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The epsilon Chronicles.
~Chapter One;The war begins~



The War was close.Epsilon's research base have found an entire fleet of unidentified ships.The scanners were almost broken.Epsilon's supreme commander,Steal Howkins was called.
At the Delta-T base,things were starting to get worse.The strange ships tried to pass through
the planet's shield.
-How many ships are there?
-About 50 attack cruisers and almost 1900 light fighters,sir!
-Can we counterattack them?
-I'm afraid that all our fleets are in the Sirius sector,sir.
-Call them back now!
-Doing it,sir!

The other GAIA forces were unable to connect because the enemy was intercepting our signals.
A small group of F-23 fighters were sent to the Phalanx station on the Epsilon's moon.
-Sir,the fighters are ready!
-Send them to orbit.Then send some D3 Exploration Ships on the exact opposite position of the enemy.
-Why?
-Do it now!
-Sir,yes,sir!
Steal goes to the main hangar and gets in his personal customized F-23.He takes off,passes trough the shield and flies to the moon.
In meantime Rusia and The United States sent one of their most powerful atack frigates to support the Epsilon Forces.The ship was called "E.G.S. "dragon"(As seen on my creations page).
Commander Steal contacts the moon forces that joined the small group of fighters:
-Anyone there?
-Yes,sir!
-Ok.Listen.Are the exploration ships in position?
-Not yet,sir!
-Let me know when they arrive.
-Yes,sir!One more thing.
-What?
-The Earth sent a super attack cruiser to help us.
-Tell them to stay on the moon's orbit.
-Ok,sir;
Steal eventually arrives and lands on the moon,at the Phalanx Station.
-How is it going?
-The explore ships are in position.They reached the place mentioned,sir!
-Let me talk to them.
*Incoming message*
-Hello?
-Yes,sir!
-Sent your radar signals to the moon satellite station so they can sent them to the enemy fleet,in a 90 degree angle.
-Wow....
*End of Message*

In meantime,at the board of Dragon Cruiser captain Stuart speeds through the hyperspace.
-When will we arrive?
-About half an hour,sir!
-Ok.I will contact Steal.
*You have a message*
Stuart:We will be there in half an hour.Hope you got a good plan!
*end of message*
The scanner signals were sent to the moon and then to the enemy to spy them.The report that came was amazing.


TO BE CONTINUED...
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| May 28, 2011, 2:23 am
please read it...and comment!
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| May 28, 2011, 6:20 am
 Group admin 
Quoting Commander Steal
please read it...and comment!


Mate, you have great enthusiasm and great ideas, but simply are not following the group's story outlines. I really don't mind, and you are welcome to keep your story going, but might find more comments being made if you take a pause to look at some of the GAIA mocs around this folder, and get a feel for the story.

The USA is part of Am Space, and could well come to help you, and Russia is actually already part of GAIA. Your story would work if it is set before GAIA was formed, but in any event, keep at it, you definitely have the GAIA spirit going, even if missing some of the details...lol. neat stuff...


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| May 29, 2011, 3:57 am
Quoting Parrington Levens

Mate, you have great enthusiasm and great ideas, but simply are not following the group's story outlines. I really don't mind, and you are welcome to keep your story going, but might find more comments being made if you take a pause to look at some of the GAIA mocs around this folder, and get a feel for the story.

The USA is part of Am Space, and could well come to help you, and Russia is actually already part of GAIA. Your story would work if it is set before GAIA was formed, but in any event, keep at it, you definitely have the GAIA spirit going, even if missing some of the details...lol. neat stuff...


Sorry! i didnt read the other stories!
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| May 29, 2011, 7:31 am
 Group admin 
Quoting Commander Steal
Sorry! i didnt read the other stories!

hehe, mate, no need to be sorry, like I said, I don't mind...
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| May 29, 2011, 7:41 am
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