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Quoting Chris Kruining
This story will play in the time after the drones on earth have been beaten and that there are to many humans on Earth so they had to expand to Mars.
So if anyone has a nice idea to tell me so I can finish/start the story I would be happy.


One way you could go with this is like in Gundam where different human factions (Earth v. Mars) square off and begin fighting each other using AEGAKS. Second, Mecha 1 returns in some form and starts things all over. Third, there's always the alien option (Martian or other) coming to wipe out humanity again. Just pick a storyline or lines you like and go from there.
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| January 20, 2011, 6:08 pm
How about the Overseers were never defeated, but when the humans have fallen, they resort to Mars. So Mecha 1 thinks all of humanity is destroyed, and the humans secretly escape to Mars. And that's when it happens...
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| January 20, 2011, 6:47 pm
 Group admin 
How did you know I was considering a space-platform AEGAKS? Mind reading is illegal, you know. I'm all for this, and if we play our cards right, we'll be able to link my rewrite with this one.
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| January 20, 2011, 11:05 pm
Space robots you say?

Robots can only be improved by adding a vacuum.
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| January 21, 2011, 12:31 am
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Jason makes a great point. Tying the two storylines together creates a continuity that will benefit both groups yet leaves enough room for each one to have its own unique flavor. I say give it a shot.
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| January 21, 2011, 1:36 am
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Quoting Chris Kruining

sorry qwerty what you are sugsesting is up to jason, the spearpoint is his story. i just took the option that the drones are beaten becouse that the most logical to me.

so jason its up to you to make the and the story of spearpoint and i will continue with evolution. okay?

I will accept this with one change. An era after spearpoint of global reuniting and the evolution. We need to make a core group for each storyline so we can keep the stories Synced.

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| January 21, 2011, 9:49 am
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Quoting Chris Kruining
well mike what if we combine story line 1,2 and 3: earth became to small for all its humans so they go to mars with most of the people so there are a few left on earth. somehow mecha 1 had a copy/kinda backup of itself and starts to build a new army in secret. meanwhile on mars the humans are winning it from the aliens,
when they suddenly got attacked by mecha 1's army. that's when they discover that all the humans left on earth are dead killed by mecha 1.so an interplanetary war is started

Well??

You could combine these stories together but it could get very confusing in no time. Most movies where they try to pull this off usually wind up being a disaster in the end. It would probably be better to focus on one story/theme at a time for a starting point at least for now and the maybe bring the other ideas in at a later date when you're looking for a good plot twist.
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| January 21, 2011, 10:45 am
Evolution and Spirepoint can be to independent but related themes, one lets say 100 years from today, the other 150 years after that. (dates are just gestimations)
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| January 21, 2011, 11:50 am
Quoting Chris Kruining

sorry qwerty what you are sugsesting is up to jason, the spearpoint is his story. i just took the option that the drones are beaten becouse that the most logical to me.

so jason its up to you to make the and the story of spearpoint and i will continue with evolution. okay?


Its a suggestive transition from Spirepoint to Evolution. And I only say it because Crash and I made a story (that might never be seen by the public audiences) and that was an idea I had for an ending.

Think about it, all human life gathers on Mount. Everest for a last fighting chance.
Plane A: Somehow defeat Mecha one and his ever-growing army.
Plane B: launch a half descent Space-Craft to Mars, and blowing up the base to give Mecha 1 what he wont's to see. And with dwindling supplies, they arrive on Mars, but their not completely alone...
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| January 21, 2011, 12:05 pm
This seems like it's dedicated more to the future of the AEGAKSverse, than any one of these stories.

Seems like it would be a good place for a collection of short stories that don't tie in very well with the main Spearpoint storyline.

Either way, the robots are in space so watch out, squishy humans!
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| January 21, 2011, 2:47 pm
Quoting Chris Kruining


sound good, so this is what the start of the story will look like:
-the humans have beaten the drones (this point is up to jason to write in spearpoint)
-there are to much humans on earth so they had to make mars a colony of earth(mike if you want to write this part)
-the humans are on mars and are building a great economy based on enegy cristals, but there not alone.(i will write this part).
-they have beaten the aliens on mars, but now the robots are after them(qwerty this one is up to you if you want, ask crach for help is nessesary)

well?


I would love to help write a part of this story, but the story that Crash and I did was about the world barely survived a lava Apocalypse which left it scared with lava pools, and then the AI that where created for national security had their programing corrupted. And seeing their defeat was immanent, they launch onto space, and unite with the colony already established on the planet Mars.
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| January 21, 2011, 3:19 pm
Quoting Neil Dynamo
This seems like it's dedicated more to the future of the AEGAKSverse, than any one of these stories.

Seems like it would be a good place for a collection of short stories that don't tie in very well with the main Spearpoint storyline.

Either way, the robots are in space so watch out, squishy humans!


I defiantly agree with Neil, everyone who wont's can write their own mildly independent story relating to the lives of the colonists.
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| January 21, 2011, 3:38 pm
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I am all for the short stories idea. It could be very Animatrix-styled. I should have a comprehensive Spearpoint timeline up by Monday, so we can decide then.
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| January 21, 2011, 11:14 pm
or you could take the best of all the suggested storylines and come up with something like this:

The humans finally defeated Mecha One and the rest of the Overseers, several years pass and the few remaining human colonies begin to suffer from overcrowding. The accepted solution is for humanity to pool their resources and build rockets for the purpose of adapting the Martian landscapes to suit their needs, eventually moving about half of their population to the Red Planet. several more years pass, and the humans of Mars decide they want independence from Earth, and a war occurs between the humans from earth and the humans from Mars. Unknown by the humans, there was life on mars, and the martians attack them, so the mars humans fight a war on two fronts. At roughly the same time, it is discovered by the humans on Earth that Mecha One had built copies of himself and all the Overseers loyal to him, and they had built up an army in secret. This army moves against the humans of earth, and the humans of Earth and Mars join forces to repel the Robots and Aliens.
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| January 25, 2011, 8:44 pm
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Quoting Rai Schrado
or you could take the best of all the suggested storylines and come up with something like this:

The humans finally defeated Mecha One and the rest of the Overseers, several years pass and the few remaining human colonies begin to suffer from overcrowding. The accepted solution is for humanity to pool their resources and build rockets for the purpose of adapting the Martian landscapes to suit their needs, eventually moving about half of their population to the Red Planet. several more years pass, and the humans of Mars decide they want independence from Earth, and a war occurs between the humans from earth and the humans from Mars. Unknown by the humans, there was life on mars, and the martians attack them, so the mars humans fight a war on two fronts. At roughly the same time, it is discovered by the humans on Earth that Mecha One had built copies of himself and all the Overseers loyal to him, and they had built up an army in secret. This army moves against the humans of earth, and the humans of Earth and Mars join forces to repel the Robots and Aliens.

I like this one, Rai. And by the way, the timeline for the Spearpoint Arc is online in the Spearpoint Group.
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| January 25, 2011, 10:53 pm
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Sounds good to me overall but a couple of questions. What will the Martian lifeforms be? Are they organic, sentient machines, cyborgs, etc.? Also I don't have a lot of time to write storylines all the time but I was wondering if my Dio the Corruptor would fit in here and how. I would like to build more "evil robots" but don't have any Exo-Force background or parts/figs. Let me know what you all honestly think.
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| February 7, 2011, 11:51 pm
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Hasn't anyone else noticed that this group only has 4 creations posted so far! We need more builds to keep the members interested or everyone is going to forget this group and move on to something else.
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| February 11, 2011, 10:59 am
Quoting Mike Johnson
Hasn't anyone else noticed that this group only has 4 creations posted so far! We need more builds to keep the members interested or everyone is going to forget this group and move on to something else.


First of all, this group practically has on "members", just four Admins and six Mods! and second, this group is just starting! though it would be nice to have more then 4 creations.
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| February 11, 2011, 11:43 am
well..make that six cuz im gnna post two or three of my newest build and it's still a fresh group
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| February 11, 2011, 11:50 am
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Good to see more builds are on the way. Now the other issue is more members. If you know someone who make a good contributor invite them to join or let the rest of us know about them so we can check them out and then invite them.
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| February 16, 2011, 11:24 am
I was just wondering if my Tenshi would count for this group. I know it doesn't transform, but one of the rules is that it just has to have wings right?
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| February 16, 2011, 5:05 pm
Quoting Rai Schrado
or you could take the best of all the suggested storylines and come up with something like this:

The humans finally defeated Mecha One and the rest of the Overseers, several years pass and the few remaining human colonies begin to suffer from overcrowding. The accepted solution is for humanity to pool their resources and build rockets for the purpose of adapting the Martian landscapes to suit their needs, eventually moving about half of their population to the Red Planet. several more years pass, and the humans of Mars decide they want independence from Earth, and a war occurs between the humans from earth and the humans from Mars. Unknown by the humans, there was life on mars, and the martians attack them, so the mars humans fight a war on two fronts. At roughly the same time, it is discovered by the humans on Earth that Mecha One had built copies of himself and all the Overseers loyal to him, and they had built up an army in secret. This army moves against the humans of earth, and the humans of Earth and Mars join forces to repel the Robots and Aliens.


This could tie into my AEGAKS :The Rebirth. for my mini-series of AEGAKS, after the final Mecha One copy is destroyed, there is a time of peace, and then, Mecha One's secret copy rises from deep inside the earth in a bunker, and the new "Reborn" Mecha One is the strongest of Spearpoint and Evolution's together. like..a Super Mecha One. Maybe Mecha One built a supreme Mecha that is like..the Drone God or something. just an idea to flow between the 3 AEGAKS timelines.
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| February 22, 2011, 2:01 pm
So this is essentially gundam age (w/ mars and all that) tied into the spearpoint timeline, right?
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| May 14, 2012, 6:53 am
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