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Bara Magna V
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((I think 210 comments is about as much as BMIV can handle. Here's another :) ))
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| November 6, 2009, 11:29 am
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Quoting jake riedke
((yes but go back there was an excuse every time
first time i only added to the storm made by telzira
2nd time i was powered up by the great being
3rd time was a little of the 2nd and i released all the energy left in the 'batteries'))
i held out my hand uneasily and he held it for ages then i saw the titanous figure in front of me.he was old and paranoid,armor rusting off the hinges his eyes seemed weary,like they had seeen years of torment,wich no doubt they had.he was taller than both me and telzira and stood a head taller than fenrir.he said that it was beyond repair that i would need a new one. "and where would you find a new one...?" i said growing angry thinking that he would kill one of my kind.
((sorry i wasnt here yesterday,i was sick.
in response to gringat i`ll make you an admin wonce you get the picture ready:)))


Some of the rocks and crystals that were loose on the ground of the cave began to hover uneasily when Telzira got close to them. They wove chaotic patterns across the floor, as she looked between Drachen and Rames - and the dead Agori.
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| November 6, 2009, 11:30 am
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Drachen

I saw the hidden rage in Rames face. I could tell what he was thinking. "Don't worry, I won't need to kill one of you for it. This cave contains everything I need to forge you a new hand. However, some of the materials are highly dangerous, and Fenrir will be getting those."

Fenrir

"You mean I have to get the Azalgor crystals? I hate those vicious baXXXXX!"

Drachen

"Yes, you need to retrieve them as you know how to get them safely."
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| November 6, 2009, 2:53 pm
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Quoting John the Imaginative
Drachen

I saw the hidden rage in Rames face. I could tell what he was thinking. "Don't worry, I won't need to kill one of you for it. This cave contains everything I need to forge you a new hand. However, some of the materials are highly dangerous, and Fenrir will be getting those."

Fenrir

"You mean I have to get the Azalgor crystals? I hate those vicious baXXXXX!"

Drachen

"Yes, you need to retrieve them as you know how to get them safely."


An ill wind blew through the cavern, carrying strange echoes - screams, wails, manaical laughter, the sounds of battle. Dust began to blow around into the faces of the people there. Every single crystal began to glow a sickly green...
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| November 6, 2009, 2:58 pm
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Quoting Gringat The Stormlord

An ill wind blew through the cavern, carrying strange echoes - screams, wails, manaical laughter, the sounds of battle. Dust began to blow around into the faces of the people there. Every single crystal began to glow a sickly green...


Drachen

"I see you've noticed the color changing properties of the crystals. A sickly green means we're in for a show. You'll see why I want to keep this place a secret." The sounds grew louder as armies materialized on both ends of the canyon.
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| November 6, 2009, 3:00 pm
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i noticed the gems glow a violent green and i started to grow woozy and feel faint the more i looked at them.then suddenly i nearly colapsed.
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| November 6, 2009, 3:04 pm
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Quoting jake riedke
i noticed the gems glow a violent green and i started to grow woozy and feel faint the more i looked at them.then suddenly i nearly colapsed.


Drachen

"He's gonna miss the show. Oh well." As the armies moved towards each other, I saw Telzira instinctively reach for her spear. "Don't bother, they don't exist, they're just images from the past."
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| November 6, 2009, 3:05 pm
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Quoting John the Imaginative

Drachen

"He's gonna miss the show. Oh well." As the armies moved towards each other, I saw Telzira instinctively reach for her spear. "Don't bother, they don't exist, they're just images from the past."


((Haha. You get what's happening. ^^ Plz let me write the rest though))
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| November 6, 2009, 3:08 pm
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Quoting John the Imaginative

Drachen

"He's gonna miss the show. Oh well." As the armies moved towards each other, I saw Telzira instinctively reach for her spear. "Don't bother, they don't exist, they're just images from the past."


The spirits were red and dusty in appearance. Lightning crackled occasionaly between them, and all of them looked extremely rusted and eroded, even though they looked so indistinct...
As one, they began to march towards Drachen...
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| November 6, 2009, 3:10 pm
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Quoting Gringat The Stormlord

The spirits were red and dusty in appearance. Lightning crackled occasionaly between them, and all of them looked extremely rusted and eroded, even though they looked so indistinct...
As one, they began to march towards Drachen...

i managed to pull myself together when i saw the armies collied "AAAHHHHH!"
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| November 6, 2009, 3:13 pm
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Quoting jake riedke
i managed to pull myself together when i saw the armies collied "AAAHHHHH!"


The armies stopped once they reached Drachen, thier ghostly boots echoing one final stamp on the dust-strewn floor. They stared ahead. A column of dust rose around Drachen, obscuring him from the view of everyone else there. Something moved beneath his feet.

Two seconds later, Drachen was thrown out of the column, about 3 metres up, and landed heavily on Fenrir. Feet first though, so that's alright.

Sounds of clinking and wailing echoed from within the pulsing column. It lay still, but for a rhythmic pulsing - at each pulse the dust surged upwards then began to fall back down again. Showers of greyness emptied over the onlookers. The ghosts began to scream - one long, drawn out scream made up of a thousand thousand voices...

And then it stopped. The column collapsed. The ghosts faded away into the air, and the crystals stopped glowing.

Where the column was, lay Agrathor, coughing violently and shaking. His eyes were glowing an ominous green, but then that faded. He looked up at Drachen.

"Oh no..."
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| November 6, 2009, 3:21 pm
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Quoting Gringat The Stormlord

The armies stopped once they reached Drachen, thier ghostly boots echoing one final stamp on the dust-strewn floor. They stared ahead. A column of dust rose around Drachen, obscuring him from the view of everyone else there. Something moved beneath his feet.

Two seconds later, Drachen was thrown out of the column, about 3 metres up, and landed heavily on Fenrir. Feet first though, so that's alright.

Sounds of clinking and wailing echoed from within the pulsing column. It lay still, but for a rhythmic pulsing - at each pulse the dust surged upwards then began to fall back down again. Showers of greyness emptied over the onlookers. The ghosts began to scream - one long, drawn out scream made up of a thousand thousand voices...

And then it stopped. The column collapsed. The ghosts faded away into the air, and the crystals stopped glowing.

Where the column was, lay Agrathor, coughing violently and shaking. His eyes were glowing an ominous green, but then that faded. He looked up at Drachen.

"Oh no..."


Drachen

"Do I want to know where HE came from? Wasn't he reduced to a pile of armor from the trap? Well, anyway, now do you see why I keep this place a secret? There have been wars fought here. Over this place. I intend to prevent it from happening again."
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| November 6, 2009, 3:42 pm
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Quoting John the Imaginative

Drachen

"Do I want to know where HE came from? Wasn't he reduced to a pile of armor from the trap? Well, anyway, now do you see why I keep this place a secret? There have been wars fought here. Over this place. I intend to prevent it from happening again."


Agrathor coughed clouds of dust, "A-are you Drachen?"

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| November 6, 2009, 3:47 pm
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Quoting Gringat The Stormlord

Agrathor coughed clouds of dust, "A-are you Drachen?"


Drachen

"I am he. You...I don't give a cXXp about, but I'd love to examine that mask of yours."

Fenrir

"Drachen is an expert of mysterious and powerful objects. He can probably explain your powers."
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| November 6, 2009, 3:49 pm
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Quoting John the Imaginative

Drachen

"I am he. You...I don't give a cXXp about, but I'd love to examine that mask of yours."

Fenrir

"Drachen is an expert of mysterious and powerful objects. He can probably explain your powers."


-Telzira-
"Uhm, what about Rames' hand?"
She looked to the Agori. Sure, his mask was powerful... but she couldn't feel any power coming from it at all... If there was any, it wasn't the kind she could detect....

Wait! There... It seemed almost as if Agrathor wqs feeling two different emotions at the same time, without them mixing...

...He had two minds.

-Agrathor-
"Y-you can help me fix it? Y-y-you can find out how to get rid of it??" His tone seemed eager, as if he'd been dropped a lifeline.
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| November 6, 2009, 3:56 pm
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Quoting Gringat The Stormlord

-Telzira-
"Uhm, what about Rames' hand?"
She looked to the Agori. Sure, his mask was powerful... but she couldn't feel any power coming from it at all... If there was any, it wasn't the kind she could detect....

Wait! There... It seemed almost as if Agrathor wqs feeling two different emotions at the same time, without them mixing...

...He had two minds.

-Agrathor-
"Y-you can help me fix it? Y-y-you can find out how to get rid of it??" His tone seemed eager, as if he'd been dropped a lifeline.


Drachen (completely forgotten about Rames.)

"I might. Though I'd need to study OW!!!!!" As Fenrir gave me a mighty punch.

Fenrir (slightly annoyed)

"Rames first, the little whelp second."

Drachen

"Fine, come with me." I lead them towards my crystal keep.
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| November 6, 2009, 3:58 pm
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Quoting John the Imaginative

Drachen (completely forgotten about Rames.)

"I might. Though I'd need to study OW!!!!!" As Fenrir gave me a mighty punch.

Fenrir (slightly annoyed)

"Rames first, the little whelp second."

Drachen

"Fine, come with me." I lead them towards my crystal keep.

-Telzira-

Telzira and Rames followed the two through a network of twisting passages, before the architecture changed to... well, actual architecture.
"How're you holding up, Rames?"
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| November 6, 2009, 4:03 pm
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Quoting Gringat The Stormlord
-Telzira-

Telzira and Rames followed the two through a network of twisting passages, before the architecture changed to... well, actual architecture.
"How're you holding up, Rames?"

"Fine" my limp hand ploped losely as i showed it to her
"what do you think about those crystles?i think there mor than have been shone..."
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| November 6, 2009, 4:06 pm
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Quoting Gringat The Stormlord
-Telzira-

Telzira and Rames followed the two through a network of twisting passages, before the architecture changed to... well, actual architecture.
"How're you holding up, Rames?"


Drachen

"He'll be fine. The crystals always turn
"knockout' green before the actual fighting starts. It will leave momentarily." I lead them into the forge. A massive room filled with sweltering heat, it was a blacksmith's dream. Alright people, I'll tell you what you need to get for me. Fenrir already knows that he needs to get Azalgor crystals. Telzira, you'll head to the western sector to pick up conductor vines. Be careful, they spark madly when cut. As for you Rames, you need to stay here. All I need are those too. How well can you stand the sight of body fluids spurting from an arm?"
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| November 6, 2009, 4:09 pm
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Quoting jake riedke
"Fine" my limp hand ploped losely as i showed it to her
"what do you think about those crystles?i think there mor than have been shone..."


"Well, yeah. You heard Drachen. Some of them are plain dangerous - even Fenrir's scared of them." She looked behind, but Fenrir was still away crystal hunting. Agamemnon hovered by her knees, a look of skittish fear on his face. He shuffled along behind them.

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| November 6, 2009, 4:11 pm
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Quoting John the Imaginative

Drachen

"He'll be fine. The crystals always turn
"knockout' green before the actual fighting starts. It will leave momentarily." I lead them into the forge. A massive room filled with sweltering heat, it was a blacksmith's dream. Alright people, I'll tell you what you need to get for me. Fenrir already knows that he needs to get Azalgor crystals. Telzira, you'll head to the western sector to pick up conductor vines. Be careful, they spark madly when cut. As for you Rames, you need to stay here. All I need are those too. How well can you stand the sight of body fluids spurting from an arm?"


Telzira nodded. "I know where they are - I could sense them all the way up here." She leaped up and jogged out into the caves, leaving Agrathor and Rames to Drachen's attention.
-Agrathor-
"Umm, can I do anything to help, Mr. Drachen sir?"
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| November 6, 2009, 4:13 pm
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Quoting John the Imaginative

Drachen

"He'll be fine. The crystals always turn
"knockout' green before the actual fighting starts. It will leave momentarily." I lead them into the forge. A massive room filled with sweltering heat, it was a blacksmith's dream. Alright people, I'll tell you what you need to get for me. Fenrir already knows that he needs to get Azalgor crystals. Telzira, you'll head to the western sector to pick up conductor vines. Be careful, they spark madly when cut. As for you Rames, you need to stay here. All I need are those too. How well can you stand the sight of body fluids spurting from an arm?"

"AAIIGH!"i yelleped jokingly
"i`ll be fine... i`ve seen worse...much worse"he started mumbleing to himselflost in his past
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| November 6, 2009, 4:13 pm
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Quoting Gringat The Stormlord

"Well, yeah. You heard Drachen. Some of them are plain dangerous - even Fenrir's scared of them." She looked behind, but Fenrir was still away crystal hunting. Agamemnon hovered by her knees, a look of skittish fear on his face. He shuffled along behind them.


Drachen

"Let me explain about Azalgor crystals. They're living crystals. However, they're extremely agressive and strong. And immune to all forms of energy-based attacks. It takes a lot of brute strength to take even one down. And they travel in packs of 4 or more."
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| November 6, 2009, 4:15 pm
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Quoting Gringat The Stormlord

"Well, yeah. You heard Drachen. Some of them are plain dangerous - even Fenrir's scared of them." She looked behind, but Fenrir was still away crystal hunting. Agamemnon hovered by her knees, a look of skittish fear on his face. He shuffled along behind them.

((Uhm got some1 on your mind do you?
btw you did it before to:)))
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| November 6, 2009, 4:15 pm
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Quoting jake riedke
((Uhm got some1 on your mind do you?
btw you did it before to:)))


((Haha. Whoops! :P Similar names.))

-AGRATHOR-
"Yeep... Sounds... painful..."
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| November 6, 2009, 4:21 pm
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Quoting Gringat The Stormlord

((Haha. Whoops! :P Similar names.))

-AGRATHOR-
"Yeep... Sounds... painful..."


Drachen

"Fenrir should be fine. He regularly wrestles with them when he comes here. Needless to say, that hasn't improved his opinion of them. Telzira, could you go get the conducter vines now? Be careful, they spark a huge amount when cut."
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| November 6, 2009, 4:23 pm
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Quoting John the Imaginative

Drachen

"Fenrir should be fine. He regularly wrestles with them when he comes here. Needless to say, that hasn't improved his opinion of them. Telzira, could you go get the conducter vines now? Be careful, they spark a huge amount when cut."


A shout came up from the caves. "I'M LOST!"

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| November 6, 2009, 4:29 pm
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Quoting Gringat The Stormlord

A shout came up from the caves. "I'M LOST!"


Drachen

"Now who would that be?"
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| November 6, 2009, 4:31 pm
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Quoting John the Imaginative

Drachen

"Now who would that be?"


"NOT FUNNY! I'M COMPLETELY - OUCH! WHAT THE XXXX! SOMETHING JUST LICKED ME..."
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| November 6, 2009, 4:32 pm
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Quoting Gringat The Stormlord

"NOT FUNNY! I'M COMPLETELY - OUCH! WHAT THE XXXX! SOMETHING JUST LICKED ME..."


Drachen

"Agrathor, is that you?"
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| November 6, 2009, 4:33 pm
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Quoting Gringat The Stormlord

"NOT FUNNY! I'M COMPLETELY - OUCH! WHAT THE XXXX! SOMETHING JUST LICKED ME..."

rahi-plant
"Mmmm leg!"
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| November 6, 2009, 4:34 pm
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Quoting jake riedke
rahi-plant
"Mmmm leg!"


((No plants here. Just crystals, metals, and crystal plants.))
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| November 6, 2009, 4:35 pm
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Quoting John the Imaginative

Drachen

"Agrathor, is that you?"


-Agrathor-
The agori pulled on Drachen's cloak. "I'm right here. That's Telzira."
A huge explosion sounded from below.

-Telzira-
"OUCH..."
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| November 6, 2009, 4:37 pm
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Quoting Gringat The Stormlord

-Agrathor-
The agori pulled on Drachen's cloak. "I'm right here. That's Telzira."
A huge explosion sounded from below.

-Telzira-
"OUCH..."


Drachen

"CAREFUL!!!! THIS PLACE IS ANCIENT!!!! Fine, I'll lead you out." I go over to Telzira, and showed her where to go to get in and out and where the vines are. I returned shortly.
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| November 6, 2009, 4:38 pm
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Quoting John the Imaginative

Drachen

"CAREFUL!!!! THIS PLACE IS ANCIENT!!!! Fine, I'll lead you out." I go over to Telzira, and showed her where to go to get in and out and where the vines are. I returned shortly.


-Agrathor-
"Can I help?"

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| November 6, 2009, 4:43 pm
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Quoting Gringat The Stormlord

-Agrathor-
"Can I help?"


Drachen

"Yes you can. DON'T TOUCH ANYTHING!"
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| November 6, 2009, 4:43 pm
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Quoting John the Imaginative

Drachen

"Yes you can. DON'T TOUCH ANYTHING!"


Agrathor jumped at Drachen's shout and fell to the ground with a small thump. "O-okay. I can do that."
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| November 6, 2009, 4:46 pm
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Quoting Gringat The Stormlord

Agrathor jumped at Drachen's shout and fell to the ground with a small thump. "O-okay. I can do that."


(Angry stomps are heard echoing throughout the keep.)

Drachen

"That would be Fenrir."

Fenrir (rather beat up)

"FXXXXX BAXXXXX!!! They put up a greater fight then usual. Well, here's your Azalgor crystals." I threw down a strange looking lump of crystal with what appeared to be legs that ended with really sharp claws.
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| November 6, 2009, 4:53 pm
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"AAAHHHH THATS GONNA BE MY HAND! AHHH!"
((this is getting rather R rated O_O:)))
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| November 6, 2009, 5:01 pm
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Quoting jake riedke
"AAAHHHH THATS GONNA BE MY HAND! AHHH!"
((this is getting rather R rated O_O:)))


Drachen

"That won't be your hand. That is what your hand will be made from."
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| November 6, 2009, 5:02 pm
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Quoting John the Imaginative

Drachen

"That won't be your hand. That is what your hand will be made from."

"Ohh ok"
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| November 6, 2009, 5:11 pm
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((Sorry guys but I'll be gone most of today. TT_TT))
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| November 7, 2009, 8:15 am
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Quoting John the Imaginative
((Sorry guys but I'll be gone most of today. TT_TT))

((Nae worries ive joined Vorox trouble and will find a way for the three groups to meet and the stories to cross))
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| November 7, 2009, 8:19 am
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Quoting Supreme commander Gideon Fucci
((((i have an idea already:)))
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| November 7, 2009, 9:56 am
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Quoting John the Imaginative
((Sorry guys but I'll be gone most of today. TT_TT))


((No worries. So was I - I just didn't tell anyone =O ))
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| November 7, 2009, 4:07 pm
Shinji rode through the desert on his steed, leaving a trail of dust behind him. All of sudden, the desert in front of him became warped, and everything froze around him. Sand twisted around a figure that rose up from the ground with it's palm facing Shinji. Shinji tried to speak, but nothing came out. An overpowering voice rang across the land.

"Give me your hand..."

-Shinji-
I saw no other options, an so followed the strangers orders. The instant I touched his cold, stony hands, the world disappeared around me, replaced by a black abyss. I fell through the shadows, my mouth open but still incapable of screaming. What had I gotten myself into?

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| November 7, 2009, 4:42 pm
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Telzira returned to the room, looking distinctly frazzled, with a coil of grey-blue vine over one shoulder. It gave off sparks every now and then.
"Got it..." Steam rose from her armour somewhere, and her cloak had a few new burn marks now.
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| November 7, 2009, 4:53 pm
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Quoting Gringat The Stormlord
Telzira returned to the room, looking distinctly frazzled, with a coil of grey-blue vine over one shoulder. It gave off sparks every now and then.
"Got it..." Steam rose from her armour somewhere, and her cloak had a few new burn marks now.


Drachen

"Eh heh heh. Alright, all the parts are here. Conductor vines for the nerves and crystal for the rest. Rames, you'll end up with a nearly indestructible hand after I'm done. Now those who don't want to watch me rip apart a vicious crystal beast with my bare hands turn away now."
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| November 7, 2009, 8:00 pm
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((you`ll soon see my personality grow with the rage of the flame`s))
my,i geuss you could call it ,friend tore into the crystlien beast like a beast himself riping and trashing tearing at every limb when he was done he held the only important part of the creature.what would soon replace my limp lifeless hand of insect meat and vermin armor when he was finished i 'carterized' what was left...
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| November 7, 2009, 8:30 pm
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Quoting The Abyss [formaly jake riedke]
((you`ll soon see my personality grow with the rage of the flame`s))
my,i geuss you could call it ,friend tore into the crystlien beast like a beast himself riping and trashing tearing at every limb when he was done he held the only important part of the creature.what would soon replace my limp lifeless hand of insect meat and vermin armor when he was finished i 'carterized' what was left...


((Drachen's got no mercy. He's an old warrior, one who has seen too many battles to believe in mercy.))

Drachen

"Now Rames, I would look away, as this could get a little more than a bit traumatic." I pull out my quality drill.

((The next scene will be a bit like this-http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fspFqd-SScY&feature=related. Skip to about 2 min, 30 sec.))
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| November 7, 2009, 8:44 pm
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Quoting John the Imaginative

((Drachen's got no mercy. He's an old warrior, one who has seen too many battles to believe in mercy.))

Drachen

"Now Rames, I would look away, as this could get a little more than a bit traumatic." I pull out my quality drill.

((The next scene will be a bit like this-http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fspFqd-SScY&feature=related. Skip to about 2 min, 30 sec.))


Telzira immediately curled back from Drachen, and grimaced. A faint shield shimmered around her.

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| November 8, 2009, 1:10 pm
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Quoting Gringat The Stormlord

Telzira immediately curled back from Drachen, and grimaced. A faint shield shimmered around her.

when he was done i had a hand where the insect corpse once stood
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| November 8, 2009, 1:15 pm
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Quoting Gringat The Stormlord

Telzira immediately curled back from Drachen, and grimaced. A faint shield shimmered around her.

((wanna make a time jump?))
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| November 8, 2009, 1:18 pm
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Quoting John the Imaginative

((Drachen's got no mercy. He's an old warrior, one who has seen too many battles to believe in mercy.))

Drachen

"Now Rames, I would look away, as this could get a little more than a bit traumatic." I pull out my quality drill.

((The next scene will be a bit like this-http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fspFqd-SScY&feature=related. Skip to about 2 min, 30 sec.))


((Just for the sake of MOCing, can Rames' hand suddenly have, like, suber Uber blasty power? And be all mechanical looking?
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| November 8, 2009, 1:20 pm
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Quoting Gringat The Stormlord

((Just for the sake of MOCing, can Rames' hand suddenly have, like, suber Uber blasty power? And be all mechanical looking?

((well the rest of him is:P)
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| November 8, 2009, 1:24 pm
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Quoting The Abyss [formaly jake riedke]
((well the rest of him is:P)


((And not match his other hand >.> :P))
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| November 8, 2009, 1:29 pm
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Quoting Gringat The Stormlord

((And not match his other hand >.> :P))

((well i alreasy saw him so yeah btw does telzira<you> really think his legs are fat?))
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| November 8, 2009, 1:32 pm
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Quoting The Abyss [formaly jake riedke]
((well i alreasy saw him so yeah btw does telzira<you> really think his legs are fat?))


((They're pretty normal on the MOC. He just has extremely retro armour ^^ ))
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| November 8, 2009, 1:35 pm
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Quoting The Abyss [formaly jake riedke]
when he was done i had a hand where the insect corpse once stood


"Are you okay now, Rames?" Telzira came forward to comfort him. His hand twitched oddly, and looked slightly different to the rest of his armour.
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| November 8, 2009, 1:45 pm
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Quoting Gringat The Stormlord

"Are you okay now, Rames?" Telzira came forward to comfort him. His hand twitched oddly, and looked slightly different to the rest of his armour.


Drachen

"The hand isn't any different than any other hand, only it's shiny and crystalline and close enough to invulnerable for practical purposes. It's more than capable a Thornax dead on without injury. Try it out."
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| November 8, 2009, 4:23 pm
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Telzira's eyes flashed a warning blue all of a sudden and she took a sharp gasp steadying herself on the wall.
"What's wrong?" Came the voice of Rames.
"The Baterra. The baterra have arrived in Bara Magna."
The face of her fiance drifted across her mind... The Baterra were here.

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| November 9, 2009, 8:42 am
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Quoting Gringat The Stormlord
Telzira's eyes flashed a warning blue all of a sudden and she took a sharp gasp steadying herself on the wall.
"What's wrong?" Came the voice of Rames.
"The Baterra. The baterra have arrived in Bara Magna."
The face of her fiance drifted across her mind... The Baterra were here.
((close to here?if so nice segway:)))

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| November 9, 2009, 2:40 pm
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i held my staff tight,awaiting the arival of death.my eyes fashed blue then black glazed over as a stern,angered look spread over my face
((time for a fight with 'my' tribe of vorox perphaps?))
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| November 9, 2009, 2:45 pm
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Quoting Gringat The Stormlord
Telzira's eyes flashed a warning blue all of a sudden and she took a sharp gasp steadying herself on the wall.
"What's wrong?" Came the voice of Rames.
"The Baterra. The baterra have arrived in Bara Magna."
The face of her fiance drifted across her mind... The Baterra were here.


Drachen and Fenrir together

"So it begins."
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| November 9, 2009, 3:05 pm
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Quoting Gringat The Stormlord
Telzira's eyes flashed a warning blue all of a sudden and she took a sharp gasp steadying herself on the wall.
"What's wrong?" Came the voice of Rames.
"The Baterra. The baterra have arrived in Bara Magna."
The face of her fiance drifted across her mind... The Baterra were here.
((wait a minute i think you messed something up you say she had a fiance but feels no love? and yet i remember her[you] saying that she missed him . that she feelt remorse. plz expplain:)))

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| November 9, 2009, 3:11 pm
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Quoting The Abyss [formaly jake riedke]
Quoting Gringat The Stormlord
Telzira's eyes flashed a warning blue all of a sudden and she took a sharp gasp steadying herself on the wall.
"What's wrong?" Came the voice of Rames.
"The Baterra. The baterra have arrived in Bara Magna."
The face of her fiance drifted across her mind... The Baterra were here.
((wait a minute i think you messed something up you say she had a fiance but feels no love? and yet i remember her[you] saying that she missed him . that she feelt remorse. plz expplain:)))


"Th-they're far away from here... but I can feel their auras even this far away... they've gotten as close as Agamemnon's old campsite... Fenrir knows what I mean."

((Simples. She had an arranged marriage - the Matron's daughter and one of Tuma's best warriors - that would help unify the tribe. The baterra killed Telzira's husband to be, and she feels guilty for not fulfilling her duty and helping him when she beleives she could have saved him. She couldn't actually have saved him, but there you go. Anyways... baterra attack. Tribe splits, and she thinks it's all her fault. Which is why she left the Sisters' Monastery as well, I guess.

I actually only got that sorted out this morning though, so ^^ I has good backstory nao? ))
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| November 9, 2009, 4:08 pm
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Quoting Gringat The Stormlord

"Th-they're far away from here... but I can feel their auras even this far away... they've gotten as close as Agamemnon's old campsite... Fenrir knows what I mean."

((Simples. She had an arranged marriage - the Matron's daughter and one of Tuma's best warriors - that would help unify the tribe. The baterra killed Telzira's husband to be, and she feels guilty for not fulfilling her duty and helping him when she beleives she could have saved him. She couldn't actually have saved him, but there you go. Anyways... baterra attack. Tribe splits, and she thinks it's all her fault. Which is why she left the Sisters' Monastery as well, I guess.

I actually only got that sorted out this morning though, so ^^ I has good backstory nao? ))

((better ^_^ ))
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| November 9, 2009, 4:12 pm
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"who`s?nevermind.so wher do we go?wgat do we do"i looked very anxious
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| November 9, 2009, 4:16 pm
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Quoting Gringat The Stormlord

"Th-they're far away from here... but I can feel their auras even this far away... they've gotten as close as Agamemnon's old campsite... Fenrir knows what I mean."

((Simples. She had an arranged marriage - the Matron's daughter and one of Tuma's best warriors - that would help unify the tribe. The baterra killed Telzira's husband to be, and she feels guilty for not fulfilling her duty and helping him when she beleives she could have saved him. She couldn't actually have saved him, but there you go. Anyways... baterra attack. Tribe splits, and she thinks it's all her fault. Which is why she left the Sisters' Monastery as well, I guess.

I actually only got that sorted out this morning though, so ^^ I has good backstory nao? ))


Fenrir

"Ah yes, the stew incident sight. I remember it well." This were starting to get interesting. Hopefully things don't deteriorate to the point where I need to use IT.
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| November 9, 2009, 4:18 pm
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Quoting The Abyss [formaly jake riedke]
"who`s?nevermind.so wher do we go?wgat do we do"i looked very anxious


Telzira's eyes glowed an ominous red.
"I won't let these tribes fall like I let mine."
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| November 9, 2009, 4:19 pm
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Quoting Gringat The Stormlord

Telzira's eyes glowed an ominous red.
"I won't let these tribes fall like I let mine."


Drachen

"Things are getting bad. But we need to calm down. Rames, how's the new hand?"
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| November 9, 2009, 4:20 pm
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"fine...tingely"my eyes faded back to normal
((lets make sure we meet them))
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| November 9, 2009, 4:34 pm
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Quoting John the Imaginative

Drachen

"Things are getting bad. But we need to calm down. Rames, how's the new hand?"


"...You said it can do different things... like... what was that about the thornax?"
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| November 9, 2009, 4:42 pm
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Quoting The Abyss [formaly jake riedke]
"fine...tingely"my eyes faded back to normal
((lets make sure we meet them))

((Hence why Telzira sensed the attack of Araneus, Ronin and the Baterra ^^ And... Araneus might crop up later, but I don't like playing him. Aggie and Telzie all the way ^^))
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| November 9, 2009, 4:47 pm
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Quoting The Abyss [formaly jake riedke]
"fine...tingely"my eyes faded back to normal
((lets make sure we meet them))


"Hey, where's that little Agori?" Telzira looked around, but the fellow had completely disappeared. A grunt of annoyance came from Drachen.
Her eyes glowed briefly.
"Oh. Underneath us." A huge scream came from below, and the sound of an agori tripping over his own feet. Something chittered and chimed after him - the sounds of claws scraping on walls could be heard.
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| November 9, 2009, 4:50 pm
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Quoting Gringat The Stormlord

"...You said it can do different things... like... what was that about the thornax?"


Drachen

"It's more than capable of taking a Thornax blast without damage. It's also stronger than a normal hand. Now Rames, if it weren't for Fenrir here, and this was one of the few times I returned to Bara Magna, I'd be handing you a massive bill right now."
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| November 9, 2009, 4:51 pm
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Quoting Gringat The Stormlord

"Hey, where's that little Agori?" Telzira looked around, but the fellow had completely disappeared. A grunt of annoyance came from Drachen.
Her eyes glowed briefly.
"Oh. Underneath us." A huge scream came from below, and the sound of an agori tripping over his own feet. Something chittered and chimed after him - the sounds of claws scraping on walls could be heard.


Fenrir

"CXXX!!!!! Those blasted Azalgors followed me! I need to stop them NOW!!!!! Or else we're in trouble. And Drachen can tell you why."
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| November 9, 2009, 4:56 pm
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Quoting John the Imaginative

Fenrir

"CXXX!!!!! Those blasted Azalgors followed me! I need to stop them NOW!!!!! Or else we're in trouble. And Drachen can tell you why."


A dark, morbid sound like the slamming of tomb doors echoed across the caves. The chiming and scraping stopped, one by one the creatures fell silent - and a green glow came from the entrance to the caves. Whispers of far-off voices twisted and writhed around the ears of the listeners, and then, all of a sudden, it stopped.
Agrathor limped up the steps, a few anfry looking mauve crystals embedded in his armour and his mask askew, but otherwise alright.
"What the CXXX were those things?" He said.
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| November 9, 2009, 5:06 pm
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Quoting Gringat The Stormlord

A dark, morbid sound like the slamming of tomb doors echoed across the caves. The chiming and scraping stopped, one by one the creatures fell silent - and a green glow came from the entrance to the caves. Whispers of far-off voices twisted and writhed around the ears of the listeners, and then, all of a sudden, it stopped.
Agrathor limped up the steps, a few anfry looking mauve crystals embedded in his armour and his mask askew, but otherwise alright.
"What the CXXX were those things?" He said.


The sounds of an intense fight begin reverberating throughout the keep.

Drachen

"Those were Azalgor crystals. Crystals that became sentient and insanely violent. I avoid their lairs unless I need one of them. Their skin is one of the hardest substances around. Their claws, some of the sharpest. And they travel in packs. Always. Where one is, 5-20 are right behind."

A massive blast rocks the keep.
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| November 9, 2009, 5:11 pm
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Quoting John the Imaginative

The sounds of an intense fight begin reverberating throughout the keep.

Drachen

"Those were Azalgor crystals. Crystals that became sentient and insanely violent. I avoid their lairs unless I need one of them. Their skin is one of the hardest substances around. Their claws, some of the sharpest. And they travel in packs. Always. Where one is, 5-20 are right behind."

A massive blast rocks the keep.


--Agrathor--
"Uhh... I'd say about 30 are following me now..." Something green glowed by his side. One by one, Azalgor crystals filled the room, each glowing that sickly green. One dubbed affectionately against Agrathor's shoulder.
"I... think they like me."
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| November 9, 2009, 5:17 pm
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Quoting Gringat The Stormlord

--Agrathor--
"Uhh... I'd say about 30 are following me now..." Something green glowed by his side. One by one, Azalgor crystals filled the room, each glowing that sickly green. One dubbed affectionately against Agrathor's shoulder.
"I... think they like me."


Drachen

"If they rub against you, it means they find you tasty. They'll readily cannibalize each other too. Every one, prepare for a fight."

Fenrir

I smash my way through the wall. "Who said you could start without me?"
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| November 9, 2009, 5:21 pm
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Quoting John the Imaginative

Drachen

"If they rub against you, it means they find you tasty. They'll readily cannibalize each other too. Every one, prepare for a fight."

Fenrir

I smash my way through the wall. "Who said you could start without me?"


The sickly green glow increased, and one of the crystals in the back exploded violently. The others didn't seem to notice.
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| November 9, 2009, 5:26 pm
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they started climbing in by the dozens
there acid breath surounding the cave
“Xxx I love this!”i exclaimed and I leapt into the air smiling my staff began to whip around me so wildly that it seemed I was a floating orb the tips of my staff ignited so that it appeared as a ball of black and purple flame. Slowly it emitted a violet halo that eventually engulfed the surrounding valley. Separate beams of black light followed striking my enemies and then I fell to the ground for my final blow swinging my staff from behind my head I struck the ground and a black and purple inferno launched from the tip
Slowly it molded itself features a horrible mouth shaped from the mass followed by the eyes. The eyes of pure evil. Other beams grew from the center of the mass forming arms and terrible claws. It absorbed the energy of my surrounding foes but they did not fall instead they stopped fighting and assumed a state of apparent peace. It reared its gaze upon me and howled an unearthly noise .it jumped on me tearing and thrashing at my very soul, still growing from my blade. It became me or I became it I don’t remember. but for ever more my eye were as dark as pits. I raised surpriseingly sturdy considering what had just transpired and said nothing

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| November 9, 2009, 5:28 pm
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Quoting Gringat The Stormlord

The sickly green glow increased, and one of the crystals in the back exploded violently. The others didn't seem to notice.


((Azalgor's don't change color, they stay a nice mauve color.))

Fenrir

"That'll teach it not to sit on Drachen's forge."

Drachen (all signs of his calm gone. Now enraged)

"IT BLEW UP ON MY FORGE! MY PRECIOUS FORGE!! RAAAAAGH!!!!!"
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| November 9, 2009, 5:30 pm
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Quoting John the Imaginative

((Azalgor's don't change color, they stay a nice mauve color.))

Fenrir

"That'll teach it not to sit on Drachen's forge."

Drachen (all signs of his calm gone. Now enraged)

"IT BLEW UP ON MY FORGE! MY PRECIOUS FORGE!! RAAAAAGH!!!!!"

((wait its taking time to load my coment XP))
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| November 9, 2009, 5:31 pm
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Quoting John the Imaginative

((Azalgor's don't change color, they stay a nice mauve color.))

Fenrir

"That'll teach it not to sit on Drachen's forge."

Drachen (all signs of his calm gone. Now enraged)

"IT BLEW UP ON MY FORGE! MY PRECIOUS FORGE!! RAAAAAGH!!!!!"

((wait its taking time to load my coment XP))
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| November 9, 2009, 5:32 pm
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Quoting The Abyss [formaly jake riedke]
they started climbing in by the dozens
there acid breath surounding the cave
“Xxx I love this!”i exclaimed and I leapt into the air smiling my staff began to whip around me so wildly that it seemed I was a floating orb the tips of my staff ignited so that it appeared as a ball of black and purple flame. Slowly it emitted a violet halo that eventually engulfed the surrounding valley. Separate beams of black light followed striking my enemies and then I fell to the ground for my final blow swinging my staff from behind my head I struck the ground and a black and purple inferno launched from the tip
Slowly it molded itself features a horrible mouth shaped from the mass followed by the eyes. The eyes of pure evil. Other beams grew from the center of the mass forming arms and terrible claws. It absorbed the energy of my surrounding foes but they did not fall instead they stopped fighting and assumed a state of apparent peace. It reared its gaze upon me and howled an unearthly noise .it jumped on me tearing and thrashing at my very soul, still growing from my blade. It became me or I became it I don’t remember. but for ever more my eye were as dark as pits. I raised surpriseingly sturdy considering what had just transpired and said nothing


((You're creating too much out of my beast. They're living crystals, and insanely violent too. They do not end up at peace. What you did would just make them slightly less violent.))
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| November 9, 2009, 5:44 pm
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Quoting The Abyss [formaly jake riedke]
they started climbing in by the dozens
there acid breath surounding the cave
“Xxx I love this!”i exclaimed and I leapt into the air smiling my staff began to whip around me so wildly that it seemed I was a floating orb the tips of my staff ignited so that it appeared as a ball of black and purple flame. Slowly it emitted a violet halo that eventually engulfed the surrounding valley. Separate beams of black light followed striking my enemies and then I fell to the ground for my final blow swinging my staff from behind my head I struck the ground and a black and purple inferno launched from the tip
Slowly it molded itself features a horrible mouth shaped from the mass followed by the eyes. The eyes of pure evil. Other beams grew from the center of the mass forming arms and terrible claws. It absorbed the energy of my surrounding foes but they did not fall instead they stopped fighting and assumed a state of apparent peace. It reared its gaze upon me and howled an unearthly noise .it jumped on me tearing and thrashing at my very soul, still growing from my blade. It became me or I became it I don’t remember. but for ever more my eye were as dark as pits. I raised surpriseingly sturdy considering what had just transpired and said nothing


Suddenly Telzira's eyes glowed the same green as the crystals, and Agrathor's eyes. She fell limp, her head lolled to the side, and then, without looking up, she raised a limp hand and blasted Rames clean out of the air with a shockwave.
Agrathor could no longer control himself, and he found himself launching at Fenrir in a fury, punching at him. Somehow, his punches were actually hurting the beast - leaving great, acid scars where they hit. The crystals crowded around Drachen, buzzing...
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| November 9, 2009, 5:54 pm
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Quoting The Abyss [formaly jake riedke]
they started climbing in by the dozens
there acid breath surounding the cave
“Xxx I love this!”i exclaimed and I leapt into the air smiling my staff began to whip around me so wildly that it seemed I was a floating orb the tips of my staff ignited so that it appeared as a ball of black and purple flame. Slowly it emitted a violet halo that eventually engulfed the surrounding valley. Separate beams of black light followed striking my enemies and then I fell to the ground for my final blow swinging my staff from behind my head I struck the ground and a black and purple inferno launched from the tip
Slowly it molded itself features a horrible mouth shaped from the mass followed by the eyes. The eyes of pure evil. Other beams grew from the center of the mass forming arms and terrible claws. It absorbed the energy of my surrounding foes but they did not fall instead they stopped fighting and assumed a state of apparent peace. It reared its gaze upon me and howled an unearthly noise .it jumped on me tearing and thrashing at my very soul, still growing from my blade. It became me or I became it I don’t remember. but for ever more my eye were as dark as pits. I raised surpriseingly sturdy considering what had just transpired and said nothing


Suddenly Telzira's eyes glowed the same green as the crystals, and Agrathor's eyes. She fell limp, her head lolled to the side, and then, without looking up, she raised a limp hand and blasted Rames clean out of the air with a shockwave.
Agrathor could no longer control himself, and he found himself launching at Fenrir in a fury, punching at him. Somehow, his punches were actually hurting the beast - leaving great, acid scars where they hit. The crystals crowded around Drachen, buzzing...
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| November 9, 2009, 5:54 pm
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Quoting Gringat The Stormlord

Suddenly Telzira's eyes glowed the same green as the crystals, and Agrathor's eyes. She fell limp, her head lolled to the side, and then, without looking up, she raised a limp hand and blasted Rames clean out of the air with a shockwave.
Agrathor could no longer control himself, and he found himself launching at Fenrir in a fury, punching at him. Somehow, his punches were actually hurting the beast - leaving great, acid scars where they hit. The crystals crowded around Drachen, buzzing...

((lets say that didnt hapen i want this development:)))
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| November 10, 2009, 3:06 pm
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((Time to unleash Spinereaver, and Agrathor's gonna die again.))

Drachen

"From thy chains within the earth I free thee, great blade of death, SPINEREAVER!!!!" The ground erupts in a shower of fire, and from the ground a massive chained hilt appears. I grab the hilt, breaking the chains in the process, and pull out a massive blade((http://www.mocpages.com/moc.php/101522)). I grasp the blade in both hands, and unleash a massive swing, tearing the Azalgors asunder. "FEAR THE MIGHT OF SPINEREAVER!!!"

Fenrir

I threw Agrathor onto the ground, and with a powerful blow, severed his head from his body. ((Fighting Azalgors daily does wonders for one's strength.)) I turned to Telzira, and delivered the Vampirik Bite, draining her of almost all of her remaining energy, leaving just enough to ensure she survived. As for Rames, a bit of fresh air will do him good. Heh heh heh.
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| November 10, 2009, 4:18 pm
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((Hello? Anyone there?))
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| November 10, 2009, 5:00 pm
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Quoting John the Imaginative
((Hello? Anyone there?))


Immediately the red mists rushed in, and Agrathor quickly regenerated, rubbing his neck and couging. Telzira was completely unconscious.

Agrathor looked around at the destruction he'd caused, and whimpered.
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| November 10, 2009, 5:10 pm
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Drachen

"Do not worry little one, for I caused most of this." I picked up Spinereaver, and slung it over my shoulder with one hand in a single quick motion. Fenrir was sitting on the rubble of a wall, staring at the sky. Rames was just walking back, rather scuffed up.
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| November 10, 2009, 5:14 pm
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Quoting John the Imaginative
Drachen

"Do not worry little one, for I caused most of this." I picked up Spinereaver, and slung it over my shoulder with one hand in a single quick motion. Fenrir was sitting on the rubble of a wall, staring at the sky. Rames was just walking back, rather scuffed up.


"You said you'd help me with this mask."
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| November 10, 2009, 5:58 pm
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Quoting Gringat The Stormlord

"You said you'd help me with this mask."


Drachen

"Ahh yes, I did. Well come here." THWACK! I knocked the poor Agori, and begin to examine the mask. ((Once again, it's like this: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fspFqd-SScY&feature=related skip to 2:30.))
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| November 10, 2009, 6:01 pm
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Quoting John the Imaginative

Drachen

"Ahh yes, I did. Well come here." THWACK! I knocked the poor Agori, and begin to examine the mask. ((Once again, it's like this: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fspFqd-SScY&feature=related skip to 2:30.))


"C-careful! I can't actually take it off, you know. It doesn't like me not touching it."
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| November 10, 2009, 6:04 pm
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Quoting Gringat The Stormlord

"C-careful! I can't actually take it off, you know. It doesn't like me not touching it."


Drachen

"Wait, you're not unconscious yet? Guess I didn't hit hard enough." WHAM!!!!! The Agori was down for the count after that. And then I continued.
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| November 10, 2009, 6:05 pm
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Quoting John the Imaginative

Drachen

"Wait, you're not unconscious yet? Guess I didn't hit hard enough." WHAM!!!!! The Agori was down for the count after that. And then I continued.


Agrathor, now completely unconscious, was left completely undefended against Drachen's brrage of drilling and probing...
((I gtg bye))
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| November 10, 2009, 6:09 pm
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Quoting The Abyss [formaly jake riedke]
“Xxx I love this!” and I leapt into the air smiling my staff began to whip around me so wildly that it seemed I was a floating orb the tips of my staff ignited so that it appeared as a ball of black and purple flame. Slowly it emitted a violet halo that eventually engulfed the surrounding valley. Separate beams of black light followed striking my enemies and then I fell to the ground for my final blow swinging my staff from behind my head I struck the ground and a black and purple inferno launched from the tip
Slowly it molded itself features a horrible mouth shaped from the mass followed by the eyes. The eyes yellow of pure evil. Other beams grew from the center of the mass forming arms and terrible claws. It absorbed the energy of my surrounding foes but they did not fall instead they stopped fighting and assumed a state of apparent peace. It reared its gaze upon me and howled an unearthly noise .it jumped on me tearing and thrashing at my very soul, still growing from my blade. It became me or I became it I don’t remember. but for ever more my eye were as dark as pits. I raised surpriseingly sturdy considering what had just transpired and said nothing

i stood solemly in the back ground.my eyes burning a violent black

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| November 10, 2009, 8:22 pm
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Quoting The Abyss [formaly jake riedke]
i stood solemly in the back ground.my eyes burning a violent black

i telepathicly shoed telzira all my current emotions((hatred,boredom,but mostly she saw that my mind was empty))and sstarted to walk away
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| November 12, 2009, 3:04 pm
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Quoting The Abyss [formaly jake riedke]
i telepathicly shoed telzira all my current emotions((hatred,boredom,but mostly she saw that my mind was empty))and sstarted to walk away


Fenrir

I rush in front of Rames and grab him roughly by the arm. "Listen here. She had no control over it. I've seen it before. Those with psychic abilities and over anything pertaining to power over the mind have had this happen to them at some point, where something augments their powers to the point where they are no longer in control, even if only temporarily rendered out of control. You can either accept this or I take you over to the Azalgors." Drachen continued examining Agrathor, but stopped for a moment to put a crystal pipe in his mouth. He took a few draws of the pipe, and exhaled. He's seen it before.
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| November 12, 2009, 3:09 pm
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Quoting John the Imaginative

Fenrir

I rush in front of Rames and grab him roughly by the arm. "Listen here. She had no control over it. I've seen it before. Those with psychic abilities and over anything pertaining to power over the mind have had this happen to them at some point, where something augments their powers to the point where they are no longer in control, even if only temporarily rendered out of control. You can either accept this or I take you over to the Azalgors." Drachen continued examining Agrathor, but stopped for a moment to put a crystal pipe in his mouth. He took a few draws of the pipe, and exhaled. He's seen it before.

((acept what?))
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| November 12, 2009, 3:12 pm
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Quoting The Abyss [formaly jake riedke]
((acept what?))


((What Fenrir just said.))
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| November 12, 2009, 3:12 pm
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Quoting John the Imaginative

Fenrir

I rush in front of Rames and grab him roughly by the arm. "Listen here. She had no control over it. I've seen it before. Those with psychic abilities and over anything pertaining to power over the mind have had this happen to them at some point, where something augments their powers to the point where they are no longer in control, even if only temporarily rendered out of control. You can either accept this or I take you over to the Azalgors." Drachen continued examining Agrathor, but stopped for a moment to put a crystal pipe in his mouth. He took a few draws of the pipe, and exhaled. He's seen it before.


Telzira merely sat hunched up agianst the wall, face in her hands. Despite Fenrir's almost surgical accuracy with the bite, her armour was still slightly damaged around the bite and she shook occasionaly.
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| November 12, 2009, 3:49 pm
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Quoting Gringat The Stormlord

Telzira merely sat hunched up agianst the wall, face in her hands. Despite Fenrir's almost surgical accuracy with the bite, her armour was still slightly damaged around the bite and she shook occasionaly.


Drachen

"You okay there? I know Fenrir may lack finesse, but he truly did the only thing capable of saving our hides. I'm just about done here too." I inhaled again and breathed out a large cloud of smoke. "Trust me, I've seen much worse than a psychic's power running amok. Much worse."
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| November 12, 2009, 3:55 pm
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Quoting John the Imaginative

Drachen

"You okay there? I know Fenrir may lack finesse, but he truly did the only thing capable of saving our hides. I'm just about done here too." I inhaled again and breathed out a large cloud of smoke. "Trust me, I've seen much worse than a psychic's power running amok. Much worse."


"They aren't amok. What makes you think that?" Telzira looked up, her eyes still glowing a virulent green, and a mad grin plastered across her face. She was wearing the mask.

Agrathor wasn't unconscious at all. His mind was completely destroyed, and he was still, on the floor where Drachen had left him. Blank, unseeing eyes stared into nothingness...

Tlezira got to her feet, the red dust rising up again. Spirits appeared around her.
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| November 12, 2009, 4:02 pm
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Quoting Gringat The Stormlord

"They aren't amok. What makes you think that?" Telzira looked up, her eyes still glowing a virulent green, and a mad grin plastered across her face. She was wearing the mask.

Agrathor wasn't unconscious at all. His mind was completely destroyed, and he was still, on the floor where Drachen had left him. Blank, unseeing eyes stared into nothingness...

Tlezira got to her feet, the red dust rising up again. Spirits appeared around her.


Drachen

"DXXN! E.R.A.! TO ME!!!!!" I felt a familiar rush of extreme power enter into me as the Eternal Rage Armor attached it self to my body. "FENRIR!!!! RAMES!!!! GET IN HERE!!!!"

Both

"What? Oh. SXXX."

Fenrir

"With someone of Telzira's capabilities under the control of that thing, I might need to bring IT out!"

Drachen

"Let's hope it doesn't progress that far!"
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| November 12, 2009, 4:07 pm
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Quoting John the Imaginative

Drachen

"DXXN! E.R.A.! TO ME!!!!!" I felt a familiar rush of extreme power enter into me as the Eternal Rage Armor attached it self to my body. "FENRIR!!!! RAMES!!!! GET IN HERE!!!!"

Both

"What? Oh. SXXX."

Fenrir

"With someone of Telzira's capabilities under the control of that thing, I might need to bring IT out!"

Drachen

"Let's hope it doesn't progress that far!"



"Oh! Oh ho! I see what you're trying to do! Well it won't work if she's dead will it!?" Telzira fell to the floor, clutching at her neck, but still laughing manaically. Sparks flew everywhere.
Agrathor's head exploded.

((Drachen would perhaps see it that Telzira is a necessary death to neutralise this thing. Rames would then go on a love-crazed rampage or something against Drachen or something...? It would be fun to RP))
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| November 12, 2009, 4:14 pm
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Quoting Gringat The Stormlord


"Oh! Oh ho! I see what you're trying to do! Well it won't work if she's dead will it!?" Telzira fell to the floor, clutching at her neck, but still laughing manaically. Sparks flew everywhere.
Agrathor's head exploded.

((Drachen would perhaps see it that Telzira is a necessary death to neutralise this thing. Rames would then go on a love-crazed rampage or something against Drachen or something...? It would be fun to RP))


((Drachen sees the truth. Oh, and I'm going to name the helm. Is that okay?))

Drachen

"Now I'm afraid that won't work. Everyone, that isn't Telzira in control. That is the Mask of the Boneraiser in control. I've read ancient texts about it, and they match it perfectly. We need to exorcise it! Fenrir, it's time to use our old tag team technique!"

Fenrir

"It's about time!"
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| November 12, 2009, 4:19 pm
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Quoting John the Imaginative

((Drachen sees the truth. Oh, and I'm going to name the helm. Is that okay?))

Drachen

"Now I'm afraid that won't work. Everyone, that isn't Telzira in control. That is the Mask of the Boneraiser in control. I've read ancient texts about it, and they match it perfectly. We need to exorcise it! Fenrir, it's time to use our old tag team technique!"

Fenrir

"It's about time!"


((That's actually what it is :P How'd you guess?))
"Oh please don't. I am so enjoying this... but... if you really insist on this, I shall have to leave." Green fire erupted around her. "And I think I'll take you, too, Lover-Boy! Think how ironic this is for you!" Telzira and Rames disappeared in clouds of red dust and green fire.

Out in the desert, Telzira reappeared, Rames was bound by a chain of telekinetic energy.
"Now I'm out of those two's way... what to do with you..." She paced around Rames thoughtfully. "Hmm..."
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| November 12, 2009, 4:25 pm
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Quoting Gringat The Stormlord

((That's actually what it is :P How'd you guess?))
"Oh please don't. I am so enjoying this... but... if you really insist on this, I shall have to leave." Green fire erupted around her. "And I think I'll take you, too, Lover-Boy! Think how ironic this is for you!" Telzira and Rames disappeared in clouds of red dust and green fire.

Out in the desert, Telzira reappeared, Rames was bound by a chain of telekinetic energy.
"Now I'm out of those two's way... what to do with you..." She paced around Rames thoughtfully. "Hmm..."


"The powers seemed just about fitting for the name.))

Drachen

I can't believe I'll have to leave the keep. Oh well, it can't be helped. GuuuUUUURGH!!!" Focusing power into my hands, I tore open a hole in space, leading directly to Telzira's location. We both jumped through it. I could see the worry on Fenrir's face. And the rage turning the symbols on his exoskeletal growths blood-red.

Fenrir
"..."
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| November 12, 2009, 4:28 pm
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((I DO NOT talk i am a shell working on instinct[so he would still feel l-u-s-t ..but i could be brought out of it[but not yet]))i sat looking,pale-eyed,at my captormy empty mind wandered...
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| November 12, 2009, 4:32 pm
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Quoting John the Imaginative

"The powers seemed just about fitting for the name.))

Drachen

I can't believe I'll have to leave the keep. Oh well, it can't be helped. GuuuUUUURGH!!!" Focusing power into my hands, I tore open a hole in space, leading directly to Telzira's location. We both jumped through it. I could see the worry on Fenrir's face. And the rage turning the symbols on his exoskeletal growths blood-red.

Fenrir
"..."


"Oh ****!" Whatever Telzira now was, it disappeared in a cloud of flame again, leaving Rames behind as Drachen and Fenrir appeared.

In Iconox, a strange figure in a black cloak materialised on the tallest tower. One by one, it coaxed the minds of the Agori there... They always were so easily corruptible. Gelu and Strakk muscled up behind her, and the people, even down to the women and children and beasts, formed up into ranks...

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| November 12, 2009, 4:34 pm
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Quoting Gringat The Stormlord

"Oh ****!" Whatever Telzira now was, it disappeared in a cloud of flame again, leaving Rames behind as Drachen and Fenrir appeared.

In Iconox, a strange figure in a black cloak materialised on the tallest tower. One by one, it coaxed the minds of the Agori there... They always were so easily corruptible. Gelu and Strakk muscled up behind her, and the people, even down to the women and children and beasts, formed up into ranks...


Drachen

Iconox. That's where they were. "Fenrir, I'll prepare the exorcism, you get her over here. B.W.M.N.!"

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| November 12, 2009, 4:39 pm
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i surounded my self in flame egulfing yards around me the ropes bured off and i arose i wlaked and faded returning on the moutain wherethe woman stood
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| November 12, 2009, 4:40 pm
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((wannaconect th 2 stories now?seems like the perfect time))
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| November 12, 2009, 4:45 pm
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Drachen

"I'll prepare the exorcism. You bring her here through any means necessary. Use IT if you have to."

Fenrir

"Got it. She's in Iconox. I can feel the evil. SHUUNPO!!!" And with that I vanished, accelerating to the limit! I reached the tower in no time. "HEY YOU PHAIL MASK! COME AND GET ME!!!!" And with that I vanished.
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| November 12, 2009, 4:46 pm
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I STOOD BY HER WHEN i sensd the beast presence.i left to pursue him
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| November 12, 2009, 4:50 pm
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Quoting The Abyss [formaly jake riedke]
I STOOD BY HER WHEN i sensd the beast presence.i left to pursue him


Fenrir

I appear behind him. "Not good enough." WHAM!!!! Rames down for several hours, just the queen to go. I reappeared in front of her, then made a extremely rude gesture, and then disappeared again.
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| November 12, 2009, 4:56 pm
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Quoting John the Imaginative

Fenrir

I appear behind him. "Not good enough." WHAM!!!! Rames down for several hours, just the queen to go. I reappeared in front of her, then made a extremely rude gesture, and then disappeared again.

((brb))
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| November 12, 2009, 4:57 pm
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i rose and followed his 'scent' i stoped him in the coridor with a wall of flame
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| November 12, 2009, 5:04 pm
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Quoting The Abyss [formaly jake riedke]
i rose and followed his 'scent' i stoped him in the coridor with a wall of flame


Fenrir

"I can't believe I have to use...Vampira...VAM-PI-RA!!!!!" Twin wings of darkness grew from my back, I discarded my blades as my claws grew long. Wisps of darkness issued from my mouth. My eyes, they emitted a blood-red glow, and a haze of the same color surrounded my body. My voice sounded as if it was corrupted by darkness. "My ultimate power Vampira. Granting me power on par with the Great Beings. But at a terrible price." I grab Rames, yank him through dimensions back to Drachen. "Exorcise the darkness within him."

Drachen

A massive burst of light, and Rames was free. "So you used it. Vampira. How long till you can move again afterwards?"

Fenrir

"Three months at the minimum. I'm getting Telzira. NOW." I jumped through the dimensions again, appearing directly in front of Telzira. "Let's end this. YOU WILL BE PURIFIED."
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| November 12, 2009, 5:11 pm
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Quoting The Abyss [formaly jake riedke]
i rose and followed his 'scent' i stoped him in the coridor with a wall of flame


((This is gonna have to wait until someone unblocks my comment.))
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| November 12, 2009, 5:12 pm
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Quoting John the Imaginative

((This is gonna have to wait until someone unblocks my comment.))


((Can I have it so Surt is in the mask? That would be fun >:D ))
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| November 12, 2009, 5:16 pm
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Quoting Gringat The Stormlord

((Can I have it so Surt is in the mask? That would be fun >:D ))

((huh.and how `bout we connect the stories soon?))
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| November 12, 2009, 5:18 pm
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Quoting Gringat The Stormlord

((Can I have it so Surt is in the mask? That would be fun >:D ))


((Sure. NOW LET THE EPIC BATTLE COMMENCE!!!!))
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| November 12, 2009, 5:20 pm
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Quoting John the Imaginative

((Sure. NOW LET THE EPIC BATTLE COMMENCE!!!!))

i left the cave though the still open votex
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| November 12, 2009, 5:22 pm
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Quoting John the Imaginative

((Sure. NOW LET THE EPIC BATTLE COMMENCE!!!!))


"Oh Fenrir, dear, you shouldn't expend your energies like that. Remember last time? It was a shame to call you "brother". Actually..." The figure grinned maliciously. "I always have been."
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| November 12, 2009, 5:24 pm
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Quoting Gringat The Stormlord

"Oh Fenrir, dear, you shouldn't expend your energies like that. Remember last time? It was a shame to call you "brother". Actually..." The figure grinned maliciously. "I always have been."

((what the hxxx is happening!(:O))
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| November 12, 2009, 5:26 pm
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Quoting Gringat The Stormlord

"Oh Fenrir, dear, you shouldn't expend your energies like that. Remember last time? It was a shame to call you "brother". Actually..." The figure grinned maliciously. "I always have been."


Fenrir

"Hello Surt. I'm afraid you shall die along with your helm. GRAAAAAGH!!!! DARK BREATH!!!!" I shot forth a massive blast of darkness from my mouth."
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| November 12, 2009, 5:28 pm
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Quoting John the Imaginative

Fenrir

"Hello Surt. I'm afraid you shall die along with your helm. GRAAAAAGH!!!! DARK BREATH!!!!" I shot forth a massive blast of darkness from my mouth."

((WHO THE HXX IS SURT!))
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| November 12, 2009, 5:29 pm
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Quoting The Abyss [formaly jake riedke]
((WHO THE HXX IS SURT!))


((An ancient and insanely powerful evil Vampirik. http://www.mocpages.com/moc.php/95357))
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| November 12, 2009, 5:30 pm
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Quoting John the Imaginative

Fenrir

"Hello Surt. I'm afraid you shall die along with your helm. GRAAAAAGH!!!! DARK BREATH!!!!" I shot forth a massive blast of darkness from my mouth."


The breath shimmered past Telzira. "Huh. Weakling. How much time left with that Vampira? Not long, I imagine."
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| November 12, 2009, 5:32 pm
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Quoting John the Imaginative

((An ancient and insanely powerful evil Vampirik. http://www.mocpages.com/moc.php/95357))

((so why is he in her body? and why isnt he metioned untill now?or in gd?i cant folow anything if you dont tell me!))
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| November 12, 2009, 5:33 pm
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(( HELLOOOOO!))
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| November 12, 2009, 5:37 pm
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Quoting Gringat The Stormlord

The breath shimmered past Telzira. "Huh. Weakling. How much time left with that Vampira? Not long, I imagine."


Fenrir

"Nah, just haven't brought to full power. Which would be a waste on someone like you, dark brother. Are you so weak that you can't use your true form, or must I exorcise you from her?" I grab Telzira and tear through the dimensions, reappearing in front of Drachen. "DO IT NOW!!! AT YOUR FXXXXX MAXIMUM POWER DXXXX!!!!"

Drachen

"Got it. UuuuuUURRRRRGGGGGHHHHH!!!!!" There was a massive flash of light. Telzira fell to the ground, the shards of the mask falling beside her. A figure appeared beside her.
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| November 12, 2009, 5:37 pm
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Quoting The Abyss [formaly jake riedke]
((so why is he in her body? and why isnt he metioned untill now?or in gd?i cant folow anything if you dont tell me!))


((He's not in her body, but in the mask. Well, he was anyway. He was mentioned way back in the first Bara Magna.))
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| November 12, 2009, 5:39 pm
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i walked into the room with the woman and beast and shot him directly between the shoulders.my eyes still black.
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| November 12, 2009, 5:43 pm
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Quoting John the Imaginative

Fenrir

"Nah, just haven't brought to full power. Which would be a waste on someone like you, dark brother. Are you so weak that you can't use your true form, or must I exorcise you from her?" I grab Telzira and tear through the dimensions, reappearing in front of Drachen. "DO IT NOW!!! AT YOUR FXXXXX MAXIMUM POWER DXXXX!!!!"

Drachen

"Got it. UuuuuUURRRRRGGGGGHHHHH!!!!!" There was a massive flash of light. Telzira fell to the ground, the shards of the mask falling beside her. A figure appeared beside her.
i followed

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| November 12, 2009, 5:45 pm
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Quoting John the Imaginative

Fenrir

"Nah, just haven't brought to full power. Which would be a waste on someone like you, dark brother. Are you so weak that you can't use your true form, or must I exorcise you from her?" I grab Telzira and tear through the dimensions, reappearing in front of Drachen. "DO IT NOW!!! AT YOUR FXXXXX MAXIMUM POWER DXXXX!!!!"

Drachen

"Got it. UuuuuUURRRRRGGGGGHHHHH!!!!!" There was a massive flash of light. Telzira fell to the ground, the shards of the mask falling beside her. A figure appeared beside her.


Surt's shaky red, dusty form materialised between Drachen and Fenrir.
"O-oh... Drachen... Hello there..." Surt bolted, the dust becoming more and more solid as he ran.
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| November 12, 2009, 5:46 pm
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Quoting Gringat The Stormlord

Surt's shaky red, dusty form materialised between Drachen and Fenrir.
"O-oh... Drachen... Hello there..." Surt bolted, the dust becoming more and more solid as he ran.

i,confused,blasted the earth with flame knoking everyone i ran and took the unconsious telzira while fenrir was temporarily down.we ran out side though the dunes past our enemys her in my arms
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| November 12, 2009, 5:50 pm
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Quoting The Abyss [formaly jake riedke]
i,confused,blasted the earth with flame knoking everyone i ran and took the unconsious telzira while fenrir was temporarily down.we ran out side though the dunes past our enemys her in my arms


Fenrir

"Drachen, go get that lovestruck !d!0t. I'll go after Surt." And with that, I tore through the dimensions after him.

Drachen

"Got it. E.R.A. Deactivate." My body shuddered as the explosive power left. I threw my swordshield on the ground, jumped on, and rode the sand dunes. Rock on.
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| November 12, 2009, 5:54 pm
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Quoting The Abyss [formaly jake riedke]
i,confused,blasted the earth with flame knoking everyone i ran and took the unconsious telzira while fenrir was temporarily down.we ran out side though the dunes past our enemys her in my arms


((So now basically we have Surt fleeing in one direction, Rames and Telzira in another, and Fenrir and Drachen left out in the middle of nowhere....
John, perhaps you'd like to leave Fenrir and Drachen at Drachen's palace and bring Dokor into it instead...?"
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| November 12, 2009, 5:55 pm
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Quoting John the Imaginative

Fenrir

"Drachen, go get that lovestruck !d!0t. I'll go after Surt." And with that, I tore through the dimensions after him.

Drachen

"Got it. E.R.A. Deactivate." My body shuddered as the explosive power left. I threw my swordshield on the ground, jumped on, and rode the sand dunes. Rock on.

((im trying to make it so that we meet the vorox)))
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| November 12, 2009, 5:55 pm
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Quoting Gringat The Stormlord

((So now basically we have Surt fleeing in one direction, Rames and Telzira in another, and Fenrir and Drachen left out in the middle of nowhere....
John, perhaps you'd like to leave Fenrir and Drachen at Drachen's palace and bring Dokor into it instead...?"


((I brought both Fenrir and Drachen back into Bara Magna. Dokor would only be a hindrance of Fenrir, so he'd have to me Drachen. I'm gonna end up controlling 3 characters at once. Wheeee!!!!))
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| November 12, 2009, 5:57 pm
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Quoting John the Imaginative

((I brought both Fenrir and Drachen back into Bara Magna. Dokor would only be a hindrance of Fenrir, so he'd have to me Drachen. I'm gonna end up controlling 3 characters at once. Wheeee!!!!))

((im bringing the vorox in ; yeah im gonna end up controling what is it EIGHT!))
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| November 12, 2009, 6:06 pm
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Quoting The Abyss [formaly jake riedke]
((im bringing the vorox in ; yeah im gonna end up controling what is it EIGHT!))

i see something move in the cornor of my eye
i hear chittering
a vorox rushes at me and i easily blast it away
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| November 13, 2009, 8:40 am
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Xkz

we crouched down among the dunes a glatorian walked in front of us-carrieing a skrall female. mesh at my side.we saw Zxs carge blidely at the glatorian.he imediatly threw him down and burt his armor
"mesh thsef personey!"(go get persephoney!)

Hory

i was attending to my ladies armor when the young mesh came running "Mother!mother! powerful galtorian kill Zxs!"
she shoed me to go get Slisc

persephoney

she ran though the dunes on all fours and arrived beside Xkz
in a harsh wisper "rth rth kug Xks!"(what happend!)
"skdfh Zxs gfgh Thez"(Zxs ran up to him and he shot him down-with fire)
"hesy thed Xks!"(well forXXX sakes,man dont keep attaking!)
"wht persephoney dfgr?"(well what would you have me do?)
"sfedb vorox"(make an aliance)she said with a stern voice"glatorian dht jkge..."(they may be useful....)
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| November 13, 2009, 8:57 am
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I saw an explosion of light and saw smoke rise up over the dunes. I spurred Therill in to action and charged towards it grabbing the blue armored glatorin that had called me brother. I saw a black and red armored figure marching through the desert carrying a black cloaked figure. Behind him was the charred remains of a vorox. I charged at him coming to a stop a few meters away. Leaping from Therill's back and landed in front of him. The figure he carried was a female skrall, witch surprised me, for they never left the black spike mountains. "Put the nice lady down and lets talk about this man to man."
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| November 13, 2009, 9:17 am
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Quoting Supreme commander Gideon Fucci
I saw an explosion of light and saw smoke rise up over the dunes. I spurred Therill in to action and charged towards it grabbing the blue armored glatorin that had called me brother. I saw a black and red armored figure marching through the desert carrying a black cloaked figure. Behind him was the charred remains of a vorox. I charged at him coming to a stop a few meters away. Leaping from Therill's back and landed in front of him. The figure he carried was a female skrall, witch surprised me, for they never left the black spike mountains. "Put the nice lady down and lets talk about this man to man."

i said nothing but put her down gently-andd withdrew my weapon-i did`nt use it yet...i saw he was a threat
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| November 13, 2009, 9:21 am
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Quoting The Abyss [formaly jake riedke]
i said nothing but put her down gently-andd withdrew my weapon-i did`nt use it yet...i saw he was a threat

I drew my sword and waited for him to make the first move.
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| November 13, 2009, 9:43 am
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Quoting Supreme commander Gideon Fucci
I drew my sword and waited for him to make the first move.
i stared at him questioninglly

persephoney
"skrall hdt?"(who`s that...skrall?)

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| November 13, 2009, 10:35 am
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Quoting The Abyss [formaly jake riedke]
Quoting Supreme commander Gideon Fucci
I drew my sword and waited for him to make the first move.
i stared at him questioninglly

persephoney
"skrall hdt?"(who`s that...skrall?)


Telzira's hand twitches slightly, but she was still out of it. She wouldn't see whatever happened between Ronin and Rames.
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| November 13, 2009, 1:21 pm
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Quoting The Abyss [formaly jake riedke]
Quoting Supreme commander Gideon Fucci
I drew my sword and waited for him to make the first move.
i stared at him questioninglly

persephoney
"skrall hdt?"(who`s that...skrall?)

((that question was directed at whom))
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| November 13, 2009, 6:29 pm
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Quoting Supreme commander Gideon Fucci
((that question was directed at whom))

((Xks)
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| November 13, 2009, 7:23 pm
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I stared at the glatorin i faced, His eyes seemed charred as if his soul had been burned by his own hatred. The blackened orbs just stared at me as if there was no life left in the glatorin, just an empty shell of his former self. I looked at him and hatred wells within me for anything so evil as to destroy another s soul. Throwing caution to the wind i attack in a hail of blows.
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| November 14, 2009, 2:21 am
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(( Hold on it has to load my comment.
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| November 14, 2009, 2:23 am
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Quoting Supreme commander Gideon Fucci
(( Hold on it has to load my comment.

((me too hope your ok with losing cuz i need to make th story meet between me and the vorox,peacefuly and have an alliance . when they`re loaded lets continue at #6))
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| November 14, 2009, 8:26 am
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Quoting Supreme commander Gideon Fucci
I stared at the glatorin i faced, His eyes seemed charred as if his soul had been burned by his own hatred. The blackened orbs just stared at me as if there was no life left in the glatorin, just an empty shell of his former self. I looked at him and hatred wells within me for anything so evil as to destroy another s soul. Throwing caution to the wind i attack in a hail of blows.

i coutered every strike of his blade thenour eyes met once more when our blades locked,consiously i thought nothing but emotionly(and through the use of my powers)i felt he was scared of me and what he could become,i could see it in his eyes.i sensed he was mentlely weak and in a moment i took pity on him.thenn the flame crept up my staff and wrapped itself around him he sceamed as he saw it.i blew him back and he was left unconsious
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