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Weapons of War Storyline Makers
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Welcome to this group, where you can help out with Weapons of War.
Permalink | January 9, 2011, 7:52 pm |
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I watched the series they're good! (I'm BIONICLlemoc on YT). If you need help I'll help you. :)
Permalink | January 10, 2011, 2:02 am |
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Quoting Bogi Stassov
I watched the series they're good! (I'm BIONICLlemoc on YT). If you need help I'll help you. :)
Sure! In fact, why do you think I made this group? I'll go sub and send you a friend request on Friday.
Permalink | January 10, 2011, 2:09 am |
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Quoting Peter Crasher the Powerlord
Sure! In fact, why do you think I made this group? I'll go sub and send you a friend request on Friday. Well I didn't really like the newest episode...Sorry. Not that I didn't like A.D and stuff. Its just it,really didn't fit in with the whole rest of the series. You know what I mean? Sorry.
Permalink | January 10, 2011, 10:03 am |
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I like the Weapons of War storyline, but I don't exactly love how it goes. You're making it like it's a TV show, different problems with the same characters in different episodes. It isn't exactly like a true story with one problem, and the solving of the problem. I really thought the first two episodes were going somewhere, but than the third one just threw them off. Vaxor was about to KILL Airaven and Komart, and than the third episode their fine. Still, it's pretty good. :)
Permalink | January 10, 2011, 12:27 pm |
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Quoting Callan Lord of Fire
I like the Weapons of War storyline, but I don't exactly love how it goes. You're making it like it's a TV show, different problems with the same characters in different episodes. It isn't exactly like a true story with one problem, and the solving of the problem. I really thought the first two episodes were going somewhere, but than the third one just threw them off. Vaxor was about to KILL Airaven and Komart, and than the third episode their fine. Still, it's pretty good. :)
Sorry if that happened. This is the true plot of the series: the Key of Zoldac, an ancient artifact that belonged to the Great Being named Zoldac, was taken to the planet of Telkra Nui under unknown causes. The citizens of the planet have caused a war to find it. Komart and the Elite Toa Force are also fighting in the war and are also looking for the Key of Zoldac. However, their search has been extremely difficult because they also have to fight the war at the same time. That is why there are different plots in the episodes. I promise to remember that the series about that and not like a TV show.
Permalink | January 10, 2011, 6:04 pm |
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Quoting Peter Crasher the Powerlord
Sorry if that happened. This is the true plot of the series: the Key of Zoldac, an ancient artifact that belonged to the Great Being named Zoldac, was taken to the planet of Telkra Nui under unknown causes. The citizens of the planet have caused a war to find it. Komart and the Elite Toa Force are also fighting in the war and are also looking for the Key of Zoldac. However, their search has been extremely difficult because they also have to fight the war at the same time. That is why there are different plots in the episodes. I promise to remember that the series about that and not like a TV show.
Sounds good. One way you can do that is by killing off characters, maybe a villain or two. Or maybe you can rebuild Komart's brother, and than kill him off in your story. Just an idea. *shrugs*
Permalink | January 10, 2011, 6:12 pm |
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i have to agree with callan it is just a bit like a tv show but not so much , u should think about killing off some characters, and try to add some cussing but put limits on it like do go too extreme like saying the f__k but not too childish like poophead. i liek the random references and humor though like the katy perry song and the werewolf from twilight
Permalink | January 10, 2011, 8:46 pm |
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Weapons of War is different in a way cuz you include many things from the real world.
Permalink | January 10, 2011, 11:12 pm |
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Quoting L. Nguyen
i have to agree with callan it is just a bit like a tv show but not so much , u should think about killing off some characters, and try to add some cussing but put limits on it like do go too extreme like saying the f__k but not too childish like poophead. i liek the random references and humor though like the katy perry song and the werewolf from twilight
Hehe. As I said, modern day culture references will be in the series. I don't like killing off characters so I won't do that. As for part where WoW is like a TV show, I will stop that. After all, even though the Weapons of War/Tales of the Toa clashing will continue in A.D.'s series, I have decided that since Weapons of War is about a war caused by the absence of an ancient artifact that everyone wants their hands on, I will focus on that more now.
Permalink | January 10, 2011, 11:13 pm |
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Quoting Adam Toh
Weapons of War is different in a way cuz you include many things from the real world.
Yeah. Expect some stuff such as songs from famous artists like Katy Perry, Ke$ha, Flo Rida and even Lady Gaga.
Permalink | January 10, 2011, 11:19 pm |
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I have 2 suggestions, they have nOthing to do with the storyline but with technical aspects.... Number one: I think the words aren't on the screen for long enough, so younger people will have trouble reading it without pushing pause every other scene or so... Number 2 I believe that the color u use for the words is really hard to see, may I suggest a black or a red, a color that shows up better! Anyway just some suggestions I think u should consider..
Yours Truly,
Aslangorge
Permalink | January 12, 2011, 1:57 am |
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These are my ideas for episode 8: Airaven and Zeekzon come back and it is revealed that both Toa had colds though they now became cured. Komart then explains to the Elite Toa Force 2 things: a new recruit(this new recruit is Toa Bronkan) and yet another search mission for the Key of Zoldac. During this discussion, Tarko gets captured by Darkvoir and Helarax and takes him to the back of the room. Darkvoir then kills Tarko with a new chainsaw(spoilers XD!). Komart and the rest of the E.T.F. hear his screaming and sees his dead body and sees Darkvoir's foot on his head. Komart prepares to attack when Tarko actually rises from the dead(will explain later) and attacks Aquara and Kedon and manages to kill Jolnar. He also comes back from the dead and attacks the team. Luckily, no one was hurt but now Tarko and Jolnar have left. Meanwhile in the F.O.T. base, Vaxor is fighting Genlane and Spidak then holds her hostage and just when Vaxor gives his final blow, Dystrax falls from the roof and absorbs his attack. Genlane askes Dystrax to help her fight Vaxor and then they fight him. Sweet, eh? If you want to change any part of this plot, let me know and I'll see what I can do.
Permalink | January 12, 2011, 11:54 pm |
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Quoting Peter Crasher the Powerlord
These are my ideas for episode 8: Airaven and Zeekzon come back and it is revealed that both Toa had colds though they now became cured. Komart then explains to the Elite Toa Force 2 things: a new recruit(this new recruit is Toa Bronkan) and yet another search mission for the Key of Zoldac. During this discussion, Tarko gets captured by Darkvoir and Helarax and takes him to the back of the room. Darkvoir then kills Tarko with a new chainsaw(spoilers XD!). Komart and the rest of the E.T.F. hear his screaming and sees his dead body and sees Darkvoir's foot on his head. Komart prepares to attack when Tarko actually rises from the dead(will explain later) and attacks Aquara and Kedon and manages to kill Jolnar. He also comes back from the dead and attacks the team. Luckily, no one was hurt but now Tarko and Jolnar have left. Meanwhile in the F.O.T. base, Vaxor is fighting Genlane and Spidak then holds her hostage and just when Vaxor gives his final blow, Dystrax falls from the roof and absorbs his attack. Genlane askes Dystrax to help her fight Vaxor and then they fight him. Sweet, eh? If you want to change any part of this plot, let me know and I'll see what I can do. not bad
Permalink | January 13, 2011, 12:16 am |
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Quoting Peter Crasher the Powerlord
These are my ideas for episode 8: Airaven and Zeekzon come back and it is revealed that both Toa had colds though they now became cured. Komart then explains to the Elite Toa Force 2 things: a new recruit(this new recruit is Toa Bronkan) and yet another search mission for the Key of Zoldac. During this discussion, Tarko gets captured by Darkvoir and Helarax and takes him to the back of the room. Darkvoir then kills Tarko with a new chainsaw(spoilers XD!). Komart and the rest of the E.T.F. hear his screaming and sees his dead body and sees Darkvoir's foot on his head. Komart prepares to attack when Tarko actually rises from the dead(will explain later) and attacks Aquara and Kedon and manages to kill Jolnar. He also comes back from the dead and attacks the team. Luckily, no one was hurt but now Tarko and Jolnar have left. Meanwhile in the F.O.T. base, Vaxor is fighting Genlane and Spidak then holds her hostage and just when Vaxor gives his final blow, Dystrax falls from the roof and absorbs his attack. Genlane askes Dystrax to help her fight Vaxor and then they fight him. Sweet, eh? If you want to change any part of this plot, let me know and I'll see what I can do.
Sounds good to me :)
Permalink | January 13, 2011, 3:48 am |
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Quoting Peter Crasher the Powerlord
These are my ideas for episode 8: Airaven and Zeekzon come back and it is revealed that both Toa had colds though they now became cured. Komart then explains to the Elite Toa Force 2 things: a new recruit(this new recruit is Toa Bronkan) and yet another search mission for the Key of Zoldac. During this discussion, Tarko gets captured by Darkvoir and Helarax and takes him to the back of the room. Darkvoir then kills Tarko with a new chainsaw(spoilers XD!). Komart and the rest of the E.T.F. hear his screaming and sees his dead body and sees Darkvoir's foot on his head. Komart prepares to attack when Tarko actually rises from the dead(will explain later) and attacks Aquara and Kedon and manages to kill Jolnar. He also comes back from the dead and attacks the team. Luckily, no one was hurt but now Tarko and Jolnar have left. Meanwhile in the F.O.T. base, Vaxor is fighting Genlane and Spidak then holds her hostage and just when Vaxor gives his final blow, Dystrax falls from the roof and absorbs his attack. Genlane askes Dystrax to help her fight Vaxor and then they fight him. Sweet, eh? If you want to change any part of this plot, let me know and I'll see what I can do.
OK, slight change of plans. Since I recently built Toa Tekrant, the new recruits are going to be both Bronkan and Tekrant.
Permalink | January 16, 2011, 9:58 pm |
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Quoting Peter Crasher the Powerlord
These are my ideas for episode 8: Airaven and Zeekzon come back and it is revealed that both Toa had colds though they now became cured. Komart then explains to the Elite Toa Force 2 things: a new recruit(this new recruit is Toa Bronkan) and yet another search mission for the Key of Zoldac. During this discussion, Tarko gets captured by Darkvoir and Helarax and takes him to the back of the room. Darkvoir then kills Tarko with a new chainsaw(spoilers XD!). Komart and the rest of the E.T.F. hear his screaming and sees his dead body and sees Darkvoir's foot on his head. Komart prepares to attack when Tarko actually rises from the dead(will explain later) and attacks Aquara and Kedon and manages to kill Jolnar. He also comes back from the dead and attacks the team. Luckily, no one was hurt but now Tarko and Jolnar have left. Meanwhile in the F.O.T. base, Vaxor is fighting Genlane and Spidak then holds her hostage and just when Vaxor gives his final blow, Dystrax falls from the roof and absorbs his attack. Genlane askes Dystrax to help her fight Vaxor and then they fight him. Sweet, eh? If you want to change any part of this plot, let me know and I'll see what I can do.
Sounds like a good plan.
Permalink | January 16, 2011, 10:35 pm |
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Quoting Peter Crasher the Powerlord
OK, slight change of plans. Since I recently built Toa Tekrant, the new recruits are going to be both Bronkan and Tekrant.
Once again, I am making a slight change of plans. Since I have recently built Toa Sokados who I will post tommorow, the new recruits will be Bronkan, Tekrant and Sokados.
Permalink | February 3, 2011, 10:21 pm |
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Well, now that episode 7 has been posted on Youtube, let's get working on the plot of episode 8, shall we?
Permalink | March 26, 2011, 11:13 pm |
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Quoting Bogi Stassov
I watched the series they're good! (I'm BIONICLlemoc on YT). If you need help I'll help you. :) How do you send a friend request?
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