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Well, I gave advice to various people such as Deff and Arnas Scheel on Bakura and Journey to the Soul respectively, so I figured I'd post something for you guys to critique.
http://www.mocpages.com/moc.php/322631
Whatever could be improved, let me know!
Permalink | May 8, 2012, 3:18 pm |
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This thing is cool. As I stated on your site:
Wow, there is a lot of action here! I'm always a big fan of multi-level MOCs. The photos are almost all clear and well lit as well. But my favorite single detail is that big green bubble in the river of slime. Really cool.
At first I was slightly annoyed when I saw that this thread had been up for two days and nobody had responded. But then I thought about it. It is the middle of the week, so lets see if you get any action on this thread over the weekend. If by Monday, none of our colleagues have had anything to say, then again, I will be slightly annoyed.
You have to remember to think on two levels: The MOC and then The Group.
Anyway, great work. Slime bubbles!
Attack!
Permalink | May 10, 2012, 9:08 am |
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Quoting Michael Rutherford
Slime bubbles!
I'll keep that in mind, thanks!
Permalink | May 10, 2012, 9:18 am |
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Quoting LukeClarenceVan The Revanchist
Well, I gave advice to various people such as Deff and Arnas Scheel on Bakura and Journey to the Soul respectively, so I figured I'd post something for you guys to critique.
http://www.mocpages.com/moc.php/322631
Whatever could be improved, let me know!
Such a brilliant MOC! My favorite part is the vermin. I guess you could improve by making the railings better. I suggest looking at the railings in Deff's MOCs.
Permalink | May 11, 2012, 11:35 am |
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Quoting Space Gypsy .
I guess you could improve by making the railings better.
Good point, thanks!
Permalink | May 11, 2012, 2:25 pm |
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I'd prefer that you'd make the acid more...thinner.It looks odd fat. :3
Permalink | May 12, 2012, 9:17 am |
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Quoting LukeClarenceVan The Revanchist
Well, I gave advice to various people such as Deff and Arnas Scheel on Bakura and Journey to the Soul respectively, so I figured I'd post something for you guys to critique.
http://www.mocpages.com/moc.php/322631
Whatever could be improved, let me know! This looks Really good! Loving all eh SNOT, the speeder could have been better, it looked rushed, But everything else is... Superb!
Permalink | May 12, 2012, 10:47 am |
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Quoting Raviel Ze MOCist!
I'd prefer that you'd make the acid more...thinner.It looks odd fat. :3
Thinner? As in a few studs less wide?
Permalink | May 12, 2012, 10:50 am |
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Quoting Arnas Scheel
This looks Really good! Loving all eh SNOT, the speeder could have been better, it looked rushed, But everything else is... Superb!
Thanks, I'll certainly spend more time on vehicles next time.
Permalink | May 12, 2012, 10:51 am |
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Quoting LukeClarenceVan The Revanchist
Thinner? As in a few studs less wide?
Well,I think plates would've been better than bricks for the acid thingy. :p
Permalink | May 12, 2012, 10:54 am |
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Quoting Raviel Ze MOCist!
Well,I think plates would've been better than bricks for the acid thingy. :p
I think it looks good. Especially the pipe it's coming out of.
Permalink | May 13, 2012, 4:52 am |
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Quoting LukeClarenceVan The Revanchist
Thanks, I'll certainly spend more time on vehicles next time.
It's hard to CC someone whose much better than me!
Permalink | May 13, 2012, 10:26 pm |
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Quoting Arnas Scheel
It's hard to CC someone whose much better than me!
I find that to sometimes. But just try to be accurate.
Permalink | May 14, 2012, 11:04 am |
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Thanks for all the CC guys!
Permalink | May 14, 2012, 11:06 am |
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Quoting LukeClarenceVan The Revanchist
Thanks for all the CC guys!
It's what we do. ;)
Permalink | May 14, 2012, 11:15 am |
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Quoting LukeClarenceVan The Revanchist
Well, I gave advice to various people such as Deff and Arnas Scheel on Bakura and Journey to the Soul respectively, so I figured I'd post something for you guys to critique.
http://www.mocpages.com/moc.php/322631
Whatever could be improved, let me know!
You know yourself, the Moc is perfect.
the only thing, would maybe be to add a railway to the lowest layer or a real flat wall.
The rest is PERFECT.
Permalink | May 16, 2012, 10:47 am |
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Quoting Deff .
You know yourself, the Moc is perfect.
the only thing, would maybe be to add a railway to the lowest layer or a real flat wall.
The rest is PERFECT.
Haha, thanks, hopefully I'll have a less successful MOC for you guys to critique next time.
Permalink | May 16, 2012, 10:57 am |
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Quoting Space Gypsy .
It's what we do. ;)
Bam!
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