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Revenger, an Archeogenis/MAOX short stroy
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The End
Far off into the Horizon, the sun sets on the peaceful town of Axis, on the planet Gadunk, in the Volatious star system. Little did the Axian towns people know, that only 50 miles away, a battle of epic proportions was taking place.
“Waxiwah! Shiva!”, The last words ever spoken by a Larxian guard in the Maxus security outpost, the farthest outpost from the Mandom base.
Although the signal was garbled, the Mandom army got the message. Within a minute , and one destroyed outpost later, the Mandom forces had about three squadrons of infantry troops, and two Rippers ready for battle.
The Rippers raced ahead, towards the last tracked sighting of the attack-force. One speeding ahead of the other, they were closer than they thought. Flying over a large canyon, the Rippers truly had underestimated their enemy. Although, originally they thought they just had to deal with a Shiva, much to their surprise, they found a Shiva leading, Two Daimajins following, a trio of BM05 Majins, and 4 bloodshots. The Archeogenis was serious about this contract.
The Shiva fired it’s Plasma Axer, completely obliterating one of the Rippers, and it’s pilot, and destroying so much of the other Ripper, that it’s Pilot had to escape in a pod.
“Mayday!…Ayda…..There’s too….we must ….cuate….repeat must BLAAAAGH!”
The Shiva had finished him off.
As the Mecha stormed the base, it was very obviously a check mate. One of the Majins broke through the Main Command Building’s roof-top and pulled out the Leader of the underground Rebellion, Ricky Raxus “Mr. Fabbio would like to see you,” was the message the Mecha emitted, as Commander Rick was hauled to the Shiva.
As the Cockpit door opened, Commander Rick was stricken with fear, for none other than Archeogenis’ most elite Commander, Yaoi Fabbio, emerged from the cockpit.
“So you are the fiend who is running this operation?”
“Yes, I am. What of it, sir?”
“ A contract has been commissioned for your life, Mr. Raxus, and I intend to complete said contract.”
“ Whatever they are offering you, I am sure I can offer you more.” Ricky calmly replied.
“ You can in no way pay more then the contractor is paying.” Yaoi replied even more steady headed.
“ I am absolutely sure, what are they paying you? 5million credits? 10 million? I’ll give you 20!” Ricky Said with beads of sweat rolling down his forehead.
“ They are paying me….” Yaoi replied, pulling out his plasma pistol,” Revenge.”
POP
And thus the life of Ricky Raxus, was swiftly ended.
As the contract stated, there could be absolutely no survivors. And thus the Shiva sweeped the base, with the Hellfire canon, reducing it to nothing but smoldering rubble.
End of Chapter 1
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| August 17, 2009, 1:08 am
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Quoting Jibs Studios (Double R)
The End
Far off into the Horizon, the sun sets on the peaceful town of Axis, on the planet Gadunk, in the Volatious star system. Little did the Axian towns people know, that only 50 miles away, a battle of epic proportions was taking place.
“Waxiwah! Shiva!”, The last words ever spoken by a Larxian guard in the Maxus security outpost, the farthest outpost from the Mandom base.
Although the signal was garbled, the Mandom army got the message. Within a minute , and one destroyed outpost later, the Mandom forces had about three squadrons of infantry troops, and two Rippers ready for battle.
The Rippers raced ahead, towards the last tracked sighting of the attack-force. One speeding ahead of the other, they were closer than they thought. Flying over a large canyon, the Rippers truly had underestimated their enemy. Although, originally they thought they just had to deal with a Shiva, much to their surprise, they found a Shiva leading, Two Daimajins following, a trio of BM05 Majins, and 4 bloodshots. The Archeogenis was serious about this contract.
The Shiva fired it’s Plasma Axer, completely obliterating one of the Rippers, and it’s pilot, and destroying so much of the other Ripper, that it’s Pilot had to escape in a pod.
“Mayday!…Ayda…..There’s too….we must ….cuate….repeat must BLAAAAGH!”
The Shiva had finished him off.
As the Mecha stormed the base, it was very obviously a check mate. One of the Majins broke through the Main Command Building’s roof-top and pulled out the Leader of the underground Rebellion, Ricky Raxus “Mr. Fabbio would like to see you,” was the message the Mecha emitted, as Commander Rick was hauled to the Shiva.
As the Cockpit door opened, Commander Rick was stricken with fear, for none other than Archeogenis’ most elite Commander, Yaoi Fabbio, emerged from the cockpit.
“So you are the fiend who is running this operation?”
“Yes, I am. What of it, sir?”
“ A contract has been commissioned for your life, Mr. Raxus, and I intend to complete said contract.”
“ Whatever they are offering you, I am sure I can offer you more.” Ricky calmly replied.
“ You can in no way pay more then the contractor is paying.” Yaoi replied even more steady headed.
“ I am absolutely sure, what are they paying you? 5million credits? 10 million? I’ll give you 20!” Ricky Said with beads of sweat rolling down his forehead.
“ They are paying me….” Yaoi replied, pulling out his plasma pistol,” Revenge.”
POP
And thus the life of Ricky Raxus, was swiftly ended.
As the contract stated, there could be absolutely no survivors. And thus the Shiva sweeped the base, with the Hellfire canon, reducing it to nothing but smoldering rubble.
End of Chapter 1

i do belive it is Yuri Fassio not Fuoi Fabbio
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| August 17, 2009, 1:16 am
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Quoting Hunterkiller 33
i do belive it is Yuri Fassio not Fuoi Fabbio

I don't want to use his real name, anyways, part two shall be coming soon.
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| August 17, 2009, 1:33 am
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Quoting Jibs Studios (Double R)
I don't want to use his real name, anyways, part two shall be coming soon.

Thank you for your consideration, but you can use my name shamelessly. I'm using my sig-fig as the new ArcheoGenis leader, anyway :)
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| August 17, 2009, 8:07 am
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thats awesome a movie:
-How much are they paying you?
-They are paying me... Revenge! muahahahahaah

lol very awesome
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| August 17, 2009, 9:24 am
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Chapter 2. The Recalling.
“Mr Fassio? Mr Fassio?”
“What?”
“Mr. Fassio, preperations are ready, sir.”
“ Good, but during this mission, all of you shall call me Yaoi Fabbio.”
“ Yes Sir! But may I ask why?”
“Because if the man we are going after heard you call me by my real name, he would kill himself on the spot.
“ Why so, sir? Wait sir?!? Sir?!?”
“……………uh….UGH!”
“ Sir? Sir? SIR!?!?”
Yuri blanks out.
“Why, why is it so dark? Why am I here? MOM?!? Is that you Mom!?!
(A dark shilouette walks into the Yuri’s line of sight, quietly brushing her hair.)
“MOM!” Yuri said running at a rapid pace,” MOM!”
( A young, cloaked, man walks in front of the woman, and quietly exchanges words. And a struggle ensues.)
“ Mom who is this man?” says a younger Yuri as he runs to his mother. “Mommy, I’m scared!”
“ It’s fine honey, just go find your father.”
“Yeah Kiddy, go find your daddy!Hehe!”
“oooo…Ok.” Young Yuri scampers off, and hides behind a couch.
“ So, now we can get to business, how much are you selling the little lad for? He’s make a good experiment.”
“Never!”
Fine Have it your way, I’ll just use your dead corpse foe experiments!!!”
“Wha, AAAGH!!!”
POP!
(The silhouette falls to the floor, and murmurs one last word.)
“Yuri.”
(The cloaked man turns, and picks up the body, and when leaving takes one last look towards the house, and reveals his face, the face engraved into Yuri’s mind for all time.)
“ Oh, oh no, why , why did he have to do it? Now….Now I don’t care if it is a Dead or Alive mission…..He’s coming back, DEAD.
End of chapter2
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| August 17, 2009, 12:05 pm
Quoting Yuri Fassio
Thank you for your consideration, but you can use my name shamelessly. I'm using my sig-fig as the new ArcheoGenis leader, anyway :)

Lul. My name is my groups leader also. I love my name too much not to use it.
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| August 17, 2009, 2:46 pm
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Quoting Knoll grey
Lul. My name is my groups leader also. I love my name too much not to use it.



Gaia is the leader of the Dragons. Her full title is Elite Royal Guardian Gaia. (Yes, Sirrush is a monarchy, but not an absolute monarchy.) She was an old character of mine. Her weapon is a greatsword that is composed of three parts: hilt, crystal, and blade. crystal floats in front of the hilt, and the blade floats in front of the crystal. Name of the sword was once Lawseraph. Now it is the Seraph's Law. Its blade is composed of starmetal, a material forged from the shed scales of the Dragon known as the Astral Lord, and is capable of cutting through nearly all substances.
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| August 17, 2009, 3:39 pm
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The Revenger Story line is going to be delayed, but if you want, you can add the next chapter, or whatever.
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| August 20, 2009, 2:19 pm
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