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talk? like with a camera?
it sounds fun, but, it distract from the work,
you see, I m not that good with pcs...
I have a hard time just making links...
my e-mail, I just begun to be comfortable with,
here, they don t even have the right one,
my ex girlfriend canceled it,
and I never fixed it with the new one,
she used to help me with pc things then...

I had to cope with my new one in order to get kits from a woman who exclusively dealt by
internet, some aquanauts and space kits
I REALLY wanted!
otherwise, I d probably still would nt have
bothered.

as for the script, what happens before
cybercity does nt concern me much since you ll
do chris s lines.
but, my premiere episode is already planned
as to re-introduce the mayor [proctor]
and some gf agents who will try to teach him
how to get cybercity profitable.

the joke about it is that, cybercity is free!
and that drives the agents nuts!

the mayor will make them tour the city,
and constantly argue about it!

wich location should chris arrive in....????
it could be the hotel, train station...
I have yet to make up my mind about it,

the clangs; they should pursue chris somehow
to link it with your story, but...should they join the gf? or fight against them?

should chris ally with a faction?
those things have to be resolved...

I want to be careful about it, as, it s best to keep it open ended for future episodes.

chris can be in many episodes without a big
presence, until we decide, and then have an entire episode for him alone.

there are many possibilities...

give suggestions!

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| September 27, 2013, 11:58 pm
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Quoting cyberfrank 2010
talk? like with a camera?
it sounds fun, but, it distract from the work,
you see, I m not that good with pcs...
I have a hard time just making links...
my e-mail, I just begun to be comfortable with,
here, they don t even have the right one,
my ex girlfriend canceled it,
and I never fixed it with the new one,
she used to help me with pc things then...

I had to cope with my new one in order to get kits from a woman who exclusively dealt by
internet, some aquanauts and space kits
I REALLY wanted!
otherwise, I d probably still would nt have
bothered.

as for the script, what happens before
cybercity does nt concern me much since you ll
do chris s lines.
but, my premiere episode is already planned
as to re-introduce the mayor [proctor]
and some gf agents who will try to teach him
how to get cybercity profitable.

the joke about it is that, cybercity is free!
and that drives the agents nuts!

the mayor will make them tour the city,
and constantly argue about it!

wich location should chris arrive in....????
it could be the hotel, train station...
I have yet to make up my mind about it,

the clangs; they should pursue chris somehow
to link it with your story, but...should they join the gf? or fight against them?

should chris ally with a faction?
those things have to be resolved...

I want to be careful about it, as, it s best to keep it open ended for future episodes.

chris can be in many episodes without a big
presence, until we decide, and then have an entire episode for him alone.

there are many possibilities...

give suggestions!
Well...I don't now how we should do the script...just on here?

The Clang its not Clangs no s. the Clang have no side but the side of the Clang. if they did join the gf they would kill them later...and yes I do think they should follow Chris to cyber city...well kind of...The Clang are everywhere the entire Universe has Clang but the Clang lord is set for Thasos...its his obsession...

and umm a faction?

Oh I have to say this because I just figured it out...this goes so well with A.I.L.C.!

I will put links to your episode on my episode so people can click on it it will go to your episode and....you have to put a link on yours to my 8th episode so people don't get confused

I could say more, I'm just thinking...


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| September 28, 2013, 12:21 am
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the links are a natural thing to do in coop,
it will allow you to get more fans.

the factions are different groups in conflict,
there are 6, if you could comment each,
I d like that, but, mostly, it would help
you to choose and understand Alta-5 s universe.

at the end of each faction s post, there is a link for the other factions, the GF is the biggest of them.

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| September 28, 2013, 11:18 am
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as for the structure of the story,
I d like to make it with 3 paths for you
to choose, I d manage to put it at the end of each episode to give you time to think.

I plan on making each episode consist of 30 pics-frames, with experience, I found it to be the best size, not too short, or long.

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| September 28, 2013, 11:24 am
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since I script the whole thing on paper, and I number each frame-pic, it s easy to structure,
we can t see the pics then, but, I ll know
what is supposed to be on them, as the scenes
will be built in advance, you ll get to see them before the shoot on the work page.
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| September 28, 2013, 11:30 am
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Quoting cyberfrank 2010
since I script the whole thing on paper, and I number each frame-pic, it s easy to structure,
we can t see the pics then, but, I ll know
what is supposed to be on them, as the scenes
will be built in advance, you ll get to see them before the shoot on the work page.
So how will we know what the other is going to say...um you put what your guy is going to say on your work page then I add on to that conversation putting Chris's lines on here?
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| September 28, 2013, 12:16 pm
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I ll put it here,
without writing everything, I ll write what s
most important here.

I might also take pics of the paper script,
and post on the w-page,
it could give you an idea of how I work.
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| September 28, 2013, 3:15 pm
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Quoting cyberfrank 2010
I ll put it here,
without writing everything, I ll write what s
most important here.

I might also take pics of the paper script,
and post on the w-page,
it could give you an idea of how I work.
Good Idea!

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| September 28, 2013, 7:01 pm
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Quoting cyberfrank 2010
I ll put it here,
without writing everything, I ll write what s
most important here.

I might also take pics of the paper script,
and post on the w-page,
it could give you an idea of how I work.
Is your planet one of those star wars globes?

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| September 30, 2013, 3:36 pm
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I might use some to show the Solaris system
one day, for now, they have never been showed,
I intend more to show ON the planets for now.

an external view is optional, what s important
is what is going on, on it!

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| September 30, 2013, 3:54 pm
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Quoting cyberfrank 2010
I might use some to show the Solaris system
one day, for now, they have never been showed,
I intend more to show ON the planets for now.

an external view is optional, what s important
is what is going on, on it!
I could do the space scenes of Chris falling to cybercity....wait what is the name of your planet?

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| September 30, 2013, 6:25 pm
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solar system; Solaris
planet; Alta-5
moons; 2
greatest city; Globolopolis
heroic city; Cybercity

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| September 30, 2013, 9:19 pm
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Quoting cyberfrank 2010
solar system; Solaris
planet; Alta-5
moons; 2
greatest city; Globolopolis
heroic city; Cybercity
Oh! so that what you meant when you said Alta-5....Nice name! anyway...as I said I could do the space/wormhole thing and send you the photos, what do you think?
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| September 30, 2013, 10:56 pm
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I think you can read my mind!
I figured that if I introduced your
character with the SAME pic as yours,
it would give the best feeling of
continuity!

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| October 1, 2013, 11:43 am
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I m at work on the refining and polishing
of the houses right now,
I just finished the beach and bridge,
I did 6 houses on 24,
would you like to see?

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| October 1, 2013, 11:48 am
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Quoting cyberfrank 2010
I m at work on the refining and polishing
of the houses right now,
I just finished the beach and bridge,
I did 6 houses on 24,
would you like to see?
Okay! show me!

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| October 1, 2013, 4:22 pm
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I ll take pics tonight,
you ll see it on the w-page!
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| October 1, 2013, 5:12 pm
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Quoting cyberfrank 2010
I ll take pics tonight,
you ll see it on the w-page!
It will all take place in this episode!(episode 7) we need to talk script soon!
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| November 7, 2013, 8:33 pm
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Quoting cyberfrank 2010
Do you know about skipe?

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| December 2, 2013, 11:22 am
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Quoting Nick White
I don t know how to use it though.
here is my e-mail;
cyberfrankstudio@hotmail.com

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| March 9, 2014, 3:08 pm
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THE PLAN;
the mayor will show the agents in the tour,
your character will be seen on the landing plates on the roof,
make a line of your own as a question to the mayor (what solar system is this?] or something along those lines, keep in mind he does nt know where he landed...
I ll plot a scheme with the Clang,
1-2 pic frames.
we ll start like this, and we ll figure a bigger scheme afterwards.

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| March 9, 2014, 3:14 pm
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Quoting cyberfrank 2010
THE PLAN;
the mayor will show the agents in the tour,
your character will be seen on the landing plates on the roof,
make a line of your own as a question to the mayor (what solar system is this?] or something along those lines, keep in mind he does nt know where he landed...
I ll plot a scheme with the Clang,
1-2 pic frames.
we ll start like this, and we ll figure a bigger scheme afterwards.
well Chris does not know anything about the modern day stuff that you have in your city, and anything about space traval so he's just gunna freak out! I think later a girl should like him and he does not know what to do about it! Just an idea. I'm really sorry but I don't have Chris's torso anymore so can his torso be dirty and you give him new clothes (we can find a new torso with your coop tools and mine) well I think when Chris arrives on your tower there should be a worm hole so you can email me the photo and I can edit a worm hole on your photo. Ttyl.

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| March 9, 2014, 10:03 pm
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ok, post the torsio you want to use
on your work page, I should have it,
eu, what happened to the other torsio...
you lost it?
as for the girl, it can easily be arranged,
he could have changed clothes in the ship.

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| March 13, 2014, 1:12 pm
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if you could ship me the un-zipped pic of the worm hole by e-mail it d be best,
otherwise, we ll skip it,
I ll just put him on the landing pad!

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| March 13, 2014, 1:15 pm
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Quoting cyberfrank 2010
if you could ship me the un-zipped pic of the worm hole by e-mail it d be best,
otherwise, we ll skip it,
I ll just put him on the landing pad!

I'll put it on my work page soon! But him changing his shirt in the ship doesn't follow my story how only his space torso was left...he doesn't have to change right away just when he leaves cyber city to find his planet! As for the torso a friend let me use it for a wile but he needs it back so I gave it back...


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| March 15, 2014, 11:58 am
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Quoting Nick White
ok, so, I ll leave it on for now.
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| March 15, 2014, 1:41 pm
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can you explain what the clang want from
Chris?
I have to make a conversation between the GF and the Clang, I want to know how it should go...
they want him dead or what?
what is their boggle with him?

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| June 12, 2014, 11:18 am
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Quoting cyberfrank 2010
can you explain what the clang want from
Chris?
I have to make a conversation between the GF and the Clang, I want to know how it should go...
they want him dead or what?
what is their boggle with him?
Well The Clang lord doesn't want the planet (Thasos) just to live on! there's something he wants with the planet but Chris (not knowingly) is the only one who can give that too him. so the Clang lord needs him alive. Oh and Clang don't like giving away their plan they just like to shoot everything! Hope that gives you something you need!

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| June 16, 2014, 2:15 pm
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Oh and by the way... Clang can take over planets in minutes!
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| June 17, 2014, 12:30 pm
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Quoting Nick White
ok, so they want him alive,
and they won t share infos with the GF,
what kind of technology do they use to take
over planets, maybe they could threaten the
GF with a small demonstration, the GF has to have a strong motive to cooperate, and I still
don t have it.

what the Clang do to make the GF comply?
trick or treat?
the game show can hurt Chris or save him,
either way can be entertaining.
would you rather see him win, or disappear?
by this time, does he have an objective?
would he seek aid in his task, or make it alone?
would he ask help from: the GF, metal legion,
resistance-5, the city pirates, normal people?
that will help me build the story.


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| June 17, 2014, 5:28 pm
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Quoting cyberfrank 2010
Quoting Nick White
ok, so they want him alive,
and they won t share infos with the GF,
what kind of technology do they use to take
over planets, maybe they could threaten the
GF with a small demonstration, the GF has to have a strong motive to cooperate, and I still
don t have it.

what the Clang do to make the GF comply?
trick or treat?
the game show can hurt Chris or save him,
either way can be entertaining.
would you rather see him win, or disappear?
by this time, does he have an objective?
would he seek aid in his task, or make it alone?
would he ask help from: the GF, metal legion,
resistance-5, the city pirates, normal people?
that will help me build the story.

Well Clang do like to show off their power, Clang have a secret weapon witch is the freeze ray (Suspended animation) that's one way to take over a planet, or as a demonstration the Clang can freeze someone! Clang like to threat people. but they can trick! (Like the Clang commander with Cloie)


Chris...hmmm...

Chris doesn't know whats going on (he doesn't even really know what money is!) but he should grab the money anyway. I don't know... it would be cool if he wins because later When the Empireim (You don't know them yet, they come in A.I.L.C. later) need a ship they can't buy it because they don't have any money and Chris pulls out money and he's just like "will this work?" (Just a thought)




Umm... yes, Chris makes friends with people. if I'm able to make that friend he could be in A.I.l.C. but Chris wants to go home so he wants to get off the planet (He might need help from some friend) and maybe he gets caught up in something else so he cant go right away. and later his clothes change. The shadow as I call them, are the Black figures in A.I.L.C. they are a big part in it so Chris needs to see them in Cyber city and then he forgets them when he looks away.

umm... that's what I got for now.

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| June 17, 2014, 11:37 pm
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Oh and by the way you should edit your "Cybercity tales of Alta-5 ep#3
the public transport station
"AND ADD THIS PHOTO TO IT;

=====
(Copy and paste it)
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<a href="/image_zoom.php?id=/user_
images/90311/1403064607m"><img
src="http://images.mocpages.com/user_
images/90311/1403064607m_
SPLASH.jpg" border="0" width="500"
height="373" alt=""></a>



right after

".....IN ORBIT AROUND ALTA-5 AT
THE SPACE STATION....."

Please.

Thanks!
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| June 18, 2014, 12:27 am
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it does nt work, part of the information is hidden somehow...
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| June 18, 2014, 11:14 am
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Quoting cyberfrank 2010
it does nt work, part of the information is hidden somehow...

That's weird... Here I'll fix it! Now try it. :)
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| June 19, 2014, 12:31 am
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