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 Group moderator 
So! As I was reading through the boards, I noticed that an admin said that we would be starting a new thread in January. With the afforementioned month coming up soon, I think that it would be appropriate to vote on what the new story should be. Ideas?
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| December 22, 2010, 1:42 pm
 Group moderator 
I think we should try one of Magna-es, of something more forward on the future.
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| December 22, 2010, 2:11 pm
BOTA MAGNA!!!!!
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| December 22, 2010, 3:43 pm
 Group admin 
Since I'm co-admin of the BRCI, and Me ep isn't active, I suppose it's really my word tat goes on this? I'll chat with him though - I'm sure he has his own plan for the next storyline.
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| December 23, 2010, 5:09 am
Bara Magna or one of the Magnas would be cool. I'd like Bara, though. That's my "vote."
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| December 23, 2010, 12:44 pm
Quoting Darth Vader#
Bara Magna or one of the Magnas would be cool. I'd like Bara, though. That's my "vote."

There already IS Bara Magna. Check the BRC (the first one)
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| December 23, 2010, 1:43 pm
Quoting Gringat the Repugnant
Since I'm co-admin of the BRCI, and Me ep isn't active, I suppose it's really my word tat goes on this? I'll chat with him though - I'm sure he has his own plan for the next storyline.

I still want Bota Magna, We already did every other CANON Magna. I've been askign since.... summer..
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| December 23, 2010, 1:48 pm
 Group admin 
Well, if it's a new topic we're starting, then I have an idea!

Gringat is proly the only one who knows this, but my self-MOC (the BARON) has recently been upgraded to Artifical Toa status (what that means, well, It's a surprise :D), and the story I've made for him involves a time jump to attain Toa-hood. Here's an excerpt:

"But as he felt the pulsating energy, a figure appeared outside the tank through what appeared to be a dimensional rift. The figure was tall, cloaked, and wore the Legendary Kanohi Vahi, the Mask of Time. He used the mask to speed up time, made apparent by the rusting of the lab around him with age.
...
And so is born a new Toa, some hundred years later, into a new world. Aridike, the BARON of Gravity."

Pretty cool, eh? Anywho, there's more to the story but I propose that we start a new story based in the MU some hundred years in the future, after Teridex's defeat!

The robot could've been turned into a mangled heap of a planetoid, or turned into an orbiting asteroid belt, and the story could evolve from there. :D
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| December 23, 2010, 2:33 pm
I'm a little confused as to what limits there are to the stories that we make. Do they all have to follow the existing Bionicle worlds, elements, etc. or are there certain liberties, like the invention of our own cities or worlds?
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| December 23, 2010, 3:48 pm
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I was thinking about something taking place on Korrothis--That is, if the BRCI didn't accept the idea.
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| December 23, 2010, 6:26 pm
Quoting Alpha AI
I was thinking about something taking place on Korrothis--That is, if the BRCI didn't accept the idea.

Here's a tip- if ya wanna submit a topic, check the BRCI first.
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| December 24, 2010, 12:57 pm
I kinda want to do pre-holocaust makuta hive leading into the events of terrydacks taking control and the stories of a few makuta survivors
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| December 24, 2010, 1:25 pm
I have an idea, kind of out there, but we could do something on Ghetta Nui. It's a bionicle city that I came up with a while ago, and I just redid my self MOC from that theme. It incorporates guns and lots of other tech, which is a little different for Bionicle, but I think it would be fun.
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| December 24, 2010, 1:49 pm
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Quoting Akara The Great
Here's a tip- if ya wanna submit a topic, check the BRCI first.


I did.
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| December 24, 2010, 4:52 pm
Quoting Cody G
I have an idea, kind of out there, but we could do something on Ghetta Nui. It's a bionicle city that I came up with a while ago, and I just redid my self MOC from that theme. It incorporates guns and lots of other tech, which is a little different for Bionicle, but I think it would be fun.

T_T Again, I would want something to do with Bota Magna, the only CANON Magna we have yet to do (eh.... Spherus magna is coming soon)
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| December 25, 2010, 1:18 pm
Quoting Akara The Great
T_T Again, I would want something to do with Bota Magna, the only CANON Magna we have yet to do (eh.... Spherus magna is coming soon)

Sure, I'm cool with that. Jungles and whatnot, right?
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| December 25, 2010, 3:24 pm
Quoting Cody G
Sure, I'm cool with that. Jungles and whatnot, right?

Yep!
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| December 25, 2010, 10:45 pm
Quoting Akara The Great
Yep!

Sweet deal.
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| December 26, 2010, 12:07 am
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Hmm... Now that I think about it, that does sound good.... I could use the Nashrak there mabey...
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| December 26, 2010, 1:43 am
Quoting Alpha AI
Hmm... Now that I think about it, that does sound good.... I could use the Nashrak there mabey...

I was thinking toa, anthros (half toa half animal) centaur, your bug species could fit in there, or at least one of their cousins....
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| December 26, 2010, 12:57 pm
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Quoting Alpha AI
Hmm... Now that I think about it, that does sound good.... I could use the Nashrak there mabey...

Could make Bota their (the Nashrak's)point of origin or somethin'.
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| December 27, 2010, 11:26 am
 Group moderator 
Yeah.... Like their homeword or somethin'. I like it!
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| December 27, 2010, 1:44 pm
So are we actually voting for something at this point or what?
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| December 27, 2010, 7:02 pm
 Group moderator 
(We wait for Gringat to let us know. he's really the only admin around here for now.)
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| December 27, 2010, 7:16 pm
 Group moderator 
Here's the bit where Me ep said that we would be starting in January:

Quoting Me ep
Quoting Hank Hansen
are we gonna start a new story soon?

January. Be patient Egghead and yes.


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| December 28, 2010, 4:10 pm
I really like the Bota Manga idea, I've got some ideas already.
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| December 29, 2010, 4:23 pm
Quoting Dr. Clockhopper
I really like the Bota Manga idea, I've got some ideas already.

Thats 5 people lets start it.
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| December 29, 2010, 7:16 pm
We're still waiting for Gringat I think.
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| January 5, 2011, 9:25 am
 Group admin 
Bota it is
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| January 5, 2011, 11:31 am
 Group moderator 
Well, you heard the admin! Let's do it!
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| January 5, 2011, 1:23 pm
Quoting Alpha AI
Well, you heard the admin! Let's do it!

K sounds good.
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| January 5, 2011, 6:43 pm
Quoting Me ep
Bota it is

Cool, when do we start! (I've been waiting for a long time)
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| January 5, 2011, 11:20 pm
Quoting Me ep
Bota it is

YEAH! GOOD THINGS COME TO THOSE WHO WAVE!! *gets a memo* To those who wait?! I thought it was wave..... oh well I did both anyways...
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| January 6, 2011, 4:07 pm
 Group moderator 
Well! Gringat (or Me ep, one of the two), let's get this party started!
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| January 11, 2011, 4:16 pm
Quoting Alpha AI
Well! Gringat (or Me ep, one of the two), let's get this party started!

WAIT HOW THE HECK DID YOU TURN INTO MOD!??!?!
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| January 11, 2011, 9:38 pm
 Group moderator 
WAIT... WHAT THE HAX? HOW/WHEN DID I BECOME A MODERATOR?
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| January 11, 2011, 11:30 pm
 Group moderator 
Well, there's only one thing to say in this instance: Congratulations!^^
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| January 12, 2011, 12:31 pm
 Group moderator 
Guess so. ^-^
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| January 12, 2011, 12:42 pm
Quoting Alpha AI
Guess so. ^-^

Why am I not mod then? I was the one who had the idea for bota magna... a while ago..
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| January 12, 2011, 4:03 pm
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Quoting Akara The Great
Why am I not mod then? I was the one who had the idea for bota magna... a while ago..

It really doesn't work that way man. I became a mod in the first BRC after being there for a long while. Its not because you suggested anything, Its because you are fit for the roll
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| January 12, 2011, 4:09 pm
Yup, that about covers it. The admins probably just picked who they thought was most apt to deal with the day-to-day discrepencies that occur in a group. Congrats to ye who made it up the chain!
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| January 12, 2011, 4:13 pm
 Group admin 
name the new story
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| January 15, 2011, 10:33 am
I'll join long as my comments come up for once! :)
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| January 15, 2011, 10:43 am
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Quoting Me ep
name the new story

'Jungle of Fear'? *shrug* I already have a character set and ready for when I return in five days
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| January 15, 2011, 1:07 pm
Quoting Gideon Fucci
'Jungle of Fear'? *shrug* I already have a character set and ready for when I return in five days

It's kinda similar to the title of our current story, don't you think?
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| January 15, 2011, 3:40 pm
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I've never been good with names.....I have about seven character names that I just pull out of my pocket for use whenever.
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| January 15, 2011, 6:21 pm
Quoting Me ep
name the new story

Into the jungle? The power of nature? Bota Magna: A new frontier (Toa colonizing there)? Eh... I got nothing else.
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| January 16, 2011, 12:14 am
 Group admin 
Well, I think that the name should be derived from the goal on Bota. What's gonna be the story? Some kinda evily monster people, or perhaps the return of the Morzzukaba? (That right there sounds like a good title...)

I think we should make an Ideas Topic for this kinda thing.
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| January 16, 2011, 8:51 am
Quoting Baron Von Ben ~
Well, I think that the name should be derived from the goal on Bota. What's gonna be the story? Some kinda evily monster people, or perhaps the return of the Morzzukaba? (That right there sounds like a good title...)

I think we should make an Ideas Topic for this kinda thing.

Weren't they called the Morbuzzak(sorry if I misspelled it)? Morzzukaba doesn't sound right to me.... well.. I do agree, we should make an idea topic for this story, but a story about the Morbuzzak on Bota Magna sounds cool! :D
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| January 16, 2011, 8:56 am
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Quoting Callan Lord of Fire
Weren't they called the Morbuzzak(sorry if I misspelled it)? Morzzukaba doesn't sound right to me.... well.. I do agree, we should make an idea topic for this story, but a story about the Morbuzzak on Bota Magna sounds cool! :D

Yeah...Morzuka-wahtever...(Googling: Morbuzakh)

Well, this is the new story voting booth, so how about we put it to a vote?
A. Return of the Morbuzakh (Self explainatory)
B. Jungle of Fear (Some kind of evil on Bota Magna, and a group of Toa/Anthro/Beings must stop it)
C. <Your Own Idea> (No more Ideas XD)
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| January 16, 2011, 9:52 am
Quoting Baron Von Ben ~
Yeah...Morzuka-wahtever...(Googling: Morbuzakh)

Well, this is the new story voting booth, so how about we put it to a vote?
A. Return of the Morbuzakh (Self explainatory)
B. Jungle of Fear (Some kind of evil on Bota Magna, and a group of Toa/Anthro/Beings must stop it)
C. <Your Own Idea> (No more Ideas XD)

What happened to my ideas? Its like I'm invisible....


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| January 16, 2011, 10:31 am
How about "Bungle in the Jungle"? ;)

If we absolutely have to do an evil plant, let's invent a new one. Maybe a half-plant half-beast kind of thing that can walk around and eat little matoran.
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| January 16, 2011, 11:30 am
Quoting Cody G
How about "Bungle in the Jungle"? ;)

If we absolutely have to do an evil plant, let's invent a new one. Maybe a half-plant half-beast kind of thing that can walk around and eat little matoran.


AM I BEING IGNORED OR SOMETHING!!!!!
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| January 16, 2011, 11:56 am
Here's my ideas.
A. Into the Jungle
In depth- bara magnians (whatever they are) become invaded by species of another galaxy (Solis Magna is the universe where Spherus/Bara/Aqua/Bota Magna are)
B. The Power of Nature
In depth- A group of matoran are sent to bota magna to find the missing elemental lord of plant life, but must find their 6 toa stones first.
C. Bota Magna: A New Frontier
In depth- A group of toa, turaga and matoran, come to Bota Magna to colonize it, but must terraform (make it habitable) first.

Something like that...
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| January 16, 2011, 12:03 pm
I say B: With Cody's idea!

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| January 16, 2011, 1:18 pm
 Group admin 
Quoting Akara The Great
Here's my ideas.
A. Into the Jungle
In depth- bara magnians (whatever they are) become invaded by species of another galaxy (Solis Magna is the universe where Spherus/Bara/Aqua/Bota Magna are)
B. The Power of Nature
In depth- A group of matoran are sent to bota magna to find the missing elemental lord of plant life, but must find their 6 toa stones first.
C. Bota Magna: A New Frontier
In depth- A group of toa, turaga and matoran, come to Bota Magna to colonize it, but must terraform (make it habitable) first.

Something like that...


Sorry, Akara, Didn't see you there! XD

These are some good ideas! So...That makes another 3 choices...
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| January 16, 2011, 1:21 pm
Quoting Singe,Keeper of Dark Metal (Sgamer360)
I say B: With Cody's idea!

Haha, thanks! :)
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| January 16, 2011, 1:32 pm
Quoting Cody G
Haha, thanks! :)
Yeah we will just name them 'pirana plants'! XD (Mario Bros.)

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| January 16, 2011, 2:24 pm
Or heres another idea. What about a story of Mahri-Nui with new toa gaurding the prison known as 'The Pit'.
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| January 16, 2011, 4:57 pm
Quoting Singe,Keeper of Dark Metal (Sgamer360)
Or heres another idea. What about a story of Mahri-Nui with new toa gaurding the prison known as 'The Pit'.

That's actually a really neat idea. I think everyone else has their hearts set on Bota Magna, but I'd be willing to switch to this.
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| January 16, 2011, 5:09 pm
Quoting Cody G
That's actually a really neat idea. I think everyone else has their hearts set on Bota Magna, but I'd be willing to switch to this.

Uuh, when The Toa Mahri destroyed the chord, Mahri Nui and Voya Nui fell to the bottom of the ocean. As I said, we already did Aqua and Bara Magna, so we only need Spherus and Bota Magna, until we go to the next galaxy (Solis Magna is the galaxy above is in).

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| January 16, 2011, 7:10 pm
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Quoting Akara The Great
Here's my ideas.
A. Into the Jungle
In depth- bara magnians (whatever they are) become invaded by species of another galaxy (Solis Magna is the universe where Spherus/Bara/Aqua/Bota Magna are)
B. The Power of Nature
In depth- A group of matoran are sent to bota magna to find the missing elemental lord of plant life, but must find their 6 toa stones first.
C. Bota Magna: A New Frontier
In depth- A group of toa, turaga and matoran, come to Bota Magna to colonize it, but must terraform (make it habitable) first.

Something like that...

I like Akara-C
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| January 16, 2011, 8:12 pm
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Quoting Akara The Great
Here's my ideas.
A. Into the Jungle
In depth- bara magnians (whatever they are) become invaded by species of another galaxy (Solis Magna is the universe where Spherus/Bara/Aqua/Bota Magna are)
B. The Power of Nature
In depth- A group of matoran are sent to bota magna to find the missing elemental lord of plant life, but must find their 6 toa stones first.
C. Bota Magna: A New Frontier
In depth- A group of toa, turaga and matoran, come to Bota Magna to colonize it, but must terraform (make it habitable) first.

Something like that...

I like Akara-C
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| January 16, 2011, 8:13 pm
Quoting Akara The Great
Uuh, when The Toa Mahri destroyed the chord, Mahri Nui and Voya Nui fell to the bottom of the ocean. As I said, we already did Aqua and Bara Magna, so we only need Spherus and Bota Magna, until we go to the next galaxy (Solis Magna is the galaxy above is in).
That alright! :D I had a feeling it wouldn't work out! But its fine! Just an idea! :)

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| January 17, 2011, 9:28 am
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Quoting Alpha AI
I like Akara-C

Same here. Plus, my MoC's a Makuta ( albeit a good one)so, hopefully he'll be able to join in. Wunderbar.
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| January 17, 2011, 11:28 am
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Quoting Alpha AI
I like Akara-C

Hmm. If my Moc's a Makuta, will he be able to join in? And, while thy're terraforming, they could find some Nashrak
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| January 17, 2011, 11:32 am
I think we need to get some major story pionst done first I.E. who are the people, and thwe villains also a few facts about this place other than narshrackkkablab, can't speak English. I think we should just start with bota mangnaI and we can give cool names depending how the plot develops.
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| January 17, 2011, 11:53 am
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Hmmmm.....We could try to make it go along this sort of storyline.....

Timeframe: after Makuta Teridax was defeated.

The matoran and agori (and glatorians and toa and all of the other good species blah blah blah.....WHATEVER!) have started to populate more of the surrounding planets while under the (brief) time of peace which came upon the defeat of Makuta Teridax. Some makuta have changed their ways and aligned themselves with the forces of good, but all makuta are still distrusted by the Matoran.

When the colony ship lands in a clearing on the surface of Bota Magna, it is apparent that the outside conditions are uninhabitable for the various species which are aboard the colony ship. This causes the off-worlders to start to terraform the planet, bit-by-bit, and also puts them at odds with most of the native species on Bota magna, who begin to sabotage the off-worlders terraforming efforts.

Sound good?
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| January 17, 2011, 12:38 pm
Quoting Alpha AI
Hmmmm.....We could try to make it go along this sort of storyline.....

Timeframe: after Makuta Teridax was defeated.

The matoran and agori (and glatorians and toa and all of the other good species blah blah blah.....WHATEVER!) have started to populate more of the surrounding planets while under the (brief) time of peace which came upon the defeat of Makuta Teridax. Some makuta have changed their ways and aligned themselves with the forces of good, but all makuta are still distrusted by the Matoran.

When the colony ship lands in a clearing on the surface of Bota Magna, it is apparent that the outside conditions are uninhabitable for the various species which are aboard the colony ship. This causes the off-worlders to start to terraform the planet, bit-by-bit, and also puts them at odds with most of the native species on Bota magna, who begin to sabotage the off-worlders terraforming efforts.

Sound good?

yeah. I had an idea, where after teridax was defeated, a civil war broke out and the planet was divided into tribes. We could then pick tribes and war with each other.
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| January 17, 2011, 3:43 pm
Quoting Alpha AI
Hmmmm.....We could try to make it go along this sort of storyline.....

Timeframe: after Makuta Teridax was defeated.

The matoran and agori (and glatorians and toa and all of the other good species blah blah blah.....WHATEVER!) have started to populate more of the surrounding planets while under the (brief) time of peace which came upon the defeat of Makuta Teridax. Some makuta have changed their ways and aligned themselves with the forces of good, but all makuta are still distrusted by the Matoran.

When the colony ship lands in a clearing on the surface of Bota Magna, it is apparent that the outside conditions are uninhabitable for the various species which are aboard the colony ship. This causes the off-worlders to start to terraform the planet, bit-by-bit, and also puts them at odds with most of the native species on Bota magna, who begin to sabotage the off-worlders terraforming efforts.

Sound good?

Quoting Dr.Egghead explosive
yeah. I had an idea, where after teridax was defeated, a civil war broke out and the planet was divided into tribes. We could then pick tribes and war with each other.


When teidax was defeated Aqua Magna, Bota Magna, and Bara Magna fused together, making spherus magna again... So I wanted this to be about 5000 years before the great cataclysm and toa/darkhunter war...
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| January 17, 2011, 6:05 pm
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If we do something on Bota, by there being a moon in the first place, there would be no Matoran, Agori, Makuta, or...anything really. We'd have to start off fresh. Maybe some sort of plant-people...I think that'd be cool. :D

Buuuuut, I still endorse my idea for a story going along with the BARON's history. 'Nother Excerpt :D

"Mata Nui then reunited and replenished Spherus Magna, dividing it into 7 regions, much like the second giant robot's brain, Metru Nui. There was Po-Maras, the desert, Le-Maras, the jungle, Ga-Maras, the sea, Onu-Maras, a system of tunnels in the sandstone mountains, Ta-Maras, the volcanic mountains, and Ko-Maras, the icy mountain peaks. The seventh region was made as a central city, called Suva-Maras where all the regions combined in a giant complex, and also where the original robot was placed after Mata Nui shut down.

The Matoran and the original habitants of Bara Magna, called Agori, were finally able to live in peace in Suva-Maras and the other regions. However, before this, there were things to attend to, like the few remaining Rahkshi that had survived Tahu's attacks with the golden armor and the still warring Element Lords. While the latter problem was solved by a collected agreement to banish the Lords to the opposite end of Spherus Magna, the first was still a major problem for Po-Maras, Le-Maras, and Ga-Maras dwellers, as the Rahkshi tended to stay near the second robot. It is estimated there are still 40 left.

As a system of government, the Matoran and Agori created three Councils, a board of elected Matoran and Agori officials, a board of the most influential Toa, including the Toa Mata, and a board comprised from the remnants from the Order of Mata Nui plus a few others, that still retains the original Order's name.

The Dark Hunters finally made peace with the Matoran and Toa, and thus Agori, as well. The Shadowed One is currently in the Order. The Toa, who so far had no jobs with the lack of an enemy to fight or a group of people in need of protection, were able to take up jobs that they saw would be for the betterment of the community, and that they chose. There were Hunters, Gatherers, Fishers, Builders, Inventors, Merchants, Explorers, and even Fighters. The Fighters retained their need for battle, and, like their Glatorian brothers-in-arms, still fought, but in the Coliseum located in Suva-Maras."
~ Aridike's Tale (6: 3-6)

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| January 17, 2011, 6:58 pm
Quoting Baron Von Ben ~
If we do something on Bota, by there being a moon in the first place, there would be no Matoran, Agori, Makuta, or...anything really. We'd have to start off fresh. Maybe some sort of plant-people...I think that'd be cool. :D

Buuuuut, I still endorse my idea for a story going along with the BARON's history. 'Nother Excerpt :D

"Mata Nui then reunited and replenished Spherus Magna, dividing it into 7 regions, much like the second giant robot's brain, Metru Nui. There was Po-Maras, the desert, Le-Maras, the jungle, Ga-Maras, the sea, Onu-Maras, a system of tunnels in the sandstone mountains, Ta-Maras, the volcanic mountains, and Ko-Maras, the icy mountain peaks. The seventh region was made as a central city, called Suva-Maras where all the regions combined in a giant complex, and also where the original robot was placed after Mata Nui shut down.

The Matoran and the original habitants of Bara Magna, called Agori, were finally able to live in peace in Suva-Maras and the other regions. However, before this, there were things to attend to, like the few remaining Rahkshi that had survived Tahu's attacks with the golden armor and the still warring Element Lords. While the latter problem was solved by a collected agreement to banish the Lords to the opposite end of Spherus Magna, the first was still a major problem for Po-Maras, Le-Maras, and Ga-Maras dwellers, as the Rahkshi tended to stay near the second robot. It is estimated there are still 40 left.

As a system of government, the Matoran and Agori created three Councils, a board of elected Matoran and Agori officials, a board of the most influential Toa, including the Toa Mata, and a board comprised from the remnants from the Order of Mata Nui plus a few others, that still retains the original Order's name.

The Dark Hunters finally made peace with the Matoran and Toa, and thus Agori, as well. The Shadowed One is currently in the Order. The Toa, who so far had no jobs with the lack of an enemy to fight or a group of people in need of protection, were able to take up jobs that they saw would be for the betterment of the community, and that they chose. There were Hunters, Gatherers, Fishers, Builders, Inventors, Merchants, Explorers, and even Fighters. The Fighters retained their need for battle, and, like their Glatorian brothers-in-arms, still fought, but in the Coliseum located in Suva-Maras."
~ Aridike's Tale (6: 3-6)

-.- we already decided on bota magna. And they could have build a ship from aqua magna to bota magna...
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| January 17, 2011, 7:21 pm
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Quoting Alpha AI
Hmmmm.....We could try to make it go along this sort of storyline.....

Timeframe: after Makuta Teridax was defeated.

The matoran and agori (and glatorians and toa and all of the other good species blah blah blah.....WHATEVER!) have started to populate more of the surrounding planets while under the (brief) time of peace which came upon the defeat of Makuta Teridax. Some makuta have changed their ways and aligned themselves with the forces of good, but all makuta are still distrusted by the Matoran.

When the colony ship lands in a clearing on the surface of Bota Magna, it is apparent that the outside conditions are uninhabitable for the various species which are aboard the colony ship. This causes the off-worlders to start to terraform the planet, bit-by-bit, and also puts them at odds with most of the native species on Bota magna, who begin to sabotage the off-worlders terraforming efforts.

Sound good?

Excellent! I like it!
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| January 18, 2011, 1:41 pm
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YEah, that's what I was thinking. The matoran/agori/all of those other races blah blah blah MOVING ON! where was I....oh yeah. they had all built some kind of space-travel thingamadoodle and landed on Bota, where this all gets started.
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| January 18, 2011, 2:57 pm
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Can we have have a definite start date for this?
My schedule shifts more than the Earth's crust, so it would be helpful.
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| January 18, 2011, 3:02 pm
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Quoting Akara The Great
When teidax was defeated Aqua Magna, Bota Magna, and Bara Magna fused together, making spherus magna again... So I wanted this to be about 5000 years before the great cataclysm and toa/darkhunter war...

I didn't know that....That's a good idea...TY! ^-^
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| January 18, 2011, 3:03 pm
What if some of the remaining rahkshi sneak into the star ship then have those plant life creatures like combine. (Like a transformer almost) And make that like the bad guys of the story?
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| January 18, 2011, 4:08 pm
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Since Rahkshi are powered by a piece of a Makuta, wouldn't they just die when the makuta did?
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| January 18, 2011, 10:50 pm
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Quoting Alpha AI
Since Rahkshi are powered by a piece of a Makuta, wouldn't they just die when the makuta did?

Rahkshi are generated out of a Makuta's own flesh, but they are still in independentent life form in their own right.Biosector.i:After the death of Teridax all Rahkshi left in the universe became wild. The Rahkshi that escaped the Matoran Universe have scattered on the Spherus Magna planet.
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| January 19, 2011, 1:30 pm
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uh, just a random question...Why the frack is everyone talking of terraforming? Its a jungle world, perfectly capable of supporting oxygen breathing creatures...All you have to do is clear a spot and build.
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| January 20, 2011, 1:42 pm
Quoting Gideon Fucci
uh, just a random question...Why the frack is everyone talking of terraforming? Its a jungle world, perfectly capable of supporting oxygen breathing creatures...All you have to do is clear a spot and build.


On spore, there are T0, T1, T2, and T3 planets. I would think bota magna is T1-T2.
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| January 20, 2011, 3:33 pm
Quoting Gideon Fucci
uh, just a random question...Why the frack is everyone talking of terraforming? Its a jungle world, perfectly capable of supporting oxygen breathing creatures...All you have to do is clear a spot and build.
What??

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| January 20, 2011, 4:11 pm
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Quoting Akara The Great

On spore, there are T0, T1, T2, and T3 planets. I would think bota magna is T1-T2.

I'm having a little trouble following what you mean here. Bota Magna Has been a lush jungle world from the time Spherus Magna split. It is inhabited by former residents of Spherus Magna, such as an intelligent variation of the Vorox, whom wield weapons from the Core War... at least through the Cannon story it is.
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| January 20, 2011, 4:37 pm
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Look, we're just procrastinating and getting nowhere here. Can SOMEONE, please, set up a character list OR get the current thread going again. It's kinda ground to a halt...


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| January 21, 2011, 12:46 pm
Quoting Mandragora Helix
Look, we're just procrastinating and getting nowhere here. Can SOMEONE, please, set up a character list *ahemAlphaahem* OR get the current thread going again. It's kinda ground to a halt...

He is kinda right. :)

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| January 21, 2011, 4:10 pm
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Agreed. Now instead of talking about terraforming, the state of Rahkshi, or whatever, let's get back to what this thread is titled: VOTING ON A NEW STORY (On Bota Magna)

So, from here on out, all ya'll put your vote as to what we should do (short explaination will suffice) and nothing else. Being a Mod, and kinda sad that this group has slowed down (a lot), I WILL delete off topic comments from this point on. Just vote and get ready for some actual writing!

Commence your votes:
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| January 21, 2011, 8:01 pm
I liked the idea of biomechanical plant life attacking some colonizing matoran or agori. Just not the vine things, something new. There's my vote-a-magna.
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| January 21, 2011, 8:30 pm
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I'm thinking that, because its a jungle planet, characters should be hunters/survivalists. I also believe that it should be about surviving. I also like the idea of plant entities being an enemy, though humanoid maybe.
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| January 21, 2011, 8:46 pm
Quoting Gideon Fucci
I'm thinking that, because its a jungle planet, characters should be hunters/survivalists. I also believe that it should be about surviving. I also like the idea of plant entities being an enemy, though humanoid maybe.

Okay, this reminds me of predator..... I like it...
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| January 22, 2011, 12:19 am
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OK, so, from what I can glean from all previous comments this is the new thread plan so far:

A group of Matoran/Agori/whatever land on a particular uninhabitable part of Bota Magna. Terraforming takes place immediatly, but some resistance is met from the locals.(wild Rahkshi, Nashrak, Vorox, whatever.)The group is faced with a big, nasty fight.Will they go with diplomacy or try an agressive stance?

So, what we need to work out is:
a) What the group of Ma/ag/wh do.
b) How the natives respond.
c) Characters/plants.
d) And which side's good etc.
e) Extra ideas.

Just put your comment with a heading of any of the above. To stop confusion.
Simples! *squeaks*
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| January 22, 2011, 11:33 am
Quoting Mandragora Helix
OK, so, from what I can glean from all previous comments this is the new thread plan so far:

A group of Matoran/Agori/whatever land on a particular uninhabitable part of Bota Magna. Terraforming takes place immediatly, but some resistance is met from the locals.(wild Rahkshi, Nashrak, Vorox, whatever.)The group is faced with a big, nasty fight.Will they go with diplomacy or try an agressive stance?

So, what we need to work out is:
a) What the group of Ma/ag/wh do.
b) How the natives respond.
c) Characters/plants.
d) And which side's good etc.
e) Extra ideas.

Just put your comment with a heading of any of the above. To stop confusion.
Simples! *squeaks*

So I think the Toa we should have should be water, plantlife, earth, stone, air, and whatever else usable to help the terraforming process, anyone disagree?
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| January 22, 2011, 12:15 pm
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Seems logical.
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| January 22, 2011, 12:19 pm
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I repeat: LET'S ACTUALLY VOTE ON SOMETHING!

We have many (over 9000) ideas, none of which will go to waste, so now we need to decide:

1)Agori/Matoran/Toa/Other as Colonizers?
2)Plant-People/Na'vi(Peaceful)/Predators(Killers) as Natives?
3)How the Natives respond and the Colonizers respond (AKA Main Conflict/Event)

Other elements of the story (like who you'll be playing as, what happens, etc.) will be decided at a LATER DATE, as in while it's actually happening.

You have your ballot:
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| January 22, 2011, 1:57 pm
Quoting Baron Von Ben ~
I repeat: LET'S ACTUALLY VOTE ON SOMETHING!

We have many (over 9000) ideas, none of which will go to waste, so now we need to decide:

1)Agori/Matoran/Toa/Other as Colonizers?
2)Plant-People/Na'vi(Peaceful)/Predators(Killers) as Natives?
3)How the Natives respond and the Colonizers respond (AKA Main Conflict/Event)

Other elements of the story (like who you'll be playing as, what happens, etc.) will be decided at a LATER DATE, as in while it's actually happening.

You have your ballot:

I think there should be a plant and na'vi hybrid, who help the foreign settlers. There predators/aliens/predaliens are hunting any other species, to hone their skills.
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| January 22, 2011, 2:45 pm
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Quoting Akara The Great
I think there should be a plant and na'vi hybrid, who help the foreign settlers. There predators/aliens/predaliens are hunting any other species, to hone their skills.

wow...and I built a green anthro raptor type character with chameleon like camouflage that hunts with a dagger and blow gun for this story...before we started thinking out details...
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| January 22, 2011, 2:56 pm
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Quoting Baron Von Ben ~
I repeat: LET'S ACTUALLY VOTE ON SOMETHING!

We have many (over 9000) ideas, none of which will go to waste, so now we need to decide:

1)Agori/Matoran/Toa/Other as Colonizers?
2)Plant-People/Na'vi(Peaceful)/Predators(Killers) as Natives?
3)How the Natives respond and the Colonizers respond (AKA Main Conflict/Event)

Other elements of the story (like who you'll be playing as, what happens, etc.) will be decided at a LATER DATE, as in while it's actually happening.

You have your ballot:



1) I think that only the stronger people (EG, Toa, Glat., good Makuta, etc.) would have been chosen to go to the planet at first. Matoran and Agori would be pretty useless...

2) I'm thinking a mixture of the three types sprinkled liberaly around the world sounds good.

3)I think that's up to the players.
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| January 22, 2011, 4:07 pm
Quoting Gideon Fucci
wow...and I built a green anthro raptor type character with chameleon like camouflage that hunts with a dagger and blow gun for this story...before we started thinking out details...

I forgot about the anthros! Oh well, I already have my toa of air halfway done. He has a vahki disk on his back, it looks good. I think I'll let him use it like those tron disks!
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| January 22, 2011, 4:19 pm
well I think one of the species on the planet should be the "....." I don't have a good name in mind but they are tall, strong and consider themselves the "ruling class" they do hunt but they make it apparent they are you will hear them and you will have to just run.
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| January 22, 2011, 8:34 pm
Quoting Baron Von Ben ~
I repeat: LET'S ACTUALLY VOTE ON SOMETHING!

We have many (over 9000) ideas, none of which will go to waste, so now we need to decide:

1)Agori/Matoran/Toa/Other as Colonizers?
2)Plant-People/Na'vi(Peaceful)/Predators(Killers) as Natives?
3)How the Natives respond and the Colonizers respond (AKA Main Conflict/Event)

Other elements of the story (like who you'll be playing as, what happens, etc.) will be decided at a LATER DATE, as in while it's actually happening.

You have your ballot:

I say this.

1) Matoran (To make it interesting?)
2) Predators
3) Lets go along as we go.

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| January 22, 2011, 8:49 pm
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Quoting Hank Hansen
well I think one of the species on the planet should be the "....." I don't have a good name in mind but they are tall, strong and consider themselves the "ruling class" they do hunt but they make it apparent they are you will hear them and you will have to just run.

Reminds me of my Nashrak.
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| January 22, 2011, 8:54 pm
Quoting Alpha AI
Reminds me of my Nashrak.

Already got my character built!
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| January 23, 2011, 12:51 am
Quoting Alpha AI
Reminds me of my Nashrak.
well from what I can gather the nashrack they are a bit too silent. these guys are like an elephant hunting in the plains.

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| January 23, 2011, 11:12 am
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can we just start this? I'd like to be able post my character and we can make it up as we go along. It should be relatively easy to come up with a plot when everything out there is hunting you...
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| January 23, 2011, 2:23 pm
Quoting Gideon Fucci
can we just start this? I'd like to be able post my character and we can make it up as we go along. It should be relatively easy to come up with a plot when everything out there is hunting you...

Claim your toa/element spot here!

Claimer: Akara Element: Air Gender: Male Name: Narios
Claimer: Akara Element: Water Gender: Female Name: Kristo
Claimer: Element: Light Gender: Name:
Claimer: Element: Plantlife Gender: Name:
Claimer: Element: Stone Gender: Name:
Claimer: Element: Earth Gender: Name:
Just update as you claim your spot.
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| January 23, 2011, 2:44 pm
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Quoting Akara The Great
Claim your toa/element spot here!

Claimer: Akara Element: Air Gender: Male Name: Narios
Claimer: Akara Element: Water Gender: Female Name: Kristo
Claimer: Element: Light Gender: Name:
Claimer: Element: Plantlife Gender: Name:
Claimer: Element: Stone Gender: Name:
Claimer: Element: Earth Gender: Name:
Just update as you claim your spot.


Just to make this a less confusing thread, I'll offically make a new Character Thread for this. And Akara, I think we should let people decide their own characters, rather than filling rolls.

So far, this is what I gather from the votes:

1)We'll be using both Matoran (proly fewer) and Toa as Colonizers
2)There will be both Peaceful and Warring Natives (but I think we'll proly end up with more Predators than Na'vi, just due to fun :D)

Also, you may notice I didn't say anything about Agori/Glatorian, mostly because of the timeline. If Bota Magna is to be in existance as a moon in our story, then the Matoran and Toa don't know a hoot about the Agori and Glatoran, and vice versa. Thus, I think we should just go with Matoran/Toa for our story, for the sake of consistancy. This IS supposed to be in line with the Canon Story.

With this in mind, let's move on over to the new Character Thread, shall we?
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| January 23, 2011, 3:31 pm
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Quoting Me ep
name the new story

"Blood on the Leaves"?"Sinful Shrubbery"?I dont know, I guess its up to Baron
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