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Bara Magna VII
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((230 comments is just about enough, I think. Man we went through that one fast. Here's the next installment - ready to carry on with that next plot you guys have been cooking up.))
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| November 15, 2009, 10:27 am
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((New thread. The old one got too big. Where's that plot you were cooking up, John? Let's play it out!
is Surt really reformed?
Will Rames ever win Telzira's heart?
Who is this mysterious Zenius?
Will Fenrir ever stop being a grumpy old fart?
Anjd what happened to the Nomads, anyway?

Tune in next time on BRC!))

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| November 15, 2009, 10:31 am
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((So how big of a time gap should we have?))
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| November 15, 2009, 5:13 pm
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Quoting John the Imaginative
((So how big of a time gap should we have?))

((36 years--its enough time for something[s] substantial to happen:)))
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| November 15, 2009, 8:36 pm
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Quoting The Abyss [formaly jake riedke]
((36 years--its enough time for something[s] substantial to happen:)))


((That's too much though. I figured like 5 months to at most about 3 years.))
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| November 15, 2009, 8:40 pm
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Quoting John the Imaginative

((That's too much though. I figured like 5 months to at most about 3 years.))

((nah.cuz with mine we can do stuff without the need of explanation :)))
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| November 15, 2009, 8:41 pm
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Quoting John the Imaginative

((That's too much though. I figured like 5 months to at most about 3 years.))

Agreed
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| November 15, 2009, 8:41 pm
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Quoting Supreme commander Gideon Fucci
Agreed


((BRACKETS!!!))
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| November 15, 2009, 8:42 pm
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Quoting Supreme commander Gideon Fucci
Agreed

((thaks. but this is getting to be a problem with you and the bracets...you might get minorly punished:P))
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| November 15, 2009, 8:43 pm
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Quoting The Abyss [formaly jake riedke]
((nah.cuz with mine we can do stuff without the need of explanation :)))


((Yes, but you forget that a massive amount of stuff can happen in 36 years. And you forget, Fenrir is ANCIENT. Whenever he uses Vampira, that takes years off of his life. I'd rather not have him dead.))
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| November 15, 2009, 8:46 pm
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Quoting John the Imaginative

((Yes, but you forget that a massive amount of stuff can happen in 36 years. And you forget, Fenrir is ANCIENT. Whenever he uses Vampira, that takes years off of his life. I'd rather not have him dead.))

((how about not dead but dieing:))
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| November 15, 2009, 8:48 pm
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Quoting The Abyss [formaly jake riedke]
((how about not dead but dieing:))


((He already is. He's well over five hundred years old.))
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| November 15, 2009, 8:52 pm
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Quoting John the Imaginative

((He already is. He's well over five hundred years old.))

((No wonder he is so grouchy))
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| November 15, 2009, 8:54 pm
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Quoting John the Imaginative

((He already is. He's well over five hundred years old.))

((many people on bara magna [canon] are well over 100 000))
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| November 15, 2009, 8:56 pm
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Quoting The Abyss [formaly jake riedke]
((many people on bara magna [canon] are well over 100 000))


((That's his true age. He's used Vampira many times over before now. His physical age is nearly 300,000.))
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| November 15, 2009, 9:01 pm
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Quoting John the Imaginative

((That's his true age. He's used Vampira many times over before now. His physical age is nearly 300,000.))


((Any number less than 10 years seems like a good number. The group has split. Telzira has followed her dreams and become a Glatorian fighter for the fire tribe, along with Rames. The two have grown close.
Fenrir has been doing what Fenrir does.
And Ronin and Kira... have perhaps also settled down in Vulcanus?
So the four of them have what could almost be a normal life?))
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| November 16, 2009, 8:15 am
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((And then I can carry out my rather twisted, evil belongs-in-a-horror-film Plot I've been cooking up over the last month?? >:D ))
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| November 16, 2009, 8:27 am
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Quoting Supreme commander Gideon Fucci
Agreed


((Let's just say it was long enough to let everyone settle down into a pretty much normal life in Vulcanus. Nothing's really happened in years - That will change once I put my plot into motion, hopefully ^^

Can we try, in this one, not to be so insanely powerful as before? It's better to let your characters get defeated sometimes. makes the story more interesting that way.))
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| November 16, 2009, 11:48 am
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((So. Here's what I think we shoudl have:
--Fenrir is becoming increasingly ill and fears his end is coming. He is significantly weaker than before in the story, and his rages have become worse and worse.

--Surt is now in a suit of armour, but constantly has to be performing rituals to keep his spirit secure.

--Telzira has discovered that she can retract the wings. She has followed her original ambitions to become an arena fighter, and mainly fights with Rames for Vulcanus.

--Rames has returned to the arena with Telzira, and the two are now in a firm relationship with each other. She teaches him how to use his powers and he teaches her glatorian fighting skills.

--Ronin and Kira have also settled down in Vulcanus, and have become friends with Telzira and Rames. Ronin misses being out in the wilds however. Kira and Telzira get along especially well - telling each other things they don't want the menfolk to hear.

I won't be specific about how much time has passed.
If anyone want to change anything about their characters, say so. If not, let's play it out this way - it's an ideal set-up for The Plot >:) ))
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| November 16, 2009, 11:59 am
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((agreed! i`ll add one thing tho
-the tribe of vorox is now their trusted freids and allies.they rage within the hundreds.they are led by mesh and his mate persephoney))
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| November 16, 2009, 2:39 pm
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Quoting The Abyss [formaly jake riedke]
((agreed! i`ll add one thing tho
-the tribe of vorox is now their trusted freids and allies.they rage within the hundreds.they are led by mesh and his mate persephoney))

((Persephoney is Mesh's MOM! Ewwwww.))
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| November 16, 2009, 2:46 pm
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Quoting Gringat The Stormlord
((Persephoney is Mesh's MOM! Ewwwww.))

(ive gone over this they are like wolves they crawl all over each other.ps wanna get started))
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| November 16, 2009, 2:49 pm
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Quoting The Abyss [formaly jake riedke]
(ive gone over this they are like wolves they crawl all over each other.ps wanna get started))


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=C4yzLeKhRgY

Telzira woke alone, the cold light of dawn filtering through the shutters of her bedroom, throwing slats of light across her equipment. Armour, a shield. A spear. The trappings of an arena glatorian. Five battle-won shields hung on the wall above.
She yawned. She knew she'd been getting enough sleep, but still she felt tired every morning. She hadn't ever felt fully revitalised for months now. It showed in her eyes.

It was a short walk to Rames' hut: now the home of the second-best Vulcanusian Glatorian, under, of course, the famous Ackar. His home was modest, especially considering how much he earned in matches. She knew he was saving it for a better house for the both of them. The thought made her smile.

She knocked on the house's wooden door. The sound of clattering came from inside, and the door opened. Telzira's smile broadened even further.
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| November 16, 2009, 2:56 pm
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Quoting Gringat The Stormlord

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=C4yzLeKhRgY

Telzira woke alone, the cold light of dawn filtering through the shutters of her bedroom, throwing slats of light across her equipment. Armour, a shield. A spear. The trappings of an arena glatorian. Five battle-won shields hung on the wall above.
She yawned. She knew she'd been getting enough sleep, but still she felt tired every morning. She hadn't ever felt fully revitalised for months now. It showed in her eyes.

It was a short walk to Rames' hut: now the home of the second-best Vulcanusian Glatorian, under, of course, the famous Ackar. His home was modest, especially considering how much he earned in matches. She knew he was saving it for a better house for the both of them. The thought made her smile.

She knocked on the house's wooden door. The sound of clattering came from inside, and the door opened. Telzira's smile broadened even further.


((Fenrir's actually calmer than he used to be.))

Fenrir

The winds of change were in the air, and I could feel them. "Surt, ready to head out?"

Surt

"Where are going brother?"

Fenrir

I picked up my staff in my gnarled, clawed hands. "To visit some old friends." I headed out the door, and saw the group I was in control in. A small, yet thriving tribe of Vampirik, brought back together after years of wandering. The tribe was set up outside the former entrance of Drachen's realm, the unofficial protectors of his resting place. Actually, we were doing better than thriving, we were expanding. We eventually might actually be large enough to become recognized.

Surt

"You don't mean?"

Fenrir

"Yes, I do. Our old traveling buddies."
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| November 16, 2009, 3:08 pm
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i heard a knocking at my door and knew telzira was here to say good morning.
i hurried to asemble the rest of my armor but i couldn`t find my loincloth! instead i wrapped my blanket around my waist and answered the door.she stood there smiling brightly--a very very pretty smile indeed-and kissed me a happy good morning "why hello to you too" i said a little startled "and to what pleasure may i give to this happy rendesvous?" i said jokingly as i held her in my arms.ahh it had been a rather eventful few years but i do think things worked out for the better-atleast concerning myself...fenrir could be better...
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| November 16, 2009, 3:08 pm
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Quoting The Abyss [formaly jake riedke]
i heard a knocking at my door and knew telzira was here to say good morning.
i hurried to asemble the rest of my armor but i couldn`t find my loincloth! instead i wrapped my blanket around my waist and answered the door.she stood there smiling brightly--a very very pretty smile indeed-and kissed me a happy good morning "why hello to you too" i said a little startled "and to what pleasure may i give to this happy rendesvous?" i said jokingly as i held her in my arms.ahh it had been a rather eventful few years but i do think things worked out for the better-atleast concerning myself...fenrir could be better...


"Just came to say hi." She smiled, and giggled a little. Rames may have noticed how dull her eyes were, however. "I'm up against Gelu today, remember?"

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| November 16, 2009, 3:11 pm
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Quoting The Abyss [formaly jake riedke]
i heard a knocking at my door and knew telzira was here to say good morning.
i hurried to asemble the rest of my armor but i couldn`t find my loincloth! instead i wrapped my blanket around my waist and answered the door.she stood there smiling brightly--a very very pretty smile indeed-and kissed me a happy good morning "why hello to you too" i said a little startled "and to what pleasure may i give to this happy rendesvous?" i said jokingly as i held her in my arms.ahh it had been a rather eventful few years but i do think things worked out for the better-atleast concerning myself...fenrir could be better...


Fenrir

I left the village in charge of my second-in-command, a very able fellow with the tribe's well being in mind. No thoughts of war or conquest. Surt and I left, Surt carrying his "materials" and I, my staff, my swordstaves kept in a chest at home. I was proficient enough with a staff to beat off bandits, and most would think twice before starting a fight with Surt. Volcanus was a few days from here. "Heh, won't they be surprised."
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| November 16, 2009, 3:14 pm
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Quoting Gringat The Stormlord

"Just came to say hi." She smiled, and giggled a little. Rames may have noticed how dull her eyes were, however. "I'm up against Gelu today, remember?"

((he`s retired ...but we`ll forget that^_^))
"Ohh yes he is a valient fighter indeed"i said mocking her atempt to say she was inadequette
"tell me honey...has anything happend recently you`d want to tell me?"i said when i noticed the look n her eyes past the cheer
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| November 16, 2009, 3:16 pm
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Quoting The Abyss [formaly jake riedke]
((he`s retired ...but we`ll forget that^_^))
"Ohh yes he is a valient fighter indeed"i said mocking her atempt to say she was inadequette
"tell me honey...has anything happend recently you`d want to tell me?"i said when i noticed the look n her eyes past the cheer


((Gresh then :) ))

"Um, no. Why?" She blinked at Rames. "Is something wrong?"
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| November 16, 2009, 3:20 pm
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Quoting Gringat The Stormlord

((Gresh then :) ))

"Um, no. Why?" She blinked at Rames. "Is something wrong?"


Fenrir

"Eh, this is taking too long. Let's speed it up a bit."

Surt

"Let's go."

We both began to run. I used my staff for when I needed to clear an obstacle. I may be old, but I'm still in shape. At the rate we were going, we'd make it before the next match.
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| November 16, 2009, 3:24 pm
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Quoting Gringat The Stormlord

((Gresh then :) ))

"Um, no. Why?" She blinked at Rames. "Is something wrong?"

"i see it in your eyes...having THE dreams again?"
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| November 16, 2009, 3:36 pm
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Quoting The Abyss [formaly jake riedke]
"i see it in your eyes...having THE dreams again?"


She scratched the back of her neck. "Actually, no. I'm just feeling really tired, even if I've been asleep all day. I'm not ill, so I have no idea what's going on..." She rubbed her eyes. "Anyways, I have to go. I'll be late if I don't hurry - guess I slept in. Are you coming to see the fight, or..." She yawned. "Sorry... Hm. No... You're coming to see the fight, Rames." She smirked. "Get your armour on! Hurry!" She pushed him back into the house playfully, and leaned back on the doorframe laughing slightly as Rames ambled around the place looking for his loincloth.
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| November 16, 2009, 4:43 pm
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Quoting Gringat The Stormlord

She scratched the back of her neck. "Actually, no. I'm just feeling really tired, even if I've been asleep all day. I'm not ill, so I have no idea what's going on..." She rubbed her eyes. "Anyways, I have to go. I'll be late if I don't hurry - guess I slept in. Are you coming to see the fight, or..." She yawned. "Sorry... Hm. No... You're coming to see the fight, Rames." She smirked. "Get your armour on! Hurry!" She pushed him back into the house playfully, and leaned back on the doorframe laughing slightly as Rames ambled around the place looking for his loincloth.

my sheet fell off and i dove under the bed "Ohh there it is!".i got up "lets go"
i slapped her on the but playfuly as payback for the pushand her feet studard."OOhh i forgot".i went into the hut and came back with thornax plants "these were a gift from the vorox"...
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| November 16, 2009, 5:07 pm
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Fenrir

We made it to the city gates. The guards initially barred us because of my appearance, but Surt walked up and let us pass. I went over to the arena, and got us some top notch seats up close to the action. And close to where Telzira will enter.

((Surt has extensively modified his armor. He's about 7-8 feet tall now.))
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| November 16, 2009, 5:16 pm
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Quoting The Abyss [formaly jake riedke]
my sheet fell off and i dove under the bed "Ohh there it is!".i got up "lets go"
i slapped her on the but playfuly as payback for the pushand her feet studard."OOhh i forgot".i went into the hut and came back with thornax plants "these were a gift from the vorox"...


She took them. She carried no thornax launcher -Heavens knew what she'd do if she was given one. A few of the pods started to orbit slowly about her.
"We should hurry." And with that, she ran, pulling Rames along like a ragdoll. The arena was close by, and alreayd the crowds were getting restless. Gresh was outside - obviously intimidated by the spinning thornax.

"I'm ready to go." Telzira said. Gresh nodded. They clashed blades in honour, and then proceeded inside. An agori appeared to take Rames to a speactators' box.

The fight began.
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| November 16, 2009, 5:17 pm
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Quoting Gringat The Stormlord

She took them. She carried no thornax launcher -Heavens knew what she'd do if she was given one. A few of the pods started to orbit slowly about her.
"We should hurry." And with that, she ran, pulling Rames along like a ragdoll. The arena was close by, and alreayd the crowds were getting restless. Gresh was outside - obviously intimidated by the spinning thornax.

"I'm ready to go." Telzira said. Gresh nodded. They clashed blades in honour, and then proceeded inside. An agori appeared to take Rames to a speactators' box.

The fight began.


Fenrir

We watched the fight in awe. Telzira's combat skills have definitely improved since we parted ways. The Thornax was a nice touch indeed.
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| November 16, 2009, 5:19 pm
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Quoting John the Imaginative
Fenrir

We made it to the city gates. The guards initially barred us because of my appearance, but Surt walked up and let us pass. I went over to the arena, and got us some top notch seats up close to the action. And close to where Telzira will enter.

((Surt has extensively modified his armor. He's about 7-8 feet tall now.))



Something wasn't right. Gresh was a competent glatorian, that much was true, but something seemed to be wrong with Telzira. A blow from gresh sent her thornax flying in all directions into the audience. Her cloak was ripped, and a thornax from gresh cannoned her into a boulder - her back making a sickening crunching noise against the hard rock. She gasped for breath, and repelled Gresh with a psychic blast. Gresh dodged, kicked, and sent her sprawling.

She got up quickly, leaped to her feet, but all spectators could see she was suddenly slow. Lethargic. She rammed Gresh with the butt of her spear, but he countered it and struck Telzira full in the stomach. She doubled over in pain and sank to her knees.

Gresh stopped, lowered his weapon. Despite being a competent glatorian, he still was rather soft and felt bad if he ever severely hurt his opponent. "Are you alright?" Telzira nodded, silently, and got back to her feet - although her legs were shaking. Gresh readied himself...
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| November 16, 2009, 5:36 pm
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Quoting Gringat The Stormlord


Something wasn't right. Gresh was a competent glatorian, that much was true, but something seemed to be wrong with Telzira. A blow from gresh sent her thornax flying in all directions into the audience. Her cloak was ripped, and a thornax from gresh cannoned her into a boulder - her back making a sickening crunching noise against the hard rock. She gasped for breath, and repelled Gresh with a psychic blast. Gresh dodged, kicked, and sent her sprawling.

She got up quickly, leaped to her feet, but all spectators could see she was suddenly slow. Lethargic. She rammed Gresh with the butt of her spear, but he countered it and struck Telzira full in the stomach. She doubled over in pain and sank to her knees.

Gresh stopped, lowered his weapon. Despite being a competent glatorian, he still was rather soft and felt bad if he ever severely hurt his opponent. "Are you alright?" Telzira nodded, silently, and got back to her feet - although her legs were shaking. Gresh readied himself...


Fenrir

"Something isn't right. Telzira's a better fighter than this. COME ON TELZIRA!!!!! WE KNOW YOU CAN DO BETTER!!!"
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| November 16, 2009, 5:39 pm
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Quoting John the Imaginative

Fenrir

We watched the fight in awe. Telzira's combat skills have definitely improved since we parted ways. The Thornax was a nice touch indeed.

i yelled from the stadium "REMEMBER NO POWERS1ITS AGAINST THE LAW! USE WHAT YOU SAID THAT FELLOW AGAMEMNON TOUGHT YOU!"i looked down to scratch my leg and fenrir was sitting below "why helo thee old freind!what have you been up to in your old age?"i saw his cane at his side.he was always telling everyone that 'it was for combat purposes' but we knew better...
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| November 16, 2009, 5:42 pm
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Quoting The Abyss [formaly jake riedke]
i yelled from the stadium "REMEMBER NO POWERS1ITS AGAINST THE LAW! USE WHAT YOU SAID THAT FELLOW AGAMEMNON TOUGHT YOU!"i looked down to scratch my leg and fenrir was sitting below "why helo thee old freind!what have you been up to in your old age?"i saw his cane at his side.he was always telling everyone that 'it was for combat purposes' but we knew better...


Fenrir

"Hello Rames. So still the lovebird like you always were? Any ideas about what's wrong with Telzira? She's usually better than this."
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| November 16, 2009, 5:48 pm
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"she says she not getting enough sleep...but i dont beleive her . and no i`m not bragging"
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| November 16, 2009, 5:57 pm
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Quoting The Abyss [formaly jake riedke]
"she say she not getting enough sleep...but i dont beleive her.and no i`m not bragging"


Fenrir

"I didn't say you were. I was just asking if you're still as obsessed with Telzira as you were before we parted ways."
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| November 16, 2009, 5:59 pm
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Quoting John the Imaginative

Fenrir

"I didn't say you were. I was just asking if you're still as obsessed with Telzira as you were before we parted ways."

"Oh i think you know the answer to that one" the fight raged on-she was`nt doing aswell as normal...
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| November 16, 2009, 6:02 pm
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Quoting John the Imaginative

Fenrir

"Hello Rames. So still the lovebird like you always were? Any ideas about what's wrong with Telzira? She's usually better than this."


Telzira readied her spear defensively, letting Gresh's attack break on her. His blow did, however, throw her weapon from her hands. She balled her fists. Gresh threw down his weapon to do the same, keeping it fair. The two were both extremely agile, and the next few seconds of martial combat were extremely complex, elegant, and captivated the entire crowd.

Gresh's blows were stronger than Telzira's however. She could feel herself getting weaker and weaker...

Gresh moved in for a final attack. Telzira looked almost finished, panting. The stubborn girl refused to back down, however, until...

There was a sudden surge of blackness - a surge that Surt and Fenrir found all too familiar. Telzira lunged forwards with animal-like vigour and grabbed Gresh by the chest. The Tesaran fell limp, suddenly, and Telzira's eyes shone brightly all of a sudden. She backed away from Gresh as if she'd seen a ghost...
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| November 16, 2009, 6:04 pm
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Quoting The Abyss [formaly jake riedke]
"Oh i think you know the answer to that one" the fight raged on-she was`nt doing aswell as normal...


Fenrir

"You seem to be doing fine, how are your powers doing?
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| November 16, 2009, 6:05 pm
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Quoting Gringat The Stormlord
Quoting John the Imaginative

Fenrir

"Hello Rames. So still the lovebird like you always were? Any ideas about what's wrong with Telzira? She's usually better than this."


Telzira readied her spear defensively, letting Gresh's attack break on her. His blow did, however, throw her weapon from her hands. She balled her fists. Gresh threw down his weapon to do the same, keeping it fair. The two were both extremely agile, and the next few seconds of martial combat were extremely complex, elegant, and captivated the entire crowd.

Gresh's blows were stronger than Telzira's however. She could feel herself getting weaker and weaker...

Gresh moved in for a final attack. Telzira looked almost finished, panting. The stubborn girl refused to back down, however, until...

There was a sudden surge of blackness - a surge that Surt and Fenrir found all too familiar. Telzira lunged forwards with animal-like vigour and grabbed Gresh by the chest. The Tesaran fell limp, suddenly, and Telzira's eyes shone brightly all of a sudden. She backed away from Gresh as if she'd seen a ghost...


Fenrir & Surt

"Not good. Not good at all."
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| November 16, 2009, 6:07 pm
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Quoting John the Imaginative

Fenrir & Surt

"Not good. Not good at all."


Her wings unfolded suddenly, in a spring of blades. Normally she kept them hidden, but now they there, bold as brass, for everyone to see. They... lengthened. A change seemed to grow over Telzira. The shadows started to creep up the sides of the arena. The agor began to panic.
She fell to her knees, and her feet lengthened, grew claws. Her back arched. Claws grew on her hands, and her eyes glowed an unearthly red. Spikes grew up out of her armour, and the beast she'd become let out a roar and took to the sky, and fled.

The entire area seemed to be being drained of energy...
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| November 16, 2009, 6:20 pm
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Quoting John the Imaginative
Quoting The Abyss [formaly jake riedke]
"Oh i think you know the answer to that one" the fight raged on-she was`nt doing aswell as normal...


Fenrir

"You seem to be doing fine, how are your powers doing?

"we`ll say ther`re...under control"
then i watched as darkness consumed my love
as it once had consumed me...and my heart sunk
in a faint wisper "ohh xxxxx"
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| November 16, 2009, 6:22 pm
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i watched in horor as the one i loved dearly turned into the monster i was"....."my jaw fell.i knew all too well what it felt like to be under the influence of darknes...
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| November 16, 2009, 6:25 pm
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Quoting The Abyss [formaly jake riedke]
i watched in horor as the one i loved dearly turned into the monster i was"....."my jaw fell.i knew all too well what it felt like to be under the influence of darknes...


A black silhouette fled over the sky and then dropped - to Telzira's house. Rames knew it.

Many of the agori were unconscious, and Fenrir, Surt and Rames all felt severely drained of energy - something unsettling for the two Vampirik, who had always before now been the ones doing the draining.

The silhoutte clambered into the building, using its wing-like forearms to climb, upside down. It found a bed - it smelled familiar. It then curled up and went to sleep. The spikes retracted, and Telzira was back to normal, asleep. Oblivious to the chaos she herself had caused outside.
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| November 16, 2009, 6:33 pm
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i rushed home to where i knew telzira must be. i saw her there onn th e bed.i tried to wake her but nothing would work...
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| November 16, 2009, 6:41 pm
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Quoting The Abyss [formaly jake riedke]
i rushed home to where i knew telzira must be. i saw her there onn th e bed.i tried to wake her but nothing would work...


We arrived.

Fenrir

"Out. NOW. Surt get ready for the ritual."
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| November 16, 2009, 6:48 pm
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Quoting The Abyss [formaly jake riedke]
i rushed home to where i knew telzira must be. i saw her there onn th e bed.i tried to wake her but nothing would work...


Telzira awoke suddenly, her eyes snapping open with a look of surprise. Her eyes were brighter and mroe awake than they'd been in weeks. "R-Rames?" She smiled. "Well, this was unexpected... what's wrong?"
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| November 16, 2009, 6:49 pm
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Quoting Gringat The Stormlord

Telzira awoke suddenly, her eyes snapping open with a look of surprise. Her eyes were brighter and mroe awake than they'd been in weeks. "R-Rames?" She smiled. "Well, this was unexpected... what's wrong?"

"You-you-you"i fell to my knees crying.my head rested on the body of telzira,half sitting in bed.
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| November 16, 2009, 6:54 pm
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Quoting The Abyss [formaly jake riedke]
"You-you-you"i fell to my knees crying.my head rested on the body of telzira,half sitting in bed.


"Umm..." Telzira looked down at him, even more confused. "Did... something happen? You lost a match?"
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| November 16, 2009, 6:58 pm
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Quoting Gringat The Stormlord

"Umm..." Telzira looked down at him, even more confused. "Did... something happen? You lost a match?"

"you..." i moaned "d-do you remember Just before defeating surt, what i was like?"i rose my head to look at her.
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| November 16, 2009, 7:04 pm
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Meanwhile, Surt finished making the circle and the runes.

Fenrir

"He's some information for you. A while back, I sent out call for the gathering of the Vampirik. 89% of the tribe came. I established us a home, Dhampir, near the sealed-off entrance to Drachen's realm is. That tribe is now expanding. Soon we will grow large enough to be allowed to build an arena. I became the leader. As such, I was granted special knowledge. Such as the ability to seal off Vampirik powers until the wielder is capable of controlling them. That is what we are doing here. Rames, out. If anyone other than me, Surt, and the target of the ability is in the room, bad things will happen to the bystander."
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| November 16, 2009, 7:13 pm
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"NO!!I DONT CARE!!" i yelled choking in my own tears "SHE NEEDS ME! I NEED HER!".they draged me out by my arms and sealed the door
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| November 16, 2009, 7:17 pm
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| November 16, 2009, 7:22 pm
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I rushed to Telzira's house with Kira hot on my heels. She was upset with what she had seen. And wanted to be by her friends side. I only cared that my sister was scared and that i had once had feelings for Telzira. The feelings had faded with time, but i still cared for her in the sense of friends. We arrived only to be stopped by Fenrir and Surt.
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| November 16, 2009, 7:24 pm
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Quoting The Abyss [formaly jake riedke]
"NO!!I DONT CARE!!" i yelled choking in my own tears "SHE NEEDS ME! I NEED HER!".they draged me out by my arms and sealed the door


Fenrir

"Lets begin. This may sting a bit. Aesir. Naer morst balor. Queo znae oweur. Hoewr voajwer." Light begin radiating from the circle, as if snow was rising from the floor.
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| November 16, 2009, 7:25 pm
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Quoting The Abyss [formaly jake riedke]
"NO!!I DONT CARE!!" i yelled choking in my own tears "SHE NEEDS ME! I NEED HER!".they draged me out by my arms and sealed the door

I put my hand on Rames shoulder."They can handle this. She will be just fine there is nothing to worry about."I reached out with my mind to calm him, My eyes turning a gray blue from the now permanent Icy color.
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| November 16, 2009, 7:33 pm
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Quoting Supreme commander Gideon Fucci
I put my hand on Rames shoulder."They can handle this. She will be just fine there is nothing to worry about."I reached out with my mind to calm him, My eyes turning a gray blue from the now permanent Icy color.

"NO!" i rushed at the door panting and weeping i turned "GET OUT OF MY HEAD! I NEED TO BE WITH HER!!!"
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| November 17, 2009, 10:41 am
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Quoting The Abyss [formaly jake riedke]
"NO!" i rushed at the door panting and weeping i turned "GET OUT OF MY HEAD! I NEED TO BE WITH HER!!!"


Telzira ahd nodded off while the circle was drawn, and woke with a start - jumping back at the sight of Fenrir...
...How different he'd become...
Runes glowed around her.
"What the..."
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| November 17, 2009, 1:14 pm
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Quoting Gringat The Stormlord

Telzira ahd nodded off while the circle was drawn, and woke with a start - jumping back at the sight of Fenrir...
...How different he'd become...
Runes glowed around her.
"What the..."

i burst into the room after ronins futile atempts to subdue me "stay still honey it`ll all be over in a second fenrir is expeirenced in this h-he`ll take care of you" i said with false hope trying to fool both myself and her,still weeping."be careful"i wispered to fenrir.it was true he was experienced in this sort of thing...but he was old and dieing...i feared for the worse.i could sense uncertainty aswell as fear in the hearts of my friends...
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| November 17, 2009, 1:34 pm
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Quoting The Abyss [formaly jake riedke]
^^



Telzira just looked more and more confused looking, and rather angry. "What the XXXX is going on here?"

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| November 17, 2009, 1:40 pm
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Quoting Gringat The Stormlord


Telzira just looked more and more confused looking, and rather angry. "What the XXXX is going on here?"

"honey please" i could just barely speak "think back to what i was like after the crystles attacked Drachens realm.." i could not contineu.a single tear swept down my face. i spoke clearly and determined "No Fenrir. it is i who must do this , you are too weak...it will kill you." i walked to telziras bed...
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| November 17, 2009, 1:49 pm
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Quoting The Abyss [formaly jake riedke]
"honey please" i could just barely speak "think back to what i was like after the crystles attacked Drachens realm.." i could not contineu.a single tear swept down my face. i spoke clearly and determined "No Fenrir. it is i who must do this , you are too weak...it will kill you." i walked to telziras bed...


"I was unconscious that time, remember?" She looked to Fenrir, who seemed just as angered by Rames' actions as she was. "Okay. Fine." She put a hand on Rames' shoulder. "What is it you have to do - and why is my room full of paint?"

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| November 17, 2009, 1:55 pm
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Quoting Gringat The Stormlord

"I was unconscious that time, remember?" She looked to Fenrir, who seemed just as angered by Rames' actions as she was. "Okay. Fine." She put a hand on Rames' shoulder. "What is it you have to do - and why is my room full of paint?"

"Y-you were posesd by evil...we must purge it" i said as i stroked her jaw line
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| November 17, 2009, 1:57 pm
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Quoting The Abyss [formaly jake riedke]
"Y-you were posesd by evil...we must purge it" i said as i stroked her jaw line


She stepped back, away from him. The last thing she wanted right now was for him to be stroking her. Putting him in a straight-cuirass would be more appropriate.
"...Right. And the evil spirit. Is it here now? Can we talk to it perhaps? No? Because it's not here is it! I think if I was possesed, I'd know. It's happened to me before now, several times. Basic training." She tapped him on the side of the head. "So stop freaking out, okay? You're too paranoid for your own good."
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| November 17, 2009, 2:08 pm
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Quoting Gringat The Stormlord

She stepped back, away from him. The last thing she wanted right now was for him to be stroking her. Putting him in a straight-cuirass would be more appropriate.
"...Right. And the evil spirit. Is it here now? Can we talk to it perhaps? No? Because it's not here is it! I think if I was possesed, I'd know. It's happened to me before now, several times. Basic training." She tapped him on the side of the head. "So stop freaking out, okay? You're too paranoid for your own good."

i was calmer for some reson "maybe so...but dont you remember the match with gresh?your wing grew back A-and you flew here.your eyes were glazed.you threw fenrir to the ground
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| November 17, 2009, 2:13 pm
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Quoting The Abyss [formaly jake riedke]
i was calmer for some reson "maybe so...but dont you remember the match with gresh?your wing grew back A-and you flew here.your eyes were glazed.you threw fenrir to the ground


"...What match with Gresh? That's not until tomorrow, right?"
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| November 17, 2009, 2:17 pm
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Quoting Gringat The Stormlord

"...What match with Gresh? That's not until tomorrow, right?"

"Ohhh.."i buried my face in my hands
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| November 17, 2009, 2:32 pm
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Quoting The Abyss [formaly jake riedke]
"Ohhh.."i buried my face in my hands


"..."
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| November 17, 2009, 2:38 pm
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Fenrir

"Allow me to explain. You apparently have gained Vampirik abilities to a degree. They are always uncontrollable at first, but they are always sealed away as I did now. Then they are unsealed later, when the manifested powers can be used against someone with the same powers. I'll unseal them when we're away from the town. There, you can fight someone with an area drain ability yourself."
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| November 17, 2009, 4:06 pm
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((Hey yall! Me is back! i think Onorekawea should come back, just cause im bored, but also cause maybe Telzira should go there for training in her new Vampirk abilities, er, something... [also, Fenir and Surt remind me of Full Metal Alchimest, lol]))
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| November 17, 2009, 4:42 pm
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Quoting Ben ~
((Hey yall! Me is back! i think Onorekawea should come back, just cause im bored, but also cause maybe Telzira should go there for training in her new Vampirk abilities, er, something... [also, Fenir and Surt remind me of Full Metal Alchimest, lol]))


((They should be reminding you. THat was kinda my idea. However, you should keep Ono away from where Telzira will be training, it will be very aggressive combat. With energy being drained from everyone around, except her opponent.))
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| November 17, 2009, 4:47 pm
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Quoting John the Imaginative

((They should be reminding you. THat was kinda my idea. However, you should keep Ono away from where Telzira will be training, it will be very aggressive combat. With energy being drained from everyone around, except her opponent.))

((anybody home?))

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| November 17, 2009, 6:00 pm
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Quoting John the Imaginative
Fenrir

"Allow me to explain. You apparently have gained Vampirik abilities to a degree. They are always uncontrollable at first, but they are always sealed away as I did now. Then they are unsealed later, when the manifested powers can be used against someone with the same powers. I'll unseal them when we're away from the town. There, you can fight someone with an area drain ability yourself."


She scowled at Surt. "This is -your- fault Surt." Surt felt the air tighten around him slightly, threateningly.
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| November 17, 2009, 6:18 pm
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Quoting Gringat The Stormlord

She scowled at Surt. "This is -your- fault Surt." Surt felt the air tighten around him slightly, threateningly.


Surt

"You think you have problems? I have to do rituals every few days to keep my spirit bound to the armor."
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| November 17, 2009, 7:41 pm
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Quoting John the Imaginative

Surt

"You think you have problems? I have to do rituals every few days to keep my spirit bound to the armor."

"STOP WHINING YOU PETHETIC WRETCH!!"
"Sorry my emotions got the better of me."
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| November 17, 2009, 8:08 pm
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((GTG))
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| November 17, 2009, 8:11 pm
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Quoting The Abyss [formaly jake riedke]
"STOP WHINING YOU PETHETIC WRETCH!!"
"Sorry my emotions got the better of me."


Surt

I grab Rames by the collar. "You have no idea how hard this is for me!" I snarled, "My tribe only trusts me because Fenrir trusts me. I've seen their expressions when they hear my name. They don't like it one bit. It is only because of Fenrir I am trusted!"
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| November 17, 2009, 8:12 pm
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Quoting John the Imaginative

Surt

I grab Rames by the collar. "You have no idea how hard this is for me!" I snarled, "My tribe only trusts me because Fenrir trusts me. I've seen their expressions when they hear my name. They don't like it one bit. It is only because of Fenrir I am trusted!"

A wall of solid blue energy appeared between the two. I walked in my hand out stretched my eyes glowing."Knock it off, you two. This is neither the time nor the place to be fighting."
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| November 18, 2009, 8:56 am
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Quoting Supreme commander Gideon Fucci
A wall of solid blue energy appeared between the two. I walked in my hand out stretched my eyes glowing."Knock it off, you two. This is neither the time nor the place to be fighting."

"do not fluant your pathetic copyous powers at me you insolent fool!!!!! we need to help telzira!"
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| November 18, 2009, 10:36 am
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i began weeping again in my saddend anger
"time to stop procrastinating" i walked to telzira and placed my hand on her shoulder...
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| November 18, 2009, 10:56 am
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Quoting The Abyss [formaly jake riedke]
"do not fluant your pathetic copyous powers at me you insolent fool!!!!! we need to help telzira!"

I strode up to Him and picked him up by the Throat."Do not mock me boy. I need no powers to crush the life from your body." I threw him to the ground. "No amount of power can kill the way i can. And I'd rather not let my anger end Telzira's happiness."
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| November 18, 2009, 11:12 am
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Fenrir

"Telzira, are you ready?"
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| November 18, 2009, 2:51 pm
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Quoting Supreme commander Gideon Fucci
I strode up to Him and picked him up by the Throat."Do not mock me boy. I need no powers to crush the life from your body." I threw him to the ground. "No amount of power can kill the way i can. And I'd rather not let my anger end Telzira's happiness."


Telzira's eyes glowed a deep angry red, and light drained from the room. "If you do not tell me what the XXXX is going on RIGHT NOW," She said, her mind boosting the power of her words in everyone's minds. "Then I will make sure each and EVERY one of you is put in a Rictus. I mean it!" Her eyes glowed brighter, angrier. "None of you have any idea how powerful I am. I've never used my more dangerous powers. DON'T MAKE ME!"
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| November 18, 2009, 3:52 pm
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Quoting Gringat The Stormlord

Telzira's eyes glowed a deep angry red, and light drained from the room. "If you do not tell me what the XXXX is going on RIGHT NOW," She said, her mind boosting the power of her words in everyone's minds. "Then I will make sure each and EVERY one of you is put in a Rictus. I mean it!" Her eyes glowed brighter, angrier. "None of you have any idea how powerful I am. I've never used my more dangerous powers. DON'T MAKE ME!"


Fenrir

"Apparently your time with Surt's mind in your body granted you Vampirik powers. Interestingly enough, you got the Leech Zone power by the looks of it. The best way to bring it under control is to fight someone else with the same power in single combat."
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| November 18, 2009, 3:57 pm
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Quoting Gringat The Stormlord

Telzira's eyes glowed a deep angry red, and light drained from the room. "If you do not tell me what the XXXX is going on RIGHT NOW," She said, her mind boosting the power of her words in everyone's minds. "Then I will make sure each and EVERY one of you is put in a Rictus. I mean it!" Her eyes glowed brighter, angrier. "None of you have any idea how powerful I am. I've never used my more dangerous powers. DON'T MAKE ME!"

i used telepathy to show her my memories and feelings
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| November 18, 2009, 3:57 pm
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Quoting The Abyss [formaly jake riedke]
i used telepathy to show her my memories and feelings


((Let the expert handle this. Fenrir is a Vampirik after all.))
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| November 18, 2009, 3:58 pm
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Quoting John the Imaginative

((Let the expert handle this. Fenrir is a Vampirik after all.))

((but i can ACTUALLY show her:)))
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| November 18, 2009, 4:02 pm
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Quoting The Abyss [formaly jake riedke]
((but i can ACTUALLY show her:)))


((Yes, but that could only make thing worse. She doesn't understand what's happening to her yet. You could make her scared of a power she should embrace.))
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| November 18, 2009, 4:03 pm
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Quoting John the Imaginative

Fenrir

"Apparently your time with Surt's mind in your body granted you Vampirik powers. Interestingly enough, you got the Leech Zone power by the looks of it. The best way to bring it under control is to fight someone else with the same power in single combat."

Rames:
i used telepathy to show her my memories and feelings


Rames' telepathy backfired. Mindfire raged through Telzira, and he had to shut himself from her for fear of his sanity.

She turned to Fenrir. "This is ridiculous! I think I would know if I was a Vampirik. Which I'm NOT!" A wave of force billowed from her on this last syllable, making the windows rattle. "If you really think I am, then prove it. Go on. Prove it. Do your scanning thingies or whatever it is you freaks do. Go on."
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| November 18, 2009, 4:04 pm
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Quoting Gringat The Stormlord
Quoting John the Imaginative

Fenrir

"Apparently your time with Surt's mind in your body granted you Vampirik powers. Interestingly enough, you got the Leech Zone power by the looks of it. The best way to bring it under control is to fight someone else with the same power in single combat."

Rames:
i used telepathy to show her my memories and feelings


Rames' telepathy backfired. Mindfire raged through Telzira, and he had to shut himself from her for fear of his sanity.

She turned to Fenrir. "This is ridiculous! I think I would know if I was a Vampirik. Which I'm NOT!" A wave of force billowed from her on this last syllable, making the windows rattle. "If you really think I am, then prove it. Go on. Prove it. Do your scanning thingies or whatever it is you freaks do. Go on."


Fenrir

"This is gonna hurt both of us. Seal, RELEASE!!! Aaaaaah!" I felt the pain as I shattered the seal on her. She screamed in pain while her powers flared while she stayed conscious. (When the seal is released, the pent-up powers auto-release, without taking over.) I brought up the Leech Zone around me.
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| November 18, 2009, 4:06 pm
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Quoting John the Imaginative

Fenrir

"This is gonna hurt both of us. Seal, RELEASE!!! Aaaaaah!" I felt the pain as I shattered the seal on her. She screamed in pain while her powers flared while she stayed conscious. (When the seal is released, the pent-up powers auto-release, without taking over.) I brought up the Leech Zone around me.


The blast was massive: a surge of blue an white lights, bone shattering force, memories, poinonous nightmares that warped and shifted and pulled at the mind. Terrible mind weapons no-one in Bara magna had ever seen... but nothing Vampirik-like. At all.

The vortex subsided, making Telzira feel drowsy. "Oh... so that's how you scan people... uff..." She blinked. "And let me guess: no vampirik powers? Didn't think so. I would know, of all people, what's going on in my own mind thankyouverymuch."
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| November 18, 2009, 4:12 pm
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Quoting Gringat The Stormlord

The blast was massive: a surge of blue an white lights, bone shattering force, memories, poinonous nightmares that warped and shifted and pulled at the mind. Terrible mind weapons no-one in Bara magna had ever seen... but nothing Vampirik-like. At all.

The vortex subsided, making Telzira feel drowsy. "Oh... so that's how you scan people... uff..." She blinked. "And let me guess: no vampirik powers? Didn't think so. I would know, of all people, what's going on in my own mind thankyouverymuch."


Fenrir

"Interesting. If it weren't for the Leech Zone, I'd be up against a wall. Surt, establish a mind link between me and Telzira."

((I hope this works.))
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| November 18, 2009, 4:15 pm
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Quoting John the Imaginative

Fenrir

"Interesting. If it weren't for the Leech Zone, I'd be up against a wall. Surt, establish a mind link between me and Telzira."

((I hope this works.))


The two sat in silence, hands together. Their minds interacting....

*****A shadowy Fenrir walked through rocky mountains. Unfamiliar stars glittered overhead. A chair lay in the middle of a crater. Next to it, another, and a table with a pitcher of water and two glasses. They were all built to a very unfamiliar design - all andgles and mazes and patterns and black rock. A small pulse of black light heralded the creation of Telzira's avatar. As expected, it was a showing of her old form she had had when Fenrir first encountered her - not the stranger build she inhabited now. She stood, nodded, and spoke with a voice that filled the entire space: "Let's just get this over with."
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| November 18, 2009, 4:23 pm
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Quoting Gringat The Stormlord

The two sat in silence, hands together. Their minds interacting....

*****A shadowy Fenrir walked through rocky mountains. Unfamiliar stars glittered overhead. A chair lay in the middle of a crater. Next to it, another, and a table with a pitcher of water and two glasses. They were all built to a very unfamiliar design - all andgles and mazes and patterns and black rock. A small pulse of black light heralded the creation of Telzira's avatar. As expected, it was a showing of her old form she had had when Fenrir first encountered her - not the stranger build she inhabited now. She stood, nodded, and spoke with a voice that filled the entire space: "Let's just get this over with."


Fenrir

"Fine. Do you sense any abnormalities within here?"
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| November 18, 2009, 4:28 pm
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Quoting John the Imaginative

Fenrir

"Fine. Do you sense any abnormalities within here?"


"Besises you, nope."
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| November 18, 2009, 4:37 pm
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Quoting Gringat The Stormlord

"Besises you, nope."


Fenrir

"This is going to make this a lot harder. Well, only one thing to do now. Seal RELEASE!!!!"
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| November 18, 2009, 4:39 pm
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Quoting John the Imaginative

Fenrir

"This is going to make this a lot harder. Well, only one thing to do now. Seal RELEASE!!!!"


"What the CXXX!" Telzira braced herself, iron girders and foundations springing up across her mind.
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| November 18, 2009, 4:43 pm
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Quoting Gringat The Stormlord

"What the CXXX!" Telzira braced herself, iron girders and foundations springing up across her mind.


Fenrir

"Here it comes!" A massive wave ripples outwards from the south of her mind.
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| November 18, 2009, 4:47 pm
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(('Ello?))
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| November 19, 2009, 3:10 pm
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Quoting John the Imaginative

Fenrir

"Here it comes!" A massive wave ripples outwards from the south of her mind.


((XXXX! I wrote a huge thing for this and it didn't get through! T.T))

A flood of memories and powers burst across Telzira's mind. Images of her past life - the face of a Skrall Matriarch. Classmates. The passing faces of Agamemnon, Agrathor, Ataklinus. An image of Fenrir, which made him cringe. Had he once looked as strong, as youthful as that?
Waves of force began to twist at him. Lightning crackled, random objects slapped and slammed into him from all directions adn a howling rose like ghosts in the wind. He heard snatches of conversation:

"...most displeased with this Telzira! Your mother will not stand for..."

"Why are you crying? Telz, talk to me! I..."

"Please. I beg of you. We will pay you quite highly. Shelden is..."

"N-n-n-no! I w-want to live!!!"

"I AM BARA-RUI...."

"Don't you worry Telzira. Everything's gonna be okay. You'll see. Tuma and The Matriarch will HAVE to co-operate, thanks to us, and I don't think I could have been landed with a better bride, to be honest! Hahah!"
A giggle. "Thanks, Zenius."
"Mhm. 's what I'm for. Now, I have to go for my afternoon training. be good now, you hear me?"
"Mhm..."

"Fenrir Help!"

"You're nothing, you hear me? NOTHING..."

"What is the point in this life anymore?" An explosion of purple fire enveloped Fenrir.

"Don't worry Telzira. Everything's gonna be okay. We can settle down now, eh? Follow your dreams. Be Glatorian.
I have to go to my afternoon training. Be good, Telzira."
"I will." A giggle, and then the surge stopped, leving darkness.

Telzira's avatar stood a little way from Fenrir's. It was the embodiment of pure anger, and it stared viciously at Fenrir. Red lgith surrounded him.
"ARE YOU HAPPY NOW!? HUH!? ARE YOU!?" A psychic blast bowled him over, weaking his connection to her mind. Fire erupted throughout the entire place. "GET OUT OF MY MIND. GET OUT OF MY HOUSE. GET OUT OF MY VILLAGE! I -N-E-V-E-R- WANT TO SEE YOU AGAIN!" A surge of pain and power coursed through Fenrir, and he found himself ripped from her consciousness and thrown a good distance across the room into Ronin.
None of them had ever seen Telzira so angry.

((And there waas no trace of Vampirik-ness. Let me carry out the plot in my own way, eh? The next bit won't happen till later, when we're doing something else. ^^ ))
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| November 19, 2009, 3:31 pm
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Quoting Aaron Tran
Out of nowhere, a toa canister the size of the mata nui robot teridax is in crashes on the outskirts of bara magna. Out emerges, Ignika Nui, here to be the new guardian of bara magna.
"I am the great being Ignika Nui. I am here to be your new guardian."
Suddenly, he waves his hand and the desert wasteland becomes filled with farmland and forests.

(( this seems like duex ex machina and it efects the whloee story ...i dont think i can allow this))
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| November 19, 2009, 3:33 pm
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Quoting Gringat The Stormlord

((XXXX! I wrote a huge thing for this and it didn't get through! T.T))

A flood of memories and powers burst across Telzira's mind. Images of her past life - the face of a Skrall Matriarch. Classmates. The passing faces of Agamemnon, Agrathor, Ataklinus. An image of Fenrir, which made him cringe. Had he once looked as strong, as youthful as that?
Waves of force began to twist at him. Lightning crackled, random objects slapped and slammed into him from all directions adn a howling rose like ghosts in the wind. He heard snatches of conversation:

"...most displeased with this Telzira! Your mother will not stand for..."

"Why are you crying? Telz, talk to me! I..."

"Please. I beg of you. We will pay you quite highly. Shelden is..."

"N-n-n-no! I w-want to live!!!"

"I AM BARA-RUI...."

"Don't you worry Telzira. Everything's gonna be okay. You'll see. Tuma and The Matriarch will HAVE to co-operate, thanks to us, and I don't think I could have been landed with a better bride, to be honest! Hahah!"
A giggle. "Thanks, Zenius."
"Mhm. 's what I'm for. Now, I have to go for my afternoon training. be good now, you hear me?"
"Mhm..."

"Fenrir Help!"

"You're nothing, you hear me? NOTHING..."

"What is the point in this life anymore?" An explosion of purple fire enveloped Fenrir.

"Don't worry Telzira. Everything's gonna be okay. We can settle down now, eh? Follow your dreams. Be Glatorian.
I have to go to my afternoon training. Be good, Telzira."
"I will." A giggle, and then the surge stopped, leving darkness.

Telzira's avatar stood a little way from Fenrir's. It was the embodiment of pure anger, and it stared viciously at Fenrir. Red lgith surrounded him.
"ARE YOU HAPPY NOW!? HUH!? ARE YOU!?" A psychic blast bowled him over, weaking his connection to her mind. Fire erupted throughout the entire place. "GET OUT OF MY MIND. GET OUT OF MY HOUSE. GET OUT OF MY VILLAGE! I -N-E-V-E-R- WANT TO SEE YOU AGAIN!" A surge of pain and power coursed through Fenrir, and he found himself ripped from her consciousness and thrown a good distance across the room into Ronin.
None of them had ever seen Telzira so angry.

((And there waas no trace of Vampirik-ness. Let me carry out the plot in my own way, eh? The next bit won't happen till later, when we're doing something else. ^^ ))


Fenrir (in pain)

I extract myself from Ronin. "Ow, my back. If anything, I'm going to say that these mental blasts are from her negative emotions if anything. But I'm really not sure. Seal, Activate." I reenacted the seal on Telzira, to save practically everyone around her in case it happened again. "Surt, my staff please."

Surt (concerned)

"Here brother."

Fenrir

"Ooooh, I'm too old for this."
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| November 19, 2009, 3:42 pm
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Quoting John the Imaginative

Fenrir (in pain)

I extract myself from Ronin. "Ow, my back. If anything, I'm going to say that these mental blasts are from her negative emotions if anything. But I'm really not sure. Seal, Activate." I reenacted the seal on Telzira, to save practically everyone around her in case it happened again. "Surt, my staff please."

Surt (concerned)

"Here brother."

Fenrir

"Ooooh, I'm too old for this."

"WHAT THR XXXX HAPPEND IN THERE!!!!"
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| November 19, 2009, 3:44 pm
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Quoting John the Imaginative

Fenrir (in pain)

I extract myself from Ronin. "Ow, my back. If anything, I'm going to say that these mental blasts are from her negative emotions if anything. But I'm really not sure. Seal, Activate." I reenacted the seal on Telzira, to save practically everyone around her in case it happened again. "Surt, my staff please."

Surt (concerned)

"Here brother."

Fenrir

"Ooooh, I'm too old for this."



Blue flames erupted around Telzira, and her breaths were deep and ragged. Rage burned in her eyes as she stared at Fenrir. Suddenly, they flashed blue, and he found flames surrounding him. Strange forces crushed him, lifted him from the floor. Lighting crackled across his armour, and he could feel the telekinetics pulling at his circuits. Pain soared through his leg as a nerve-wire broke open.
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| November 19, 2009, 4:19 pm
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Quoting Gringat The Stormlord


Blue flames erupted around Telzira, and her breaths were deep and ragged. Rage burned in her eyes as she stared at Fenrir. Suddenly, they flashed blue, and he found flames surrounding him. Strange forces crushed him, lifted him from the floor. Lighting crackled across his armour, and he could feel the telekinetics pulling at his circuits. Pain soared through his leg as a nerve-wire broke open.


Fenrir

"AAAAAH!!!!!"

Surt (worried)

"Telzira! Stop! Your going to kill at this rate. His body is essentially over 300,000 years old! It can't handle the strain you're putting it through!!!!"
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| November 19, 2009, 4:21 pm
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Quoting John the Imaginative

Fenrir

"AAAAAH!!!!!"

Surt (worried)

"Telzira! Stop! Your going to kill at this rate. His body is essentially over 300,000 years old! It can't handle the strain you're putting it through!!!!"


She didn't listen. Fenrir struggled in pain, as anything not bolted downin the room began to rise - including Surt, Ronin and Kira. The latter two found themselves shot outsde through the window. The fire enveloped Surt now as well. Even more powerful forces ripped at his armour, tearing off bolts and plates of metal, ripping at his soul as they went.
Fenrir's staff shattered in a shower of splinters...
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| November 19, 2009, 4:25 pm
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Quoting Gringat The Stormlord

She didn't listen. Fenrir struggled in pain, as anything not bolted downin the room began to rise - including Surt, Ronin and Kira. The latter two found themselves shot outsde through the window. The fire enveloped Surt now as well. Even more powerful forces ripped at his armour, tearing off bolts and plates of metal, ripping at his soul as they went.
Fenrir's staff shattered in a shower of splinters...


((ARE YOU TRYING TO KILL BOTH OF MY CHARACTERS!!!!))

Surt (angry.)

"XXXX!!! There's too much interference, I can't do a Soul Transfer."

Fenrir

"AAAAAaaaaahhhhh..." I fell into unconsciousness.
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| November 19, 2009, 4:29 pm
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Quoting John the Imaginative

((ARE YOU TRYING TO KILL BOTH OF MY CHARACTERS!!!!))

Surt (angry.)

"XXXX!!! There's too much interference, I can't do a Soul Transfer."

Fenrir

"AAAAAaaaaahhhhh..." I fell into unconsciousness.


((No. I'm kinda counting on Rames to come and save the day :) ))

"Both of you have brought me nothing but pain, misery and death! And now you DARE to come here, when I'm FINALLY away from you two, FINALLY managing to have a normal life, and you RUIN IT ALL!!! You lie to me. You lie to Rames! And then YOU VIOLATE THE DEEPEST PARTS OF MY MIND ON A WHIM! Whose xxxxing idea was it that I was a Vampirik, becasue OBVIOUSLY I'M NOT!" Surt's arm completely blew away, making his spirit writhe. Fenrir's breath came in ragged gasps.
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| November 19, 2009, 4:37 pm
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Quoting Gringat The Stormlord

((No. I'm kinda counting on Rames to come and save the day :) ))

"Both of you have brought me nothing but pain, misery and death! And now you DARE to come here, when I'm FINALLY away from you two, FINALLY managing to have a normal life, and you RUIN IT ALL!!! You lie to me. You lie to Rames! And then YOU VIOLATE THE DEEPEST PARTS OF MY MIND ON A WHIM! Whose xxxxing idea was it that I was a Vampirik, becasue OBVIOUSLY I'M NOT!" Surt's arm completely blew away, making his spirit writhe. Fenrir's breath came in ragged gasps.


((Apparently, Jake isn't here at the moment.so you'll have to stop her on your own.))

Fenrir (wakes up)

"I...don't know...what it is...Back...at the...arena...you released...an area drain...similar to...the...Leech Zone...so my...first...thought was that...the fusion...of your...and Surt's...bodies...had given...you...Vampirik...powers...But know...it's obviously...something...else...I had...just planned...to visit...you today...I didn't...expect...your past...to be so...horrible...just like...mine..."

Surt

"..."
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| November 19, 2009, 4:44 pm
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i reached to her nd firmly placed my hand on the back of her head. her minds eye egulfed in a fierious black inferno.all through her head his echoing thoughts raged *EENNOOOUUGGHH!!!!!* the noise
came from everywhere and nowhere at the same time.her shoulders swung backwards and her back arched majorly.she screamed at an insane level of sound all through this i held my grip firm...((i`ll contineu in 1 minute my moms gotta use the computer dont go on with out me plz:)))
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| November 19, 2009, 4:50 pm
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Quoting John the Imaginative

((Apparently, Jake isn't here at the moment.so you'll have to stop her on your own.))

Fenrir (wakes up)

"I...don't know...what it is...Back...at the...arena...you released...an area drain...similar to...the...Leech Zone...so my...first...thought was that...the fusion...of your...and Surt's...bodies...had given...you...Vampirik...powers...But know...it's obviously...something...else...I had...just planned...to visit...you today...I didn't...expect...your past...to be so...horrible...just like...mine..."

Surt

"..."


The power vortex suddenly stopped, and Telzira put her head ot one side, hand on her hips.
"Of COURSE it was awful. Why do you think I left?"
She stopped to think for a second...
"And actually... there is something pretty similar to leech zone which I can cast. Maybe you made a mistake."
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| November 19, 2009, 4:51 pm
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Quoting The Abyss [formaly jake riedke]
i reached to her nd firmly placed my hand on the back of her head. her minds eye egulfed in a fierious black inferno.all through her head his echoing thoughts raged *EENNOOOUUGGHH!!!!!* the noise
came from everywhere and nowhere at the same time.her shoulders swung backwards and her back arched majorly.she screamed at an insane level of sound all through this i held my grip firm...((i`ll contineu in 1 minute my moms gotta use the computer dont go on with out me plz:)))


((...I was thinking more that he'd come in and ask her to stop, and she would becasue they love each other :3
...I think I'll have to go with the scenario I wrote instead. Sorry. ^^; ))
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| November 19, 2009, 4:54 pm
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Quoting Gringat The Stormlord

The power vortex suddenly stopped, and Telzira put her head ot one side, hand on her hips.
"Of COURSE it was awful. Why do you think I left?"
She stopped to think for a second...
"And actually... there is something pretty similar to leech zone which I can cast. Maybe you made a mistake."


Fenrir (breathing deeply, very deeply. He misses air.)

"I didn't know. Though something does seem to cause your powers to flare up from time to time. I just hope this day can continue like a normal day from now on."

Surt (irritated)

I picked up my fallen pieces in order to prepare for the ritual. "Please."
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| November 19, 2009, 4:55 pm
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Quoting John the Imaginative

Fenrir (breathing deeply, very deeply. He misses air.)

"I didn't know. Though something does seem to cause your powers to flare up from time to time. I just hope this day can continue like a normal day from now on."

Surt (irritated)

I picked up my fallen pieces in order to prepare for the ritual. "Please."



"I guess so. I just need to use them more often, is all." Her eyes glowed blue, adnt eh room reconstituted itself. Furniture scraped up and across the floor. Her bed remade itself. She traipsed over to the window to look for Ronin and Kira... but they'd left. Not a big surprise. ((Just removing them from the RP since Gideon aint here for a while))

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| November 19, 2009, 5:03 pm
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Quoting Gringat The Stormlord


"I guess so. I just need to use them more often, is all." Her eyes glowed blue, adnt eh room reconstituted itself. Furniture scraped up and across the floor. Her bed remade itself. She traipsed over to the window to look for Ronin and Kira... but they'd left. Not a big surprise. ((Just removing them from the RP since Gideon aint here for a while))


Fenrir

"This will be slightly macabre, so if you don't like that stuff, look away." I grabbed a spike from my back and ripped it out, replacing my staff for the time being. I focused and the spike grew back almost immediately.
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| November 19, 2009, 5:07 pm
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Quoting John the Imaginative

Fenrir

"This will be slightly macabre, so if you don't like that stuff, look away." I grabbed a spike from my back and ripped it out, replacing my staff for the time being. I focused and the spike grew back almost immediately.
((HELOO))

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| November 19, 2009, 6:14 pm
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Quoting The Abyss [formaly jake riedke]
Quoting John the Imaginative

Fenrir

"This will be slightly macabre, so if you don't like that stuff, look away." I grabbed a spike from my back and ripped it out, replacing my staff for the time being. I focused and the spike grew back almost immediately.
((HELOO))


Telzira grimaced, but otherwise didn't seem flinched by it. She scratched one wing with the other, making a faint sound like razors being sharpened.
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| November 19, 2009, 6:20 pm
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Quoting Gringat The Stormlord

Telzira grimaced, but otherwise didn't seem flinched by it. She scratched one wing with the other, making a faint sound like razors being sharpened.

i cringed not at ferir-to wich i had grown acustom-but at my fiance`s unnatural wings scraping like metal being cut in too with a rusty blade
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| November 19, 2009, 7:00 pm
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I opened my eyes. I was in the halls out side of Telzira's dwelling and Kira was looking at me with concern. "What happened to everyone and why am I outside?" Kira helped me to my feet."Well, little brother, When Telzira flipped out on Fenrir she through him into you. You got knocked cold from the force of his body slamming into your head, so i dragged you out here. And beleive me that was no easy task."
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| November 19, 2009, 7:04 pm
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Fenrir

"How about we all go inside and talk about whats happened since we parted ways?"
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| November 19, 2009, 8:43 pm
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Quoting Aaron Tran
Meanwhile.....
Out of nowhere, the mask of life comes crashing down at the same crater mata nui landed at hundreds of mines per hour. Then, the mask of life flies up into the sky and a body starts to form. A minute later, agori and glatorians can see the large body of, Ignika Nui!
"I will be the new guardian of bara magna for now on. I will not hurt anyone unless they are corrupted by the makuta."
Ignika Nui then waves his hand slowly and then water, forests and farmland pop-up on bara magna out of nowhere.
"I hope you will accept my offer as your leader now, but i can barely help fend against the makuta. I only have hlaf the light powers I had before. As you can see, half of my body is engulfed in shadow."


((You enjoy being completely random? 'Cause it's rather irritating.))
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| November 19, 2009, 8:49 pm
Quoting John the Imaginative

((You enjoy being completely random? 'Cause it's rather irritating.))


Don't blame me, Jake Redke is the one who said i have to put Ignika Nui in a story!
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| November 19, 2009, 8:54 pm
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Quoting Aaron Tran
Meanwhile.....
Out of nowhere, the mask of life comes crashing down at the same crater mata nui landed at hundreds of mines per hour. Then, the mask of life flies up into the sky and a body starts to form. A minute later, agori and glatorians can see the large body of, Ignika Nui!
"I will be the new guardian of bara magna for now on. I will not hurt anyone unless they are corrupted by the makuta."
Ignika Nui then waves his hand slowly and then water, forests and farmland pop-up on bara magna out of nowhere.
"I hope you will accept my offer as your leader now, but i can barely help fend against the makuta. I only have hlaf the light powers I had before. As you can see, half of my body is engulfed in shadow."

(( Ideocracy flows deep within this one. Any character with god caliber powers will not be accepted. If this guy makes it then they have gotten soft. Story changing characters must build themselves up before being introduced so no super powered god like characters. if they were allowed the soldiers of light would have been in this group. stop trying characters like this one out he is not welcome.))
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| November 19, 2009, 8:55 pm
Quoting Supreme commander Gideon Fucci
(( Ideocracy flows deep within this one. Any character with god caliber powers will not be accepted. If this guy makes it then they have gotten soft. Story changing characters must build themselves up before being introduced so no super powered god like characters. if they were allowed the soldiers of light would have been in this group. stop trying characters like this one out he is not welcome.))


DANGIT!!!!! Am i allowed to have him land on and help bara magna when the glatorian and agori side is losing or something?
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| November 19, 2009, 8:57 pm
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Quoting Aaron Tran

Don't blame me, Jake Redke is the one who said i have to put Ignika Nui in a story!


((Yes, but you do need a limit on their power, that's one of the rules. No character can be too powerful.))
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| November 19, 2009, 8:57 pm
Quoting John the Imaginative

((Yes, but you do need a limit on their power, that's one of the rules. No character can be too powerful.))


((*sadly* Ok, I did say he is HALF light and HALF shadow. He only uses life to supercharge weps and ressurect or heal someone. He basically uses alot of light and shadow.))
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| November 19, 2009, 8:59 pm
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Quoting Aaron Tran

*sadly* Ok, I did say he is HALF light and HALF shadow. He only uses life to supercharge weps and ressurect or heal someone. He basically uses alot of life and shadow.


((Oh, and when you input a non-story comment, put them with (()) so there isn't mistaken as part of the story.))
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| November 19, 2009, 9:01 pm
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Quoting Aaron Tran

((*sadly* Ok, I did say he is HALF light and HALF shadow. He only uses life to supercharge weps and ressurect or heal someone. He basically uses alot of light and shadow.))

((Still to powerful I think you should try some otherstory. this story is well established and does not need additional characters.Especially god like ones.))
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| November 19, 2009, 9:25 pm
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((i wont be here today:( ))
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| November 20, 2009, 7:40 am
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Quoting Aaron Tran

((*sadly* Ok, I did say he is HALF light and HALF shadow. He only uses life to supercharge weps and ressurect or heal someone. He basically uses alot of light and shadow.))


((If you really want an insanely powerful character, put him ijn the "sands of bara magna" storyline. That's our most random, chaotic storyline - It's already had a whole island crash into it, and Basically enything can happen in that one.
For other storylines, you'll need a character who isn't too powerful, not because that wouldn't be awesome, but because here in BRC, we focus more on the personalities of the characters, rather than epic battles - and actually, the battles are more interesting if itsa likely that your character will lose. ))
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| November 20, 2009, 11:09 am
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Quoting John the Imaginative
Fenrir

"How about we all go inside and talk about whats happened since we parted ways?"


"I'd rather not." Telzira folded her arms and frowned.
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| November 20, 2009, 11:22 am
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Quoting Gringat The Stormlord

"I'd rather not." Telzira folded her arms and frowned.


Fenrir

"Why? Just because of what happened eariler? I just planned to visit you for a while, then return to my city."
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| November 20, 2009, 2:47 pm
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Quoting John the Imaginative

Fenrir

"Why? Just because of what happened eariler? I just planned to visit you for a while, then return to my city."


"Oh, well, thank you -so much- for that, Fenrir."
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| November 20, 2009, 3:08 pm
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Quoting Gringat The Stormlord

"Oh, well, thank you -so much- for that, Fenrir."


Fenrir

"It's been awhile since we last met. Can we please talk as friends and leave on the same terms?"
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| November 20, 2009, 3:09 pm
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Quoting John the Imaginative

Fenrir

"It's been awhile since we last met. Can we please talk as friends and leave on the same terms?"


"No. Goodbye Fenrir."
Fenrir felt a pushing behind him, as if someone was trying to drag him to the door. His feet began to slide across the floor.
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| November 20, 2009, 3:12 pm
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Quoting Gringat The Stormlord

"No. Goodbye Fenrir."
Fenrir felt a pushing behind him, as if someone was trying to drag him to the door. His feet began to slide across the floor.


Fenrir

"Fine, though expect to see some Vampirik in the arena before the end of the year."
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| November 20, 2009, 3:14 pm
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Quoting John the Imaginative

Fenrir

"Fine, though expect to see some Vampirik in the arena before the end of the year."


She didn't reply. Fenrir was silently thrust out of the room, the door locking itself behind him. He heard the sound of the bars drawing themselves across.

Finally alone, Telzira curled up on the floor, knees to her chest, and cried.
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| November 20, 2009, 3:21 pm
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Quoting Gringat The Stormlord

She didn't reply. Fenrir was silently thrust out of the room, the door locking itself behind him. He heard the sound of the bars drawing themselves across.

Finally alone, Telzira curled up on the floor, knees to her chest, and cried.


Fenrir

"Can you keep yourself together long enough to make it outside town?"

Surt

"Yes."

Fenrir

"Once we're out, do the ritual."
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| November 20, 2009, 3:23 pm
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Fenrir

As I left, I thought I could hear crying coming from Telzira's house but dismissed, knowing that if I intruded, it will turn out badly for me. I figured we'll just tour the city for a while after Surt repairs himself.

((GTG, gonna go see New Moon.))
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| November 20, 2009, 3:27 pm
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Quoting John the Imaginative
Fenrir

As I left, I thought I could hear crying coming from Telzira's house but dismissed, knowing that if I intruded, it will turn out badly for me. I figured we'll just tour the city for a while after Surt repairs himself.

((GTG, gonna go see New Moon.))


((I shall continue the story anyway. Telzira's the only character that has to be here, right now, anyway. So read up when you get back? :D Have fun. I'm off to see the 4th Kind Tomorrow ^^))

Telzira rose, wiping her eyes.

The sound of sobbing continued... Someone else was there.

Stealthily, she crept for her spear and held it tight, before treading lightly towards the sound of the sobbing. It sounded eerie, echoing. It seemed to be coming from on a floor below - the cellars.

The hatch creaked open, and she peered inside. Wide eyes glared at her from the darkness, and somebody wimpered. She turned on the lights to find a group of agori huddled up against the wall, away from her. Before she could open her mouth to speak, one of them fired something and it thudded deep into her chest. She sank to the floor, dropping the spear, and then the agori fell upon her, murder in their eyes.

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| November 20, 2009, 3:52 pm
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Quoting Aaron Tran

((Don't blame me, Jake Redke is the one who said i have to put Ignika Nui in a story! ))

((No i was warning you that i would be deleted as only characters are allowed in group creations))
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| November 20, 2009, 4:08 pm
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as i left to explane her mood to fenrir i heard a terrible bone curtleing scream from the cellers bellow
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| November 20, 2009, 4:10 pm
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Quoting The Abyss [formaly jake riedke]
Quoting Aaron Tran

((Don't blame me, Jake Redke is the one who said i have to put Ignika Nui in a story! ))

((No i was warning you that i would be deleted as only characters are allowed in group creations))


A sudden scream bellowed through Rames' mind.
**RAMES! HELP! I'M SURROUNDED BY- AAAAARG-!** The telepathic message cut off suddenly.

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| November 20, 2009, 5:02 pm
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Quoting Gringat The Stormlord

A sudden scream bellowed through Rames' mind.
**RAMES! HELP! I'M SURROUNDED BY- AAAAARG-!** The telepathic message cut off suddenly.

i rushed into the house and heard her voice throughout my mindthen i knew where to look!i bursted down the stairs to find her in the clutches of small devolved agori i blew hot flame from the tip of my sword it coverd her and she only felt the soft embrace of a mother womb while on just the other side it sorched and lept at the armor of these somewhat nomadic looking 'beasts'...
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| November 20, 2009, 5:14 pm
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Quoting The Abyss [formaly jake riedke]
i rushed into the house and heard her voice throughout my mindthen i knew where to look!i bursted down the stairs to find her in the clutches of small devolved agori i blew hot flame from the tip of my sword it coverd her and she only felt the soft embrace of a mother womb while on just the other side it sorched and lept at the armor of these somewhat nomadic looking 'beasts'...


Telzira knelt on the floor, with her palms down on the stone, coughing. Black blood dripped from her mouth and chest, while the corpses of a dozen Vulcanusians smouldered.

Some chains rattled. Another Vulcanusian was there, alive. A great festering wound pulsed on his shoulder. He looked towards Rames and Telzira with an air of unsurpressed terror.

He was chained to the wall.
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| November 20, 2009, 5:27 pm
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Quoting Gringat The Stormlord

Telzira knelt on the floor, with her palms down on the stone, coughing. Black blood dripped from her mouth and chest, while the corpses of a dozen Vulcanusians smouldered.

Some chains rattled. Another Vulcanusian was there, alive. A great festering wound pulsed on his shoulder. He looked towards Rames and Telzira with an air of unsurpressed terror.

He was chained to the wall.

((you might wanna consider buying a new house!!siriously what are all these guy doing in your house espesialy a man chained up in the basement...:)))
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| November 20, 2009, 5:33 pm
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Quoting The Abyss [formaly jake riedke]
((you might wanna consider buying a new house!!siriously what are all these guy doing in your house espesialy a man chained up in the basement...:)))


Telzira's chest bubbled as she tried to breathe - ragged gasps, like a fish wrenched from the water. The colour was draining from her face.
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| November 20, 2009, 6:00 pm
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Fenrir

"CXXX!!!! What was that? Surt, do the ritual. I'm going back!" I ran back to Telzira's house.

Surt

"Got it." I drew the runic circle, sat in the center, and began the ritual.
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| November 20, 2009, 8:48 pm
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far far away A colossal figure sat alone on an impossibly large thrown In the midst of massive ruins overgrown with vegetation .
Vine wrapped around and entwined him. He had become them. they grew around and through him.
His eyes like deep sullen pits. He sat there staring into nothingness. someone might have mistaken him for a stone statue .
Through his minds eye he watched all that had transpired….
((please do not ignore this character once I get things going (witch is not yet so in story do not refer to him.)I have been planning something epic with this character and leading up to his introduction for weeks.try to figure it out but don’t post it:)))

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| November 21, 2009, 9:53 am
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Quoting The Abyss [formaly jake riedke]
far far away A colossal figure sat alone on an impossibly large thrown In the midst of massive ruins overgrown with vegetation .
Vine wrapped around and entwined him. He had become them. they grew around and through him.
His eyes like deep sullen pits. He sat there staring into nothingness. someone might have mistaken him for a stone statue .
Through his minds eye he watched all that had transpired….
((please do not ignore this character once I get things going (witch is not yet so in story do not refer to him.)I have been planning something epic with this character and leading up to his introduction for weeks.try to figure it out but don’t post it:)))


The agori on the wall laughed - a mad, joyous laugh. He seemed to be overjoyed, filled with hope, seeing Telzira die. The makeshift crossbow he'd used dropped from his restrained hand. Tears streamed down his face.

Telzira's wings flicked in and out madly, as she gasped for breath. She grapped Rames' hand tightly, and tried to speak to him, but found herself unable. All she managed was a miserable choking sound as more blood bubbled up her throat. Her body twitched ominously as the severed nerves pulled in chaotic directions. It felt as if Rames was about to lose his OTHER hand!
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| November 21, 2009, 3:20 pm
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Quoting Gringat The Stormlord


Rames

i hled her in my arms blood gurgle up through the rotten hole inher stomach. my eyes glowed a calm blue as i cried. darkend blue shadows lept from my hands crawling over the surface of her body. they were there and yet they were`nt thewallls of her abdomen slowly began to close. i nelt down and layed her on the ground letting the calmiing shadows take efect. i turned my attention to the perpatraitor of this crime the same shadows danced over me this time in bright black. my eyes glazed over and i held his throat in my hand the dark shadows lept to him...
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| November 21, 2009, 3:36 pm
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Quoting The Abyss [formaly jake riedke]
Rames

i hled her in my arms blood gurgle up through the rotten hole inher stomach. my eyes glowed a calm blue as i cried. darkend blue shadows lept from my hands crawling over the surface of her body. they were there and yet they were`nt thewallls of her abdomen slowly began to close. i nelt down and layed her on the ground letting the calmiing shadows take efect. i turned my attention to the perpatraitor of this crime the same shadows danced over me this time in bright black. my eyes glazed over and i held his throat in my hand the dark shadows lept to him...



The agori choked, as the shadows enveloped him. He swore at Rames, cursing the "Vampirik-loving traitor" with his dying breath. His heartlight winked out.

Telzira got up, coughing. She felt dizzy from blood loss, and leaned against the wall, a hand on her forhead, wheezing. "R-Rames?" She said, weakly.
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| November 21, 2009, 3:49 pm
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Quoting Gringat The Stormlord

The Abyss

he had relaxed control on the glatorian
now was his time to strike after all these years. time was fading.
suddenly Telzira realized the truth
how rames was but a pawn-his powers were the direct result of an unknown controler and this controler had in the past taken full control.
she realized the importance of the surounding plannets
she new she must contact the remaining great beings the fate of the universe depended on it!
she felt horrifide and disgusted and scared she was able to make out the faint image of some terifying monster.
her personality was never the same again
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| November 21, 2009, 4:20 pm
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Quoting Gringat The Stormlord


The agori choked, as the shadows enveloped him. He swore at Rames, cursing the "Vampirik-loving traitor" with his dying breath. His heartlight winked out.

Telzira got up, coughing. She felt dizzy from blood loss, and leaned against the wall, a hand on her forhead, wheezing. "R-Rames?" She said, weakly.


Fenrir

I poured a special fluid over her wounds. "As much as you hate me now, we're both here. Vampirik-loving traitor...CXXX!!!! I need to get to my own tribe! SURT!!!!! WE LEAVE NOW!!!!" Little did I know what had happened.
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| November 21, 2009, 4:20 pm
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Quoting John the Imaginative

Fenrir

"As much as you hate me now, we're both here. Vampirik-loving traitor...CXXX!!!! I need to get to my own tribe! SURT!!!!! WE LEAVE NOW!!!!" Little did I know what had happened.

((who are you talking to?))
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| November 21, 2009, 4:44 pm
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Quoting The Abyss [formaly jake riedke]
((who are you talking to?))


((First I was talking to Telzira, then yelling for Surt. Now we're both rushing to the -now smouldering- Vampirik village. Feel free to join us.))
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| November 21, 2009, 4:46 pm
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Quoting John the Imaginative

((First I was talking to Telzira, then yelling for Surt. Now we're both rushing to the -now smouldering- Vampirik village. Feel free to join us.))

((you never said he was with us))
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| November 21, 2009, 4:50 pm
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Quoting The Abyss [formaly jake riedke]
((you never said he was with us))


((He was right outside the gates, performing the ritual to repair his armor.))
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| November 21, 2009, 4:55 pm
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Fenrir

We returned a few hours later, but the news we had wasn't good. By then Telzira's condition had stabilized, thanks to the potion. "The entire village was burned to the ground. By the looks of it, most of my people escaped in time. But what troubles me is that the location was revealed. Who could have done it? None of my people." I turned to face the occupants of the room. "Don't tell me you..."
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| November 21, 2009, 5:09 pm
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Quoting John the Imaginative
Fenrir

We returned a few hours later, but the news we had wasn't good. By then Telzira's condition had stabilized, thanks to the potion. "The entire village was burned to the ground. By the looks of it, most of my people escaped in time. But what troubles me is that the location was revealed. Who could have done it? None of my people." I turned to face the occupants of the room. "Don't tell me you..."


Most disturbing were reports of a winged black creaure at the scene, spreading destruction.

-Telzira-
She looked to Fenrir worriedly, and seemed to be... afraid? of Rames. She looked behind herself to him several times, anxiously.
She spoke up, to Fenrir, although her voice was little more than a hoarse whisper. "I... never heard... anything about that. Why would... anyone do such a thing?" She coughed - a terrible sound to anyone there. "There's anti-vampirism all over the place... but to destroy the entire village..." She coughed again. Her wings twitched and sheared as she did so, making Rames have to move out of the way for fear of having his face cut.

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| November 21, 2009, 5:49 pm
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Quoting Gringat The Stormlord

Most disturbing were reports of a winged black creaure at the scene, spreading destruction.

-Telzira-
She looked to Fenrir worriedly, and seemed to be... afraid? of Rames. She looked behind herself to him several times, anxiously.
She spoke up, to Fenrir, although her voice was little more than a hoarse whisper. "I... never heard... anything about that. Why would... anyone do such a thing?" She coughed - a terrible sound to anyone there. "There's anti-vampirism all over the place... but to destroy the entire village..." She coughed again. Her wings twitched and sheared as she did so, making Rames have to move out of the way for fear of having his face cut.


((Telzira did this whilst she blacked out?))

Fenrir

"My life's work...gone...but I shall persevere. I shall rebuild, and I shall protect Drachen's final resting place!" Fire burned in my eyes.
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| November 21, 2009, 5:53 pm
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Quoting Aaron Tran

Meanwhile,
The ignika crashes to the ground. Then, the body of ignika nui forms.
"I am ignika nui, being of life, light and shadow."
After he forms his staff, shield and armor, 100 vorox skrall, and bonhunters attack him. He manages to drive them off, but he ends up weak and his armor with a cracked down the middle.
"They have almsot managed to split the light and dark side of my body in half. I must find shelter and someone to repair my armor"

((Ya know what no just stop your character is to powerful for this universe. He is not welcome.))
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| November 21, 2009, 6:03 pm
Quoting Supreme commander Gideon Fucci
((Ya know what no just stop your character is to powerful for this universe. He is not welcome.))


((I made him less powerful. He just formed his current body when he was banished from the matoran universe. He BARELY fended off the vorox, skrall and bonehunters. ))
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| November 21, 2009, 6:06 pm
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Quoting Aaron Tran

((I made him less powerful. He just formed his current body when he was banished from the matoran universe. He BARELY fended off the vorox, skrall and bonehunters. ))


((Yes, 100 of them.))
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| November 21, 2009, 6:07 pm
Quoting John the Imaginative

((Yes, 100 of them.))


((Ok, I'l change it to 25.))
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| November 21, 2009, 6:10 pm
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Quoting Aaron Tran

((I made him less powerful. He just formed his current body when he was banished from the matoran universe. He BARELY fended off the vorox, skrall and bonehunters. ))


((This is too similar to the actual bionicle story. Please use a different character.

Perhaps try an agori?))
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| November 21, 2009, 6:11 pm
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Quoting Aaron Tran

((I made him less powerful. He just formed his current body when he was banished from the matoran universe. He BARELY fended off the vorox, skrall and bonehunters. ))

((No. beside you have never put this character in the creation topic anyways,and i will not have him in this universe))
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| November 21, 2009, 6:12 pm
Quoting Gringat The Stormlord

((This is too similar to the actual bionicle story. Please use a different character.

Perhaps try an agori?))


Could i use the veteran glatorian Nepzek? Maybe toa dahmani?
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| November 21, 2009, 6:15 pm
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Quoting Aaron Tran

((I made him less powerful. He just formed his current body when he was banished from the matoran universe. He BARELY fended off the vorox, skrall and bonehunters. ))

((How bout make it four or five. I dont care how much weaker he is. In our universe no one character is aloud to defeat 100 warriors unless he explodes himself in an epic self sacrificial way(thats how Kore will go out by the way. Guns blazing.)))
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| November 21, 2009, 6:16 pm
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Quoting Aaron Tran

Could i use the veteran glatorian Nepzek? Maybe toa dahmani?

((not in this universe.BRACKETS!!!)
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| November 21, 2009, 6:18 pm
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Quoting Aaron Tran

Could i use the veteran glatorian Nepzek? Maybe toa dahmani?


((Use double brackets for Out of Character somments please. (())(())(()) Napzek sounds like a good bet. Does he just fight, or does he have any sort of powers?))
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| November 21, 2009, 6:19 pm
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Quoting Supreme commander Gideon Fucci
((How bout make it four or five. I dont care how much weaker he is. In our universe no one character is aloud to defeat 100 warriors unless he explodes himself in an epic self sacrificial way(thats how Kore will go out by the way. Guns blazing.)))


((Although for Tempesta Magna you'll have to make a new character. I created the world here, and you'll need my approval to put a character here. HeyI'll help you come up with something in a conversation I will call "Character Making Help". Just go there and run through your new characters so I can see what will work. If you like, I'll make the new characters you have to come up with here at home, and post them :)

And don't worry Jake. I'll lock and/or delete the topic afterwards. ))
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| November 21, 2009, 6:40 pm
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Quoting John the Imaginative

((Telzira did this whilst she blacked out?))

Fenrir

"My life's work...gone...but I shall persevere. I shall rebuild, and I shall protect Drachen's final resting place!" Fire burned in my eyes.


((Fenrir might beleive that is so, yes.))

"I'll do... whatever I can... Fenrir." She coughed again.

((I'm surprised nobody was wondering about the agori locked in Telzira's cellar...))

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| November 21, 2009, 6:51 pm
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Quoting Gringat The Stormlord

((Fenrir might beleive that is so, yes.))

"I'll do... whatever I can... Fenrir." She coughed again.

((I'm surprised nobody was wondering about the agori locked in Telzira's cellar...))
((i was but my comment got lost in the torrent:)))

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| November 21, 2009, 6:52 pm
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Quoting Gringat The Stormlord

((Fenrir might beleive that is so, yes.))

"I'll do... whatever I can... Fenrir." She coughed again.

((I'm surprised nobody was wondering about the agori locked in Telzira's cellar...))


((You don't want to know half the stuff Fenrir seen. And Telzira didn't do it?))

Fenrir

"Th-thank you."
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| November 21, 2009, 6:52 pm
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Quoting John the Imaginative

((You don't want to know half the stuff Fenrir seen. And Telzira didn't do it?))

Fenrir

"Th-thank you."


((I don't really want you to know the answer to that.))

Telzira nodded, weakly. Her chest still hurt where the shard of metal had been fired into it. She held it in her hands idly - a bloodstained, jagged peice of exsidian, sharp at the tip.
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| November 21, 2009, 7:03 pm
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Quoting Gringat The Stormlord

((I don't really want you to know the answer to that.))

Telzira nodded, weakly. Her chest still hurt where the shard of metal had been fired into it. She held it in her hands idly - a bloodstained, jagged peice of exsidian, sharp at the tip.


((I won't inquire further. Oh, and you got me hooked on Nightwish.))

Fenrir

"That looks nasty. Hand it here." I held out my hand.

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| November 21, 2009, 7:06 pm
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Quoting John the Imaginative

((I won't inquire further. Oh, and you got me hooked on Nightwish.))

Fenrir

"That looks nasty. Hand it here." I held out my hand.


Telzira passed it over, wincing slightly with the movement. "Here."

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| November 21, 2009, 7:10 pm
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Quoting Gringat The Stormlord

Telzira passed it over, wincing slightly with the movement. "Here."


Fenrir

I focused for a bit, and the blade glowed for a few seconds. "Just sharp, no poison or anything else. That reminds me, do you still have that spearhead? The one that melted the flesh off my arm."
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| November 21, 2009, 7:11 pm
Quoting Gringat The Stormlord

((Use double brackets for Out of Character somments please. (())(())(()) Napzek sounds like a good bet. Does he just fight, or does he have any sort of powers?))

((Nepzek is a veteran glatoran who has a lance that can blast lightning. He has a special armor that is made of something like protosteel.))
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| November 21, 2009, 7:14 pm
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Quoting Aaron Tran
Nepzek is a veteran glatoran who has a lance that can blast lightning. He has a special armor that is made of something like protosteel.


((BRACKETS))
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| November 21, 2009, 7:16 pm
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Quoting John the Imaginative

Fenrir

I focused for a bit, and the blade glowed for a few seconds. "Just sharp, no poison or anything else. That reminds me, do you still have that spearhead? The one that melted the flesh off my arm."


"The Baterra sword? I'd guess that's already melted in the core of the planet by now..."
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| November 21, 2009, 7:30 pm
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Quoting Gringat The Stormlord

"The Baterra sword? I'd guess that's already melted in the core of the planet by now..."


Fenrir (surprised)

"How did it end up there?"
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| November 21, 2009, 7:31 pm
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Quoting John the Imaginative

Fenrir (surprised)

"How did it end up there?"


"Oh, well, it melted through solid rock easily enough didn't it? I've been using a regular exsidian spear since then. Iconox make."
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| November 21, 2009, 7:35 pm
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Quoting Gringat The Stormlord

"Oh, well, it melted through solid rock easily enough didn't it? I've been using a regular exsidian spear since then. Iconox make."


Fenrir

"Waste of a good blade."

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| November 21, 2009, 7:36 pm
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Quoting John the Imaginative

Fenrir

"Waste of a good blade."


"Mhm."
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| November 21, 2009, 7:40 pm
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Quoting John the Imaginative

Fenrir

"Waste of a good blade."


"Not that it would have been healthy to keep it now I have Rames..."
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| November 22, 2009, 4:53 am
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Quoting Gringat The Stormlord

"Not that it would have been healthy to keep it now I have Rames..."


Fenrir

"Meh. Bring him if yo want, though can you disguise your appearance at least a little, Telzira. Your look is likely to provoke an attack, just like mine does with the other tribes."
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| November 22, 2009, 8:31 am
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((Hey Gringat, can we make it a red shadow floating over head? 'Cause I wast to introduce another character.))
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| November 22, 2009, 10:10 am
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The Abyss

unbeknowest to them someone was watchingtheir every move...

Rames

"well we`d might aswell leave they`ll have decided you`re banished by now"i halted the shadows growing on the walls

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| November 22, 2009, 10:42 am
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Quoting The Abyss [formaly jake riedke]
The Abyss

unbeknowest to them someone was watchingtheir every move...

Rames

"well we`d might aswell leave they`ll have decided you`re banished by now"i halted the shadows growing on the walls


Her eyes widened. "What!?? No!"
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| November 22, 2009, 12:13 pm
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Quoting John the Imaginative
((Hey Gringat, can we make it a red shadow floating over head? 'Cause I wast to introduce another character.))


((As soon as this scene is over, sure))
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| November 22, 2009, 12:14 pm
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Quoting Gringat The Stormlord

Her eyes widened. "What!?? No!"


Fenrir

"Look at this scene here. We have the dead bodies of matoran in your basement. The authorities will come and see this. They will automatically blame you for this. I can save your hides by disposing of them in no time." I gather up the corpses, including the one on the wall, chains and all. I launch out, leaving no trace of what had happened. The authorities arrived soon after.
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| November 22, 2009, 12:16 pm
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Quoting Gringat The Stormlord

((As soon as this scene is over, sure))

((isnt he talking about the shadows i created:))
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| November 22, 2009, 12:17 pm
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"and what you did in the arena"i sighed
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| November 22, 2009, 12:17 pm
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Quoting The Abyss [formaly jake riedke]
((isnt he talking about the shadows i created:))


((No, what we're talking about is the being that was floating over the remains of my village.))
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| November 22, 2009, 12:20 pm
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Quoting The Abyss [formaly jake riedke]
"and what you did in the arena"i sighed


Surt

"That just bars the user from arena participation for some time."
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| November 22, 2009, 12:22 pm
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Quoting John the Imaginative

((No, what we're talking about is the being that was floating over the remains of my village.))


((You're not to touch that one. That black creature is MINE. Important for my plot, see?))
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| November 22, 2009, 12:40 pm
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Quoting John the Imaginative

Surt

"That just bars the user from arena participation for some time."


Telzira looked close to crying. She looked like she was going to be sick. Fear showed in her eyes. For Telzira, this was something nobody here had ever seen before, even when up against Great-Beings-know-what with tooth and blade. She stared off into space, drawing her arms tight around herself. She shivered.

"But I never did ANY of that stuff!" She struggled to speak, and the voice sounded eerily different to normal coming from her injured lungs. "I don't remember even going to the arena in the first place! And the agori in the cellar make no sense..."
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| November 22, 2009, 12:45 pm
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Quoting Gringat The Stormlord

Telzira looked close to crying. She looked like she was going to be sick. Fear showed in her eyes. For Telzira, this was something nobody here had ever seen before, even when up against Great-Beings-know-what with tooth and blade. She stared off into space, drawing her arms tight around herself. She shivered.

"But I never did ANY of that stuff!" She struggled to speak, and the voice sounded eerily different to normal coming from her injured lungs. "I don't remember even going to the arena in the first place! And the agori in the cellar make no sense..."

i embraced telzira trying to comforrt her
((you may now refer to The Abyss in story if you want as per my coment far up:))
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| November 22, 2009, 12:52 pm
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Ronin

I bared the way to Telzira's dwelling While Kira knocked at the door. We knew they were in there they just were not answering. I tried to talk her down but she wanted to know what was going on with her friend.
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| November 22, 2009, 1:00 pm
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The Abyss
sudenly telzira new the importace of the great beiings...and the primordial order
she knew that she must somehow contact the beings on all the plannets they were stationed...the fate of the univers may depend on it!
but first she must travel far far north...in search of...something.
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| November 22, 2009, 2:06 pm
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Quoting The Abyss [formaly jake riedke]
The Abyss
sudenly telzira new the importace of the great beiings...and the primordial order
she knew that she must somehow contact the beings on all the plannets they were stationed...the fate of the univers may depend on it!
but first she must travel far far north...in search of...something.



((I don't really like the idea of that. She has an elaborate vision that gives pretty much the same message? Yeah. Let's go with that. :P ))
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| November 22, 2009, 4:12 pm
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Quoting Gringat The Stormlord


((I don't really like the idea of that. She has an elaborate vision that gives pretty much the same message? Yeah. Let's go with that. :P ))

((um..bit of each then eh:)))
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| November 22, 2009, 4:36 pm
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Fenrir

I launch back through the window. "The authorities won't find the bodies now. You want to know? You'll have to let Rames in your head. He's obviously the one you trust the most. But first, the authorities. I believe they're here now." The door began to be pounded on. There was yelling outside.
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| November 22, 2009, 4:37 pm
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The authorities

"Open up! We heard an explosion just now! Let us in!"

Fenrir

"Hope you have a good alibi. If not, I'm sure one of us has one. Me, I'm going with accidental Thornax explosion."
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| November 22, 2009, 5:34 pm
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((Don't say a word until after i post my next comment.))
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| November 22, 2009, 5:45 pm
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Quoting Supreme commander Gideon Fucci
((Don't say a word until after i post my next comment.))


((A word.))
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| November 22, 2009, 5:50 pm
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Ronin

I ran into my house and pulled an aged chest out from under my bed. Throwing it open, I Pulled out a helmet that no Skrall had seen in ages. With the helmet were thick armored plates and a large shield. Dawning the armor, I felt a surge of power as the helmet clicked into place grabbing the sword and shield i ran back to Telzira's dwelling only to find the authorities were already there. I knocked the one that was pounding on the door back away from the door. I moved between them and the door."If you want in you'll have to get past me, And I can guarantee most of you will Die before I fall.
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| November 22, 2009, 5:55 pm
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Quoting Supreme commander Gideon Fucci
Ronin

I ran into my house and pulled an aged chest out from under my bed. Throwing it open, I Pulled out a helmet that no Skrall had seen in ages. With the helmet were thick armored plates and a large shield. Dawning the armor, I felt a surge of power as the helmet clicked into place grabbing the sword and shield i ran back to Telzira's dwelling only to find the authorities were already there. I knocked the one that was pounding on the door back away from the door. I moved between them and the door."If you want in you'll have to get past me, And I can guarantee most of you will Die before I fall.


Fenrir

"Calm down Ronin, let them in. I'll take care of it." (In a quiet voice. ->) "Now everybody look like they saw a Thornax go off by accident."
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| November 22, 2009, 5:56 pm
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Quoting John the Imaginative

Fenrir

"Calm down Rames, let them in. I'll take care of it."

((It is Ronin, not Rames. Ronin has a Long lasting thing for Telzira and whether she knows it or not does not matter he will die for her.))
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| November 22, 2009, 6:30 pm
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Quoting Supreme commander Gideon Fucci
((It is Ronin, not Rames. Ronin has a Long lasting thing for Telzira and whether she knows it or not does not matter he will die for her.))


((Whatever, just let the cops in.))
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| November 22, 2009, 7:02 pm
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Quoting John the Imaginative

Fenrir

"Calm down Ronin, let them in. I'll take care of it." (In a quiet voice. ->) "Now everybody look like they saw a Thornax go off by accident."
"How does Telzira feel about this I won't let anyone in unless she wishes it." Kira seemed to appear from thin air next to me. She too was in full battle armor but was not here to fight." brother ease down we dont need another fight right now. I know Telzira. She would not want you killing in her name. Besides you don't want to be thrown out for stopping an investigation." She spoke in a soft tone that calmed my battle ready nerves. I sighed,"If that is what you wish, sister." ((I have just been itching for a fight and no one is letting me have at anyone we all are going with the flow of Telzira's life. Am i the only one that noticed when you go back through the whole story that this world we have created revolves around Telzira. What about the other characters like Fenrir Rames and Ronin? anybody?))
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| November 22, 2009, 8:44 pm
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Quoting Supreme commander Gideon Fucci
Quoting John the Imaginative

Fenrir

"Calm down Ronin, let them in. I'll take care of it." (In a quiet voice. ->) "Now everybody look like they saw a Thornax go off by accident."
"How does Telzira feel about this I won't let anyone in unless she wishes it." Kira seemed to appear from thin air next to me. She too was in full battle armor but was not here to fight." brother ease down we dont need another fight right now. I know Telzira. She would not want you killing in her name. Besides you don't want to be thrown out for stopping an investigation." She spoke in a soft tone that calmed my battle ready nerves. I sighed,"If that is what you wish, sister." ((I have just been itching for a fight and no one is letting me have at anyone we all are going with the flow of Telzira's life. Am i the only one that noticed when you go back through the whole story that this world we have created revolves around Telzira. What about the other characters like Fenrir Rames and Ronin? anybody?))


((I've noticed that too. Telzira has the most mysteries about her, so it kinda makes sense. Besides, I don't care as long as I get to ropeplay.))

Fenrir

The cops entered the house. There was signs of a Thornax explosion in the basement, Fenrir looked a little crisp in front, and everyone was looking rather shocked and worried. There was no sign of the Agori's presence at all. "Sorry about that, I accidentally set off a Thornax in the basement. I dropped one I was holding by accident. Curse these old hands."

The cops (Irritated)

"Fine, but-" Surt looms up behind them. (Worried) "Never mind, lets go."

Fenrir

After they left I said "I told you it would work."
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| November 22, 2009, 8:54 pm
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Quoting John the Imaginative

((I've noticed that too. Telzira has the most mysteries about her, so it kinda makes sense. Besides, I don't care as long as I get to ropeplay.))

Fenrir

The cops entered the house. There was signs of a Thornax explosion in the basement, Fenrir looked a little crisp in front, and everyone was looking rather shocked and worried. There was no sign of the Agori's presence at all. "Sorry about that, I accidentally set off a Thornax in the basement. I dropped one I was holding by accident. Curse these old hands."

The cops (Irritated)

"Fine, but-" Surt looms up behind them. (Worried) "Never mind, lets go."

Fenrir

After they left I said "I told you it would work."


Fenrir

"So, how'd I do?"
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| November 23, 2009, 4:22 pm
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((So what is wrong with Ronin's helmet?!?))
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| November 23, 2009, 4:38 pm
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Quoting John the Imaginative

Fenrir

"So, how'd I do?"


((Telzira's story is actually pretty much meant to wrap around Fenrir's if that's possible. I wanna focus more on the Vampirik - maybe take one of them on as a character. I have a good idea for him.
Telzira's story can wait. I'll chuck in the occasional peice of it, but essentially it's a sideplot :) ))

Telzira was on her feet, at the window. She stared as the guards left.
"Fenrir?"
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| November 23, 2009, 4:41 pm
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Quoting Gringat The Stormlord

((Telzira's story is actually pretty much meant to wrap around Fenrir's if that's possible. I wanna focus more on the Vampirik - maybe take one of them on as a character. I have a good idea for him.
Telzira's story can wait. I'll chuck in the occasional peice of it, but essentially it's a sideplot :) ))

Telzira was on her feet, at the window. She stared as the guards left.
"Fenrir?"


Fenrir

"Yes?"
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| November 23, 2009, 4:44 pm
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Quoting John the Imaginative

Fenrir

"Yes?"


"Let's go to your village. I want to help."
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| November 23, 2009, 4:49 pm
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Ronin

I walk into Telzira's dwelling with Kira right behind me."Are you alright?"I blurted as soon as I was in the door."I heard that the Guard was looking for you."
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| November 23, 2009, 4:50 pm
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Quoting Gringat The Stormlord

"Let's go to your village. I want to help."


Fenrir

"We're fine Ronin. You want to help. That's fine with me. Let's go now."
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| November 23, 2009, 4:52 pm
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Quoting John the Imaginative

Fenrir

"We're fine Ronin. You want to help. That's fine with me. Let's go now."

Ronin
"Then lets get this show on the road."
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| November 23, 2009, 5:06 pm
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Quoting Supreme commander Gideon Fucci
Ronin
"Then lets get this show on the road."


Fenrir

"I may be old, but I'm still in perfectly good shape. How bout we race to the village to speed things up?"
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| November 23, 2009, 5:11 pm
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Quoting John the Imaginative

Fenrir

"I may be old, but I'm still in perfectly good shape. How bout we race to the village to speed things up?"


He turned to Telzira for confirmation on this, but she was already gone.
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| November 23, 2009, 5:15 pm
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Quoting Gringat The Stormlord

He turned to Telzira for confirmation on this, but she was already gone.


Fenrir

"Heh, always the impatient one. Surt, hammer throw."

Surt

I picked up Fenrir and spun him around to gain momentum, and then I threw him. He rocketed out the window and towards the village. I then ran off after him.

Fenrir

As I flew by Telzira, I took in the incredulous expression on her face all the way. "See ya." I shot forward. I flipped onto my feet when my speed decreased and ran as fast as I could toward the village.
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| November 23, 2009, 5:19 pm
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