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Review #1) "A World in Crisis: American Airborne Commandos II" by Cade Cordell the Christian man!
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MOC name:
A World in Crisis: American Airborne Commandos II

http://mocpages.com/moc.php/189860

Creator name:
Cade Cordell the Christian man!

Review:

The Overall:
Looks like a well-made collection of soldiers.

The Good:
1) Clear photography
2) Uncluttered
3) Main focus is on central element (the soldiers)

The Bad:
I don't really have any gripes about this one (except maybe that the second pic is a bit dark in the foreground and the protruding window thingie is a bit distracting), but I do have some suggestions...

The Suggestions:
More pics? I can see that one soldier has an H&K MP5 and that another carries an M-16, but I can't even make out what the guy on the right is armed with.

Oh, and possibly a link to whatever this "World in Crisis" thing is, just to clear it up for people that don't know.

Maybe descriptions of the 3 soldiers and their weapons?

The closing statement:
There's really a lot you could do with this MOC to make it less "spartan".

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| March 28, 2010, 3:11 pm
Thanks for the suggestions! And the guy on the left has an M 16 like the guy on the right.
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| March 28, 2010, 3:34 pm
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