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I watched the series they're good! (I'm BIONICLlemoc on YT). If you need help I'll help you. :)
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| January 10, 2011, 2:02 am
Quoting Peter Crasher the Powerlord

Sure! In fact, why do you think I made this group? I'll go sub and send you a friend request on Friday.
Well I didn't really like the newest episode...Sorry. Not that I didn't like A.D and stuff. Its just it,really didn't fit in with the whole rest of the series. You know what I mean? Sorry.

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| January 10, 2011, 10:03 am
I like the Weapons of War storyline, but I don't exactly love how it goes. You're making it like it's a TV show, different problems with the same characters in different episodes. It isn't exactly like a true story with one problem, and the solving of the problem. I really thought the first two episodes were going somewhere, but than the third one just threw them off. Vaxor was about to KILL Airaven and Komart, and than the third episode their fine. Still, it's pretty good. :)
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| January 10, 2011, 12:27 pm
Quoting Peter Crasher the Powerlord

Sorry if that happened. This is the true plot of the series: the Key of Zoldac, an ancient artifact that belonged to the Great Being named Zoldac, was taken to the planet of Telkra Nui under unknown causes. The citizens of the planet have caused a war to find it. Komart and the Elite Toa Force are also fighting in the war and are also looking for the Key of Zoldac. However, their search has been extremely difficult because they also have to fight the war at the same time. That is why there are different plots in the episodes. I promise to remember that the series about that and not like a TV show.

Sounds good. One way you can do that is by killing off characters, maybe a villain or two. Or maybe you can rebuild Komart's brother, and than kill him off in your story. Just an idea. *shrugs*
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| January 10, 2011, 6:12 pm
Weapons of War is different in a way cuz you include many things from the real world.
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| January 10, 2011, 11:12 pm
I have 2 suggestions, they have nOthing to do with the storyline but with technical aspects.... Number one: I think the words aren't on the screen for long enough, so younger people will have trouble reading it without pushing pause every other scene or so... Number 2 I believe that the color u use for the words is really hard to see, may I suggest a black or a red, a color that shows up better! Anyway just some suggestions I think u should consider..
Yours Truly,
Aslangorge
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| January 12, 2011, 1:57 am
Quoting Peter Crasher the Powerlord
These are my ideas for episode 8: Airaven and Zeekzon come back and it is revealed that both Toa had colds though they now became cured. Komart then explains to the Elite Toa Force 2 things: a new recruit(this new recruit is Toa Bronkan) and yet another search mission for the Key of Zoldac. During this discussion, Tarko gets captured by Darkvoir and Helarax and takes him to the back of the room. Darkvoir then kills Tarko with a new chainsaw(spoilers XD!). Komart and the rest of the E.T.F. hear his screaming and sees his dead body and sees Darkvoir's foot on his head. Komart prepares to attack when Tarko actually rises from the dead(will explain later) and attacks Aquara and Kedon and manages to kill Jolnar. He also comes back from the dead and attacks the team. Luckily, no one was hurt but now Tarko and Jolnar have left. Meanwhile in the F.O.T. base, Vaxor is fighting Genlane and Spidak then holds her hostage and just when Vaxor gives his final blow, Dystrax falls from the roof and absorbs his attack. Genlane askes Dystrax to help her fight Vaxor and then they fight him. Sweet, eh? If you want to change any part of this plot, let me know and I'll see what I can do.

Sounds good to me :)
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| January 13, 2011, 3:48 am
Quoting Peter Crasher the Powerlord
These are my ideas for episode 8: Airaven and Zeekzon come back and it is revealed that both Toa had colds though they now became cured. Komart then explains to the Elite Toa Force 2 things: a new recruit(this new recruit is Toa Bronkan) and yet another search mission for the Key of Zoldac. During this discussion, Tarko gets captured by Darkvoir and Helarax and takes him to the back of the room. Darkvoir then kills Tarko with a new chainsaw(spoilers XD!). Komart and the rest of the E.T.F. hear his screaming and sees his dead body and sees Darkvoir's foot on his head. Komart prepares to attack when Tarko actually rises from the dead(will explain later) and attacks Aquara and Kedon and manages to kill Jolnar. He also comes back from the dead and attacks the team. Luckily, no one was hurt but now Tarko and Jolnar have left. Meanwhile in the F.O.T. base, Vaxor is fighting Genlane and Spidak then holds her hostage and just when Vaxor gives his final blow, Dystrax falls from the roof and absorbs his attack. Genlane askes Dystrax to help her fight Vaxor and then they fight him. Sweet, eh? If you want to change any part of this plot, let me know and I'll see what I can do.


Sounds like a good plan.
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| January 16, 2011, 10:35 pm
Quoting Bogi Stassov
I watched the series they're good! (I'm BIONICLlemoc on YT). If you need help I'll help you. :)
How do you send a friend request?

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