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Quoting cyberfrank 2010
talk? like with a camera?
it sounds fun, but, it distract from the work,
you see, I m not that good with pcs...
I have a hard time just making links...
my e-mail, I just begun to be comfortable with,
here, they don t even have the right one,
my ex girlfriend canceled it,
and I never fixed it with the new one,
she used to help me with pc things then...

I had to cope with my new one in order to get kits from a woman who exclusively dealt by
internet, some aquanauts and space kits
I REALLY wanted!
otherwise, I d probably still would nt have
bothered.

as for the script, what happens before
cybercity does nt concern me much since you ll
do chris s lines.
but, my premiere episode is already planned
as to re-introduce the mayor [proctor]
and some gf agents who will try to teach him
how to get cybercity profitable.

the joke about it is that, cybercity is free!
and that drives the agents nuts!

the mayor will make them tour the city,
and constantly argue about it!

wich location should chris arrive in....????
it could be the hotel, train station...
I have yet to make up my mind about it,

the clangs; they should pursue chris somehow
to link it with your story, but...should they join the gf? or fight against them?

should chris ally with a faction?
those things have to be resolved...

I want to be careful about it, as, it s best to keep it open ended for future episodes.

chris can be in many episodes without a big
presence, until we decide, and then have an entire episode for him alone.

there are many possibilities...

give suggestions!
Well...I don't now how we should do the script...just on here?

The Clang its not Clangs no s. the Clang have no side but the side of the Clang. if they did join the gf they would kill them later...and yes I do think they should follow Chris to cyber city...well kind of...The Clang are everywhere the entire Universe has Clang but the Clang lord is set for Thasos...its his obsession...

and umm a faction?

Oh I have to say this because I just figured it out...this goes so well with A.I.L.C.!

I will put links to your episode on my episode so people can click on it it will go to your episode and....you have to put a link on yours to my 8th episode so people don't get confused

I could say more, I'm just thinking...


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| September 28, 2013, 12:21 am
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the links are a natural thing to do in coop,
it will allow you to get more fans.

the factions are different groups in conflict,
there are 6, if you could comment each,
I d like that, but, mostly, it would help
you to choose and understand Alta-5 s universe.

at the end of each faction s post, there is a link for the other factions, the GF is the biggest of them.

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| September 28, 2013, 11:18 am
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as for the structure of the story,
I d like to make it with 3 paths for you
to choose, I d manage to put it at the end of each episode to give you time to think.

I plan on making each episode consist of 30 pics-frames, with experience, I found it to be the best size, not too short, or long.

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| September 28, 2013, 11:24 am
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Quoting cyberfrank 2010
since I script the whole thing on paper, and I number each frame-pic, it s easy to structure,
we can t see the pics then, but, I ll know
what is supposed to be on them, as the scenes
will be built in advance, you ll get to see them before the shoot on the work page.
So how will we know what the other is going to say...um you put what your guy is going to say on your work page then I add on to that conversation putting Chris's lines on here?
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| September 28, 2013, 12:16 pm
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Quoting cyberfrank 2010
I ll put it here,
without writing everything, I ll write what s
most important here.

I might also take pics of the paper script,
and post on the w-page,
it could give you an idea of how I work.
Good Idea!

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| September 28, 2013, 7:01 pm
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Quoting cyberfrank 2010
I ll put it here,
without writing everything, I ll write what s
most important here.

I might also take pics of the paper script,
and post on the w-page,
it could give you an idea of how I work.
Is your planet one of those star wars globes?

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| September 30, 2013, 3:36 pm
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Quoting cyberfrank 2010
I might use some to show the Solaris system
one day, for now, they have never been showed,
I intend more to show ON the planets for now.

an external view is optional, what s important
is what is going on, on it!
I could do the space scenes of Chris falling to cybercity....wait what is the name of your planet?

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| September 30, 2013, 6:25 pm
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Quoting cyberfrank 2010
solar system; Solaris
planet; Alta-5
moons; 2
greatest city; Globolopolis
heroic city; Cybercity
Oh! so that what you meant when you said Alta-5....Nice name! anyway...as I said I could do the space/wormhole thing and send you the photos, what do you think?
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| September 30, 2013, 10:56 pm
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I think you can read my mind!
I figured that if I introduced your
character with the SAME pic as yours,
it would give the best feeling of
continuity!

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| October 1, 2013, 11:43 am
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Quoting cyberfrank 2010
I m at work on the refining and polishing
of the houses right now,
I just finished the beach and bridge,
I did 6 houses on 24,
would you like to see?
Okay! show me!

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| October 1, 2013, 4:22 pm
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Quoting cyberfrank 2010
I ll take pics tonight,
you ll see it on the w-page!
It will all take place in this episode!(episode 7) we need to talk script soon!
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| November 7, 2013, 8:33 pm
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Quoting cyberfrank 2010
Do you know about skipe?

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| December 2, 2013, 11:22 am
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Quoting Nick White
I don t know how to use it though.
here is my e-mail;
cyberfrankstudio@hotmail.com

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| March 9, 2014, 3:08 pm
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Quoting cyberfrank 2010
THE PLAN;
the mayor will show the agents in the tour,
your character will be seen on the landing plates on the roof,
make a line of your own as a question to the mayor (what solar system is this?] or something along those lines, keep in mind he does nt know where he landed...
I ll plot a scheme with the Clang,
1-2 pic frames.
we ll start like this, and we ll figure a bigger scheme afterwards.
well Chris does not know anything about the modern day stuff that you have in your city, and anything about space traval so he's just gunna freak out! I think later a girl should like him and he does not know what to do about it! Just an idea. I'm really sorry but I don't have Chris's torso anymore so can his torso be dirty and you give him new clothes (we can find a new torso with your coop tools and mine) well I think when Chris arrives on your tower there should be a worm hole so you can email me the photo and I can edit a worm hole on your photo. Ttyl.

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| March 9, 2014, 10:03 pm
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ok, post the torsio you want to use
on your work page, I should have it,
eu, what happened to the other torsio...
you lost it?
as for the girl, it can easily be arranged,
he could have changed clothes in the ship.

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| March 13, 2014, 1:12 pm
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if you could ship me the un-zipped pic of the worm hole by e-mail it d be best,
otherwise, we ll skip it,
I ll just put him on the landing pad!

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| March 13, 2014, 1:15 pm
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Quoting cyberfrank 2010
if you could ship me the un-zipped pic of the worm hole by e-mail it d be best,
otherwise, we ll skip it,
I ll just put him on the landing pad!

I'll put it on my work page soon! But him changing his shirt in the ship doesn't follow my story how only his space torso was left...he doesn't have to change right away just when he leaves cyber city to find his planet! As for the torso a friend let me use it for a wile but he needs it back so I gave it back...


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| March 15, 2014, 11:58 am
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Quoting Nick White
ok, so, I ll leave it on for now.
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| March 15, 2014, 1:41 pm
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Quoting cyberfrank 2010
can you explain what the clang want from
Chris?
I have to make a conversation between the GF and the Clang, I want to know how it should go...
they want him dead or what?
what is their boggle with him?
Well The Clang lord doesn't want the planet (Thasos) just to live on! there's something he wants with the planet but Chris (not knowingly) is the only one who can give that too him. so the Clang lord needs him alive. Oh and Clang don't like giving away their plan they just like to shoot everything! Hope that gives you something you need!

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| June 16, 2014, 2:15 pm
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Oh and by the way... Clang can take over planets in minutes!
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| June 17, 2014, 12:30 pm
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Quoting cyberfrank 2010
Quoting Nick White
ok, so they want him alive,
and they won t share infos with the GF,
what kind of technology do they use to take
over planets, maybe they could threaten the
GF with a small demonstration, the GF has to have a strong motive to cooperate, and I still
don t have it.

what the Clang do to make the GF comply?
trick or treat?
the game show can hurt Chris or save him,
either way can be entertaining.
would you rather see him win, or disappear?
by this time, does he have an objective?
would he seek aid in his task, or make it alone?
would he ask help from: the GF, metal legion,
resistance-5, the city pirates, normal people?
that will help me build the story.

Well Clang do like to show off their power, Clang have a secret weapon witch is the freeze ray (Suspended animation) that's one way to take over a planet, or as a demonstration the Clang can freeze someone! Clang like to threat people. but they can trick! (Like the Clang commander with Cloie)


Chris...hmmm...

Chris doesn't know whats going on (he doesn't even really know what money is!) but he should grab the money anyway. I don't know... it would be cool if he wins because later When the Empireim (You don't know them yet, they come in A.I.L.C. later) need a ship they can't buy it because they don't have any money and Chris pulls out money and he's just like "will this work?" (Just a thought)




Umm... yes, Chris makes friends with people. if I'm able to make that friend he could be in A.I.l.C. but Chris wants to go home so he wants to get off the planet (He might need help from some friend) and maybe he gets caught up in something else so he cant go right away. and later his clothes change. The shadow as I call them, are the Black figures in A.I.L.C. they are a big part in it so Chris needs to see them in Cyber city and then he forgets them when he looks away.

umm... that's what I got for now.

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| June 17, 2014, 11:37 pm
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Oh and by the way you should edit your "Cybercity tales of Alta-5 ep#3
the public transport station
"AND ADD THIS PHOTO TO IT;

=====
(Copy and paste it)
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<a href="/image_zoom.php?id=/user_
images/90311/1403064607m"><img
src="http://images.mocpages.com/user_
images/90311/1403064607m_
SPLASH.jpg" border="0" width="500"
height="373" alt=""></a>



right after

".....IN ORBIT AROUND ALTA-5 AT
THE SPACE STATION....."

Please.

Thanks!
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| June 18, 2014, 12:27 am
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Quoting cyberfrank 2010
it does nt work, part of the information is hidden somehow...

That's weird... Here I'll fix it! Now try it. :)
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| June 19, 2014, 12:31 am
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Quoting Nick White
now, it takes me to yahoo, saying the page is nt found, so sorry!
I hope it s not too much trouble for you,
I know you have great intentions,
thanks!


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| August 7, 2014, 1:27 am
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Quoting cyberfrank 2010
ok, so I just posted ML ep #7,
now, I want to do Mm #4 with Chris,
I have a lot of work to be ready, as I have
to re-build a new tv show scene, I decided on
using my Cybercity park s scene to do it,
as I can now use my seats in it, I think I have
enough to cover it, + my apartment is too small to have all scenes built, the show will now be made from 'panels' which I introduced in Genesis, it allows me to have big scenes, store them easy, and have multiple configurations for great pic angles and lighting, + I start to mingle with GIMP, to make 'tricks' like you, but, mainly, to have gun shots, and explosions.

so, the script is nt done, I m thinking about a theme, as the other contestants had [city-castle] but, for Chris, I d like to have more
of you in it.

I was thinking about space classic, or monsters, but, I d like to have your opinion,
what would you see?

also, I d love you to be the one talking through Chris, you cooperate well,
are constant, and persistent,
you re a good partner.

the way I see this...

when we agree on a theme, I should come up
with situations, I will then ask you to
write what you think Chris would say.

I hope you ll see this soon,
you don t reply on your episode pages
on my comments, every time you comment me,
I check your page to see if you made something that I missed, and check if you replied.

I like that you re not shy about commenting
and updating me, I m pretty busy doing this and my job.

thanks Nick!
that sounds good! Hmmmm... Theme... I like the classic space idea alot! I think he should be clueless wile fighting and then not knowing he defeats the challange.(just an idea) Sorry. I'll try the reply to them your comments, I'm in California right now and we drove to California, so.. We whent through Arizona Utah... There was not much wi-fi for my iPod, so now that I found wi-fi in California I can talk to you for a bit. Thanks!

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| August 7, 2014, 2:45 pm
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It would be great if he was surrounded by evil classic space men and the only way out is a broken transporter and Chris tries to fix it but it blows up, defeating the evil space men. (Back in the first season Chris's transporters always blew up in his face, just to keep the tradition) Chris dos'nt know what to do most of the time so it would leave him to do something cool. :)
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| August 9, 2014, 12:25 pm
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Quoting Nick White
mmm, there are no transporters in the game show concept, but, being surrounded by classic space men is doable in the form of blacktron troopers, transporters will be used by the GF soon, it s already built, it s been stored in a box for a year now, so, this sequence could happen in the future, it resembles the pods in the movie 'the fly' made in the 80s.

so, I will start scripting according to your choice, the stage is progressing, it only misses 2 seats, which is barely noticeable,
now, I need to redo the stage, I ll let you know when I m ready to start scripting-shooting!
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| August 9, 2014, 3:18 pm
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Quoting cyberfrank 2010
Quoting Nick White
wow, you travel to nice places, I d love to see those.

thanks for informing me about your situation.
Yes it was lots of fun but the trip takes 3 days! I live in Missouri. We stopped at the Grand Canyon and kept going so it was fun but California is hot in the day and cold at night!

It doesn't have to be a transporter. And blacktron is what I was thinking of... Or do you not want that? But if later chris does that with a real transporter it would be cool like around real Clang later.

Oh and about it needs to be 2-3 characters in A.I.L.C. Have you ever seen the show LOST?

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| August 10, 2014, 2:09 am
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Quoting Nick White
super!
you re lucky to see all that,
I m happy to hear this for you!
I did nt know it would be cold at night.

But if later chris does that with a real transporter it would be cool like around real Clang later.

we ll see, maybe to get him out of the game...

Oh and about it needs to be 2-3 characters in A.I.L.C. Have you ever seen the show LOST?

yes, at first, I thought the writer was
real smart, as he had to know, and understand
each and every character, to have depth,
after 2-3 episodes, it was clear for me, that
he made it up as he went along,
like a drunk driver, xd,

what happened...
he himself got lost in the story, xd,
as story has to have 3 vital elements;
1 a good intro
2 a good intruigue with action
3 a great ending that makes people have
spiritual reflection

but the twist is this...
it has to be defined before the first line.

everybody I know hated how lost finished,
and were disappointed in the story,
they felt they wasted their time watching this, they expected too much because of
the real potential of the concept.


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| August 10, 2014, 2:26 pm
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what I m doing with my series is different,
it will not end, but, it has to have conclusions, cybercity stories has one,
and now, Metal legion too.
cybercity had damages and rid of Vartok
Metal legion now captured him
tales of alta-5 has one, [unwritten]
moneyman has one [unwritten]
all have an ultimate objective.

cybercity; to be free and secure
metal legion; to free alta-5
meedass; to control alta-5
genesis; to make alta-5
moneyman; to control people s minds

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| August 10, 2014, 2:34 pm
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what I meant with the 2-3 characters

it s the way for character depth,
the more you add, the shallower it gets,
the more complicated and confusing it gets,
it has to be easier for the reader than that
to be pleasing to read.

I m telling you as a friend and reader,
all I said was to enjoy your stories more
considering your collection,

it sums up to this;
pictures;
main pic; your most exciting one
much less exteriors, more built scenes

props;
using your ships often is good, they are convincing, more ground ones.

story;
2-3 characters, clear objectives,
no small talk about other things to keep interest.

effects;
you re doing great and clearly improving,
a great asset!

I commented on your stories, each have strong
points I highlighted, but, in general,
those corrections will make your stories
very enjoyable to read.

people here expect brick scenes,
you have to work on that.

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| August 10, 2014, 2:55 pm
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check my work page, he, he.

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| August 10, 2014, 3:35 pm
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I will write the script prototype in
the money man group,
please reply Chris s answers there.

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| August 10, 2014, 7:16 pm
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Quoting cyberfrank 2010
Quoting Nick White
super!
you re lucky to see all that,
I m happy to hear this for you!
I did nt know it would be cold at night.

But if later chris does that with a real transporter it would be cool like around real Clang later.

we ll see, maybe to get him out of the game...

Oh and about it needs to be 2-3 characters in A.I.L.C. Have you ever seen the show LOST?

yes, at first, I thought the writer was
real smart, as he had to know, and understand
each and every character, to have depth,
after 2-3 episodes, it was clear for me, that
he made it up as he went along,
like a drunk driver, xd,

what happened...
he himself got lost in the story, xd,
as story has to have 3 vital elements;
1 a good intro
2 a good intruigue with action
3 a great ending that makes people have
spiritual reflection

but the twist is this...
it has to be defined before the first line.

everybody I know hated how lost finished,
and were disappointed in the story,
they felt they wasted their time watching this, they expected too much because of
the real potential of the concept.

Wow... You hate lost as much as I do! I hated the end of that so much! No what I ment was the lot of people with lots of character development... But I have other ideas...

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| August 10, 2014, 10:49 pm
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Thanks for all the help! I really grateful for all that u've helped me with! I will defiantly do more for the next season! I don't know if I can reply to everything till I'm back home! Thanks!
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| August 11, 2014, 12:05 am
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ok, but, check my work page, xd.
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| August 11, 2014, 1:13 pm
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Quoting cyberfrank 2010
ok, but, check my work page, xd.
hey! That's my ship!

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| August 11, 2014, 3:23 pm
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Quoting Nick White
I never thought about it, but, one can paste
other creators s pics, while in some cases
it might be bad, for coop, it s excellent.
we should figure a way to use it best.
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| August 11, 2014, 3:46 pm
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Quoting cyberfrank 2010
Quoting Nick White
I never thought about it, but, one can paste
other creators s pics, while in some cases
it might be bad, for coop, it s excellent.
we should figure a way to use it best.
Awesome!

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| August 11, 2014, 6:40 pm
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he, he, I have a surprise for you,
Chris s shadow is in the story,
I have made it s presence very discreet,
no one mentionned it, it s at 2 places in the story!
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| August 17, 2014, 9:29 pm
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Wow I have to see this! By the way after the money man I think Chris should have a bit of free time in the city and learns the guitar! (Just an idea tell me what you think) thanks for putting a shadow in it! There very important. Thanks!
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| August 18, 2014, 12:10 am
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Quoting Nick White
as I m not sure exactly what the shadow is about, and did nt want to mess your scheme, I did as in your earliest episodes, and made it discreet, but, it can play a great part of what s next!

and, what s next?

maybe the Clang should get him out of the show?...


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| August 18, 2014, 1:16 pm
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maybe Chris could get to know what is life
in sector -3?
play the guitar there?
life is miserable, it might be poetic.

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| August 18, 2014, 1:21 pm
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Quoting cyberfrank 2010
maybe Chris could get to know what is life
in sector -3?
play the guitar there?
life is miserable, it might be poetic.
sector -3 sound awesome! You and me think the same it would work as poetic as he has a lot of sad memory's.

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| August 18, 2014, 6:02 pm
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That sound awesome about the Clang part!
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| August 18, 2014, 11:07 pm
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Quoting Nick White
ok, we have some time,
I thought about showing the Clang scheming
in the Money man episode, but, then, I figured
that it was wrong to show the audience the 'inside' of the story.
I think it would be best to show this on
your page...

the scheme could be done in your story...
and the effects, on mine, xd.

how do we do this...

I could take pics of the Clang figs that I have, with Mr Harris in his office talking,
put it on my work page,
you copy it, and use it on your story.

we can write the script together as before.
what do you think?

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| August 19, 2014, 12:32 pm
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That sound great but... I'm not doing season three of A.I.L.C. until I can buy a new camera, I don't know how long it will take me... Is there another way? I will make short stories like, "Stories of Lightning City" but that will be about long ago Chris's parents and other stuff.
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| August 19, 2014, 1:57 pm
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Quoting Nick White
the story with parents does nt sound exciting,
Chris is at a cross-road,
how about; the shadow...
make the origins of Chris s shadow,
that could be good,
any other idea?
or the chronicles of sector -3?


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| August 19, 2014, 2:04 pm
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I only need a few more panels to complete sector 3, and design the public park.
it will feature;
front doors [4+]
back alley
and be 3-4 levels high.
it should look as in money man #2 episode.

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| August 19, 2014, 2:08 pm
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Quoting cyberfrank 2010
Quoting Nick White
the story with parents does nt sound exciting,
Chris is at a cross-road,
how about; the shadow...
make the origins of Chris s shadow,
that could be good,
any other idea?
or the chronicles of sector -3?

Actually there is a fun story in my mind of Jon and Diego, some character development.

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| August 19, 2014, 2:09 pm
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Quoting cyberfrank 2010
I only need a few more panels to complete sector 3, and design the public park.
it will feature;
front doors [4+]
back alley
and be 3-4 levels high.
it should look as in money man #2 episode.
that sounds good!

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| August 19, 2014, 2:17 pm
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how about you make a script like I did?
number the frames to a max of 25,
it has to involve these elements;
Chris
sector 3
the shadow,
and a fight of 4 frames with the Clang.

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| August 19, 2014, 2:21 pm
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Quoting cyberfrank 2010
how about you make a script like I did?
number the frames to a max of 25,
it has to involve these elements;
Chris
sector 3
the shadow,
and a fight of 4 frames with the Clang.
okay so I right a script like you did for me. Where would you like me to right it? It may take me a wile... A few hours or day..

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| August 19, 2014, 2:53 pm
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Quoting Nick White
write it here, so, I will be able
to give replies.
we ll do like money man.


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| August 19, 2014, 5:17 pm
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Quoting cyberfrank 2010
Quoting Nick White
write it here, so, I will be able
to give replies.
we ll do like money man.

Okay! :)

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| August 19, 2014, 6:03 pm
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I have added the pics on the work page.
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| August 27, 2014, 1:32 pm
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I made commercials for you to use in my work page.
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| August 31, 2014, 1:02 pm
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Quoting cyberfrank 2010
I made commercials for you to use in my work page.
Thanks! For what? Maybe I could use them later for season three. Man I have so many good ideas, sad, funny, awesomeness!

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| September 5, 2014, 1:56 am
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