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A New Land Chapter 1 Beasts of the Island
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Vulshab stands at the bow of his ship; approaching the new island.
"Prepare to land on the island," he says as he takes out his double sided sword. This being the first time to land on the island, he wanted to take as many precautions as possible.
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| November 9, 2010, 8:30 pm
Plutolious

From his watching spot he saw the ship coming. If would be worthless to attack the ship now. He would get them separated. Then pick them off one by one.
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| November 9, 2010, 8:59 pm
Resham

When I heard the cry land! I ran out on deck to see. This would be my new life. I couldn't wait.
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| November 9, 2010, 10:37 pm
---Intruder alert!
Unknown bioform has entered the complex.
-Terminating hibernation cycle....done.
--Re-booting exoskeleton.....exoskeleton ready for energy transfer.

The factory, now grown into disrepair, hummed to life once more as a bolt of green energy arced through cables strewn across the cieling, walls, and floor, and finally transfered itself into a smallish robot. The robot's three optical sensors glowed with a bluish light as it's body flared to life, rejuvinated by the fresh burst of power. The robot stumbled towards the tripwire sensor with an aquward gait, the energy being within having been unacustomed with his robot body due to disuse. The disturbance had turned out only to be an insect rahi which happened to crawl over the lens of the sensor. The robot's curiosity now being satisfied, and that it was illogical to simply return into stasis, it collected it's tools, a sword and a plasma sphere launcher, and startedto stumble outside his long-time home.
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| November 10, 2010, 1:44 am
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Vulshab steps onto the warm, sandy land; feeling the heat bounce off his armor and mask.
"Nuparu, Macku, Hahli, stay with the ship. Lhikan, Hewkii, Resham, come with me," he says as he helps the three Matoran onto the land of the future Po-Metru.
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| November 10, 2010, 6:10 pm
Plutolious


Now was a chance. I wanted to test their skills. Go attack the boat, I told my drones, destroy it, preventing escape.
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| November 10, 2010, 6:46 pm
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Vulshab stops short, looking towards the sky.
"What are those things?" he asks aloud as he channels his acid powers into his double-sided sword.
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| November 10, 2010, 8:21 pm
Resham

If you really want to know what I think then I will tell you that they look like mutant bug things, Ahhhhh!

(I will post a picture of them soon)
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| November 10, 2010, 10:22 pm
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Quoting Dr.Egghead explosive
Resham

If you really want to know what I think then I will tell you that they look like mutant bug things, Ahhhhh!

(I will post a picture of them soon)

Vulshab wide stream of acid at the approaching beasts. He rests his dual sided sword at his side as he motions his hand upwards, sending a massive diamond wall to seperate the Matoran and him from the flying monsters.
((If you get to post a moc of your creatures, you can enter it in the contest going on here.))
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| November 10, 2010, 10:40 pm
-Alpha-
As I wandered through the craggy canyons which were scattered nearly everywhere in this area, I saw an abnormal wall of diamond shoot up from the ground. I then chose to investigate, and walked in the anomaly's direction. I soon was able to climb on top of one of the taller mountains, and saw several biomechanical and biological beings in a pitched battle. I continued to observe these beings with the aid of a zoom lens built into my middle eye.
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| November 11, 2010, 12:57 am
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Quoting Alpha AI
-Alpha-
As I wandered through the overgrown forest, which was teeming with biomechanical life, I saw an abnormal wall of diamond shoot up from the ground. I then chose to investigate, and walked in the anomaly's direction.

((I don't know if I mentioned this yet, but we are supposed to be in Po-Metru, so there are no forests that I know of. Of course, Po-Metru isn't actually formed yet.
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| November 11, 2010, 2:58 pm
((D'oh! Fixing.))
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| November 11, 2010, 3:47 pm
((fixed it. Re-read the comment plz))
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| November 11, 2010, 5:37 pm
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Quoting Alpha AI
((fixed it. Re-read the comment plz))

Okay, thanks! I'll reply in a second...

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| November 11, 2010, 6:01 pm
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After Vulshab makes the wall made of pure diamond, he notices a reflection coming from the distance. He would figure out what that was later, now he had to help these birds land.
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| November 11, 2010, 9:20 pm
Plutolious screeched a retreat order. He could have kept the fight going, but what was the point. He had got the information he wanted. Kill the diamond toa and the rest will be easy.
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| November 11, 2010, 10:42 pm
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Vulshab regroups with the boat, telling the three to steer the boat back with the fleet. Vulshab, Resham, and the other two Matoran make their way towards the glittering object in distance.
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| November 11, 2010, 11:33 pm
--Alpha--
The aerial creatures having repealed their assault, four of the bipedal beings began to advance upon my position. I started to walk forward to meet them mid-way.... Crash!... Clang! ...Clunk!..... Thonk!.....Whump! I had realized too late that I had misjudged the distance, being decieved by my zoom lens into thinking I were closer to both the ground and the bipeds. I ran a quick systems check.....
--- All systems running at over 95% efficiency.
-Minor damage to outer chassis.
- Energy container has not been breached.
I was satisfied with the results, and got up to continue towards the bipeds.
((from a distance, and ONLY from a distance, he could seemingly look like a matoran... One who just fell off a cliff and then got up again...))
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| November 12, 2010, 2:02 am
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Vulshab looks overhead at four of the flying beings. He looks in the distance at the reflection, noticing a Matoran-like being in the distance.
"Those winged rats are going to make a meal out of that Matoran!" yells Yulshab as he fires a stream of acid at the flying creatures.
((The acid is supposed to come out of his hand this time.))
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| November 12, 2010, 7:30 pm
((yet you forget to mention that the matoran just FELL OFF A FREAKIN' CLIFF!!))
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| November 12, 2010, 7:35 pm
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Quoting Alpha AI
((yet you forget to mention that the matoran just FELL OFF A FREAKIN' CLIFF!!))

((Oh, thought you got up the cliff... I'll mention if Doc gets his comment out soon.))
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| November 12, 2010, 10:22 pm
((I think it's a pinch late for that... And didn't he say they retreated??))
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| November 12, 2010, 11:38 pm
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Quoting Alpha AI
((I think it's a pinch late for that... And didn't he say they retreated??))

((Yeah, he did. I thought they were attacking you... I'll edit my post as soon as I get the chance.))
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| November 13, 2010, 10:04 am
((...You on yet?))
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| November 14, 2010, 1:38 pm
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((Sorry for the wait))
Vulshab was the first to make it to the edge of the cliff. He turns around, facing the three panting Matoran.
"Stay here, I'll be back!" he yells as he jumps into the canyon, creating a diamond slide. He slides down towards the bottom, his feet gaining momentum as he approaches the bottom of the canyon.
((I probably left the Matoran vulnerable, but the Matoran wouldn't have been able to make it into the canyon.))
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| November 14, 2010, 3:29 pm
--Alpha--
I saw one of the bipedal beings rapidly approaching me, riding on a sled of diamonds generated from within itself. Obviously, my curiosity was aroused.
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| November 14, 2010, 7:53 pm
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Vulshab digs his heels into the slide before jumping off onto the sandy ground below. As he lands, he looks around, not spotting anything in the dimly lit canyon.
"Matoran!" he yells, his kind voice echoing throughout the canyon. "Where are you?"
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| November 14, 2010, 11:00 pm
Resham stopped running. It had seemed in his desperate attempt to flee the creatures, he had been taken to the bottom of a cliff. He barely had time to take cover behind a rock before the figure came crashing down.

(Sorry about not being active)
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| November 14, 2010, 11:48 pm
Vulshab hears no response, but instead notices a glowing green dot zip across the sands and rocks towards himself, and planted itself upon the senter of his chest. A green light, with three blue lights at a diagonal-upward direction near it, appeared to be the source of the dot. ((Issa laser pointer)) A figure stepped out from the shadows, now obviously appearing to be no matoran at all, but a robot. It's three blue eyes blinked in sequence, as if confused with the question asked of it. the whirring of cogs and the ocasional spark from behind it's head-disk made it appear to be making some kind of adjustment. The robot then repeated the question asked of it, as if using a recording, and it's third eye flashed thrice as it began to speak in an electronic monotone: "Define: Matoran. Explain:You generated diamonds from within yourself. Inquiry: what are you? Input required." ((He's kinda like a child....he nows just about nothing on how the world works, but everything about computer-y stuff.))
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| November 15, 2010, 12:52 am
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Quoting Alpha AI
Vulshab hears no response, but instead notices a glowing green dot zip across the sands and rocks towards himself, and planted itself upon the senter of his chest. A green light, with three blue lights at a diagonal-upward direction near it, appeared to be the source of the dot. ((Issa laser pointer)) A figure stepped out from the shadows, now obviously appearing to be no matoran at all, but a robot. It's three blue eyes blinked in sequence, as if confused with the question asked of it. the whirring of cogs and the ocasional spark from behind it's head-disk made it appear to be making some kind of adjustment. The robot then repeated the question asked of it, as if using a recording, and it's third eye flashed thrice as it began to speak in an electronic monotone: "Define: Matoran. Explain:You generated diamonds from within yourself. Inquiry: what are you? Input required." ((He's kinda like a child....he nows just about nothing on how the world works, but everything about computer-y stuff.))

Vulshab looks towards his right, noticing Resham. He gestures with his left hand to stay back. Vulshab turns his attention to the robot, trying to look it photoreceptor to photoreceptor. The Toa of Diamond and Acid thinks over the inquirys before answering.

"A Matoran is a small being, like myself but smaller. Actually he's about your size." ((Is that right?)) "I am a Toa of Diamond and Acid, so I can generate any kind of diamond or acid form."

He looks at the robot with a sense of caution behind his mask. It probably wasn't a good idea to tell the robot these things, but it may be the only way...
((Glad to see you back, Dr. Egghead.)
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| November 15, 2010, 10:02 am
--Alpha--((Yeah he is a little taller than a matoran.))
I paused, computing these new terms, and then asked more questions. "Define: Toa. Explain: How do you generate diamond and acid?" I was rapidly assimilating the language form that the toa was presenting me, so I could be able to speak like it does soon.
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| November 15, 2010, 10:39 am
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Vulshab looks at the curious robot from top to bottom as he answers, "A Toa is one of the taller beings. It is our job to protect the Matoran and put an end to the Dark Hunters and Makuta. As for how I can generate the element, I am not sure. It is just something that Toa are capable of possessing."
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| November 15, 2010, 10:52 am
--Alpha--
I once again continued to ask questions of the toa. I attempted to say "what" but my vocal processor shorted out midway through the word. It was speedily fixed, however, so I proceded withmy questions: "What are Makuta and dark hunters?"
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| November 15, 2010, 11:56 am
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Vulshab looks down at the sandy ground, sighing.

"Dark Hunters and Makuta are the Toa's enemies. I'll explain everything else some other time, but right now I need to ask you some questions. Do you know of any threats in the area, besides those winged things?"
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| November 15, 2010, 2:23 pm
--Arnau--
I processed the question, then responded "System error. Not enough data. Input required."
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| November 15, 2010, 6:38 pm
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Vulshab nods his head as he looks the robot over.
"I guess not. You want to come with the Matoran and I as we scout the island?"
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| November 15, 2010, 8:04 pm
--Alpha--
I paused, then agreed to the toa's request. This would allow me to gather aditional data.
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| November 15, 2010, 8:14 pm
Resham

I was glad that piece arrangements had been made. Better another to protect me from the flying beasts.

(I think we're gonna need something else in the story because it looks like Plutolious is the only bad guy)
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| November 15, 2010, 8:33 pm
((hang on a bit.... Tommorow I'll add an insane makuta.))
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| November 15, 2010, 8:49 pm
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((Yeah, I'll have some bad guys up pretty soon as well. As well as some more NPC's.))
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| November 15, 2010, 10:40 pm
((BUMP))
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| November 23, 2010, 1:18 am
((Can someone start the story again))
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| November 23, 2010, 12:07 pm
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((Yeah, I'll try to start it back in a few hours.))
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| November 23, 2010, 12:12 pm
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((Sorry for not posting. But, I'm going to try to be more active now. I'll try to continue the story shortly...))
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| December 9, 2010, 10:18 pm
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Falshab looks down from her camouflaged house in the canopy at the visitors below her.
"They are trespassers," she thought to herself. She draws her sword as a look of hatred spreads across her face. "And they must be dealt with."
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| December 9, 2010, 10:39 pm
-Alpha-
I walked after Vulshab, eager for more input. My L.A.B.S. (local area bioform scanner) picked up two more beings than there were supposed to be, though.....

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Makuta Aeronix flew over the great dessert of what would soon be Po-Metru. He was simply flying, looking for anyone. While he was doing this, the casual observer would think that Aeronix was making small talk with the mask on the back of his weapon. Noticing the toa below, he abruptly swooped down in front of them and shouted loudly "BOO!!"
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| December 10, 2010, 1:17 am
resham

I jumped about a mile when that other flying thing swooped down. No, I'm serious when I said I jumped a mile. It was like the air itself was propelling me. When I came back down I levitated just before touching the ground. I found everyone staring at me.
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| December 10, 2010, 6:19 pm
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Vulshab:

"That was weird, Resham," said Vulshab, confused. He soon shakes it off and turns around to face their new guest. "Who are you?" he asks, weapon drawn.
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| December 17, 2010, 6:28 pm
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