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Hey guys, I thought you might want to discuss certain things you may have liked, disliked, laughed at, were disappointed in, thought could be better...ect. in the Hero's Peril pages. I thought we could start with Page 1 and work our way up to the newest page...
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| January 8, 2009, 8:51 am
Of course page 1 is always important. It's what gets people sucked into the story.You did a great job beginning the story.

I really like how you designed the main villain. What I mean is if he had come in with a whole horde of soldiers and conquered Malicoran, than we'd (well atleast I'd) picture him much differently.
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| January 8, 2009, 10:02 am
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Quoting Brik Masta
I really like how you designed the main villain. What I mean is if he had come in with a whole horde of soldiers and conquered Malicoran, than we'd (well at least I'd) picture him much differently.


Yeah, the main villain is great. I think it wouldn't hurt to add a few secondary bad guys, though. That way you can kill off a couple, and while the reader gets the feeling of satisfaction of gaining ground, you're not killing the main villain. Just an idea. =)

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| January 8, 2009, 6:47 pm
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I wanted to give the idea that the main villain doesn't need an army, horde, or even a second in command because he uses fear, and with that he can control an army. JD, the two guys behind the main villain at the bottom of Page 1 and on the cover of every page are his second and third in command. "Side-kicks" if you will...You will see them farther in the comic.
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| January 9, 2009, 8:20 am
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Ah...gotcha. =)
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| January 10, 2009, 2:01 pm
Should we start discussing Page 2?
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| January 15, 2009, 8:24 am
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I'll start another thread, so people can still discuss page 1 here...
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| January 15, 2009, 8:39 am
Quoting Caleb Cutlass-Crocodile Blanchet
I wanted to give the idea that the main villain doesn't need an army, horde, or even a second in command because he uses fear, and with that he can control an army. JD, the two guys behind the main villain at the bottom of Page 1 and on the cover of every page are his second and third in command. "Side-kicks" if you will...You will see them farther in the comic.
But he needs people to do the dirty work that he dosnt want to do.

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| April 1, 2009, 9:06 pm
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Quoting Skylar LaBounty
But he needs people to do the dirty work that he dosnt want to do.
That's why he has his horde and his second and third in command, he has them, but he doesn't need them...

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| April 1, 2009, 10:28 pm
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