'm trapped in my mech." I shoved against the hatch, willing it to move. It wouldn't budge.
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| February 27, 2010, 10:49 am
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Quoting Supreme commander Gideon Fucci
[Jak]

I was no longer standing, that much I knew. I was laying against the inner walls of the hard suit. Blood splattered the interior. The blue liquid glowed like the control panels that surrounded me. I wiped my face, my hand coming away covered in blood.
"Shiva. Orbatroz. Status report." I coughed raggedly as i tried to contact the others. "Are you all right. Respond." Nothing. "Shiva. Orbatroz are you there." Still nothing. I sighed and hit the emergency hatch release. The charges that should have blown the hatch sky high made a dull thud as they detonated. The hatch moved less than a centimeter. Daxn it."Guys, if you can hear me I'm trapped in my mech." I shoved against the hatch, willing it to move. It wouldn't budge.


[Shiva] Shiva dug himself out of the snow, and stood to attention. He looked damaged, but the worst thing was the blank expression now on his face.

"Waiting for input." he said.





[Harren and Omzhare] "My sword is done for. What about yours?"

Harren nodded, producing her own empty hilt. It sparked briefly and then the protodermis flowed out, formign the shape of a heavy hatchet. "This should help."

"Can it cut through protosteel?"

"...No."

"DXmn." Omzhare lost his footing, hitting his ehad against the wall as the ship lurched. The glacier surrounding them was beginning to haul the Fist of Elisara downstream, stripping parts of it into morraine as it did so. HArren adn Omzhare were safe in the heart of the ship - for now.

"We have to get upwards Harren!" he said. She nodded, and the two of them began to dig their way out...


[Tezra]

A surviving cyclonoid crept in close to Tezra's position. The tokia was unconscious... easy to steal from. Geziriseyinei reched out gingerly with his airy claws, and began to unbolt parts of the mech. His essence tingled as the metal entered his windstream...
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| February 28, 2010, 11:23 am
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Quoting Gringat the Repugnant

[Shiva] Shiva dug himself out of the snow, and stood to attention. He looked damaged, but the worst thing was the blank expression now on his face.

"Waiting for input." he said.





[Harren and Omzhare] "My sword is done for. What about yours?"

Harren nodded, producing her own empty hilt. It sparked briefly and then the protodermis flowed out, formign the shape of a heavy hatchet. "This should help."

"Can it cut through protosteel?"

"...No."

"DXmn." Omzhare lost his footing, hitting his ehad against the wall as the ship lurched. The glacier surrounding them was beginning to haul the Fist of Elisara downstream, stripping parts of it into morraine as it did so. HArren adn Omzhare were safe in the heart of the ship - for now.

"We have to get upwards Harren!" he said. She nodded, and the two of them began to dig their way out...


[Tezra]

A surviving cyclonoid crept in close to Tezra's position. The tokia was unconscious... easy to steal from. Geziriseyinei reched out gingerly with his airy claws, and began to unbolt parts of the mech. His essence tingled as the metal entered his windstream...


[Jak]

I took the hilt of brothers sword and ignited it. The blade grew and extended out. Blue energy arched every where as I began to cut my way through the hatch, The lenses in the helmet automatically polarized to compensate for the bright light. I soon cut a good sized hole and crawled out into the snow. I ran towards the ship as it moved away from me. I leapt over the water and slammed the blade into the side of the ship to stop me as I slid. I climbed in through a shattered port hole.
"Hello! Can anybody here me."
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| February 28, 2010, 11:39 am
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Quoting Supreme commander Gideon Fucci

[Jak]

I took the hilt of brothers sword and ignited it. The blade grew and extended out. Blue energy arched every where as I began to cut my way through the hatch, The lenses in the helmet automatically polarized to compensate for the bright light. I soon cut a good sized hole and crawled out into the snow. I ran towards the ship as it moved away from me. I leapt over the water and slammed the blade into the side of the ship to stop me as I slid. I climbed in through a shattered port hole.
"Hello! Can anybody here me."

((he`s a pretty fast runner. miles away from the ship then blown back by a shockwave))

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| February 28, 2010, 3:47 pm
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Quoting The Abyss ~ My heart way heavy with the souls of the unforgotten
((he`s a pretty fast runner. miles away from the ship then blown back by a shockwave))


((He didn't say he got there quickly. He just got there. Could have been running for a good few minutes.))

[Julio & Shiva]

The bleeding figure limped towards Orbatroz, waving wildly. "Hey! You there!" He collapsed back into the snow. Orbatroz heard the man utter a curseword under his breath.
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| February 28, 2010, 5:28 pm
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Quoting Supreme commander Gideon Fucci

[Jak]

I took the hilt of brothers sword and ignited it. The blade grew and extended out. Blue energy arched every where as I began to cut my way through the hatch, The lenses in the helmet automatically polarized to compensate for the bright light. I soon cut a good sized hole and crawled out into the snow. I ran towards the ship as it moved away from me. I leapt over the water and slammed the blade into the side of the ship to stop me as I slid. I climbed in through a shattered port hole.
"Hello! Can anybody here me."


The sound of crying and mournful wails echoed through the ship - into Harren's ears. These were familiar voices!

"The villagers! They're still there! I can hear Elder Deku preching to them..."

The vault door ahead of them was ealed shut, forced to close as the ship crushed together. Most of the akonians had gone into the emergency bunker - an integral, vault-like part of the ship designed to protect during attacks and crashes. This core held a route to the escape pods - but was completely inaccessible any other way. By the sound of the akonians inside, that route was now blocked. They were running out of air.

[Omzhare] "We need to cut our way in... and we have no way to do it!" Omzhare punched the door in disgust.

Harren hammered her fist on it. "Deku! Deku! it's me, Harren!" On the other side, the villagers surged, anxious to talk to their Tokia warden. A babble of desperate voices barraged her through the walls...


...hello.... ....can anybody hear me....

[Omzhare] "I am General Omzhare of the Meta-Magnian spacefleet! There are a number of trapped akonians within the crash vault and they cannot escape! We have no way of cutting through!" Omzhare shouted to the open air, hoping this strange caller would listen...
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| February 28, 2010, 5:37 pm
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Quoting Gringat the Repugnant

The sound of crying and mournful wails echoed through the ship - into Harren's ears. These were familiar voices!

"The villagers! They're still there! I can hear Elder Deku preching to them..."

The vault door ahead of them was ealed shut, forced to close as the ship crushed together. Most of the akonians had gone into the emergency bunker - an integral, vault-like part of the ship designed to protect during attacks and crashes. This core held a route to the escape pods - but was completely inaccessible any other way. By the sound of the akonians inside, that route was now blocked. They were running out of air.

[Omzhare] "We need to cut our way in... and we have no way to do it!" Omzhare punched the door in disgust.

Harren hammered her fist on it. "Deku! Deku! it's me, Harren!" On the other side, the villagers surged, anxious to talk to their Tokia warden. A babble of desperate voices barraged her through the walls...


...hello.... ....can anybody hear me....

[Omzhare] "I am General Omzhare of the Meta-Magnian spacefleet! There are a number of trapped akonians within the crash vault and they cannot escape! We have no way of cutting through!" Omzhare shouted to the open air, hoping this strange caller would listen...

[Jak]

"Ah General. I will be there soon." I brought up a schematic of the ship. They were two rooms over. I cut through the door and continued to the other wall climbing over obstacles. I began cutting through the wall, smoke and sparks flying every where. The metal smoldered and glowed white hot. I kicked the slab of metal from the hole into the opposite wall. I stepped through making sure i didn't touch the metal. On the other side was the general and a blue Tokia.

I looked them over. Both were injured, but nothing to serious. "So, I heard you needed an opening.
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| February 28, 2010, 11:39 pm
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((http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=llgBBgKSRLo&fea
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[Acose]
he woke up dazed and confused, he attempted to get to his feet and dizzily fell back. when he rolled over the room came into foccus and he saw a cycloniod attaking Tezra. getting up he stumbled and fell forward slightly. the room began to spin again but he took control; grabing the electro-magnetic-pulse blaster of an unconsious solider and bringing it to his eye, he took aim.

Crash.
Boom.
the power raged through the air, singing oxygen molecules as it went. went the well aimed shot made contact with the turned back of the cyclonoid it arced back in pain as its body began melting and corroding and its mind atomized. it fell to the ground and he walked toward Tezra.
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| March 1, 2010, 4:30 pm
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Quoting Supreme commander Gideon Fucci
[Jak]

"Ah General. I will be there soon." I brought up a schematic of the ship. They were two rooms over. I cut through the door and continued to the other wall climbing over obstacles. I began cutting through the wall, smoke and sparks flying every where. The metal smoldered and glowed white hot. I kicked the slab of metal from the hole into the opposite wall. I stepped through making sure i didn't touch the metal. On the other side was the general and a blue Tokia.

I looked them over. Both were injured, but nothing to serious. "So, I heard you needed an opening.


[Omzhare] The general scored an X on the metal with a sharp finger. "That, I beleive, is the oppertune point. Hopefully all of the Akonians can get out... Although I fear not all of them managed to strap themselves in."
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| March 2, 2010, 4:56 pm
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Quoting The Abyss ~ My heart way heavy with the souls of the unforgotten
((http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=llgBBgKSRLo&fea
ture=PlayList&p=DFBDF24B
048A3FCD&index=0&playnext=1))

[Acose]
he woke up dazed and confused, he attempted to get to his feet and dizzily fell back. when he rolled over the room came into foccus and he saw a cycloniod attaking Tezra. getting up he stumbled and fell forward slightly. the room began to spin again but he took control; grabing the electro-magnetic-pulse blaster of an unconsious solider and bringing it to his eye, he took aim.

Crash.
Boom.
the power raged through the air, singing oxygen molecules as it went. went the well aimed shot made contact with the turned back of the cyclonoid it arced back in pain as its body began melting and corroding and its mind atomized. it fell to the ground and he walked toward Tezra.



The cyclonoid's essence left stinging droplets in the air. Tezra's hardsuit was open, meticulously picked apart. The cyclonoid, thinking Tezra was dead, had not touched her. They had no interest in a dead body. You could no longer cause them pain.
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| March 2, 2010, 5:00 pm
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the creatures body disintegrated into nothing ness, as Acose bent over Tezra. He disconected her and shook her wildly by the shoulders "Tezra, wake up!" he could see her slowly coming to as her eyes gradualy opened. "W- what hap-pend?"
"She crashed. The shock must have dislodged part of the northern glacier as I can already fleel her moving under our feet."
she looked up at him dazed and confused. she most likely had suffered from some brain ingury due to the violent impact.
"Come now, get up on your feet. When we were first attacked I sent out a message to your brother for help, he should be here with transport in a few hours. his assult ship is quite grand."

[Callidan]he sat in darkened despair, a single light above his head when the radio crackled to life: "Three hours, sir, and we`ll arrive."
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| March 2, 2010, 6:35 pm
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Quoting The Abyss ~ My heart way heavy with the souls of the unforgotten
the creatures body disintegrated into nothing ness, as Acose bent over Tezra. He disconected her and shook her wildly by the shoulders "Tezra, wake up!" he could see her slowly coming to as her eyes gradualy opened. "W- what hap-pend?"
"She crashed. The shock must have dislodged part of the northern glacier as I can already fleel her moving under our feet."
she looked up at him dazed and confused. she most likely had suffered from some brain ingury due to the violent impact.
"Come now, get up on your feet. When we were first attacked I sent out a message to your brother for help, he should be here with transport in a few hours. his assult ship is quite grand."

[Callidan]he sat in darkened despair, a single light above his head when the radio crackled to life: "Three hours, sir, and we`ll arrive."




[Julio] "You're sure?"

[Shiva] "Lifesigns detected. Akonian."

[Julio] "Are they... Tokia, or just Akonian Akonians?"

[Shiva] "Current definition: Tokia. Requires Update. Invalid reference."

[Julio] "...Right..." Julio rounded a small, icy hill. The wreckage of the ship smouldered about a mile away, to the north. He had skirted about a quarter of the way around from where he had landed, with only a faulty A.I and a psychotic tokia for company. And Orbatroz wasn't looking to healthy... HE winced as another round of hacking coughs resounded from inside the strange tokia's armour.

Julio stopped dead. He saw one of the mechs down, and two figres there... He ran forward, limping slightly on his damaged leg. "Acose! Tezra! It's me, Julio!!!" He waves his arms to them.
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| March 3, 2010, 10:10 am
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[Acose & Tezra]
when Tezra had refused to stand on herown two feet Acose was forced to sling her over his shoulder. the part of the ship they had been in had erupted all over the ice sheet and they were now open to the cold northern air. it spiked and tore at Acoses throaght and lungs(for Tezra had fallen asleep on his shoulder)
"Come on Tez, lets go that way-" he pointed east, "-i see some people in the distance. maybe there were surrvivors..."
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| March 3, 2010, 4:55 pm
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Quoting Gringat the Repugnant

[Omzhare] The general scored an X on the metal with a sharp finger. "That, I beleive, is the oppertune point. Hopefully all of the Akonians can get out... Although I fear not all of them managed to strap themselves in."

[Jak]

"Any one on the other side of that door had better move." I twirled the energy blade on my fingers and drove the blade through the door.And began to cut the door. Sparks began to fly in all directions as the blade super heated the metal. "Shield your eyes" I called. There was an explosion of sparks and light as began to cut through the bolt on the other side. When I finished, motioned for the others to step back. "All those on the other side should stand clear of the door." I heard the shuffle of feat and groans of pain. I touched my hand lightly against the door and gave a slight push. The door fell inward, making a metallic clang as it hit the ground. I stepped in first and motioned for the akonians to leave.
"Common. We're getting you out of here."
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| March 3, 2010, 5:18 pm
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Quoting Supreme commander Gideon Fucci
[Jak]

"Any one on the other side of that door had better move." I twirled the energy blade on my fingers and drove the blade through the door.And began to cut the door. Sparks began to fly in all directions as the blade super heated the metal. "Shield your eyes" I called. There was an explosion of sparks and light as began to cut through the bolt on the other side. When I finished, motioned for the others to step back. "All those on the other side should stand clear of the door." I heard the shuffle of feat and groans of pain. I touched my hand lightly against the door and gave a slight push. The door fell inward, making a metallic clang as it hit the ground. I stepped in first and motioned for the akonians to leave.
"Common. We're getting you out of here."


[Harren] "Back the way you came, right?" The akonian villagers came out, crowding around Harren and staring in awe and fear at the other two. Harren was barely taller than them.
"I need to go back in there... who's left?"

She disappeared inside the vault for a minute, and then reappeared. "Not good. There are several wounded - people who didn't manage to strap themselves down during the crash... Elder Mylus is dead..." Murmurs and blessing began to murmur through the crowd.

"Farewell, my sister." ... "Drothmarr take you under his wing"... "She was always there for me"..."As if she had always been there"..."Don't worry now Theirin. The tokia are here now..."..."Where's father?"..."I wish Mezzinus was here..."

That stung.

Omzhare asessed the wounds. "Skeletal fractures. Wire and nerve snappings. Several skin tears - nothing any medic won;t be able to fix quickly. Those who are alive now will make it... the time it's taken for us... those with the worse injuries are already dead..." He looked to Jak. "We are not far from the Talons' Port, Tokia. They have medical facilities there do they not?"
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| March 3, 2010, 5:37 pm
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Quoting Gringat the Repugnant

[Harren] "Back the way you came, right?" The akonian villagers came out, crowding around Harren and staring in awe and fear at the other two. Harren was barely taller than them.
"I need to go back in there... who's left?"

She disappeared inside the vault for a minute, and then reappeared. "Not good. There are several wounded - people who didn't manage to strap themselves down during the crash... Elder Mylus is dead..." Murmurs and blessing began to murmur through the crowd.

"Farewell, my sister." ... "Drothmarr take you under his wing"... "She was always there for me"..."As if she had always been there"..."Don't worry now Theirin. The tokia are here now..."..."Where's father?"..."I wish Mezzinus was here..."

That stung.

Omzhare asessed the wounds. "Skeletal fractures. Wire and nerve snappings. Several skin tears - nothing any medic won;t be able to fix quickly. Those who are alive now will make it... the time it's taken for us... those with the worse injuries are already dead..." He looked to Jak. "We are not far from the Talons' Port, Tokia. They have medical facilities there do they not?"

[Jak]

I nodded. I tapped my radio and linked to there control center."Jak to Talons' Port. I need a multiple medical transports to these coordinates asap. I need emergency medical teams on stand by and facilities for refugees. I will also need transports for those that have not been wounded. Over"

"Talons' Port Control copies all. Mobilizing medical teams and transports now. Transports will arrive in ten minutes. Over."

"Copy that." I turned to the others. "Transports are on the way. medical crews on stand by. We're not leaving anyone behind."
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| March 4, 2010, 9:56 am
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Quoting The Abyss ~ My heart way heavy with the souls of the unforgotten
[Acose & Tezra]
when Tezra had refused to stand on herown two feet Acose was forced to sling her over his shoulder. the part of the ship they had been in had erupted all over the ice sheet and they were now open to the cold northern air. it spiked and tore at Acoses throaght and lungs(for Tezra had fallen asleep on his shoulder)
"Come on Tez, lets go that way-" he pointed east, "-i see some people in the distance. maybe there were surrvivors..."


Tezra's comm crackled into life, Harren's voice on the other side. "Tezra? Tezra, are you there? I'm with the akonians and Omzhare. Some Planetside Tokia are helping us. Where's Julio? Can you hear me??"
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| March 4, 2010, 11:40 am
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Quoting Gringat the Repugnant

Tezra's comm crackled into life, Harren's voice on the other side. "Tezra? Tezra, are you there? I'm with the akonians and Omzhare. Some Planetside Tokia are helping us. Where's Julio? Can you hear me??"

Acose jiggled Tezra in his arms as he tried to detach her comm-link.
"This is Acose, Tezra has been badly injured and is unconsious. Julio leapt --with many others-- at the last minute.Their fate is unknown. More than likely he perished."
Acose continued his trek over the never ending ice sheets, not seeming to be going anywhere; it all looked the same. his destination --the figures on the horizon-- never growing nearer.
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| March 4, 2010, 3:39 pm
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Quoting The Abyss ~ My heart way heavy with the souls of the unforgotten
Acose jiggled Tezra in his arms as he tried to detach her comm-link.
"This is Acose, Tezra has been badly injured and is unconsious. Julio leapt --with many others-- at the last minute.Their fate is unknown. More than likely he perished."
Acose continued his trek over the never ending ice sheets, not seeming to be going anywhere; it all looked the same. his destination --the figures on the horizon-- never growing nearer.


((Dude. Look up! Julio, Orbatroz and Shiva have found Tezra and Acose. Julio is shouting and waving to them.))

[Harren] "Jak's taking us out of the ship, but I don't know where we're gonna come out. Keep in contact Acose. We need to get some of the villagers to the medical facilities underground as soon as possible."
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| March 5, 2010, 12:17 pm
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they had gotten closer now and Acose began to hear the cries of the figures--one must have been julio! ..at least someone survived the drop. "I hope this Jak is one to be trusted. I sure isee julio on ahead. Doesnt look too beat up" the weight of Tezra`s body was growing to much to handle. he heard her murrmer something in her sleep. at least she was alive...
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| March 5, 2010, 4:24 pm
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Quoting The Abyss ~ My heart way heavy with the souls of the unforgotten
they had gotten closer now and Acose began to hear the cries of the figures--one must have been julio! ..at least someone survived the drop. "I hope this Jak is one to be trusted. I sure isee julio on ahead. Doesnt look too beat up" the weight of Tezra`s body was growing to much to handle. he heard her murrmer something in her sleep. at least she was alive...


[Julio] The sirrushian motioned to the other two. "I recognise these two! I'm coming!"

[Shiva] "Threat detected."

[Julio] "What!? No! Those are my friends!"

[Shiva] "Readying weapons."

[Julio] "ARGH! Abort! Abort! Take no action!"

A gun flicked up out of the android's wrist and pointed towards the two stricken tokia.

"Sxxx," said Julio, jumping into the way of the oncoming missile...

...

The akonians winced, as one, as an explosion rocked the ship.

[Omzhare] "The glacier will be destroying the engines... There will be a lot of chronodermis escaping." He closed his eyes, trying to keep calm. "If that is not contained, I can only imagine what will happen to the area..."

...

[Ezru] Ezru got up, his ears ringing. That ship had finally landed, then, and not well. He let out a dry chuckle, and strode through the tunnels towards the Mortrag Glacier. Just following the alarms and screaming akonians. Those who got into his way were swatted like cavernflies into the metal walls...

The ship was above him now. Several peices had sunk to his level. The renosphere was destroyed, the ship now filling it. Its very tip - the engine section - jutted out of the top. The town beneath was completely crushed, and the buildings that weren't soon would be by glacial rock and ice. It was a scene of utter devastation - and doubtless, soon, the cyclonoids would find this way into the caverns, and no amount of repelling doors, tokia, or turrets would save them now...

He looked up at the mass of the ship. In the distance, a house-sized chunk of icy shrapnel plummeted to the floor below, giving a muffled crash sound. The sound of creaking and groaning filled the air. There were no tokia in sight. Good.

Just then, the glacier cut into the ship's engines. Chronodermis cascaded down - and the heavy silver liquid hit Ezru, dead on...
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| March 5, 2010, 5:17 pm
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Quoting Gringat the Repugnant

[Julio] The sirrushian motioned to the other two. "I recognise these two! I'm coming!"

[Shiva] "Threat detected."

[Julio] "What!? No! Those are my friends!"

[Shiva] "Readying weapons."

[Julio] "ARGH! Abort! Abort! Take no action!"

A gun flicked up out of the android's wrist and pointed towards the two stricken tokia.

"Sxxx," said Julio, jumping into the way of the oncoming missile...

((his character isnt a dumb machine remember it is basicly a tokia with a different body and computing software. an advanced ai with free will jon said...repededly. i actualy dont see the difference between him and a tokia as they`re both machines))

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| March 5, 2010, 7:26 pm
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((I did say that indeed. And I will enforce that if necessary. Or do I need to bring in ND-00 Nidhogg with its three personalities to show you just how much I prefer my mechs to have free will.))
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| March 5, 2010, 7:39 pm
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Quoting John the Imaginative
((I did say that indeed. And I will enforce that if necessary. Or do I need to bring in ND-00 Nidhogg with its three personalities to show you just how much I prefer my mechs to have free will.))

((hey Johns back))
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| March 5, 2010, 7:45 pm
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Quoting Supreme commander Gideon Fucci
((hey Johns back))

((i know when i first read it all i could think of was "duex ex machina" and darthvaders theme :P. impecable timing, realy))
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| March 5, 2010, 7:48 pm
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Quoting Gringat the Repugnant

((Dude. Look up! Julio, Orbatroz and Shiva have found Tezra and Acose. Julio is shouting and waving to them.))

[Harren] "Jak's taking us out of the ship, but I don't know where we're gonna come out. Keep in contact Acose. We need to get some of the villagers to the medical facilities underground as soon as possible."

[Jak]

We arrived at a gaping hole in the ship. I could see the medical transports on the horizon.
"There here." The first ship landed. The rear hatch opened and tokia and akonians in white armor and red patches on there shoulders jumped out carrying stretchers.
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| March 5, 2010, 7:56 pm
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Quoting John the Imaginative
((I did say that indeed. And I will enforce that if necessary. Or do I need to bring in ND-00 Nidhogg with its three personalities to show you just how much I prefer my mechs to have free will.))


((No... Shiva got knocked on the head and is now malfunctioning. If you look up, you'll see that happened...

Good to see you back dude! Maybe you could put some sense back into him. And Julio. And... Telossen, Merlonus, Fenrir (Those two have their own storyline now :D ) ))
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| March 6, 2010, 10:00 am
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Quoting The Abyss ~ My heart way heavy with the souls of the unforgotten
Quoting Gringat the Repugnant

[Julio] The sirrushian motioned to the other two. "I recognise these two! I'm coming!"

[Shiva] "Threat detected."

[Julio] "What!? No! Those are my friends!"

[Shiva] "Readying weapons."

[Julio] "ARGH! Abort! Abort! Take no action!"

A gun flicked up out of the android's wrist and pointed towards the two stricken tokia.

"Sxxx," said Julio, jumping into the way of the oncoming missile...

((his character isnt a dumb machine remember it is basicly a tokia with a different body and computing software. an advanced ai with free will jon said...repededly. i actualy dont see the difference between him and a tokia as they`re both machines))


((The difference is that Akonians are alive. They grow, and are made of naturally growing cybernetics, using both proteins and circuits. Shiva was made by the akonians, and he is a machine. An artificial intelligence. At the moment though, he's been knocked senseless and has temporarily gone back to "dumb machine" mode.))
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| March 6, 2010, 10:04 am
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[Jak]

More of the craft landed. Crash carts were passing with akonians from the ship into the medical craft. Soon only the three tokia and two dozen akonians remained. The last transport lowered its ramp and the Akonians piled in. I pushed the general and the other Tokia towards the transports. "Go. I will search for any other survivors." I lied. I had some unfinished business to attend to in the underground.
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| March 6, 2010, 12:07 pm
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[Acose & Tezra]
He saw two misiles come straight towards him. he considered tossing Tezra aside and taking the blow, his mechasuit would most likely stop it. but he could not allow any more harm to come to her, he had been sent for just the opposite and she probably would not surrvive another head injury. all this was thought instintaniously. he drew his pistol, substandard issuse given only has the highest of praises, and took fire! the third bullet released hit its target (and not a momment tooo soon) the warhead detonated only a quarter mile from where he was standing. putting his finger to his comm-link he spoke: "Julio! Julio is that you! WHAT THE HXLL WAS THAT!?"

[Orbatroz]
He stepped out behind Shiva, his already high stature grown larger by the stasis-mech he addorned. grabing him with massive mechanicle hand, he turned Shiva around to meet his gaze
"What the hxll has gotten into you?!"
((btw i have him sitting on my desk nearly finished))
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